| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.283 | | leniency | 0.566 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "implication" | | 2 | "constructed" | | 3 | "database" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.31% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1434 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1044 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.48 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 4 | | Eva | 2 | | Avaros | 2 | | Stupid | 1 | | Lucien | 5 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Old | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Six | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Cheung" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite reach those mismatched eyes" | | 1 | "tasted like dark chocolate and foreign la" | | 2 | "something between fury and need driving her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.697 | | wordCount | 1434 | | matches | | 0 | "Not desperation exactly, but close" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "registered that Ptolemy" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 68 | | mean | 21.09 | | std | 19.17 | | cv | 0.909 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 57 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 43 | | 44 | 59 | | 45 | 39 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 41 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "was filing" | | 1 | "was filing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "That impossible gaze met hers — one amber eye warm despite its unnatural colour, the other black as the Avaros realm itself." | | 1 | "Vulnerable, in the way only Lucien ever managed to make her feel — stripped bare by a single syllable." | | 2 | "The flat revealed itself in pieces as he moved past her: the cramped living area cluttered with boxes she'd yet to unpack, the kitchenette where two mugs sat unwashed in the sink, the small tabby cat — Ptolemy, Eva's creature, temporarily in her care — watching from the armchair with the lazy disdain only felines could muster." | | 3 | "The scent of him invaded her senses — sandalwood and something darker underneath, the trace of Avaros that clung to half-demons like a second skin." | | 4 | "He reached into his jacket, and she tensed automatically — old instincts from the Evan years, the flinch reflex that never quite went away." | | 5 | "Something flickered across his face — guilt, maybe, or the half-demon equivalent." | | 6 | "Or rather, it was exactly like she remembered, which was the problem — his mouth moving against hers, his hands settling on her waist with careful precision, the way he tasted like dark chocolate and foreign lands." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 302 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.03642384105960265 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013245033112582781 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 11.95 | | std | 11.21 | | cv | 0.938 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 57 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 66.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.45 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 60.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She unlocked the three deadbolts," | | 1 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 2 | "Her heart performed some complicated" | | 3 | "she heard herself say" | | 4 | "She'd thought it so many" | | 5 | "She crossed her arms, anchoring" | | 6 | "He tilted his head, studying" | | 7 | "His jaw tightened almost imperceptibly." | | 8 | "She stepped aside." | | 9 | "He said it like he" | | 10 | "She closed the door, but" | | 11 | "He turned to face her," | | 12 | "She repeated the words flatly," | | 13 | "His voice dropped, urgent now" | | 14 | "He moved closer, and she" | | 15 | "He reached into his jacket," | | 16 | "She took it." | | 17 | "They stood outside a building" | | 18 | "He said her name like" | | 19 | "His eyebrows rose." |
| | ratio | 0.4 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "Rory wiped her hands on" | | 2 | "Some drunk stumbling up the" | | 3 | "She unlocked the three deadbolts," | | 4 | "The door swung inward, and" | | 5 | "Lucien stood in the dimly" | | 6 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 7 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 8 | "That impossible gaze met hers" | | 9 | "Her heart performed some complicated" | | 10 | "she heard herself say" | | 11 | "A smile tugged at the" | | 12 | "The name felt strange in" | | 13 | "She'd thought it so many" | | 14 | "She crossed her arms, anchoring" | | 15 | "He tilted his head, studying" | | 16 | "The question hung between them," | | 17 | "This was the threshold she'dCrossed" | | 18 | "Each time she'd told herself" | | 19 | "Each time she'd been lying." |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Six months of nothing, not a single message after he'd vanished from her life like smoke through a cracked window, and now here he stood on her doorstep as thou…" | | 1 | "The scent of him invaded her senses — sandalwood and something darker underneath, the trace of Avaros that clung to half-demons like a second skin." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.094 | | leniency | 0.189 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.038 | |