Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0CZSNVQ81EX3EZQTSQP37

Run Details

Duration:
48.9s
Cost:
$0.063150
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like broken teeth, their surfaces worn smooth by centuries of wind and rain. Aurora paused at the edge of the clearing, her hand instinctively moving to the Heartstone pendant beneath her jacket. The crimson gem pulsed against her chest, warm and steady as a second heartbeat. "This is it?" She glanced back at Nyx, who had materialized beside her, their form a rippling silhouette against the grey afternoon light. "The boundary." Nyx's voice drifted past her ear like smoke. "Isolde's grove lies beyond. Step between the stones, and you leave London behind." Aurora studied the gap between two of the largest oaks — ancient things, gnarled and massive, their bark split with age. Nothing about the space looked different from the rest of Richmond Park. The same damp grass, the same pale winter sky visible through bare branches. And yet something tugged at her, a pressure behind her eyes, a frequency just below hearing. "Time moves differently inside." Nyx circled her, their edges blurring where shadow met dying light. "An hour. A minute. A week. There's no predicting it." "You mentioned that. Twice." "Because you weren't listening the first time." Aurora pulled her jacket tighter and stepped forward. The moment she crossed the threshold between the stones, the world shifted. It wasn't dramatic — no flash of light, no thunderclap. Instead, the change crept over her like cold water rising. The grey sky above bled into soft amber, the colour of honey held up to candlelight. The air warmed against her skin, carrying scents she couldn't name — something floral, something green, something that made her think of summer evenings she'd never actually lived. She turned back. The standing stones remained visible, but Richmond Park beyond them had become a watercolour smear, indistinct and unreachable. "Bloody hell," she breathed. The grove spread before her in impossible directions. Wildflowers carpeted the ground — bluebells and foxglove and roses, all blooming together despite the season, despite any logic she understood. Trees she didn't recognise stretched toward that amber sky, their leaves silver-green and rustling in a breeze she couldn't feel. Light filtered down through the canopy in golden shafts, thick as poured syrup. Nyx drifted past her, their form more solid now, more defined. Their violet eyes glowed brighter in this half-light. "The Fae-touched places remember what they once were." They moved without footsteps, without sound. "Before the Veil hardened. Before the realms separated." Aurora knelt and touched one of the flowers — a rose the colour of twilight, petals soft as breath. It was warm. Alive. She could almost feel a pulse beneath its surface. "It's real," she said. "All of it." "As real as anything." Nyx paused beside a tree whose trunk twisted in spirals. "More real, perhaps. The mortal world is pale by comparison." They walked deeper. The grove seemed to shift around them, paths appearing where none had existed moments before, the trees rearranging themselves like pieces on a board. Aurora kept her hand on the Fae blade at her hip — Isolde's gift, cold even through the leather of its sheath. The moonsilver dagger was meant for this place. She wondered if it would protect her here, or if carrying Fae-forged steel into Fae-touched territory was some kind of insult she didn't understand. A sound reached her. Distant. Musical. Like wind chimes made of crystal, or voices singing in a language that predated words. "Do you hear that?" Nyx tilted their head. "The grove speaks to those who enter. It's tasting you. Learning your shape." "That's not comforting." "It wasn't meant to be." The path opened into a wider clearing, and Aurora stopped short. A pool lay at its center, perfectly circular, its surface so still it might have been glass. The water — if it was water — reflected nothing. Not the amber sky, not the silver trees, not her own face when she crept closer to peer down. Instead, the depths showed darkness. Movement. Shapes that might have been clouds or might have been something else entirely, drifting through an endless void. "Don't touch it." Nyx's whisper carried genuine warning. "The seeing pools show truth, but truth has teeth. Ask the wrong question and it will answer in ways you cannot survive." Aurora stepped back. The pendant at her chest pulsed harder, and she pressed her palm against it through her jacket. "Why is this reacting? There's no Hel portal here." "The Heartstone responds to liminal spaces. Places where the Veil thins." Nyx circled the pool, their reflection absent from its surface. "The grove exists between. Neither fully Earth nor fully Fae. The pendant recognises the instability." "Instability. Wonderful." She moved past the pool, following a path marked by stones that glowed with faint phosphorescence. The air grew thicker as they walked, heavier with that sweet impossible scent. Aurora's skin prickled with awareness. She felt watched. Not threatened, exactly, but observed — catalogued by something vast and patient and very, very old. The trees parted. A figure waited at the center of the next clearing, seated on a throne of living wood. Vines and flowers grew from the chair's arms, climbing and twisting, and the figure herself seemed to have grown from the same earth — silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes that held no whites, no pupils, only that soft violet light. Isolde. The Seer smiled, and it was the smile of something that had seen centuries pass like seasons. "The pendant-bearer." Her voice rang like struck crystal. "The shadow-bound. You've come seeking answers to questions you haven't learned to ask." Aurora's mouth went dry. She'd prepared for this meeting — rehearsed what she'd say, what she'd demand. But standing before the half-Fae oracle, words scattered like startled birds. "I need to know about the Veil. The rifts. Why they're opening." Isolde rose. She moved without sound, without weight, leaving no impression in the flower-covered ground. When she circled Aurora, the air shimmered in her wake. "Three questions you've asked already." The Seer's fingers brushed the air near Aurora's face, not quite touching. "One about hearing. One about reaction. One about the rifts themselves. The grove counts what it's owed." "I didn't mean—" "Intent matters nothing here." Isolde's smile sharpened. "Only words. Only truth. The Fae cannot lie, pendant-bearer, but we count what we're given with perfect precision." Nyx moved closer to Aurora's side, their form solidifying into something almost protective. "She didn't know the rules, Seer. Release her from the debt." "The shadow speaks." Isolde's attention shifted, those lavender eyes focusing on Nyx with sudden intensity. "Aldric of the failed summoning. Aldric of the space between. Do you still remember your mortal name? Or has the darkness eaten it at last?" Something flickered across Nyx's expression — pain, maybe, or anger, or something too old for either. "I remember enough." "Do you?" Isolde drifted closer to them, her silver hair floating as if underwater. "Three hundred years I've watched your shadow stretch across London. Three hundred years you've bound yourself to mortals, trying to feel again what you lost. Does this one know what you are? What you were?" "Enough." Aurora stepped between them. Her hand found the Fae blade's hilt, and the cold of it steadied her. "We came for information. About the Veil. About why it's weakening." Isolde's attention snapped back to her. The Seer's smile returned, soft and terrible. "The blade I gave you. You've drawn it." Aurora looked down. She hadn't realised she'd unsheathed it — the moonsilver dagger gleamed in her grip, faintly luminescent, casting pale light across her fingers. "I didn't—" "The blade knows its own purpose." Isolde reached out and touched the flat of the blade with one finger. Where her skin met the metal, frost crystallised and spread. "It was forged in the old courts. Before the exile. Before the silence. It remembers what it was made to cut." "And what's that?" Isolde withdrew her hand. The frost remained, glittering. "Demons," the Seer said. "The things that crawl through tears in the Veil. The hungry ones. The hollow ones." Her eyes found Aurora's, and for a moment, the ageless mask cracked, revealing something almost like concern beneath. "They're coming, pendant-bearer. The winter solstice approaches, and the Veil will thin as it always does. But this year..." She trailed off. Turned away. Walked toward her living throne with steps that left no trace. "This year, something on the other side is pushing back."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:51:48.799Z" 2/19/2026, 3:51:48 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She glanced back [back]"
1"Her voice rang like [like]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.735
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.082
89.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count2
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"cascading"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"footsteps"
2"pulse"
3"crystal"
4"comforting"
5"depths"
6"whisper"
7"cascading"
8"weight"
9"shimmered"
10"perfect"
11"intensity"
12"flickered"
13"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
95.76% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1000
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Nyx11
Aurora15
Richmond2
Park2
Fae5
Isolde9
Fae-forged1
Fae-touched1
Seer4
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Seer"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Fae-touched"
globalScore0.75
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touching"
58.86% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.411
wordCount1417
matches
0"Neither fully Earth nor"
1"Not threatened, exactly, but observed"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean24.02
std19.53
cv0.813
sampleLengths
053
123
223
362
425
54
67
720
864
921
104
1162
1219
1322
1432
157
1624
1781
1821
194
2017
213
225
2357
2424
2530
2620
279
2836
292
3053
313
3261
331
3417
3521
3628
3712
3825
3934
403
4125
4213
4311
4440
4516
463
4749
4830
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences122
ratio0.098
matches
0"Aurora studied the gap between two of the largest oaks — ancient things, gnarled and massive, their bark split with age."
1"It wasn't dramatic — no flash of light, no thunderclap."
2"The air warmed against her skin, carrying scents she couldn't name — something floral, something green, something that made her think of summer evenings she'd never actually lived."
3"Wildflowers carpeted the ground — bluebells and foxglove and roses, all blooming together despite the season, despite any logic she understood."
4"Aurora knelt and touched one of the flowers — a rose the colour of twilight, petals soft as breath."
5"Aurora kept her hand on the Fae blade at her hip — Isolde's gift, cold even through the leather of its sheath."
6"The water — if it was water — reflected nothing."
7"Not threatened, exactly, but observed — catalogued by something vast and patient and very, very old."
8"Vines and flowers grew from the chair's arms, climbing and twisting, and the figure herself seemed to have grown from the same earth — silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes that held no whites, no pupils, only that soft violet light."
9"She'd prepared for this meeting — rehearsed what she'd say, what she'd demand."
10"Something flickered across Nyx's expression — pain, maybe, or anger, or something too old for either."
11"She hadn't realised she'd unsheathed it — the moonsilver dagger gleamed in her grip, faintly luminescent, casting pale light across her fingers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount993
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03121852970795569
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007049345417925478
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean11.61
std7.79
cv0.671
sampleLengths
020
119
214
323
410
513
621
712
813
916
1015
1110
124
137
148
1512
1610
1710
1816
1928
203
2118
224
238
2421
2520
2613
2711
288
2914
308
3119
323
331
349
354
363
3714
3810
393
4024
4122
428
4324
444
451
461
4715
484
494
69.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4426229508196721
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners54
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Instead, the change crept over"
1"Instead, the depths showed darkness."
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences82
matches
0"She glanced back at Nyx,"
1"It wasn't dramatic — no"
2"She turned back."
3"Their violet eyes glowed brighter"
4"They moved without footsteps, without"
5"It was warm."
6"She could almost feel a"
7"They walked deeper."
8"She wondered if it would"
9"She moved past the pool,"
10"She felt watched."
11"Her voice rang like struck"
12"She'd prepared for this meeting"
13"She moved without sound, without"
14"Her hand found the Fae"
15"She hadn't realised she'd unsheathed"
16"Her eyes found Aurora's, and"
17"She trailed off."
ratio0.22
20.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences82
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Aurora paused at the edge"
2"The crimson gem pulsed against"
3"She glanced back at Nyx,"
4"Nyx's voice drifted past her"
5"Aurora studied the gap between"
6"Nothing about the space looked"
7"The same damp grass, the"
8"Nyx circled her, their edges"
9"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter"
10"The moment she crossed the"
11"It wasn't dramatic — no"
12"The grey sky above bled"
13"The air warmed against her"
14"She turned back."
15"The standing stones remained visible,"
16"The grove spread before her"
17"Wildflowers carpeted the ground —"
18"Trees she didn't recognise stretched"
19"Light filtered down through the"
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The air warmed against her skin, carrying scents she couldn't name — something floral, something green, something that made her think of summer evenings she'd n…"
1"She moved past the pool, following a path marked by stones that glowed with faint phosphorescence."
2"Vines and flowers grew from the chair's arms, climbing and twisting, and the figure herself seemed to have grown from the same earth — silver hair cascading to …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx circled, their edges blurring where shadow met dying light"
1"Nyx circled, their reflection absent from its surface"
2"The Seer's fingers brushed, not quite touching"
3"Isolde's attention shifted, those lavender eyes focusing on Nyx with sudden intensity"
4"Isolde drifted, her silver hair floating as if underwater"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.122
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.041
80.0422%