Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0DGX1292JF5EYP2WJDWTZ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.182205

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just past midnight, three sharp raps that cut through the rain hammering against Eva's windows. Rory stood frozen at the door, one hand still raised, water streaming from her black hair onto the grimy hallway carpet. The smell of curry from downstairs mixed with petrichor and something else — blood, faint but unmistakable. The deadbolts scraped open one by one. Through the gap, amber light spilled out, followed by Lucien's face. His platinum hair remained perfectly slicked despite the late hour, though his usually immaculate charcoal suit jacket hung open, sleeves rolled to his elbows. "Merde." The word escaped him before he could catch it. His mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — swept over her sodden form. "You're bleeding." "Just a scratch." Rory's voice came out rougher than intended. She hadn't seen him since that night three months ago, when she'd walked out of his Mayfair flat with her dignity barely intact. "Is Eva here?" "In Cardiff. Family emergency." He stepped back, opening the door wider. "Come in before you bleed all over Mrs. Patel's hallway." She hesitated. Water dripped steadily from her delivery jacket, forming dark spots on the worn runner. Going in meant being alone with him, meant navigating whatever remained between them without Eva's cheerful presence as buffer. "Unless you'd prefer to explain to the landlady why there's blood on her carpet." His French accent, usually faint, thickened slightly — the only sign he wasn't as composed as he appeared. Rory pushed past him, careful not to brush against his body. The familiar chaos of Eva's flat engulfed her: towers of books threatening to topple, scrolls unfurled across every surface, the lingering scent of sage and frankincense. Ptolemy lifted his tabby head from his perch atop a grimoire, fixed her with an imperious stare, then resumed his nap. "Bathroom." Lucien's hand hovered near her elbow without touching. "Now." "I know where it is." She shrugged off his almost-touch, leaving wet footprints on the threadbare carpet. In the tiny bathroom, fluorescent light revealed the gash along her left forearm, deeper than she'd thought. Blood had soaked through her jacket sleeve, mixing with rainwater to create rust-coloured rivulets. Lucien appeared in the doorway with Eva's first aid kit. "What happened?" "Delivery gone wrong." She peeled off the sodden jacket, wincing as fabric pulled away from the wound. "Customer had friends. Unfriendly ones." "Human?" "Would I be here if they were?" He set the kit on the sink's edge, movements economical. "Shirt." "Excuse me?" "The sleeve is ruined. Unless you'd prefer I cut it off you." Heat crept up her neck. She'd changed in front of him before — before things went sideways, before she'd learned exactly how dangerous caring for someone like him could be. But this felt different. Raw. She turned her back and pulled the delivery shirt over her head, hyperaware of his presence behind her. "Christ, Rory." His breath hitched. She glanced down. Bruises bloomed across her ribs, purple-black against pale skin. "Those are from Tuesday." "Putain de merde." He moved closer, and she caught his reflection in the mirror — jaw tight, that careful control slipping. "Sit." She perched on the bathtub's edge, holding out her injured arm. His fingers were gentle as he cleaned the wound, though she noticed the slight tremor in his hands. The bathroom felt too small, too warm despite her rain-chilled skin. "This needs stitches." He didn't look up from his work. "Then stitch it." "I'm not a doctor." "No, just a half-demon who's patched up worse." The words came out sharper than intended. "Or have you forgotten?" His hands stilled. In the harsh light, she could see the faint lines around his eyes, the tension in his shoulders beneath the crisp white shirt. "I haven't forgotten anything." The confession hung between them, heavy with meaning. Rory forced herself to breathe normally, to ignore the warmth of his fingers against her skin, the way his cologne — sandalwood and something darker — made her stomach tighten. "Why did you come here?" He resumed cleaning the wound, voice carefully neutral. "You have other safe houses." "Silas is dealing with a situation at the bar. Tommy's out of town." She hissed as antiseptic hit raw flesh. "Figured Eva wouldn't mind." "But you didn't know she was gone." Not a question. "Which means you came here bleeding, in the middle of the night, without knowing who would answer." "I thought—" She stopped. What had she thought? That three months was enough time? That she could handle seeing him again? "It doesn't matter." "Doesn't it?" He selected a needle from the kit, sterilising it with practiced ease. "Hold still." The first pierce of needle through skin made her grip the tub's edge. Lucien worked in silence, each stitch precise. She focused on the faded floral wallpaper, on Ptolemy's distant purring, on anything but the careful way he held her arm. "You left," he said finally, tying off the last stitch. "No explanation. No word." "You know why I left." "Do I?" He applied antibiotic ointment with unnecessary concentration. "Because from where I stood, we had one argument about my methods—" "You killed someone in front of me." The words exploded out. "Tore his throat out with your bare hands." "He was trying to kill you." His control cracked, accent thickening further. "What would you have had me do? Let him?" "I had it handled." "You had a knife to your throat." "I was negotiating!" "You were dying!" He stood abruptly, turning to grip the sink. In the mirror, his amber eye glowed faintly. "And I would do it again. Every time. Without hesitation." The bathroom fell silent except for the rain against the window. Rory stared at his back, at the tension vibrating through his frame. This was why she'd left — not the violence itself, but what it revealed. The depth of what lay between them. The danger of it. "I should go." She reached for her ruined shirt. "No." He turned, blocking the doorway. "Not like this. Not again." "Lucien—" "I have things to say." His mismatched gaze held hers. "Three months of things. And you're going to hear them." "Since when do you get to make demands?" "Since you showed up bleeding on a doorstep where you knew I might be." He stepped closer, and she had nowhere to retreat. "Since you trusted me enough to let me touch you again, even after—" "Don't." But the word lacked conviction. This close, she could see the faint demonic markings that appeared along his collar when his control slipped, could feel the heat radiating from his body. "After I showed you what I am," he continued, voice dropping. "What I'm capable of when it comes to protecting what's mine." "I'm not yours." "Aren't you?" His hand rose to cup her face, thumb brushing her cheekbone. "Then why are you here, Rory? Why not any other safe house in London?" She should pull away. Should remind him why they'd ended, why a human and half-demon could never work. Instead, she found herself leaning into his touch, eyes closing as his fingers tangled in her wet hair. "Because I'm a fool," she whispered. "No." His forehead touched hers. "Because you know, as I do, that this isn't finished." The rain intensified, drumming against glass. In the living room, Ptolemy yowled, likely demanding attention or food. But neither of them moved, suspended in the small space between what was and what might be. "I can't watch you kill for me again," she managed. "And I can't watch you bleed." His thumb traced the crescent scar on her wrist, the one he'd memorised months ago. "We seem to be at an impasse." "Seems so." His lips quirked — not quite a smile. "Then we'll have to negotiate. You're good at that, I hear." Despite everything, she felt her own mouth twitch. "Better when there's not a knife to my throat." "I'll bear that in mind." He pulled back slightly, studying her face. "You need dry clothes. Food. Rest." "Is that your professional assessment?" "That's me trying very hard not to do what I want to do." The amber eye flared brighter. "Which is carry you to Eva's spare room and show you exactly how much I've missed you these three months." Heat flooded through her. "Lucien—" "But I won't." He stepped back, giving her space to breathe. "Not tonight. Not when you're hurt and exhausted and we have too much to sort through." The loss of his warmth left her cold. She grabbed a towel from the rack, wrapping it around her shoulders. "Very noble of you." "I have my moments." He retrieved his cane from where he'd left it by the door. "Eva keeps clothes in the bureau. Should be something that fits."
total_cost0.182205

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.06% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags35
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He stepped back [back]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"He stood abruptly [abruptly]"
3"He pulled back [back]"
4"He stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences87
tagDensity0.402
leniency0.805
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.115
79.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"streaming"
count1
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"chilled"
count1
4
word"tension"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"practiced ease"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"streaming"
1"navigating"
2"familiar"
3"chilled"
4"tension"
5"warmth"
6"stomach"
7"practiced ease"
8"silence"
9"could feel"
10"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1472
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount973
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Lucien4
Mayfair1
French1
Rory5
Ptolemy3
Heat2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Heat"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.679
wordCount1472
matches
0"not the violence itself, but what it revealed"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean21.03
std14.37
cv0.684
sampleLengths
056
142
226
336
421
535
632
758
810
948
1012
1122
121
137
1411
152
1612
1753
185
1916
2022
2140
2210
233
244
2519
2630
2738
2818
2924
3027
3124
3216
3341
3414
355
3621
3719
3821
394
407
413
4229
4348
449
4511
461
4720
488
4936
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences143
ratio0.056
matches
0"The smell of curry from downstairs mixed with petrichor and something else — blood, faint but unmistakable."
1"His mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — swept over her sodden form."
2"\"Unless you'd prefer to explain to the landlady why there's blood on her carpet.\" His French accent, usually faint, thickened slightly — the only sign he wasn't as composed as he appeared."
3"She'd changed in front of him before — before things went sideways, before she'd learned exactly how dangerous caring for someone like him could be."
4"\"Putain de merde.\" He moved closer, and she caught his reflection in the mirror — jaw tight, that careful control slipping."
5"Rory forced herself to breathe normally, to ignore the warmth of his fingers against her skin, the way his cologne — sandalwood and something darker — made her stomach tighten."
6"This was why she'd left — not the violence itself, but what it revealed."
7"His lips quirked — not quite a smile."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount968
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"purple-black against pale skin."
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.030991735537190084
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.015495867768595042
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean10.29
std6.63
cv0.644
sampleLengths
018
121
217
37
411
524
610
714
82
910
1023
113
1211
1310
142
1514
1619
1732
1811
1926
2021
219
221
2317
2417
2514
2610
272
2817
295
301
317
3210
331
342
3512
365
3725
384
391
4018
415
423
439
444
4521
461
4711
4818
4911
73.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.46153846153846156
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners66
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Instead, she found herself leaning"
ratio0.011
40.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences87
matches
0"His platinum hair remained perfectly"
1"His mismatched eyes — one"
2"She hadn't seen him since"
3"He stepped back, opening the"
4"His French accent, usually faint,"
5"She shrugged off his almost-touch,"
6"She peeled off the sodden"
7"He set the kit on"
8"She'd changed in front of"
9"She turned her back and"
10"His breath hitched"
11"She glanced down."
12"He moved closer, and she"
13"She perched on the bathtub's"
14"His fingers were gentle as"
15"He didn't look up from"
16"His hands stilled."
17"He resumed cleaning the wound,"
18"She hissed as antiseptic hit"
19"He selected a needle from"
ratio0.448
40.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences87
matches
0"The knock came just past"
1"Rory stood frozen at the"
2"The smell of curry from"
3"The deadbolts scraped open one"
4"His platinum hair remained perfectly"
5"The word escaped him before"
6"His mismatched eyes — one"
7"Rory's voice came out rougher"
8"She hadn't seen him since"
9"He stepped back, opening the"
10"Water dripped steadily from her"
11"His French accent, usually faint,"
12"Rory pushed past him, careful"
13"The familiar chaos of Eva's"
14"Ptolemy lifted his tabby head"
15"Lucien's hand hovered near her"
16"She shrugged off his almost-touch,"
17"Blood had soaked through her"
18"Lucien appeared in the doorway"
19"She peeled off the sodden"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The knock came just past midnight, three sharp raps that cut through the rain hammering against Eva's windows."
1"This close, she could see the faint demonic markings that appeared along his collar when his control slipped, could feel the heat radiating from his body."
82.14% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags35
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He resumed, voice carefully neutral"
1"He stood abruptly, turning to grip the sink"
2"he continued, voice dropping"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She hissed (hiss)"
1"he continued (continue)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences87
tagDensity0.046
leniency0.092
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.069
82.3126%