| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She glanced back [back]" | | 1 | "Her voice rang like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.367 | | leniency | 0.735 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.082 | |
| 89.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1415 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1415 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "crystal" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.76% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1417 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1000 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Aurora | 15 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 5 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Seer | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Fae-touched" |
| | globalScore | 0.75 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 58.86% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.411 | | wordCount | 1417 | | matches | | 0 | "Neither fully Earth nor" | | 1 | "Not threatened, exactly, but observed" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 24.02 | | std | 19.53 | | cv | 0.813 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 81 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 61 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 49 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora studied the gap between two of the largest oaks — ancient things, gnarled and massive, their bark split with age." | | 1 | "It wasn't dramatic — no flash of light, no thunderclap." | | 2 | "The air warmed against her skin, carrying scents she couldn't name — something floral, something green, something that made her think of summer evenings she'd never actually lived." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground — bluebells and foxglove and roses, all blooming together despite the season, despite any logic she understood." | | 4 | "Aurora knelt and touched one of the flowers — a rose the colour of twilight, petals soft as breath." | | 5 | "Aurora kept her hand on the Fae blade at her hip — Isolde's gift, cold even through the leather of its sheath." | | 6 | "The water — if it was water — reflected nothing." | | 7 | "Not threatened, exactly, but observed — catalogued by something vast and patient and very, very old." | | 8 | "Vines and flowers grew from the chair's arms, climbing and twisting, and the figure herself seemed to have grown from the same earth — silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes that held no whites, no pupils, only that soft violet light." | | 9 | "She'd prepared for this meeting — rehearsed what she'd say, what she'd demand." | | 10 | "Something flickered across Nyx's expression — pain, maybe, or anger, or something too old for either." | | 11 | "She hadn't realised she'd unsheathed it — the moonsilver dagger gleamed in her grip, faintly luminescent, casting pale light across her fingers." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 993 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03121852970795569 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007049345417925478 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 11.61 | | std | 7.79 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 69.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4426229508196721 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the change crept over" | | 1 | "Instead, the depths showed darkness." |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 1 | "It wasn't dramatic — no" | | 2 | "She turned back." | | 3 | "Their violet eyes glowed brighter" | | 4 | "They moved without footsteps, without" | | 5 | "It was warm." | | 6 | "She could almost feel a" | | 7 | "They walked deeper." | | 8 | "She wondered if it would" | | 9 | "She moved past the pool," | | 10 | "She felt watched." | | 11 | "Her voice rang like struck" | | 12 | "She'd prepared for this meeting" | | 13 | "She moved without sound, without" | | 14 | "Her hand found the Fae" | | 15 | "She hadn't realised she'd unsheathed" | | 16 | "Her eyes found Aurora's, and" | | 17 | "She trailed off." |
| | ratio | 0.22 | |
| 20.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora paused at the edge" | | 2 | "The crimson gem pulsed against" | | 3 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 4 | "Nyx's voice drifted past her" | | 5 | "Aurora studied the gap between" | | 6 | "Nothing about the space looked" | | 7 | "The same damp grass, the" | | 8 | "Nyx circled her, their edges" | | 9 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter" | | 10 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 11 | "It wasn't dramatic — no" | | 12 | "The grey sky above bled" | | 13 | "The air warmed against her" | | 14 | "She turned back." | | 15 | "The standing stones remained visible," | | 16 | "The grove spread before her" | | 17 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground —" | | 18 | "Trees she didn't recognise stretched" | | 19 | "Light filtered down through the" |
| | ratio | 0.878 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The air warmed against her skin, carrying scents she couldn't name — something floral, something green, something that made her think of summer evenings she'd n…" | | 1 | "She moved past the pool, following a path marked by stones that glowed with faint phosphorescence." | | 2 | "Vines and flowers grew from the chair's arms, climbing and twisting, and the figure herself seemed to have grown from the same earth — silver hair cascading to …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx circled, their edges blurring where shadow met dying light" | | 1 | "Nyx circled, their reflection absent from its surface" | | 2 | "The Seer's fingers brushed, not quite touching" | | 3 | "Isolde's attention shifted, those lavender eyes focusing on Nyx with sudden intensity" | | 4 | "Isolde drifted, her silver hair floating as if underwater" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.061 | | leniency | 0.122 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.041 | |