Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0DRBWG32C17AAJK804437

Run Details

Duration:
2m 43s
Cost:
$0.001158
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station tasted of damp brick and ozone. Detective Harlow Quinn’s polished oxfords clicked against the grimy tile floor, the sound echoing through the cavernous, shadow-draped space. Her sharp jaw was set, her brown eyes scanning the scene with military precision. Yellow police tape cordoned off a section of the deserted platform, a stark, modern intrusion in the Victorian gloom. Beside a faded poster advertising a circus that had left town decades ago, a forensic technician in a white suit was dusting a wrought-iron bench. On the bench sat a single, incongruous item: a small brass compass, its casing mottled with a greenish patina. “Quinn.” Detective Inspector Raj Singh emerged from the shadows near a boarded-up ticket booth, his hands deep in the pockets of his wool overcoat. “Unusual spot for a burglary, even for Camden.” “This wasn’t a burglary,” Quinn said, her voice flat. She didn’t look at him, her attention fixed on the compass. She noted the intricate etchings on its face—sigils, not navigational markings. “What’s missing?” “According to the caller, a whole market’s worth of junk. They described this place as… bustling. Stalls. Dozens of people. All gone now, vanished into thin air. They found only that.” Singh gestured at the compass. “Witness is a nervous type. Occult researcher from the British Museum. Eva Kowalski. She’s over there.” Quinn followed his nod. A young woman with a cascade of curly red hair huddled on an upturned crate just outside the tape line, a worn leather satchel clutched to her chest. Round glasses magnified her wide, green eyes. She was staring at the compass, her freckled face pale. “An entire market doesn’t vanish, Raj.” “She claims it does. Says it’s called the Veil Market. Moves locations every full moon. Requires a bone token to enter.” Singh’s tone was carefully neutral, the tone he used when humoring a theory he found absurd. “She says she was here last night, buying books. Came back this morning to follow up on a lead and found it… like this. Empty. Said she felt a ‘residual tear’ in the air.” Quinn finally turned to him, her gaze sharp. “And you’re logging this as a burglary?” “What would you like me to log it as? Grand larceny by apparition?” Singh sighed, rubbing his temple. “Look, Harlow. The physical evidence is one discarded trinket on a bench. No forced entry, no footprints beyond the witness’s and our own, no CCTV because we’re in a decommissioned station. The witness’s story is fantastical. It’s a prank, or she’s confused, or she’s involved and laying a bizarre cover.” Quinn walked past him, ducking under the tape. She approached the bench, her eyes not on the compass but on the space around it. The forensic tech stepped back. “Bag that,” Quinn said, not pointing. “The compass, ma’am?” “The air above the bench. Three cubic feet. Use an electrostatic sampler.” The tech blinked. Singh moved closer. “Harlow?” She ignored him. Her eyes traced the grime on the floor. There were scuff marks, but they were wrong. They weren’t the random patterns of foot traffic; they formed faint, concentric arcs, centered not on the bench, but on a point about six feet in front of it. As if people had been standing in a rough circle, shifting their weight. Not milling about a market. Waiting. Or watching. She crouched. The tile here was different. Not cleaner, but the patina of dust was uniformly disturbed in a perfect, three-foot diameter circle. No individual shoe prints. It looked like something heavy with a flat, circular base had been sitting there, and had been lifted straight up. “Where are the stall imprints? The dropped merchandise? The litter?” Quinn stood, addressing Singh but looking at Eva Kowalski. “If a bustling market was here last night, even if it was packed up, there would be signs. Oil stains from lamps. Indentations from table legs. A scrap of fabric, a coin, a bit of string. There is nothing. Just this one object, placed deliberately on a bench, and a circular disturbance on the floor.” She walked over to Eva. The woman looked up, tucking a strand of red hair behind her left ear. “You’re Eva Kowalski.” “Yes.” “You have a bone token.” Eva’s grip tightened on her satchel. “I… I used it to get in last night. It… dissolved after use.” “Describe the stall that was there.” Quinn pointed to the clean circle on the floor. Eva swallowed. “A Shade artisan. He sold navigational tools. Things attuned to ley lines and… thin places. His stall had a large black anvil. He bolted it to the floor because the vibrations from the trains above would make it ‘sing’, he said.” An anvil. Heavy. Bolted down. Quinn looked back at the circle. A flat, heavy base. “What did you buy from him?” “I didn’t. I was browsing. He was showing me a shadow compass—said it didn’t point north, it pointed toward the nearest rift or portal. I told him I’d think about it.” Quinn walked back to the bench. She looked at the brass compass. The etchings matched Eva’s description. She pulled a pen from her pocket and used it to gently flip open the compass’s lid. The needle inside didn’t quiver toward magnetic north. It spun slowly, lazily, then locked. It pointed unerringly toward the brick wall at the end of the platform. “That’s not north,” Singh said, coming to stand beside her. “No.” Quinn’s mind was working, pieces clicking into a configuration that defied the Met’s manual of procedure. A market that moves. A token that dissolves. A compass that points to nowhere. It was absurd. It was impossible. It was exactly the kind of unexplained texture that had surrounded Morris’s death. The reports she’d buried, the witness statements that read like fever dreams, the evidence that simply evaporated from the lockers. She looked at the circular mark on the floor where the anvil had stood. Lifted straight up. Not dragged. The scuff marks of a circle of people, facing inward. Not a market evacuation. A ceremony. A ritual. “They didn’t burgle the market, Raj,” she said, her voice low. “Then what?” “They didn’t take anything *from* it.” She met his skeptical gaze. “They took *it*. The whole thing. They folded it up and took it somewhere else. This wasn’t a theft. It was an abduction.” Singh stared at her. “Harlow, be serious.” “I am.” She pointed at the compass with her pen. “This was left behind. A deliberate clue, or a piece that got knocked loose in the struggle. It’s not pointing north. It’s pointing to where they took it.” She turned to Eva. “What happens if you follow a shadow compass?” Eva stood, her movements hesitant. “It leads you to a place where the barrier is thin. A rift. If the market was moved through a forced portal, the compass would point to the point of egress. The wound in the world.” Quinn looked at the wall the needle indicated. It was solid, dingy red brick. She walked toward it, Singh following, his protestations dying in his throat. Up close, she saw it. Not with her eyes, but with the trained observation of eighteen years. The air in front of the wall was wrong. It didn’t smell like brick and damp. It smelled like burnt honey and static. The hair on her arms stood up. And on the floor, almost invisible, was a fine, sparkling dust. She crouched again, dipping her finger. It wasn’t London grime. It was iridescent, like crushed abalone shell. “This is where they opened the door,” she said. “What is that dust?” Singh asked, his professional curiosity finally overriding his disbelief. “I don’t know.” But she did. It was residue. It was evidence that couldn’t be explained, that would be logged as ‘unknown particulate’ and filed away, just like the strange, non-metallic shards they’d found near Morris’s body. She stood, wiping her finger on her trousers. The worn leather watch on her wrist felt heavy. “We’re not investigating a burglary. We’re investigating a kidnapping. And the victim isn’t a person. It’s a place.” She looked back at Eva Kowalski, who was watching her with a mixture of fear and dawning hope. “We’re going to need that research of yours, Miss Kowalski. All of it.”
created_at"2026-02-19T03:52:13.956Z" 2/19/2026, 3:52:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.81
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"deliberately"
2"gently"
3"slowly"
4"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"scanning"
2"stark"
3"gloom"
4"intricate"
5"traced"
6"weight"
7"perfect"
8"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1389
ratio0.001
matches
0"from"
1"it"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount828
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Victorian1
Inspector1
Raj1
Singh10
Eva8
Kowalski2
Met1
Morris1
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raj"
3"Singh"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Met"
7"Morris"
places
0"Victorian"
1"London"
globalScore0.775
windowScore0.833
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like something heavy with a flat,"
1"smelled like burnt honey and static"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.88
wordCount1389
matches
0"not on the compass but on the space around it"
1"not on the bench, but on a point about six feet in front of it"
2"Not cleaner, but the patina of dust was uniformly disturbed in a perfect, thr"
3"Not with her eyes, but with the trained observation of eighteen years"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean29.55
std22.27
cv0.754
sampleLengths
066
144
21
331
433
552
649
76
871
915
1068
1129
126
133
1412
157
1669
1747
1874
1919
203
211
225
2319
2415
2543
2615
276
2831
2934
3027
3110
3237
3333
3437
3511
362
3734
387
3950
4041
4173
4228
439
4413
4537
4666
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"been lifted"
13.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was dusting"
1"was staring"
2"was working"
3"was watching"
96.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences123
ratio0.016
matches
0"She noted the intricate etchings on its face—sigils, not navigational markings."
1"They weren’t the random patterns of foot traffic; they formed faint, concentric arcs, centered not on the bench, but on a point about six feet in front of it."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount825
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"cavernous, shadow-draped space."
1"solid, dingy red brick."
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02909090909090909
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013333333333333334
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean11.29
std10.47
cv0.927
sampleLengths
014
119
214
319
425
519
61
723
88
99
1011
1111
122
1336
1416
154
1628
177
1810
196
2037
2134
228
237
2418
2550
268
2716
285
296
303
3112
323
333
341
353
368
378
3829
3913
405
411
422
432
445
4516
464
4720
4819
4955
46.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.34959349593495936
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences87
matches
0"Her sharp jaw was set,"
1"She didn’t look at him,"
2"She noted the intricate etchings"
3"She was staring at the"
4"She approached the bench, her"
5"She ignored him."
6"Her eyes traced the grime"
7"They weren’t the random patterns"
8"It looked like something heavy"
9"She walked over to Eva."
10"She looked at the brass"
11"She pulled a pen from"
12"It spun slowly, lazily, then"
13"It pointed unerringly toward the"
14"It was absurd."
15"It was impossible."
16"It was exactly the kind"
17"She looked at the circular"
18"she said, her voice low"
19"She met his skeptical gaze"
ratio0.379
46.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences87
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s polished oxfords"
2"Her sharp jaw was set,"
3"Detective Inspector Raj Singh emerged"
4"Quinn said, her voice flat"
5"She didn’t look at him,"
6"She noted the intricate etchings"
7"Singh gestured at the compass"
8"Quinn followed his nod."
9"A young woman with a"
10"She was staring at the"
11"Singh’s tone was carefully neutral,"
12"Quinn finally turned to him,"
13"Singh sighed, rubbing his temple"
14"Quinn walked past him, ducking"
15"She approached the bench, her"
16"The forensic tech stepped back."
17"Quinn said, not pointing"
18"The tech blinked."
19"Singh moved closer."
ratio0.828
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"As if people had been"
ratio0.011
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Beside a faded poster advertising a circus that had left town decades ago, a forensic technician in a white suit was dusting a wrought-iron bench."
1"She walked toward it, Singh following, his protestations dying in his throat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice flat"
1"Quinn said, not pointing"
2"Singh said, coming to stand beside her"
3"she said, her voice low"
4"Singh asked, his professional curiosity finally overriding his disbelief"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Singh sighed (sigh)"
1"It was evidence that couldn’t be explained (be could be explain)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.095
76.4510%