| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.145 | | leniency | 0.29 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.032 | |
| 92.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1909 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 81.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1909 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "fractured" | | 4 | "calculate" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "charged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 181 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1920 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 26 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1356 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Eva | 5 | | Cardiff | 2 | | University | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Lucien | 6 | | French | 1 | | Right | 1 | | Szechuan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.521 | | wordCount | 1920 | | matches | | 0 | "not whether to agree, but the weight of what agreement meant" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 85 | | mean | 22.59 | | std | 21.32 | | cv | 0.944 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 84 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 56 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 60 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 61 | | 42 | 56 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 64 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 244 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't wearing" | | 1 | "was learning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 181 | | ratio | 0.099 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain had darkened the shoulders of his jacket and flattened a few strands of platinum blond against his temple — the only evidence that anything in the world had ever dared to inconvenience him." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — settled on her with that particular stillness she remembered too well." | | 2 | "His cane — ivory handle, the one she knew hid a blade thin enough to slide between ribs — caught the frame." | | 3 | "He entered like he always entered rooms — assessing corners, exits, the placement of objects." | | 4 | "The silence that followed was the kind that fills a room the way water fills a sinking car — slowly, then all at once." | | 5 | "That was the thing about Lucien — he never dressed up the ugly parts." | | 6 | "But he had this one quality that undermined every wall she built — he never pretended to be better than he was." | | 7 | "The flat was small enough that one step changed everything — the distance between them compressed from across-the-room to close-enough-to-touch." | | 8 | "He reached toward her face — slow, deliberate, giving her every chance to pull away." | | 9 | "And yet his hand hovered there, not touching, waiting — and the waiting was the thing that undid her." | | 10 | "His fingers still hung in the air between them — long, steady fingers that she'd watched shuffle documents and uncork wine bottles and, once, press a cloth against a cut on her forehead with a gentleness that didn't match a single other thing about him." | | 11 | "Not his hand to her face — her hand to his wrist." | | 12 | "She watched him calculate — not whether to agree, but the weight of what agreement meant." | | 13 | "The curry house below had closed; she could tell because the bass note of the extraction fan had cut out, leaving only the patter against glass and the creak of old floorboards." | | 14 | "His free hand — the one she wasn't holding — found the edge of her sleeve and tugged it gently, just enough to expose the crescent scar on her left wrist." | | 15 | "He'd listened without commenting, and later she'd realized that was its own kind of intimacy — someone seeing a mark on your body and not needing to narrate it." | | 16 | "The space between them opened again, breathable, but charged — like the air before a storm chooses whether to break or pass over." | | 17 | "But he didn't say anything, and that restraint — that deliberate, maddening restraint — was why she'd let him in." |
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| 95.26% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1343 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 61 | | adverbRatio | 0.045420699925539834 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008190618019359643 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 181 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 181 | | mean | 10.61 | | std | 9.67 | | cv | 0.912 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 50.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3425414364640884 | | totalSentences | 181 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 91.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she held his wrist" | | 1 | "Then the black." | | 2 | "Of course he noticed." |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 21.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes — one" | | 1 | "He never looked surprised." | | 2 | "She pushed the door" | | 3 | "His cane — ivory handle," | | 4 | "It sat deeper on him," | | 5 | "She stepped back anyway" | | 6 | "He entered like he always" | | 7 | "His gaze swept across the" | | 8 | "He noticed those." | | 9 | "His black eye lingered on" | | 10 | "He set his cane against" | | 11 | "He put them in his" | | 12 | "He held her gaze with" | | 13 | "She laughed, and it came" | | 14 | "He said it plainly." | | 15 | "He just laid them on" | | 16 | "He didn't move." | | 17 | "She hated that he admitted" | | 18 | "She hated more that the" | | 19 | "Her voice dropped" |
| | ratio | 0.495 | |
| 33.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open and" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 2 | "Rain had darkened the shoulders" | | 3 | "His mismatched eyes — one" | | 4 | "He never looked surprised." | | 5 | "Rory gripped the edge of" | | 6 | "Ptolemy wound between her ankles," | | 7 | "She pushed the door" | | 8 | "His cane — ivory handle," | | 9 | "Something shifted behind his expression." | | 10 | "Lucien didn't wear guilt the" | | 11 | "It sat deeper on him," | | 12 | "She stepped back anyway" | | 13 | "He entered like he always" | | 14 | "His gaze swept across the" | | 15 | "The three deadbolts on the" | | 16 | "He noticed those." | | 17 | "His black eye lingered on" | | 18 | "Rory crossed her arms." | | 19 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her" |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 45.87% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Because Ptolemy had already trotted" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the landing in a charcoal suit that had no business being on Brick Lane at eleven o'clock at night." | | 1 | "Lucien was a liar by trade, an information broker who dealt in secrets the way other people dealt cards." | | 2 | "She could smell his cologne, something dark and resinous that she'd caught on her pillow once and hadn't washed for four days, which was pathetic, and she'd nev…" | | 3 | "His fingers still hung in the air between them — long, steady fingers that she'd watched shuffle documents and uncork wine bottles and, once, press a cloth agai…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.065 | | leniency | 0.129 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.032 | |