Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0D3T65980WYJQXK1PTE9E

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
38.9s
Cost:
$0.016336
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A dull thump rattled the flat’s front door, followed instantly by nervous scrabbling on the other side. Aurora paused mid-pace, toe stubbing the heap of research notes sliding off Eva’s teetering coffee table. She’d spent the last hour alphabetising grimoires and pretending she didn’t care about anything outside the four walls and the lazy purring from Ptolemy sprawled over her duffle. The knock came again—one-two, the rhythm clipped and impatient. Aurora set down a battered copy of Demon Law: Volume II. Butterflies gnawed her stomach with thin, icy teeth. She eyed the three deadbolts. Eva never returned before midnight, didn’t bother knocking even then. Aurora’s pulse flickered when the second lock rattled. She called through the frame, “Lost, are you?” An accented scoff filtered through the wood. “Je peux sentir le curry d'ici. Open the door, chérie. My arm’s getting tired.” Her hand froze, fingertips brushing the worn scar on her wrist as if it could anchor her. Lucien. The thrill sat swords-edge beside dread. The deadbolts sounded deafening, one after the next. The door creaked open an inch—narrow enough for a single wary eye. Through the gap, he leaned on the frame: tall, expensive, irritation curling his mouth. Lucien Moreau still wore secrets and old wounds as neatly as his suit; his platinum hair slicked and immaculate despite the June rain. That cane of his—ivory glinting—rested over one gloved hand. Aurora slid her gaze from the amber of his right eye to the black left, as if balancing a knife on a fingertip. “You’re lost, then.” He exhaled. “Let me in before your neighbour’s nosiness ends up in somebody’s police report.” She stepped aside, not an inch more than the law required. Lucien’s cologne seeped through the doorway: pepper, old paper, a hint of sulphur that memory wouldn’t scrub away. He closed the door with care, gaze flicking over towers of books and post-its shrinking under Ptolemy’s slow stretch. He swept off rainwater with a deliberate flick of his sleeve. “How’s the academic hermitage?” His tone tangled with contempt and something softer, maybe envy. “Eva leave you any tea, or just the privilege of cat-sitting?” Aurora slouched against the wall, arms folded, weight on her good leg. “Nothing stronger than green tea and a shelf of curses I’m meant to categorise. Why are you here, Lucien?” She stabbed at efficiency, but her voice rasped with something brittle. His eyes lingered on the bruise-dark circles beneath hers. “I came by to collect—” He gestured at the table where the envelope sat, thick with whatever infernal documents Eva traded with half-London’s supernatural riff-raff. “But I might’ve expected you.” The line set his mouth harder. “You never were much for staying gone.” Aurora snorted, brushing hair behind her ear to keep her nerves busy. “You never were much for apologies.” The cat hopped down, chose Lucien’s shoes to claim this time, and Auroras heart stuttered watching him reach to scratch Ptolemy’s head. “Still bribing felines for information?” “Still running from the things that want you?” The reply slipped out before she could worry it over; a knife gleaming in candlelight. His gaze flickered, but he didn’t flinch. The game was always questions, never answers, and every word another move. “I’m not running,” she replied, quiet but vicious as a snap of frost. “London’s far enough. You’d know about distance.” He drummed gloved fingers on the cane’s head, gaze falling to her left wrist. “You ever sleep, Aurora?” Her laughter refused to be kind. “Any reason you’re counting my hours? Or did you just miss my dazzling conversation about demon loopholes?” He hesitated like a man in front of a locked case. The rain outside gathered strength, rattling window panes until the whole flat shivered. “I didn’t want it ending like that.” The words ducked out, raw, nothing layering them. No smirk. No measured wit. Bare as the first day they’d crossed into this fog-wrapped city. Aurora blinked, shock raw. The room pressed close—a stack of manuscripts, the cat, the smell of dust and vindaloo. She felt her spine slot down the wall until she half-sat on the old radiator, shoes worrying a patch of threadbare rug. “You had options, Moreau. You built the wall yourself.” Ptolemy sneezed at the cane, disgruntled as always by tension, and Lucien stepped closer. “And yet you stayed behind it. Tell me, have you forgiven yourself yet?” The question hit. Aurora bit her lower lip, resisting the urge to spit fire. Words, when they finally came, sawed up her throat. “You mean about Evan? Or what happened in Marseille?” A muscle jumped on his jaw, and he leaned the cane against Eva’s cluttered writing desk. “We can take turns listing regrets, but you’ll win on volume.” A smirk that barely remembered how to live touched her lips. “Your French guilt complex is showing.” So close now that she counted flecks of dark in his golden eye. His hands curled loose at his sides, one bare, one gloved. “I came to return your mother’s book.” The revelation startled the air between them. He drew a battered hardback from his pocket—its jacket wrapped in waterproof cloth. The cover bled faded embroidery. Aurora flinched. “I thought you pawned it.” He slid it across the coffee table, careful. “I borrowed it. You can scold me later. Read the margin notes on page one-fifty-four.” She reached out, spine pressed still to the radiator, caught the book’s edge. Her fingers brushed his, skin hot from the touch. She wanted to reel away and carve some biting line, but she only opened the cover. Her mother’s looping script unravelled beneath her thumb. Margins crowded with annotations in ink faded to dusk-blue—and further down, a note in sharp, angular French. Lucien’s handwriting. Never run alone. She read it once, twice, then set the book aside with hands that shook. Words finally found her. “Why bring it now?” His face closed, a mask cracking at the edge. “That night you vanished, I—” He faltered, searching words in a tongue not meant for tenderness. “I stopped looking after myself. Eva said to bring you something you wouldn’t throw away.” Aurora squeezed the book, pressing the worn cover. “I wouldn’t throw you away.” He snorted, bitterness purring under the sound. “Only misplaced me.” But softness threaded the words. He ran a thumb under her wrist, brushing the scar. Heat pricked her skin. Aurora barely breathed. “Careful, Lucien,” she whispered, not pulling away. No one moved. Rain sang at the windows. Ptolemy curled on the duffle and yawned. Finally, he retreated the inch she hadn’t known he’d claimed. “I’ll collect Eva’s package, then go.” She thrust the book against his chest, harder than she meant to. “Stay. For tea.” Her words tried for casual, but her grip lingered on him. “There’s… enough for two. Provided you’re still allowed mortal cups.” He graced her with that brief, irreverent half-smile. “Just don’t make it more than two sugars. I hear it’s bad for my… soul.” Aurora rolled her eyes and started for the kettle, shuffling past heaps of demonology and the ghost of every old sorrow. Lucien trailed, silent except for the soft thump of his cane against overgrown carpet. Unsaid things swelled between them, but the air thinned. Not forgiveness, not yet. But room. Ptolemy flicked his tail, restless. Aurora asked, “Why’d you write it in French?” Lucien, now half-buried in a pile of notes, considered her with an unreadable smile. “Some secrets want to be translated. Others want to stay close to the tongue.” Her eyes didn’t leave him while the kettle hissed, like she could map all the reasons she’d ever left him behind. Tea, book, scar, silence. Pieces of a broken mosaic, waiting for hands patient enough to begin again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"tenderness"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"mosaic"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"pulse"
2"flickered"
3"glinting"
4"weight"
5"gleaming"
6"measured"
7"tension"
8"complex"
9"tenderness"
10"flicked"
11"unreadable"
12"silence"
13"mosaic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences97
matches
0"d with contempt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1293
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount989
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Ptolemy6
Demon1
Law1
Volume1
Moreau1
June1
Aurora13
Lucien8
Auroras1
French1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Law"
3"Moreau"
4"June"
5"Aurora"
6"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.843
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if balancing a knife on a fingertip"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.773
wordCount1293
matches
0"not running,” she replied, quiet but vicious as a snap of frost"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
98.99% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean28.73
std14.26
cv0.496
sampleLengths
061
151
28
321
424
520
646
726
815
948
1036
1142
1252
1318
1427
1542
1620
1718
1823
1924
2031
2141
229
2327
2432
2527
2617
2738
2825
2923
3065
3125
3240
3313
3429
3510
3615
3716
3836
3923
4050
415
428
4328
4438
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences121
ratio0.058
matches
0"The knock came again—one-two, the rhythm clipped and impatient."
1"The door creaked open an inch—narrow enough for a single wary eye."
2"Lucien Moreau still wore secrets and old wounds as neatly as his suit; his platinum hair slicked and immaculate despite the June rain."
3"That cane of his—ivory glinting—rested over one gloved hand."
4"“Still running from the things that want you?” The reply slipped out before she could worry it over; a knife gleaming in candlelight."
5"The room pressed close—a stack of manuscripts, the cat, the smell of dust and vindaloo."
6"He drew a battered hardback from his pocket—its jacket wrapped in waterproof cloth."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1008
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"brief, irreverent half-smile."
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.030753968253968252
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008928571428571428
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean10.69
std5.84
cv0.547
sampleLengths
017
116
228
39
411
58
65
710
88
98
107
1114
1217
131
146
158
1612
1714
1823
199
2023
213
222
2313
2411
2518
2619
2711
2814
2911
3012
3130
329
3325
3411
357
3612
376
3822
395
4023
417
4212
4313
447
4514
464
476
4817
4911
60.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3884297520661157
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners47
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"So close now that she"
1"Finally, he retreated the inch"
ratio0.022
68.89% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences90
matches
0"She’d spent the last hour"
1"She eyed the three deadbolts."
2"She called through the frame,"
3"Her hand froze, fingertips brushing"
4"She stepped aside, not an"
5"He closed the door with"
6"He swept off rainwater with"
7"His tone tangled with contempt"
8"She stabbed at efficiency, but"
9"His eyes lingered on the"
10"He gestured at the table"
11"His gaze flickered, but he"
12"she replied, quiet but vicious"
13"He drummed gloved fingers on"
14"Her laughter refused to be"
15"He hesitated like a man"
16"She felt her spine slot"
17"His hands curled loose at"
18"He drew a battered hardback"
19"He slid it across the"
ratio0.378
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences90
matches
0"A dull thump rattled the"
1"Aurora paused mid-pace, toe stubbing"
2"She’d spent the last hour"
3"The knock came again—one—two, the"
4"Aurora set down a battered"
5"Butterflies gnawed her stomach with"
6"She eyed the three deadbolts."
7"Eva never returned before midnight,"
8"Aurora’s pulse flickered when the"
9"She called through the frame,"
10"An accented scoff filtered through"
11"Her hand froze, fingertips brushing"
12"The thrill sat swords-edge beside"
13"The deadbolts sounded deafening, one"
14"The door creaked open an"
15"Lucien Moreau still wore secrets"
16"That cane of his—ivory glinting—rested"
17"Aurora slid her gaze from"
18"She stepped aside, not an"
19"Lucien’s cologne seeped through the"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her hand froze, fingertips brushing the worn scar on her wrist as if it could anchor her."
1"Aurora slid her gaze from the amber of his right eye to the black left, as if balancing a knife on a fingertip."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She stabbed, but her voice rasped with something brittle"
1"she replied, quiet but vicious as a snap of frost"
2"she whispered, not pulling away"
3"Her words tried, but her grip lingered on him"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He faltered (falter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.105
81.2241%