Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0DSMKJ3TRZTQFS1RDDRKW

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.1
Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.053231
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The constable at the alley mouth lifted the tape with a gloved hand. "You're late, ma'am. Trains are on time and you're not. End of days." Harlow ducked under, rain sliding off the brim of her hood. The alley behind Camden High Street narrowed between two brick walls tattooed in neon paint and old band posters. A metal service door yawned open halfway down, frame buckled as if kicked by something with patience rather than force. "Scene secure?" Her voice bounced off wet brick. "Best we could." The constable shifted on his feet. "Station's shut since the seventies. One stairwell in, one emergency exit we blocked. SOCO's still grumbling about the mould." Harlow checked her watch. The leather strap had worn down to pale threads near the buckle. 03:17 glowed in tired green. She swept the alley with a slow look, then moved through the door. The air changed on the first step. London throbbed faint on the other side of the brick, bass from a club, traffic wash. Down here, the sound dropped, thick and close, as if the dark pressed cotton into ears. Rust bloomed along the handrail. Old posters flaked down the stairwell walls: a grinning woman in a swimsuit urged people to see Britain by Rail. Someone had graffitied horns on her and blacked her eyes. Boots clanged on metal treads ahead. "Quinn. About bloody time." Reed leaned over the rail a flight below, face washed in the blue spill from his phone. His tie hung loose, grey shirt creased into fatigue lines. "Path got lost," she stepped down past him. "What have you dragged me out to admire?" "You'll see." He tucked the phone away. "Unidentified male, probably twenties. No ID. One of the workmen went down the wrong tunnel, found him on the platform. Freaked the lot of them. They thought it was urban explorers, at first." "Urban explorers don't usually leave bodies." "Depends how urban." The last flight opened onto the platform. Floodlights on tripods threw harsh pools across cracked tiles and flaking paint. The old Camden Northbound sign sagged over empty tracks shrouded in shadow. A smell ran under everything: damp concrete, old oil, something metallic that clung to the back of the throat. SOCOs moved in their paper suits, tape stretched around a wide portion of the platform. The body lay near the centre of that taped square. White scene markers dotted the ground like low teeth. "Watch your step." Reed walked her toward the tape. "You'll ruin my whole theory if you smudge something." "You have a theory?" "Oh, several. All more interesting than paperwork." Harlow paused at the tape. The victim lay on his back, arms splayed, palms up. Dark hair curled damp against his forehead. No obvious wounds. His mouth hung open, teeth bared in a way that belonged to shouting, not peace. His eyes stared at the tunnel ceiling. "Overdose?" She kept her tone flat. "That's the early favourite." Reed scratched his jaw. "Cold down here, you know. Lad shoots up in an abandoned station, no one finds him till weeks later. Except he's fresh as a daisy, so timing's off, but still." "No syringe." "Could have rolled onto the tracks. SOCO's checking. No track marks on the arms, though. Or legs. Might be wrap or pills." Harlow stepped inside the tape. The nearest SOCO nodded and shifted to give her room. "Careful of the chalk, guv." She looked down. A circle ringed the body, drawn in off-white lines on the old tile. Not smooth. No neat compass sweep. The line kinked at points where the chalk stub had caught in tile cracks, then pressed on. Inner marks branched from the main ring, looping in repeated patterns. Repeated, not random. No smudges where a foot had dragged through. Harlow crouched, joints protesting. The chalk under the victim's hand lay whole, not crushed. He lay just inside the circle, heels almost touching the line. The toe of his right trainer pointed toward the tunnel mouth. "Kids," Reed shrugged behind her. "Cult nonsense. Draw a few pentagrams, drink cheap vodka, scare each other. One goes too far." "None of these are pentagrams." "Fine. Emo sudoku." Harlow ignored him. The chalk line didn't break under the body. It faded where his weight pressed, but the curve remained. Someone marked the circle first. Then he went inside. "Any sign of a camp?" She traced a finger above the chalk, not touching. "Sleeping bags. Bottles. Cigarette ends." "Nothing. Just him." Reed shifted again. He never stayed still at scenes. "No drag marks, no other footprints except the workman's. We're on old tile, so prints aren't generous, but still. You know the drill." The floodlights hummed. Water dripped somewhere into stillness. She leaned over the victim. No needle. No wrap. His shirt lay rumpled, top button gone. Black singe ringed the empty buttonhole, the fabric edges crisped. The same dark ring rimmed his nostrils, not dirt, not blood. Inside his nostrils, skin darkened as if hollowed by smoke. "Any burns?" She angled her head to catch better light. "That's the odd bit." Reed knelt next to her. "No external burns on the skin. None. Just that." He pointed at the buttonhole. "And those." He meant the eyes. The sclera had clouded to a milky grey. Fine spider-webbed fractures ran from the pupils outward, like frozen lightning. No petechial haemorrhages. Something else. "Pathologist?" "On their way. You know how they love early mornings." She reached into the inside pocket of her coat. Fingers closed around cool metal, smooth except for faint etching under the skin. For a breath she stood still, hand there. The familiar weight steadied her, then reminded her what kind of scene this might be. She drew out the small brass compass. Reed's eyebrows went up. "You bringing orienteering back into fashion?" "Picked it up on the Holborn job." She cupped it so the etched sigils on the face stayed turned toward her, away from Reed. "Thought I'd see if we can navigate our way out of your theories." He snorted. She flipped the lid. The glass showed faint scratches. Verdigris crept along the casing edges like dried moss. The needle jerked once, then spun, faster than it should, blurring into a dark circle. Reed leaned closer. "Bit eager for north, isn't it?" "It's old." She angled it in her palm. The needle slowed, then snapped, hard, not toward the tunnel mouth, not along the platform, but at the wall behind the victim's head. A glossy advert from some forgotten year peeled there, corners curled. A woman laughed over a breakfast table, all teeth, blocked by mould blooms where damp had crept in. Harlow closed the lid. "Electromagnetics from the track," Reed stretched his back. "Or your toy's knackered." "Tracks are dead." "Still metal. Still the earth doing its thing." "Compass points at the wall, not the rails." "Maybe the wall's special." The metallic taste in her mouth thickened. She swallowed it down. "Scene log?" Her gaze flicked to the small table near the stairwell, the clipboard anchored under a stone. "Who's been down here?" "Workman, you, me, SOCO team, two uniforms. No one else. We cleared the tunnels first, in case we had a live knifer hiding." "You disturb anything before calling me?" "Just your sleep." She studied his face. Lines cut deeper around his mouth than last year. Tiredness, not deceit. "I want any bodycam footage from the first officers, now." "They're uploading." Her eyes went back to the victim. The soles of his trainers bore a fine dust, darker than the platform grime. Not track grease. Something granular. She reached for an evidence tech's attention. "Prints off his shoes yet?" "Working on it, ma'am." The tech glanced up. "We dusted the soles. There's a residue we don't recognise. Already bagged a sample." "Let me see." The tech passed her a clear swab tube. Inside, faint black grain clung to the cotton tip. Not soil. Not soot. More like ground charcoal pressed with something oily. Reed watched. "Someone needs to clean their boots." "This station's been shut forty years." Harlow turned the tube in her fingers. "Where's he walked through that's dirtier than this?" "Have you seen the upstairs gents on the High Street?" She opened the victim's hand with a gloved grip. The fingers lay stiff, not fully rigid. Under the nails, the same black residue packed tight. Scratches marked his palms, thin crescents. "He grabbed something. Or clawed at it." She looked up. "Any sign of whatever that was? Rope, cable, wood, wall?" "Nothing obvious. We checked around for loose hardware. The rail company wants to know if we nick anything, so they were keen on an inventory." Her fingers slid into his jacket pocket. Wallet absent. Phone absent. She found keys – two standard yale, one heavy old thing that belonged on a cellar door – and something that clicked faint against her glove. She drew it out. The token lay on her palm, small enough to vanish in a child's hand. Bone, bleached to a dull cream, surface polished by touch. A hole pierced one end, as if for a cord. On one side, a symbol had been carved shallow, then inked once in black that had sunk deep; a vertical line crossed by three horizontals, not quite even. On the other, a familiar spider-crack pattern radiated from the hole. It didn't spread; it sat, contained, as if someone had frozen the moment something tried to split it. Reed leaned closer. "Oyster card's had a rebrand." "You recognise this symbol?" She turned it so he could see the inked mark. "Looks like a music festival logo. Or one of those brands that sells expensive water in glass instead of plastic." "Anything like it on his clothes? Bag? Jewellery?" "Nothing. We searched. No other personal effects." The token's weight felt wrong for bone, heavier, denser. Her thumb ran along its edge. Heat lingered there, faint, like a stone that had sat in sun. There was no sun down here. "Bag it." Reed raised both hands. "Your show." The SOCO slipped an evidence bag open. Harlow dropped the token in, watched it flash once under fluorescent light before plastic fogged the edges. "Harlow." Reed rested a hand on his own belt, fingers tapping out a rhythm he hadn't noticed. "We're calling this what? Suspicious death until the doc tells us otherwise. I'm all for keeping an open mind, but we've got one unidentified lad in an abandoned station with no visible wounds, no ID, and some art students' scrawl on the floor. Occam's razor loves heroin." "Occam never worked Camden nights." "You know what I mean." She walked the edge of the chalk circle, eyes on the line. No footprints broke the dust along its path. Chalk had fallen thick at two points, where someone had paused or pressed harder. Each of the inner marks repeated at precise intervals. Too even for drunk kids bored on a Friday. She pointed at one. "You think art students do this freehand, in the dark? No smears. No corrections." "Some people like rulers." "The circle sits off-centre." She stepped back, measuring with her gaze. "Not aligned with the tiles or the platform edge. Whoever drew this didn't care about symmetry of the station. They cared about something else." "Like what?" "The tunnel." She stood at the victim's head. From here, his feet pointed straight at the tunnel mouth. The circle's forward-most point touched the yellow safety line by a hair. Behind his head, less than a foot from the outer edge of the chalk, the breakfast advert peeled. A faint, almost unnoticeable draught whispered from its lower corner, where the paper had curled away from the wall. "Draught." Reed frowned. "Ventilation." "From where?" She pressed the loose corner with one gloved finger. The paper crackled. Cold air slid out, sharper than the heavy damp that filled the station. "Old maintenance shaft? Rats need fresh air too." "Rats don't draw circles." She peeled the advert higher. Behind it, the wall didn't show painted brick. Someone had tiled this patch differently, smooth pale slabs set tight, edges marked by dark lines. Not grout. Something more deliberate. Tiny sigils ran along the seams, etched so small they almost vanished into grime. She held her breath. The same sigils adorned the face of the compass in her pocket. The same hand, or the same tradition. Her fingers itched to pull the compass out again. She kept them still. "You thinking what, hidden room? More trainspotters' heaven?" Reed peered past her shoulder. "We can get the council to send a survey team. Not before breakfast, mind." "Don't touch it yet." Her tone came out sharper than intended. He glanced at her, caught something in her expression, stepped back a half-pace. "You see a hidden stash of paperwork in there, it's all yours." The hum of the floodlights pressed in. Somewhere, a far train rumbled, not on these tracks, but above, running on modern lines. Vibration bled down the pillars, faint tremor through her boots. Dust fell in lazy skeins from the ceiling. She ran through the picture in her mind. An abandoned station with one easy access from a public alley. No CCTV on the approach; cameras up there either broken years ago or aimed elsewhere. A circle drawn with care and purpose, not vandalism. A young man with hands torn by something rough, dust from somewhere deeper than this station packed under his nails and ground into his soles. A token from a world no one on Reed's team knew, sitting in his pocket like a ticket he never got to use. "Bodycams," she reminded. Reed lifted his radio. "Control, DI Reed. Pull first response footage from the Camden North disused station job. Priority. Straight to DI Quinn's inbox and mine. And I want environmental overviews, not just the corpse." Static crackled back, then acknowledgement. Harlow stepped away from the chalk, toward the platform edge. She knelt, peered down. The track bed lay quiet, rails mottled with rust. No fresh scuffs, no dropped paraphernalia. No syringe glint. No knife. Nothing. "Could have come in through the tunnel?" Reed joined her, gaze trailing off into the dark. "Other stations connect somewhere along the line. Kids get down from live platforms all the time." "Where are their footprints?" She pointed at the layer of dust near the first set of sleepers. "No disturbance. Just pigeon droppings and time." "Could be he came hours earlier. Dust settles." "Not that fast." He worked his jaw. "All right. So he comes in your special door, stands in your special circle, clutches a mystery token, and dies of nothing we can see. What's your interpretation, then?" Harlow watched the body for a long moment. The fractures in his eyes caught the light, tiny mirrored branches. "This isn't an overdose," her voice carried across the tiled vault. "Someone used this place for something. It went wrong. Or right, depending on what they wanted." Reed folded his arms. "You planning to write 'something' on the incident report?" "We'll start with 'unlawful killing' and work from there." "You really think it's a murder?" "The chalk's not for decoration. Neither is that wall." She nodded toward the hidden tiles. "People brought him here. They prepared this." "You don't know that." Her jaw tightened. "I've seen it before." Reed's attention sharpened. "You talking Morris?" She didn't answer. The memory of another basement, another circle carved instead of chalked, another partner's hand slack in hers, rose quick and hot. The same smell of metal in the air. The same wrong quiet after. She pushed it down. "We're not losing this one into a coroner's tick-box," she looked back at the token bagged on the table. "Get me a list of every crew with authorised access to disused lines within five miles. And every trespass incident report down here for the last year." "That's a lot of paper." "Then start turning it." Her gaze returned to the circle. "Everyone else might see an accident. I don't." Reed blew out a breath. "Fine. You call it suspicious, we dance the dance. But if the doc comes back with a heart defect and I lose my Saturday on ritual-cap nonsense, you buy the first round." "Deal." She slipped the compass back into her pocket. The metal throbbed faint against her palm, needle pushing insistently toward the wall behind the peeling advert. Harlow walked back into the circle's edge, toes a breath from white chalk, and looked down at the young man, the careful ring around him, the cracked eyes that reflected light he would never see again. "Start from here," her voice cut through the hum. "Everyone looked at the body. Start looking at who went to this much trouble to make sure it ended up in the wrong place."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags34
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Reed shifted again [again]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences118
tagDensity0.288
leniency0.576
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.034
98.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2817
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2817
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"throbbed"
count2
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"etching"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"etched"
count2
6
word"navigate"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"standard"
count1
9
word"aligned"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"dance"
count2
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"etching"
4"familiar"
5"etched"
6"navigate"
7"flicked"
8"standard"
9"aligned"
10"glint"
11"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences213
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences213
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences296
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2811
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1826
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Reed"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Reed"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Harlow12
Britain1
Rail1
Northbound1
Reed22
Friday1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Reed"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore0.898
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences137
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite even"
93.28% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.067
wordCount2811
matches
0"not toward the tunnel mouth, not along the platform, but at the wall behind the victim's head"
1"not along the platform, but at the wall behind the victim's head"
2"not on these tracks, but above, running on modern lines"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences296
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs154
mean18.25
std17.5
cv0.959
sampleLengths
013
113
250
38
428
534
674
76
84
927
1016
1140
126
133
1450
1534
1618
174
187
1947
206
2138
222
2322
2415
255
263
2758
2836
2921
305
313
3230
3319
3435
358
3647
3710
3825
3928
401
4110
4245
437
444
456
4637
472
4833
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences213
matches
0"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs305
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences296
ratio0.014
matches
0"She found keys – two standard yale, one heavy old thing that belonged on a cellar door – and something that clicked faint against her glove."
1"On one side, a symbol had been carved shallow, then inked once in black that had sunk deep; a vertical line crossed by three horizontals, not quite even."
2"It didn't spread; it sat, contained, as if someone had frozen the moment something tried to split it."
3"No CCTV on the approach; cameras up there either broken years ago or aimed elsewhere."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1829
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"Fine spider-webbed fractures"
1"Inside, faint black grain"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.026790595954073265
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002186987424822307
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences296
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences296
mean9.5
std6.86
cv0.723
sampleLengths
013
113
211
319
420
58
69
719
84
912
105
1113
127
1316
1416
155
1620
1710
186
194
2017
2110
228
238
247
2533
266
273
287
2912
3012
3119
3215
3310
349
359
369
374
387
395
4010
417
423
4315
447
456
468
4730
482
4922
63.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.41216216216216217
totalSentences296
uniqueOpeners122
67.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences197
matches
0"Then he went inside."
1"More like ground charcoal pressed"
2"Too even for drunk kids"
3"Somewhere, a far train rumbled,"
ratio0.02
98.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences197
matches
0"Her voice bounced off wet"
1"She swept the alley with"
2"His tie hung loose, grey"
3"she stepped down past him"
4"He tucked the phone away"
5"His mouth hung open, teeth"
6"His eyes stared at the"
7"She kept her tone flat"
8"She looked down."
9"He lay just inside the"
10"It faded where his weight"
11"She traced a finger above"
12"He never stayed still at"
13"She leaned over the victim."
14"His shirt lay rumpled, top"
15"She angled her head to"
16"He pointed at the buttonhole"
17"He meant the eyes."
18"She reached into the inside"
19"She drew out the small"
ratio0.305
48.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount162
totalSentences197
matches
0"The constable at the alley"
1"Harlow ducked under, rain sliding"
2"The alley behind Camden High"
3"A metal service door yawned"
4"Her voice bounced off wet"
5"The constable shifted on his"
6"Harlow checked her watch."
7"The leather strap had worn"
8"She swept the alley with"
9"The air changed on the"
10"London throbbed faint on the"
11"Rust bloomed along the handrail."
12"Someone had graffitied horns on"
13"Boots clanged on metal treads"
14"Reed leaned over the rail"
15"His tie hung loose, grey"
16"she stepped down past him"
17"He tucked the phone away"
18"The last flight opened onto"
19"Floodlights on tripods threw harsh"
ratio0.822
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences197
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She found keys – two standard yale, one heavy old thing that belonged on a cellar door – and something that clicked faint against her glove."
1"Harlow walked back into the circle's edge, toes a breath from white chalk, and looked down at the young man, the careful ring around him, the cracked eyes that …"
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags34
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She traced, not touching"
1"Her gaze flicked, the clipboard anchored under a stone"
2"Reed rested, fingers tapping out a rhythm he hadn't noticed"
3"Reed joined, gaze trailing off into the dark"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences118
tagDensity0.008
leniency0.017
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.017
88.6236%