Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0EDWD5NAGSG83RA5Z6Y66

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.073240
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and the smell of cumin and frying oil from the curry house below rolled in with the draft. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing in a charcoal suit that had no business being on Brick Lane at eleven o'clock at night. Rain had darkened the shoulders of his jacket and flattened a few strands of platinum blond against his temple — the only evidence that anything in the world had ever dared to inconvenience him. His mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — settled on her with that particular stillness she remembered too well. Not surprise. He never looked surprised. Rory gripped the edge of the door. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring at the newcomer like a traitor. "No." "Aurora." "I said no. Whatever it is." She pushed the door. His cane — ivory handle, the one she knew hid a blade thin enough to slide between ribs — caught the frame. Not forceful. Just present. Like him. "Five minutes." "You got five minutes three weeks ago. You used them to lie to my face." Something shifted behind his expression. Not guilt, exactly. Lucien didn't wear guilt the way other people did. It sat deeper on him, in the way his jaw tightened and his gaze dropped half an inch before snapping back. "I did not lie. I withheld." "Oh, brilliant. The Frenchman's here to split hairs." She stepped back anyway. Not because she wanted to. Because Ptolemy had already trotted toward him, and because the hallway was narrow and cold and she wasn't wearing shoes, and the draft from the stairwell cut right through Eva's oversized Cardiff University jumper she'd stolen from Rory's suitcase and Rory had stolen back. He entered like he always entered rooms — assessing corners, exits, the placement of objects. His gaze swept across the chaos of Eva's flat: the books stacked in columns on the kitchen counter, the scrolls pinned open with coffee mugs, the research notes taped to the wall above the sofa in a web of red string that Eva swore made sense. The three deadbolts on the door he'd just come through. He noticed those. His black eye lingered on them a beat too long. "Eva is away?" "Doesn't matter where Eva is." "It matters if someone is listening." Rory crossed her arms. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist pressed against the inside of her elbow. "Say what you came to say." He set his cane against the bookshelf by the door, leaning it just so, and turned to face her fully. Without it, he looked less like a character from a period drama and more like a man standing in a cramped flat with nowhere to put his hands. He put them in his pockets. "The deal with the Marchetti family fell through." "Good." "Not good. They believe you were the reason." The kitchen faucet dripped. Ptolemy jumped onto the counter and knocked a pen to the floor. "Why would they think that?" "Because I told them." The silence that followed was the kind that fills a room the way water fills a sinking car — slowly, then all at once. Rory stared at him. He held her gaze with that infuriating steadiness, both eyes fixed, the amber one catching the bare bulb light from the ceiling fixture Eva kept meaning to replace. "You told a supernatural crime family that I — a human delivery girl with a pre-law degree she never finished — was the reason their deal collapsed." "I told them you had information that made the terms untenable. Which is true. You found the discrepancy in their shipping records. I merely... attributed the discovery." "Attributed." She laughed, and it came out sharp enough to make Ptolemy's ears flatten. "You painted a target on me so they'd come after me instead of you." "So they would come to negotiate with you instead of killing me, yes." He said it plainly. No flinch. No softening. That was the thing about Lucien — he never dressed up the ugly parts. He just laid them on the table like cards and watched you decide what to do with them. "Get out." "Aurora—" "You don't get to do that. You don't get to stand there in your stupid suit looking like that and say my name like it's something worth saying, and then tell me you've put my life in danger because it was convenient. Get out." He didn't move. Rain tapped against the window behind her. A motorbike growled past on Brick Lane, its headlight swinging a bar of white across the ceiling. "I came to fix it." "You came because you need something." "Both." She hated that he admitted it. She hated more that the admission made her believe him. Lucien was a liar by trade, an information broker who dealt in secrets the way other people dealt cards. But he had this one quality that undermined every wall she built — he never pretended to be better than he was. Not with her. "Three weeks." Her voice dropped. "Three weeks and nothing. Not a call, not a message, not even one of your cryptic little notes folded into a restaurant napkin. I thought—" She stopped. Swallowed. The scar on her wrist itched the way it always did when her pulse climbed. "You thought what?" "It doesn't matter what I thought." He took a step closer. Just one. The flat was small enough that one step changed everything — the distance between them compressed from across-the-room to close-enough-to-touch. She could smell his cologne, something dark and resinous that she'd caught on her pillow once and hadn't washed for four days, which was pathetic, and she'd never told anyone, and she never would. "You thought I had disappeared. That I had decided you were not worth the complication." His voice was low, the French accent thickening the way it only did when he was tired or honest. Right now he looked both. "You thought that what happened between us was a transaction. Something I could close like a ledger." "Wasn't it?" The question hung between them. Ptolemy, sensing the tension or simply bored, hopped off the counter and padded into the bedroom. Lucien's hand came out of his pocket. He reached toward her face — slow, deliberate, giving her every chance to pull away. His fingers stopped a breath from her jaw. "Tell me to leave and I will leave. But do not tell me it was a transaction." She should have told him to leave. Every practical bone in her body screamed it. He was half-demon. He was a fixer. He'd sold her out to people who wouldn't hesitate to hurt her. And yet his hand hovered there, not touching, waiting — and the waiting was the thing that undid her. Evan had never waited. Evan had never given her the choice. Her jaw tightened. "You don't get to show up when it rains and look wounded and expect me to fold." "I expect nothing. I am here because there is nowhere else I could make myself go." She breathed out through her nose. A shaky exhale she couldn't quite control. His fingers still hung in the air between them — long, steady fingers that she'd watched shuffle documents and uncork wine bottles and, once, press a cloth against a cut on her forehead with a gentleness that didn't match a single other thing about him. She closed the distance herself. Not his hand to her face — her hand to his wrist. She gripped it and pulled it down, and for a fractured second she saw something flash through his mismatched eyes: fear. Actual fear. That she would push him away. Instead she held his wrist between them like evidence. "You fix this. Whatever you've done, whatever you've told them — you undo it. And you don't keep things from me again. Not about my safety. Not about anything." "Aurora—" "Rory. My friends call me Rory, and if you're going to stand in my flat at eleven at night looking like a drowned cat in couture, you're at least going to use my actual name." A ghost of something crossed his mouth. Not quite a smile. Something more dangerous. "Rory." He said it like he was learning a new language. His accent turned the R soft, the vowels rounder. "I will fix it." "Swear." "On what? I am half-demon. My oaths are literally binding." "I know. That's why I'm asking." His eyes searched her face. The amber one. Then the black. Back again. She watched him calculatenot whether to agree, but the weight of what agreement meant. For someone like him, a binding oath wasn't metaphor. It was chain and lock and thrown-away key. "I swear I will undo what I have done. I swear I will keep nothing from you that concerns your safety." He paused. "Is that sufficient, or shall I also swear to stop wearing stupid suits?" Her grip on his wrist loosened but didn't release. "The suits can stay." "Generous." "I'm a generous person. It's a flaw." The rain picked up outside. The curry house below had closed; she could tell because the bass note of the extraction fan had cut out, leaving only the patter against glass and the creak of old floorboards. The flat felt smaller than it ever had. Warmer. His free hand — the one she wasn't holding — found the edge of her sleeve and tugged it gently, just enough to expose the crescent scar on her left wrist. He looked at it. He always looked at it. She'd told him the story once, the childhood accident, the fall from the garden wall in Cardiff. He'd listened without commenting, and later she'd realized that was its own kind of intimacy — someone seeing a mark on your body and not needing to narrate it. "You should eat something," he said. "You look thin." "That's not the compliment you think it is." "It is not a compliment. It is a concern." She released his wrist. Stepped back. The space between them opened again, breathable, but charged — like the air before a storm chooses whether to break or pass over. "There's leftover Szechuan in the fridge. Yu-Fei gave me the end-of-shift extras." "From the Golden Empress?" "Don't sound so horrified. It's good." "I have eaten at the Golden Empress. The mapo tofu gave me a nosebleed." "You're half-demon and you can't handle spice?" "The demon half is from Avaros. We are suited to cold." She pulled open the fridge. Containers of food crowded the shelves alongside Eva's unlabeled jars of things Rory had learned not to ask about. She grabbed the Szechuan chicken and set it on the counter. Lucien shrugged off his damp jacket and draped it over the back of a kitchen chair. Underneath, his shirt was white, pressed, and slightly translucent where the rain had soaked through at the collar. She didn't look. She looked. She looked away. He noticed. Of course he noticed. He was a broker of information. Noticing was what he did. But he didn't say anything, and that restraint — that deliberate, maddening restraint — was why she'd let him in. She put two forks on the counter. No plates. They'd eat from the container like civilized adults at the end of the world. "Five minutes is up," she said. He picked up a fork. "So it is." Neither of them moved toward the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.29
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.032
92.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1909
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"gently"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1909
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"fractured"
count1
4
word"calculate"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"tension"
3"fractured"
4"calculate"
5"weight"
6"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences128
matches
0"looked surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences181
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1920
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1356
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Ptolemy5
Eva5
Cardiff2
University1
Rory6
Lucien6
French1
Right1
Szechuan1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite control"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.521
wordCount1920
matches
0"not whether to agree, but the weight of what agreement meant"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences181
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean22.59
std21.32
cv0.944
sampleLengths
022
183
219
31
41
538
62
715
838
96
1061
1184
123
135
146
1524
1654
178
181
198
2016
215
224
2356
2427
2527
2628
2713
2840
292
301
3144
3227
335
346
351
3660
3730
3818
393
406
4161
4256
432
4421
4530
4617
4764
4820
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs244
matches
0"wasn't wearing"
1"was learning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences18
totalSentences181
ratio0.099
matches
0"Rain had darkened the shoulders of his jacket and flattened a few strands of platinum blond against his temple — the only evidence that anything in the world had ever dared to inconvenience him."
1"His mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — settled on her with that particular stillness she remembered too well."
2"His cane — ivory handle, the one she knew hid a blade thin enough to slide between ribs — caught the frame."
3"He entered like he always entered rooms — assessing corners, exits, the placement of objects."
4"The silence that followed was the kind that fills a room the way water fills a sinking car — slowly, then all at once."
5"That was the thing about Lucien — he never dressed up the ugly parts."
6"But he had this one quality that undermined every wall she built — he never pretended to be better than he was."
7"The flat was small enough that one step changed everything — the distance between them compressed from across-the-room to close-enough-to-touch."
8"He reached toward her face — slow, deliberate, giving her every chance to pull away."
9"And yet his hand hovered there, not touching, waiting — and the waiting was the thing that undid her."
10"His fingers still hung in the air between them — long, steady fingers that she'd watched shuffle documents and uncork wine bottles and, once, press a cloth against a cut on her forehead with a gentleness that didn't match a single other thing about him."
11"Not his hand to her face — her hand to his wrist."
12"She watched him calculate — not whether to agree, but the weight of what agreement meant."
13"The curry house below had closed; she could tell because the bass note of the extraction fan had cut out, leaving only the patter against glass and the creak of old floorboards."
14"His free hand — the one she wasn't holding — found the edge of her sleeve and tugged it gently, just enough to expose the crescent scar on her left wrist."
15"He'd listened without commenting, and later she'd realized that was its own kind of intimacy — someone seeing a mark on your body and not needing to narrate it."
16"The space between them opened again, breathable, but charged — like the air before a storm chooses whether to break or pass over."
17"But he didn't say anything, and that restraint — that deliberate, maddening restraint — was why she'd let him in."
95.26% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1343
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.045420699925539834
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008190618019359643
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences181
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences181
mean10.61
std9.67
cv0.912
sampleLengths
022
123
234
320
42
54
67
712
81
91
1010
1122
122
132
142
152
1615
175
183
199
2021
216
2212
235
2444
2515
2646
2710
283
2910
303
315
326
334
3414
356
3620
3728
386
398
401
418
424
4312
445
454
4624
474
4828
4927
50.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3425414364640884
totalSentences181
uniqueOpeners62
91.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"Instead she held his wrist"
1"Then the black."
2"Of course he noticed."
ratio0.028
21.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences109
matches
0"His mismatched eyes — one"
1"He never looked surprised."
2"She pushed the door"
3"His cane — ivory handle,"
4"It sat deeper on him,"
5"She stepped back anyway"
6"He entered like he always"
7"His gaze swept across the"
8"He noticed those."
9"His black eye lingered on"
10"He set his cane against"
11"He put them in his"
12"He held her gaze with"
13"She laughed, and it came"
14"He said it plainly."
15"He just laid them on"
16"He didn't move."
17"She hated that he admitted"
18"She hated more that the"
19"Her voice dropped"
ratio0.495
33.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences109
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"Rain had darkened the shoulders"
3"His mismatched eyes — one"
4"He never looked surprised."
5"Rory gripped the edge of"
6"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
7"She pushed the door"
8"His cane — ivory handle,"
9"Something shifted behind his expression."
10"Lucien didn't wear guilt the"
11"It sat deeper on him,"
12"She stepped back anyway"
13"He entered like he always"
14"His gaze swept across the"
15"The three deadbolts on the"
16"He noticed those."
17"His black eye lingered on"
18"Rory crossed her arms."
19"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
ratio0.853
45.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Because Ptolemy had already trotted"
ratio0.009
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the landing in a charcoal suit that had no business being on Brick Lane at eleven o'clock at night."
1"Lucien was a liar by trade, an information broker who dealt in secrets the way other people dealt cards."
2"She could smell his cologne, something dark and resinous that she'd caught on her pillow once and hadn't washed for four days, which was pathetic, and she'd nev…"
3"His fingers still hung in the air between them — long, steady fingers that she'd watched shuffle documents and uncork wine bottles and, once, press a cloth agai…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.129
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.032
86.4372%