Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0DDFGN1294W92GN4R1P8N

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Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.010528
Provider:
Together

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air pressure dropped with a sudden, violent pop, like a cork firing from a champagne bottle. The damp chill of the London alleyway vanished, replaced by a wall of heat that smelled of roasted cinnamon and copper. Rory stumbled forward, boots sinking into soil that felt disturbingly soft, like rotting velvet. She gasped, hand flying to her chest where the Heartstone Pendant seared her skin, radiating a heat that had nothing to do with the sudden temperature spike. The crimson gem throbbed against her sternum, a frantic second heartbeat. "Close your mouth. You look like a stranded fish." The voice brushed against her ear, a dry rasp of wind over dead leaves. Nyx coalesced beside her, their dark form rippling in the light. The shade hunched, contracting into a tighter silhouette to escape the oppressive glow above. "It’s the sky." Rory looked up, shielding her eyes. Her breath hitched in her throat. The horizon bled in hues of violent orange and deep amber, a bruised twilight that refused to dim. There was no sun, just a suffocating, radiant ceiling of heavy light that pressed down on her shoulders, a physical weight. "Dymas. The realm of excess. I’d hoped for a shadowier hell." "We aren't in Hell. Not exactly." Rory squinted at the landscape before them. It stretched out in a riot of impossible geometry. Hills rolled in impossible spirals, orchards twisted into fractal shapes that hurt the eyes. Trees with bark like polished obsidian rose from the earth, their leaves shimmering with a metallic sheen—copper, silver, and gold. Then the smell hit her. It roared through her senses, bypassing her brain and striking directly at her gut. Roasting garlic, caramelised sugar, the rich tang of spiced meats, the scent of fresh bread so potent she could taste the yeast. Her stomach gave a treacherous, lurching growl. Her mouth watered, instantly and painfully. "Do not eat." Nyx drifted forward, their feet leaving no impression on the dark soil. "I wasn't planning to." Rory lied. She took a step, eyes locked on a bush nearby. It bore fruit that looked like pomegranates, but the skin pulsed with a slow rhythm, translucent to reveal the juice inside. It looked delicious. It looked like the only thing that mattered in the universe. "The compulsion is the first course. You eat, you stay." She ripped her gaze away, forcing herself to look at the path ahead. A road of crushed white shells wound through the orchard. "Where are we going?" "To the source. The stone is warm, is it not?" Rory clutched the silver chain, the gem burning her palm. It pulled slightly, like a magnet finding north. "It feels like it's melting my skin." "Then we are close." They moved deeper into the orchard. The air here didn't just smell of food; it tasted of it. Moist, humid, and thick. Every inhale felt like swallowing a heavy cream sauce. Sweat pricked at Rory’s hairline, plastering stray black strands to her neck. Silence hung over the grove, but not the peaceful silence of an empty library. This was a held breath. A waiting silence. Every rustle of the metallic leaves sounded like a coin dropping on pavement. A vine curled across the path, thick as a man's arm and covered in glistening thorns. As Rory stepped over it, the thorns retracted with a wet hiss. "Watch the flora. It bites." "I noticed." Ahead, the trees thinned. In the clearing, a fountain bubbled. But the liquid wasn't water. It churned with a thick, golden viscosity—honey or maybe molten butter. The scent of vanilla drifted from it, cloying and sweet. Rory stopped. She drew the Fae-Forged Blade from her belt. The moonsilver metal gleamed in the amber light, cold against her knuckles. It felt grounding. Real. "Do you see that?" She pointed to the edge of the clearing. A figure stood there, motionless. It looked human, but its skin was stretched tight over its bones, pale as parchment. It wore a tunic of fine silk, stained with wine and oil. It was pruning a tree that grew glass apples. "Helbound," Nyx whispered, the sound dispersing into the warm air. "A soul indentured to Prince Belphegor. Or perhaps just a waiter for the eternal feast." The figure turned. Its eyes were gone, sewn shut with silver thread. Yet, it tilted its head directly at them. "Greetings, travellers from the Veil. The feast is not yet served, but the appetisers are ripe for the plucking." Its voice didn't come from a mouth. It vibrated from the chest, a resonant hum that made the ground beneath Rory’s boots tremble. Rory tightened her grip on the dagger. The Heartstone flared against her chest, a sudden spike of heat. "We aren't here for the food." "All are here for the food. Eventually." The blind figure reached up, plucked a glass apple from the branch. It crunched loudly as it bit down, shattering like thin candy. "Pass. But perhaps you would care for the vintage? The blood of a thousand grapes, wept under the amber sun." Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx. The shade had flattened themselves against Rory’s shadow, barely a sliver of darkness in the overwhelming brightness. "Keep walking," the wind whispered. "Do not accept." "We're just passing through. Heading to the Spire." She gestured vaguely to the distant structure she could see jutting into the sky—a needle of black stone that pierced the amber glow. The Helbound soul laughed, a dry, rattling sound like parchment crumbling. "The Spire? The Prince's larder? You have a sweet tooth, little mortal. Or perhaps a death wish. The path is paved with sugar." It gestured with a shattered apple stem. "Go then. But beware the bees. They dislike the scent of the Fae." Rory nodded once, curt and sharp. She stepped around the fountain, giving the blind servant a wide berth. As she moved past, the scent of the honey fountain intensified, making her head spin. Her knees buckled slightly. "Steady." Nyx flowed up her leg, solidifying just enough to offer a cold, supporting pressure against her calf. "This place... it's heavy. Like walking through treacle." "It is the atmosphere of desire. It wants you to stop. To sit. To consume until you burst." She gritted her teeth, forcing her legs to move. The air grew thicker the further they went from the orchard, the vegetation changing. The metallic trees gave way to fields of grain that shimmered in colours no wheat should possess—blue, violent purple, iridescent green. In the distance, a roar went up. A cheer. Thousands of voices screaming in delight. "The competition," Nyx said. "They never stop." "Competition?" "Culinary. The prize is immortality. The price is often sanity." Rory looked down at the pendant. The glow was bright now, cutting through the amber gloom of her shirt. It pulled toward the roar, toward the Spire. She adjusted her grip on the Fae blade, the cold metal the only thing keeping her grounded against the hunger gnawing at her insides. "Let's move. Before I start eyeing up that purple wheat." She strode forward, boots crunching on the strange, spongy earth. The amber light bathed them in a sweaty, claustrophobic glow, casting long, distorted shadows that writhed on the ground like dying snakes. Nyx floated beside her, a shadow in a world of too much light. "Just don't chew the scenery, Rory. It bites back."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.176
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"radiant"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"treacherous"
count1
8
word"lurching"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"glistening"
count1
12
word"churned"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"structure"
count1
16
word"shattered"
count1
17
word"desire"
count1
18
word"shimmered"
count1
19
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"velvet"
2"throbbed"
3"oppressive"
4"radiant"
5"weight"
6"stomach"
7"treacherous"
8"lurching"
9"pulsed"
10"silence"
11"glistening"
12"churned"
13"silk"
14"vibrated"
15"structure"
16"shattered"
17"desire"
18"shimmered"
19"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"g in delight"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1233
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount972
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Rory14
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Nyx7
Helbound1
Spire1
Fae2
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
places
0"London"
1"Spire"
globalScore0.78
windowScore0.833
16.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like pomegranates, but the skin pu"
1"looked like the only thing that mattered"
2"felt like swallowing a heavy cream sauc"
3"sounded like a coin dropping on pavement"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.811
wordCount1233
matches
0"not yet served, but the appetisers are ripe for the plucking"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean18.97
std14.43
cv0.761
sampleLengths
038
152
29
339
43
551
611
76
850
95
1049
113
1212
134
1447
1510
1623
174
1810
1918
207
214
2243
2335
2428
255
262
2736
2826
294
308
3141
3225
3320
3419
3523
3618
376
387
3923
4020
4123
428
438
4423
4511
4623
477
4813
4937
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"was stretched"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was pruning"
26.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences123
ratio0.041
matches
0"Trees with bark like polished obsidian rose from the earth, their leaves shimmering with a metallic sheen—copper, silver, and gold."
1"The air here didn't just smell of food; it tasted of it."
2"It churned with a thick, golden viscosity—honey or maybe molten butter."
3"She gestured vaguely to the distant structure she could see jutting into the sky—a needle of black stone that pierced the amber glow."
4"The metallic trees gave way to fields of grain that shimmered in colours no wheat should possess—blue, violent purple, iridescent green."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount977
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"blue, violent purple, iridescent"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.028659160696008188
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012282497441146366
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean10.02
std5.78
cv0.576
sampleLengths
017
121
214
327
411
59
614
711
814
93
106
116
1218
1321
1411
156
167
179
1814
1920
205
2114
2222
237
246
253
2612
274
282
2910
3021
313
3211
3310
3413
3510
364
3710
3810
398
407
414
426
4312
444
459
4612
4714
485
493
53.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.36585365853658536
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners45
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Then the smell hit her."
ratio0.011
72.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences87
matches
0"She gasped, hand flying to"
1"Her breath hitched in her"
2"It stretched out in a"
3"It roared through her senses,"
4"Her stomach gave a treacherous,"
5"Her mouth watered, instantly and"
6"She took a step, eyes"
7"It bore fruit that looked"
8"It looked delicious."
9"It looked like the only"
10"She ripped her gaze away,"
11"It pulled slightly, like a"
12"They moved deeper into the"
13"It churned with a thick,"
14"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade"
15"It felt grounding."
16"She pointed to the edge"
17"It looked human, but its"
18"It wore a tunic of"
19"It was pruning a tree"
ratio0.368
28.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences87
matches
0"The air pressure dropped with"
1"The damp chill of the"
2"Rory stumbled forward, boots sinking"
3"She gasped, hand flying to"
4"The crimson gem throbbed against"
5"The voice brushed against her"
6"Nyx coalesced beside her, their"
7"The shade hunched, contracting into"
8"Rory looked up, shielding her"
9"Her breath hitched in her"
10"The horizon bled in hues"
11"Rory squinted at the landscape"
12"It stretched out in a"
13"Hills rolled in impossible spirals,"
14"Trees with bark like polished"
15"It roared through her senses,"
16"Her stomach gave a treacherous,"
17"Her mouth watered, instantly and"
18"Nyx drifted forward, their feet"
19"She took a step, eyes"
ratio0.862
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Yet, it tilted its head"
ratio0.011
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Rory stumbled forward, boots sinking into soil that felt disturbingly soft, like rotting velvet."
1"She gasped, hand flying to her chest where the Heartstone Pendant seared her skin, radiating a heat that had nothing to do with the sudden temperature spike."
2"The horizon bled in hues of violent orange and deep amber, a bruised twilight that refused to dim."
3"There was no sun, just a suffocating, radiant ceiling of heavy light that pressed down on her shoulders, a physical weight."
4"It roared through her senses, bypassing her brain and striking directly at her gut."
5"It bore fruit that looked like pomegranates, but the skin pulsed with a slow rhythm, translucent to reveal the juice inside."
6"She gestured vaguely to the distant structure she could see jutting into the sky—a needle of black stone that pierced the amber glow."
7"The metallic trees gave way to fields of grain that shimmered in colours no wheat should possess—blue, violent purple, iridescent green."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx whispered, the sound dispersing into the warm air"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"the wind whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.176
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.118
76.1589%