Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0E308KBSBA42XR0J7HNYE

Run Details

Duration:
2m 60s
Cost:
$0.002345
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy clunk that echoed in the small hallway. Rory pulled the door open, a cardboard container of leftover chow mein in one hand, her keys in the other. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, the dim light from the hall catching the slicked-back platinum of his hair. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—taking her in with a slow, unnerving sweep. He smelled of cold night air and expensive cologne. “Delivery’s downstairs, Luc. You’re on the wrong floor.” “Aurora.” His voice was a low, smooth baritone that did things to her spine she’d spent months trying to forget. “A pleasure, as always.” He didn’t move to come in. He simply waited, a picture of impeccable patience in his tailored charcoal suit, knowing the decision was hers. Let him in, or let the entire history between them fester right there on the threshold. With a sigh that felt like surrender, she stepped back. “You’re letting the heat out.” He crossed into the flat with a predator’s grace, the tip of his cane making a soft tap on the worn floorboards. His gaze swept over the cramped space—the books stacked precariously on the coffee table, the scrolls spilling from a half-open drawer, the tabby cat, Ptolemy, watching from atop a bookshelf with unblinking yellow eyes. “Charming. I see Eva’s decorative style remains… academic.” “It’s a flat, not a gallery.” Rory dumped the food container on the kitchen counter, a small act of defiance. “What do you want?” He turned to face her fully, leaning his weight on the cane. “A social call. Is that so difficult to believe?” “Yes.” The word was flat, final. “You don’t make social calls. You broker information. You fix problems. You don’t drop by for a chat.” A faint, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips. “You know me too well.” “I thought I did.” The retort was out before she could stop it, sharp and bitter. The memory of their last encounter, months ago in the rain-slicked alley behind his club, hung between them. The things he hadn’t said. The things she’d been too proud to ask. He didn’t flinch. His mismatched eyes held hers, and for a moment, the flat felt unbearably small. The scent of his cologne was everywhere, mingling with the smell of old paper and last night’s curry. “I require your particular talents,” he said, his tone shifting from vaguely amused to all business. “A small matter of retrieval.” Rory barked a short, humourless laugh. “You’ve got a dozen people who can ‘retrieve’ things for you. People who didn’t tell you to go to hell.” “None with your… finesse. Or your immunity to certain charms.” He tilted his head. “The item is warded. Human-touch only. It becomes… volatile… in the presence of any other bloodline.” She crossed her arms over her chest, the familiar crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist seeming to pulse. “No.” “The pay is substantial.” “I said no.” She took a step toward him, the space between them crackling with a familiar, frustrating energy. “I’m done with that life. I deliver noodles now. It’s simple. It pays the rent. It doesn’t end with me running for my life from things that shouldn’t exist.” “We both know you were born for more than noodles, Aurora Carter.” He said her full name like a challenge, his gaze dropping to her mouth for a fraction of a second. “The quick thinking. The cool head. It is a waste.” “It’s a choice.” Her voice dropped to a whisper. “My choice. You don’t get to show up here and undo it because you’ve got a problem.” He moved then, faster than a man with a cane should. He didn’t touch her, but he closed the distance, his presence overwhelming. The amber eye seemed to glow in the low light. “It is not just my problem.” His voice was low, intimate, forcing her to listen. “The man you fled from Cardiff. Evan.” The name was a physical blow. The air left her lungs. The sounds of Brick Lane outside faded into a dull roar. “What about him?” “He is in London. Asking questions. He has… associates. The kind who would find this particular item very useful.” Lucien’s gaze was relentless. “This is not a job offer, *chérie*. It is a warning wrapped in an opportunity. Help me secure this thing before he does, and you remove a weapon from his arsenal. A significant one.” Her heart hammered against her ribs. The cool-headed composure she prided herself on shattered. He’d known exactly which lever to pull. He always did. “You’re lying.” The accusation was weak, and they both knew it. “Am I?” He reached inside his suit jacket. She flinched, a minute movement she hated herself for. He paused, then slowly withdrew a single photograph and held it out. It was Evan. Standing outside the Golden Empress, talking to Yu-Fei Cheung. Rory’s stomach twisted. “He found me.” The words were numb on her tongue. “He found your place of employment. With help.” Lucien let the photograph fall onto a pile of Eva’s notes. “He has not found this flat. Yet. My people are diverting him. For now.” The world tilted. The safe, boring life she’d built here, above the noise and spice of Brick Lane, was an illusion. He’d peeled it back in sixty seconds. She stared at the photo, at Evan’s smug, familiar face, and felt the old fear curdle in her stomach, quickly followed by a hot rush of anger. “Why come to me? Why not just take care of it yourself? You could make him disappear.” She looked up at Lucien, her blue eyes blazing. “You’ve done it before.” For the first time, a flicker of something raw crossed his polished features. “This is not that sort of problem. The item requires a delicate touch. Your touch. And…” He hesitated, a rare thing for him. “I owed you a warning. Regardless of your answer.” The admission hung in the air, more shocking than any threat. Lucien Moreau did not deal in debts or warnings. He dealt in transactions. The silence stretched, thick and heavy. Ptolemy jumped down from the bookcase and wound himself around Lucien’s legs, purring loudly. Traitor. Rory looked from the cat to the man. The attraction was still there, a live wire under her skin. The hurt was there too, a dull ache she’d carried for months. And now, this. Evan. The past she’d run from, crashing into the present she’d chosen. She walked to the counter, picked up the container of cold chow mein, and threw it into the bin. The clatter was loud and final. “Tell me about this item.” A slow, genuine smile spread across Lucien’s face, transforming him from a dangerous broker into something far more compelling. “It is a key. Of sorts.” “What does it open?” His heterochromatic eyes met hers, the amber one seeming to burn. “Nothing pleasant.” He reached into his jacket again, this time withdrawing a folded piece of vellum. “The instructions are here. The location is a private auction, tomorrow night at the Greymalkin Gallery.” He placed the vellum on the counter next to the discarded photograph. The two items side by side—her past and her proposed future. “I’ll need a dress.” “It will be delivered by morning.” He picked up his cane, his purpose here apparently achieved. He moved toward the door, then stopped, turning back to her. “Aurora.” She looked at him, her arms wrapped tightly around herself again. “The wards… they are keyed to emotional resonance. Fear, primarily. Anger. Passion.” His gaze was intense, willing her to understand. “The more you feel, the more volatile it becomes. Your famous cool head… it will be your greatest asset.” He gave a slight, formal nod and reached for the door. The three deadbolts clicked shut behind him, one after the other, each sound like a verdict. Rory stood alone in the silent flat, the scent of his cologne still clinging to the air, the vellum and the photograph staring up at her from the counter. The past was no longer knocking. It had just kicked the door down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
3"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"predator"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"encounter"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"resonance"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"predator"
2"weight"
3"encounter"
4"familiar"
5"pulse"
6"whisper"
7"shattered"
8"stomach"
9"flicker"
10"silence"
11"resonance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1368
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount941
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Ptolemy2
Rory6
Brick2
Lane2
Evan3
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Lucien7
Eva1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Empress"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Cheung"
7"Lucien"
8"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like surrender, she stepped back"
1"s purpose here apparently achieved"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1368
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean25.81
std14.47
cv0.561
sampleLengths
035
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28
324
440
515
656
78
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921
1024
1113
1247
1335
1421
1526
1630
1719
184
1948
2042
2126
2233
2322
2422
253
2657
2724
2811
2929
3015
3110
3233
3355
3430
3545
3624
3721
3846
3925
405
4125
424
4311
4432
4523
464
4728
4811
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
68.32% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences115
ratio0.026
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—taking her in with a slow, unnerving sweep."
1"His gaze swept over the cramped space—the books stacked precariously on the coffee table, the scrolls spilling from a half-open drawer, the tabby cat, Ptolemy, watching from atop a bookshelf with unblinking yellow eyes."
2"The two items side by side—her past and her proposed future."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount952
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"familiar crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03361344537815126
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011554621848739496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean11.9
std7.33
cv0.616
sampleLengths
015
120
218
319
49
58
620
74
86
918
1016
1110
125
1322
1434
158
1620
174
1812
199
206
2118
228
235
2416
2518
265
278
283
2914
3018
3116
325
336
3420
3514
3616
3718
381
394
4019
4129
4232
4310
449
4517
4611
4712
4810
4915
36.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.28695652173913044
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
24.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences84
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1"He smelled of cold night"
2"His voice was a low,"
3"He didn’t move to come"
4"He simply waited, a picture"
5"He crossed into the flat"
6"His gaze swept over the"
7"He turned to face her"
8"He didn’t flinch."
9"His mismatched eyes held hers,"
10"he said, his tone shifting"
11"He tilted his head"
12"She crossed her arms over"
13"She took a step toward"
14"He said her full name"
15"Her voice dropped to a"
16"He moved then, faster than"
17"He didn’t touch her, but"
18"His voice was low, intimate,"
19"Her heart hammered against her"
ratio0.488
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences84
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway,"
3"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
4"He smelled of cold night"
5"His voice was a low,"
6"He didn’t move to come"
7"He simply waited, a picture"
8"He crossed into the flat"
9"His gaze swept over the"
10"Rory dumped the food container"
11"He turned to face her"
12"The word was flat, final"
13"A faint, almost imperceptible smile"
14"The retort was out before"
15"The memory of their last"
16"The things he hadn’t said."
17"The things she’d been too"
18"He didn’t flinch."
19"His mismatched eyes held hers,"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A slow, genuine smile spread across Lucien’s face, transforming him from a dangerous broker into something far more compelling."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his tone shifting from vaguely amused to all business"
1"She looked up, her blue eyes blazing"
2"He reached, this time withdrawing a folded piece of vellum"
3"He picked up, his purpose here apparently achieved"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.082
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.8585%