| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1244 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "teasingly" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1244 | | totalAiIsms | 41 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "trepidation" | | 3 | "fleeting" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "footfall" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "amidst" | | 11 | "yearning" | | 12 | "unravel" | | 13 | "tapestry" | | 14 | "comforting" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "sense of" | | 18 | "predator" | | 19 | "vibrated" | | 20 | "glint" | | 21 | "anticipation" | | 22 | "tracing" | | 23 | "flickered" | | 24 | "silence" | | 25 | "profound" | | 26 | "crystal" | | 27 | "crystalline" | | 28 | "reminder" | | 29 | "depths" | | 30 | "echoes" | | 31 | "pulsed" | | 32 | "echoed" | | 33 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 70.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1220 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.65% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 64 | | wordCount | 1084 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 8 | | Isolde | 10 | | Aurora | 11 | | Fae | 3 | | Seer | 1 | | Pale | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Dymas | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Faery | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Faery" |
| | globalScore | 0.946 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 62.28% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as though feeling something pure and untouchable" | | 1 | "as if remembering times only the Grove itself could recall" |
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| 36.07% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.639 | | wordCount | 1220 | | matches | | 0 | "not in what was visible, but what danced in shadow" | | 1 | "not all was meant to be understood, but savored" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "understanding that fate" |
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| 65.22% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 43.57 | | std | 16.48 | | cv | 0.378 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 71 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 66 |
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| 93.37% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.308 | | matches | | 0 | "Time itself seemed to twist and flutter here—her heart thrummed in her chest, torn between excitement and the soft tug of trepidation." | | 1 | "Each bloom sang a silent hymn to the ancient pulse beneath the soil—a secret cadence only the Fae understood." | | 2 | "Rory didn't need words to answer—they were hungry for understanding, yearning to unravel the tapestry of the Veil and the secrets it sheltered." | | 3 | "Yet, it wasn't a predator's gaze that grazed her—rather an ancient audience, curious and unpinned, observing secrets clinging to her motions." | | 4 | "\"This place,\" Aurora spoke with quiet reverence, \"it's alive.\" Her words drew a strange comfort—the realization that she had entered something sacred and extraordinary, a bridge between realities." | | 5 | "Rory's hand brushed against the slender, leaf-shaped dagger tucked securely at her side—the Fae-Forged Blade a gift from Isolde herself." | | 6 | "Its moonsilver glint caught the light, weaving anticipation into her thoughts; it was the key to Hel's wards, a talisman against demonkind—her anchor to a world beyond the reach of mundane." | | 7 | "Nyx's silhouette paused, their gaze caught by the distant shimmer of the Veil itself—a phantom curtain." | | 8 | "Even it knew boundaries here were ethereal, shifting; there was a logic at play she longed to understand." | | 9 | "Aurora’s fingers caressed the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist; a memory flickered in her mind, words past exchanged with an unknown benefactor—the lingering transient, touching promises yet unfulfilled." | | 10 | "Silence draped around, deep and profound, until a new sound—a brook’s gentle hum—caught their attention." | | 11 | "In this place, even Nyx found moments of humbleness—whispers slipped from shadows beckoning from paths unseen." | | 12 | "With the water's touch came a notion—a glimpse of Dymas, of Belphegor's land, the pulse of abundance threaded through the streams." | | 13 | "The path they walked gripped Aurora's soul; its allure lay not in what was visible, but what danced in shadow and light, breathed through leaf and petal." | | 14 | "The heartstone pulsed its promise of connection—the invitation to walk further, step deeper into the unknown tapestry." | | 15 | "Rory's eyes met the violet glow within Nyx's, a silent conversation unfurling between them—the yearning for answers, the quest entwined." | | 16 | "Isolde gazed into the distance, a knowing woven gently into her being; this Grove, for all its secrets, stood solidly entwined with worlds unseen, nurturing those daring enough to wander." | | 17 | "As Aurora and Nyx moved forward—each step a reverent exploration—an echo danced like laughter, carrying promises that transformed unease to wonder, mystery to revelation." | | 18 | "They realized, not all was meant to be understood, but savored and explored; secret pathways carried them further, their hearts beating in time with rhythms as ancient as stars." | | 19 | "The journey, begun in light and shadow, unfolded with the certainty of endless possibilities, woven into the timeless embrace of the Faery Grove—a haven larger than worlds, deeper than destiny." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1106 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.022603978300180832 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007233273056057866 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 82.19% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 18.77 | | std | 6.67 | | cv | 0.355 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 74.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.47692307692307695 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes, keen" | | 1 | "Their form, a silhouette of" | | 2 | "Her gaze swept the wildflowers," | | 3 | "her voice, holding the weight" | | 4 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 5 | "Its moonsilver glint caught the" | | 6 | "Her gaze flickered with knowing," | | 7 | "She felt a tether, a" | | 8 | "Her fingers brushed the crystalline" | | 9 | "Their journey led through the" | | 10 | "They realized, not all was" |
| | ratio | 0.193 | |
| 65.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed aside the curtain" | | 1 | "The fabric of the world" | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes, keen" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice, as insubstantial as" | | 4 | "Their form, a silhouette of" | | 5 | "Her gaze swept the wildflowers," | | 6 | "Each bloom sang a silent" | | 7 | "Isolde, the Seer, stepped forward" | | 8 | "her voice, holding the weight" | | 9 | "Rory didn't need words to" | | 10 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 11 | "Nyx, drawn by instinct more" | | 12 | "Aurora nodded, although Nyx had" | | 13 | "Unease whispered through her mind," | | 14 | "Aurora spoke with quiet reverence," | | 15 | "The Fae Grove vibrated underfoot," | | 16 | "Rory's hand brushed against the" | | 17 | "Its moonsilver glint caught the" | | 18 | "Isolde's voice, delicate and woven" | | 19 | "Rory paused, her brows knitting" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, it wasn't a predator's" | | 1 | "Even it knew boundaries here" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 29.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached for the Heartstone Pendant, feeling its comforting pulse of warmth against her skin, tethering her to purpose as she glanced back at Nyx." | | 1 | "With every step she took, the Grove seemed to shift around her, paths weaving and unwinding, urging her deeper into its heart." | | 2 | "Yet, it wasn't a predator's gaze that grazed her—rather an ancient audience, curious and unpinned, observing secrets clinging to her motions." | | 3 | "Aurora saw their fingers brush against the surface of an ancient stone, the action delicate as though feeling something pure and untouchable." | | 4 | "The water flowed like liquid crystal, its bed lined with stones that glittered as if the sky itself had scattered stars here, forgotten." | | 5 | "Her fingers brushed the crystalline surface, raising ripples that danced with moonlight." | | 6 | "As Aurora and Nyx moved forward—each step a reverent exploration—an echo danced like laughter, carrying promises that transformed unease to wonder, mystery to r…" |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx confessed, a rare vulnerability threading their habitual calm" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice enfolding them like the sweet, ancient air" | | 2 | "Rory began, the thought weaving through her mind," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Aurora spoke (speak)" | | 2 | "Nyx confessed (confess)" | | 3 | "warned Isolde (warn)" | | 4 | "Rory concluded (conclude)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.35 | | leniency | 0.7 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |