| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx reformed partially [partially]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.531 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 85.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1334 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1334 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "wavering" | | 4 | "resonated" | | 5 | "tinged" | | 6 | "navigate" | | 7 | "structure" | | 8 | "crystalline" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "comforting" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1300 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1014 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.87 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Late | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Aurora | 19 | | Shade | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Grove | 3 | | English | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Empress" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Grove" | | 7 | "English" | | 8 | "Isolde" | | 9 | "Blade" | | 10 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Late" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.563 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.75% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed uncertain of itself, wavering" | | 1 | "seemed genuinely curious about the Grove was a bonus" | | 2 | "indigo that seemed to exist independently of the petals themselves, as if the hue originated from somewhere beneath reality's surface" | | 3 | "as if breathing" |
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| 46.15% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.538 | | wordCount | 1300 | | matches | | 0 | "not English oaks but something wilder, their silver bark catching light" | | 1 | "not from fear exactly, but from the weight of power" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 38.24 | | std | 22.44 | | cv | 0.587 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 76 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 93 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 61 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 58 | | 31 | 66 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora touched the Heartstone beneath her coat—a habit now, reflexive as breathing—and felt its warmth pulse once before settling into its usual steady heat." | | 1 | "Having someone—something—that could slip between shadows felt prudent." | | 2 | "Sound changed—the distant traffic from the main road cut off mid-drone, replaced by something she felt more than heard." | | 3 | "Not physically—her feet remained planted on grass—but everything shifted sideways in a way that made her eyes water." | | 4 | "Trees ringed the edges—not English oaks but something wilder, their silver bark catching light that came from no visible source." | | 5 | "The grass beneath Aurora's boots felt real enough—cool, slightly damp—but each step released tiny motes of luminescence that drifted upward before winking out." | | 6 | "She crouched at its edge and her reflection stared back—but wrong." | | 7 | "Nyx swirled closer to the seer, their form rippling with what might have been curiosity or irritation—Aurora couldn't tell." | | 8 | "More like architecture suggested through negative space—pillars of twisted wood that framed empty air, creating doorways that led nowhere visible." | | 9 | "The closer she got, the more her chest tightened—not from fear exactly, but from the weight of power that saturated the air." | | 10 | "They stepped through one of the empty doorways and vanished—but their voice still whispered from nearby." |
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| 98.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 965 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.04145077720207254 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016580310880829015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 13.54 | | std | 7.56 | | cv | 0.558 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 77.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.5104166666666666 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 87.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "More like architecture suggested through" | | 1 | "Too tall, their branches reaching" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, and stepped through" | | 1 | "their voice whispered from multiple" | | 2 | "She said it as fact," | | 3 | "She knelt, running her fingers" | | 4 | "They were softer than normal" | | 5 | "She crouched at its edge" | | 6 | "It wasn't a building, exactly." | | 7 | "she repeated, watching the pendant's" | | 8 | "They stepped through one of" |
| | ratio | 0.118 | |
| 45.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora touched the Heartstone beneath" | | 2 | "Nyx's voice drifted from the" | | 3 | "Aurora pulled her notebook from" | | 4 | "The Half-Fae hadn't been forthcoming" | | 5 | "Something about understanding the spaces" | | 6 | "Nyx solidified beside her, their" | | 7 | "The violet glow of their" | | 8 | "Aurora had brought the Shade" | | 9 | "That Nyx seemed genuinely curious" | | 10 | "The air between the northern" | | 11 | "Aurora reached forward and her" | | 12 | "Sound changed—the distant traffic from" | | 13 | "A low thrum that resonated" | | 14 | "she muttered, and stepped through" | | 15 | "The world tilted." | | 16 | "Colours brightened until they bordered" | | 17 | "Nyx flowed through beside her" | | 18 | "their voice whispered from multiple" | | 19 | "Aurora blinked hard, forcing her" |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Not physically—her feet remained planted on grass—but everything shifted sideways in a way that made her eyes water." | | 1 | "Deep violet merged with shades of indigo that seemed to exist independently of the petals themselves, as if the hue originated from somewhere beneath reality's …" | | 2 | "Trees ringed the edges—not English oaks but something wilder, their silver bark catching light that came from no visible source." | | 3 | "The grass beneath Aurora's boots felt real enough—cool, slightly damp—but each step released tiny motes of luminescence that drifted upward before winking out." | | 4 | "They were softer than normal grass, almost downy, and left a faint tingle on her skin that wasn't unpleasant." | | 5 | "Aurora approached cautiously, her boots leaving impressions in the moss-covered ground that glowed briefly before fading." | | 6 | "The pool's surface was mirror-smooth, undisturbed by wind that didn't exist here." | | 7 | "More like architecture suggested through negative space—pillars of twisted wood that framed empty air, creating doorways that led nowhere visible." | | 8 | "Crystalline formations grew from the ground around it, each one humming a single pure note that overlapped with its neighbours into harmony that hurt to hear." | | 9 | "And underneath it all, she was still just Rory from Cardiff, who'd wanted nothing more complicated than escaping her past." |
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| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx reformed partially, their edges still misty" | | 1 | "Nyx emerged, their form rippling with something that might have been amusement" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "their voice whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 3 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.188 | | leniency | 0.375 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |