Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0D09JFGX6C3YXRB11D096

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy, metallic groan. I pulled the door open, expecting the damp chill of the hallway or perhaps a frantic neighbour complaining about the bass from the curry house downstairs again. Instead, a silver-tipped umbrella stood there. My gaze travelled up charcoal wool, past a silk tie the colour of spilled wine, to a face that belonged in a gallery, not a grubby flat above a Brick Lane takeaway. Lucien Moreau. He smelled of ozone and expensive tobacco. It was a scent that made the back of my throat burn, a ghost of three months ago, of mistakes made in dark corners and alleyways that didn't appear on any London A-Z. "I didn't order any trouble." "Then you won't mind if I come in." He didn't wait for an invitation. His shoulder brushed mine as he swept past, the fabric of his suit cold against my arm. I gripped the doorframe, knuckles white. Ptolemy, my tabby, didn't hiss. He just wound himself around Lucien's polished Oxfords, purring like a broken radiator. Traitor. I slammed the door. The three locks clicked back into place, a futile barrier against a man who kept a thin blade inside an ivory cane. "Ptolemy missed me." "The cat has no taste." I leaned back against the wood, crossing my arms. "You're not supposed to be here, Lucien. We agreed. Cardiff is a long way away, but the contract still stands." "Contracts." He turned in a slow circle, taking in the chaos. Towers of books threatened to topple from every surface, scroll cases leaning precariously against mugs of cold tea. "You live like a hedge wizard, Rory. It's charming. In a tragic sort of way." "I live like a student of esoteric history who works twelve-hour shifts delivering noodles. Get to the point. Why are you in my flat?" He stopped by the desk, his fingers hovering over a stack of photocopies regarding Celtic demonology. He didn't touch them. He never touched anything unless he meant to break it or own it. "I need your eyes." "My eyes are currently trying to find a way to get you out of here without waking the entire building." "Not those eyes." He turned. The dim yellow light from the floor lamp caught his irises. One amber, one void black. A constant reminder of the blood that ran through his veins, the demon heritage from a realm called Avaros. "Your way of seeing things. The patterns." "I'm done with patterns. I'm done with the underworld." "Are you?" He took a step closer. The air in the cramped room seemed to thin. "Because the underworld hasn't finished with you. You haven't felt it? The heaviness in the air? The way the shadows in the alley below are a little too long for the streetlights?" I stiffened. I had felt it. A prickling on the back of my neck for the past week, a sensation like being watched through a keyhole. I'd chalked it up to lack of sleep and the stress of the barrister exams I wasn't studying for. "I've been busy." "So busy you didn't notice the tracker on your bike?" My hand instinctively went to my pocket where the keys sat. Cold metal met my palm. "I checked it this morning." "Check it again." I fished the keys out, the metal jingling softly. There, clipped onto the ring, was a small, smooth stone. Not a tracking device in the traditional, technological sense. It pulsed faintly, a heartbeat of warmth against my skin. A geas stone. "Breathtaking," Lucien said softly, watching my reaction. "You usually spot these before they even hit the ground." "I've been distracted." "By the delivery job? Or by the memory of what happened in Soho?" "Don't." "Which part?" He walked forward, invading my personal space. He was taller than me, lean and predatory. "The part where I saved your life, or the part where I ruined it?" Heat flared in my cheeks, unwanted and dangerous. I hated that he could still do this, unravel me with a few well-placed words. The attraction was a chemical reaction, impulsive and stupid, layered over a foundation of hurt. "You didn't ruin my life, Lucien. You just reminded me that trusting a half-demon is statistically a bad idea." "And yet, here I am. The only thing standing between you and whatever that stone is calling." "I can handle myself." He laughed, a low, dark sound. "You have a black belt in sarcasm and a working knowledge of Welsh folklore. Against what's coming, you might as well be armed with a spoon." He reached out. I flinched, but his hand didn't strike me. His fingers, cool and smooth, caught my left wrist. He turned my hand over, exposing the small, crescent-shaped scar etched into the skin. A childhood accident, or so I told people. "This wasn't an accident." "I fell off a wall. I was seven." "You were pushed. By something that didn't want you on that wall." His thumb traced the white line, sending a shiver up my arm. "Your mother knew. That's why she sent you to Cardiff, to your father. Away from the old places." "Stop digging into my past." "It's my job to dig." He didn't let go. His grip tightened, just enough to be possessive. "Someone put that stone on your keys, Rory. Someone who knows what you are. What you can do. They aren't hiring you to deliver sweet and sour pork anymore." "So what? I throw the stone in the Thames?" "If it were that simple, I wouldn't be here." He released my wrist and turned away, pacing the small length of the room. "The stone is a beacon. It's active. Which means I'm not the only one who found you." Ptolemy hissed. The sound was sudden and sharp, cutting through the tension like a knife. The tabby backed away from the window, his tail puffed up to twice its size, ears flattened against his skull. The window rattled. Not from the wind. The double-glazing vibrated with a low, thrumming frequency that made my teeth ache. "Get back," Lucien said. The playfulness vanished. He reached for the ivory-handled cane at his side. With a sharp flick of his wrist, a blade of moon-white metal slid free, humming with a faint, blue light. "Lucien?" "The glamour is dropping." He moved to the window, peering through the gap in the curtains. "They're bypassing the wards on the building. Sloppy work. They must be desperate." "Who?" "Harvesters. Low-level. They think you're a conduit." "I'm a law student." "You're a gateway. Always have been." He turned, his back to the window. "The stone on your keys? It's not a tracker. It's a key. To you." A heavy thud sounded against the front door. The wood groaned, dust drifting down from the frame. It wasn't a knock. It was a battering ram. My heart hammered against my ribs. I looked at the deadbolts. Three heavy locks. They wouldn't hold. "Can you fight?" Lucien asked, his blade gleaming in the yellow light. "I have a cricket bat under the bed." "Inspiring." He smirked, but his eyes were fixed on the door. "Get it. And stay behind me." The door shook again, the hinges screaming. The smell of sulfur and rotting meat began to seep through the wood, overpowering the scent of curry and Lucien's cologne. "They're coming through," I whispered. "Then let's give them a welcome." Lucien lunged forward, slamming his shoulder into the door just as it splintered inward. I grabbed the only weapon I had, turning to face the darkness spilling into my home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"I leaned back [back]"
1"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.073
92.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1282
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1282
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"unravel"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silk"
2"reminder"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"unravel"
6"etched"
7"traced"
8"beacon"
9"tension"
10"vibrated"
11"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1273
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount789
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
London1
Lucien7
Oxfords1
Towers1
Celtic1
Avaros1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Oxfords"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1273
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean20.87
std15.4
cv0.738
sampleLengths
037
138
22
340
45
58
648
726
83
934
1044
1124
1233
134
1420
1547
169
1748
1845
193
2010
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223
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2417
253
2613
271
2831
2938
3019
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324
3332
3442
354
368
3742
385
3946
409
4140
4235
4320
444
4532
461
4729
481
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"were fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs130
matches
0"wasn't studying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences121
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount795
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03270440251572327
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007547169811320755
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean10.52
std7.26
cv0.69
sampleLengths
010
127
26
332
42
57
633
75
88
96
1017
116
125
1313
141
154
1622
173
1814
1920
2011
2118
2215
2324
2416
254
2613
274
2820
295
3011
315
3219
337
349
357
369
3732
382
394
4020
4119
423
4310
4411
455
465
473
489
4910
51.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.34710743801652894
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners42
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Instead, a silver-tipped umbrella stood"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences74
matches
0"I pulled the door open,"
1"My gaze travelled up charcoal"
2"He smelled of ozone and"
3"It was a scent that"
4"He didn't wait for an"
5"His shoulder brushed mine as"
6"I gripped the doorframe, knuckles"
7"He just wound himself around"
8"I slammed the door."
9"I leaned back against the"
10"He turned in a slow"
11"He stopped by the desk,"
12"He didn't touch them."
13"He never touched anything unless"
14"He took a step closer"
15"I had felt it."
16"I'd chalked it up to"
17"My hand instinctively went to"
18"I fished the keys out,"
19"It pulsed faintly, a heartbeat"
ratio0.568
7.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences74
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"I pulled the door open,"
2"My gaze travelled up charcoal"
3"He smelled of ozone and"
4"It was a scent that"
5"He didn't wait for an"
6"His shoulder brushed mine as"
7"I gripped the doorframe, knuckles"
8"Ptolemy, my tabby, didn't hiss."
9"He just wound himself around"
10"I slammed the door."
11"The three locks clicked back"
12"I leaned back against the"
13"He turned in a slow"
14"Towers of books threatened to"
15"He stopped by the desk,"
16"He didn't touch them."
17"He never touched anything unless"
18"The dim yellow light from"
19"A constant reminder of the"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He stopped by the desk, his fingers hovering over a stack of photocopies regarding Celtic demonology."
1"The double-glazing vibrated with a low, thrumming frequency that made my teeth ache."
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien asked, his blade gleaming in the yellow light"
1"He smirked, but his eyes were fixed on the door"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.145
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.036
83.1050%