| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.088 | | leniency | 0.176 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1238 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1238 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "radiant" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "treacherous" | | 8 | "lurching" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "glistening" | | 12 | "churned" | | 13 | "silk" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "structure" | | 16 | "shattered" | | 17 | "desire" | | 18 | "shimmered" | | 19 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1233 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.98% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 972 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Helbound | 1 | | Spire | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.78 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 16.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like pomegranates, but the skin pu" | | 1 | "looked like the only thing that mattered" | | 2 | "felt like swallowing a heavy cream sauc" | | 3 | "sounded like a coin dropping on pavement" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.811 | | wordCount | 1233 | | matches | | 0 | "not yet served, but the appetisers are ripe for the plucking" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 18.97 | | std | 14.43 | | cv | 0.761 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "was stretched" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | |
| 26.71% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "Trees with bark like polished obsidian rose from the earth, their leaves shimmering with a metallic sheen—copper, silver, and gold." | | 1 | "The air here didn't just smell of food; it tasted of it." | | 2 | "It churned with a thick, golden viscosity—honey or maybe molten butter." | | 3 | "She gestured vaguely to the distant structure she could see jutting into the sky—a needle of black stone that pierced the amber glow." | | 4 | "The metallic trees gave way to fields of grain that shimmered in colours no wheat should possess—blue, violent purple, iridescent green." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 977 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "blue, violent purple, iridescent" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.028659160696008188 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012282497441146366 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 10.02 | | std | 5.78 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 53.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.36585365853658536 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 38.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the smell hit her." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 72.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She gasped, hand flying to" | | 1 | "Her breath hitched in her" | | 2 | "It stretched out in a" | | 3 | "It roared through her senses," | | 4 | "Her stomach gave a treacherous," | | 5 | "Her mouth watered, instantly and" | | 6 | "She took a step, eyes" | | 7 | "It bore fruit that looked" | | 8 | "It looked delicious." | | 9 | "It looked like the only" | | 10 | "She ripped her gaze away," | | 11 | "It pulled slightly, like a" | | 12 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 13 | "It churned with a thick," | | 14 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 15 | "It felt grounding." | | 16 | "She pointed to the edge" | | 17 | "It looked human, but its" | | 18 | "It wore a tunic of" | | 19 | "It was pruning a tree" |
| | ratio | 0.368 | |
| 28.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The air pressure dropped with" | | 1 | "The damp chill of the" | | 2 | "Rory stumbled forward, boots sinking" | | 3 | "She gasped, hand flying to" | | 4 | "The crimson gem throbbed against" | | 5 | "The voice brushed against her" | | 6 | "Nyx coalesced beside her, their" | | 7 | "The shade hunched, contracting into" | | 8 | "Rory looked up, shielding her" | | 9 | "Her breath hitched in her" | | 10 | "The horizon bled in hues" | | 11 | "Rory squinted at the landscape" | | 12 | "It stretched out in a" | | 13 | "Hills rolled in impossible spirals," | | 14 | "Trees with bark like polished" | | 15 | "It roared through her senses," | | 16 | "Her stomach gave a treacherous," | | 17 | "Her mouth watered, instantly and" | | 18 | "Nyx drifted forward, their feet" | | 19 | "She took a step, eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 57.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, it tilted its head" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 26.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stumbled forward, boots sinking into soil that felt disturbingly soft, like rotting velvet." | | 1 | "She gasped, hand flying to her chest where the Heartstone Pendant seared her skin, radiating a heat that had nothing to do with the sudden temperature spike." | | 2 | "The horizon bled in hues of violent orange and deep amber, a bruised twilight that refused to dim." | | 3 | "There was no sun, just a suffocating, radiant ceiling of heavy light that pressed down on her shoulders, a physical weight." | | 4 | "It roared through her senses, bypassing her brain and striking directly at her gut." | | 5 | "It bore fruit that looked like pomegranates, but the skin pulsed with a slow rhythm, translucent to reveal the juice inside." | | 6 | "She gestured vaguely to the distant structure she could see jutting into the sky—a needle of black stone that pierced the amber glow." | | 7 | "The metallic trees gave way to fields of grain that shimmered in colours no wheat should possess—blue, violent purple, iridescent green." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, the sound dispersing into the warm air" |
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| 91.18% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the wind whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.088 | | leniency | 0.176 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |