Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0EFXWJJSTDYBQHFGAFYKP

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Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.149625

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath the rusted chain blocking the entrance to Camden's abandoned Northern Line extension. Her torch beam cut through the darkness, revealing crumbling tiles and decades of accumulated grime. The smell hit her first—not the expected mustiness of a forgotten tunnel, but something sharper. Metallic. "Body's further down, ma'am." PC Thompson's voice echoed off the curved walls. The young constable stood twenty feet ahead, his own torch creating a second pool of light in the gloom. "Found by some urban explorers around midnight." Quinn's boots crunched on broken glass as she approached. The tunnel opened into what had once been a platform, its edges disappearing into shadow. But instead of the usual detritus of abandoned stations—graffiti, empty bottles, makeshift camps—the space looked swept clean. Too clean. "Where exactly?" She swept her torch across the platform. Thompson pointed to a recessed doorway marked 'Staff Only' in faded paint. "Through there. Used to be a control room, according to the old maps." Quinn noted the lack of dust on the door handle. Someone had been using this entrance regularly. She pushed through, and the metallic smell intensified. The control room stretched maybe fifteen feet square. Ancient electrical panels lined one wall, their gauges dark and broken. In the centre of the concrete floor lay a man in his thirties, arms splayed, wearing what looked like an expensive suit. No visible wounds. No blood. "Christopher Aldrich." Thompson consulted his notebook. "Investment banker. Wallet still on him, full of cash and cards. Watch too—Rolex, genuine by the looks of it." Quinn crouched beside the body, careful not to disturb the scene. Aldrich's eyes stared at the ceiling, pupils dilated. His mouth hung slightly open, and she caught a whiff of something floral beneath the metallic tang. She checked her worn leather watch—3:47 AM. The body showed early signs of rigor mortis. "Drugs?" Thompson suggested. "Rich banker, secret location. Maybe a deal gone wrong?" Quinn pulled on latex gloves and gently turned Aldrich's head. No injection marks on the neck. She checked his arms through the suit jacket—nothing there either. But something else caught her attention. A faint residue on his collar, iridescent in the torchlight. "Has forensics been down yet?" "On their way. Traffic's murder at this hour." She stood, scanning the room more carefully. The dust patterns were wrong. While the floor around the body showed recent disturbance, the corners remained pristine—except for one spot near the electrical panels where the dust had been deliberately swept in a rough circle about three feet in diameter. "Thompson, what do you make of this?" She directed her beam at the circle. The constable squinted. "Looks like someone cleaned up. Maybe trying to remove evidence?" "Or preparing the space for something." Quinn moved closer to the panels. Scratch marks scored the concrete within the circle, forming a pattern she couldn't quite make out in the harsh torch light. She'd need proper lighting to see it clearly. Her phone buzzed. A text from DI Morrison at the station: 'Aldrich's office called it in. Said he missed a critical meeting yesterday. No one's seen him since Tuesday night.' That was two days ago. But the rigor mortis suggested death within the last twelve hours. Quinn frowned at the discrepancy. "Ma'am?" Thompson had wandered to the far corner. "There's something here." She joined him. Tucked behind a fallen panel lay a brass compass, its face etched with symbols she didn't recognise. The needle spun lazily, never settling on magnetic north. "Evidence bag," she ordered. Thompson produced one, but as Quinn reached for the compass, footsteps echoed from the platform. She tensed, hand moving instinctively to her radio. "Detective Quinn?" A woman's voice called out. "I'm Dr Sarah Chen from the Coroner's office. PC at the entrance said you were down here." A short woman in her fifties appeared in the doorway, medical bag in hand. She took in the scene with practiced efficiency before kneeling beside Aldrich. "Initial observations?" Quinn asked. "No obvious trauma." Dr Chen gently manipulated the body's limbs. "Rigor's inconsistent though. See here?" She lifted Aldrich's left arm, which moved with surprising ease. "But the right side's completely stiff. That's unusual." "Time of death?" "Based on this? Anywhere from six to thirty-six hours. I'll know more after the post-mortem." Chen opened Aldrich's shirt collar. "Hello, what's this?" Quinn leaned in. A faint mark on the deceased's chest, just visible above the shirt line. It looked like a burn, but the edges were too precise, forming a symbol that matched one of the etchings on the compass. "Thompson, I want this whole room photographed. Every angle, every corner." Quinn straightened. "And get uniform to expand the cordon. I want the entire platform sealed off." "You think there's more to find?" Quinn gestured at the swept circle, the marked body, the hidden compass. "Someone went to a lot of trouble to stage this. The question is why." Dr Chen looked up from her examination. "Staged? You don't think this is where he died?" "Look at the dust patterns. This body was moved here, positioned deliberately." Quinn walked the perimeter of the room again. "No sign of struggle. No defensive wounds. A wealthy banker doesn't just wander into an abandoned tube station to die peacefully." "Unless he was meeting someone," Thompson offered. "In which case, where's the other party?" Quinn's torch beam caught something else—scratches on the doorframe, fresh ones. "And why clean only certain areas while leaving others untouched?" She photographed the scratches with her phone. They formed a repetitive pattern, almost like writing but in no alphabet she recognised. "There's something else," Dr Chen said quietly. She'd pulled back Aldrich's eyelids with gloved fingers. "The pupils are blown, but look at the irises. See that discolouration?" Quinn looked closer. What she'd taken for brown eyes showed flecks of silver, creating an almost metallic sheen. "Drug reaction?" "I've never seen anything like it." Chen made notes on her tablet. "I'll run a full toxicology panel, but this isn't consistent with any recreational drug I know." The compass in the evidence bag continued its lazy spin. Quinn watched it, unease building in her chest. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to trust her instincts, and right now they screamed that she was missing something fundamental about this scene. "Ma'am, you should see this." Thompson stood by the electrical panels, shining his torch on the wall above them. "These cables have been cut. Recently, by the look of it." Quinn examined the severed wires. Clean cuts, not frayed by age. Someone had deliberately disabled whatever systems these panels once controlled. "But here's the thing," Thompson continued. "According to the station blueprints, this room never had external power. These panels were decorative, part of a planned extension that was never completed." "So why cut cables that were never connected to anything?" The pieces of the puzzle refused to fit. A body with impossible rigor mortis. A room cleaned in specific patterns. Decorative panels someone had bothered to disable. And a compass that defied magnetic north. Quinn's phone rang. Morrison again. "We've got another problem," his voice crackled through the poor reception. "Aldrich's wife just called. Says she spoke to her husband an hour ago."
total_cost0.149625

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Dr Chen said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.468
leniency0.936
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.043
63.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count3
4
adverb"lazily"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"carefully"
3"deliberately"
4"lazily"
5"completely"
40.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
1"Sarah"
2"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"pristine"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"magnetic"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"gloom"
2"scanning"
3"pristine"
4"etched"
5"magnetic"
6"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1208
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount821
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.19
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
Camden1
Northern1
Line1
Thompson9
Aldrich6
Scratch1
Morrison2
Said1
Tuesday1
Dr3
Chen5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Thompson"
4"Aldrich"
5"Scratch"
6"Morrison"
7"Dr"
8"Chen"
places(empty)
globalScore0.404
windowScore0.333
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like an expensive suit"
1"quite make out in the harsh torch light"
2"looked like a burn, but the edges were to"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.828
wordCount1208
matches
0"not the expected mustiness of a forgotten tunnel, but something sharper"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"screamed that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean24.16
std13.58
cv0.562
sampleLengths
048
138
243
39
425
525
646
725
851
912
1042
115
128
1348
1414
1513
1641
1730
1821
1911
2029
214
2223
2324
2426
254
2633
273
2823
2939
3027
316
3226
3316
3441
357
3628
3721
3827
3918
402
4128
4244
4330
4421
4530
4610
4734
485
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences118
ratio0.051
matches
0"The smell hit her first—not the expected mustiness of a forgotten tunnel, but something sharper."
1"But instead of the usual detritus of abandoned stations—graffiti, empty bottles, makeshift camps—the space looked swept clean."
2"She checked her worn leather watch—3:47 AM."
3"She checked his arms through the suit jacket—nothing there either."
4"While the floor around the body showed recent disturbance, the corners remained pristine—except for one spot near the electrical panels where the dust had been deliberately swept in a rough circle about three feet in diameter."
5"\"In which case, where's the other party?\" Quinn's torch beam caught something else—scratches on the doorframe, fresh ones."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount415
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.03855421686746988
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.007228915662650603
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean10.24
std5.93
cv0.579
sampleLengths
017
115
215
31
412
519
67
79
815
917
102
119
1212
1313
1410
157
168
178
1811
1922
203
212
226
2319
2411
258
2617
277
288
293
309
3110
326
3310
346
3510
365
378
387
395
4036
4114
423
4310
4412
4521
468
473
4813
497
82.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5084745762711864
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her torch beam cut through"
1"She swept her torch across"
2"She pushed through, and the"
3"His mouth hung slightly open,"
4"She checked her worn leather"
5"She checked his arms through"
6"She stood, scanning the room"
7"She directed her beam at"
8"She'd need proper lighting to"
9"Her phone buzzed."
10"She joined him."
11"She tensed, hand moving instinctively"
12"She took in the scene"
13"She lifted Aldrich's left arm,"
14"It looked like a burn,"
15"She photographed the scratches with"
16"They formed a repetitive pattern,"
17"She'd pulled back Aldrich's eyelids"
18"his voice crackled through the"
ratio0.229
56.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences83
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath"
1"Her torch beam cut through"
2"The smell hit her first—not"
3"PC Thompson's voice echoed off"
4"The young constable stood twenty"
5"Quinn's boots crunched on broken"
6"The tunnel opened into what"
7"She swept her torch across"
8"Thompson pointed to a recessed"
9"Quinn noted the lack of"
10"Someone had been using this"
11"She pushed through, and the"
12"The control room stretched maybe"
13"Thompson consulted his notebook"
14"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
15"Aldrich's eyes stared at the"
16"His mouth hung slightly open,"
17"She checked her worn leather"
18"The body showed early signs"
19"Quinn pulled on latex gloves"
ratio0.807
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"While the floor around the"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
86.17% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Thompson suggested (suggest)"
1"she ordered (order)"
2"Thompson continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.106
leniency0.213
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.128
80.8049%