Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0EH71CRJEGYF986RRX92M

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Duration:
13.0s
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$0.018458
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Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed aside the curtain of ivy that draped over the entrance. The fabric of the world shimmered as her fingers brushed the leaves, a whispered promise that the Grove beyond held mysteries she couldn't wait to untangle. Her bright blue eyes, keen with wonder, traced the lines of ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary of Isolde's domain. Time itself seemed to twist and flutter here—her heart thrummed in her chest, torn between excitement and the soft tug of trepidation. "Rory," Nyx's voice, as insubstantial as mist, drifted through the clearing. "Do you feel it? The air… it's different." Their form, a silhouette of shadow, moved beside her, violet eyes barely more than a fleeting glimmer in the Grove's light. "Like breathing song instead of air," Aurora replied. Her gaze swept the wildflowers, their petals vivid and extravagant, unfurling with the lazy elegance of dancers caught mid-step. Each bloom sang a silent hymn to the ancient pulse beneath the soil—a secret cadence only the Fae understood. Isolde, the Seer, stepped forward without the whisper of a footfall to betray her approach, silver hair cascading like moonlight over her shoulders. "The Grove welcomes you," her voice, holding the weight of riddles, seemed to come from the very trees, wrapped in layers of echo. Pale lavender eyes met Aurora's, grounding her amidst the strangeness. Despite the fae compulsion she was bound by, there was reassurance in her presence. "What do you seek within?" Rory didn't need words to answer—they were hungry for understanding, yearning to unravel the tapestry of the Veil and the secrets it sheltered. She reached for the Heartstone Pendant, feeling its comforting pulse of warmth against her skin, tethering her to purpose as she glanced back at Nyx. Nyx, drawn by instinct more than plan, drifted through the ferns, their silhouette stretched into the dappled shadows. "The boundary here," they murmured, "it's porous. Like silk, easily torn." Aurora nodded, although Nyx had spoken to the world itself as much as to her. With every step she took, the Grove seemed to shift around her, paths weaving and unwinding, urging her deeper into its heart. Unease whispered through her mind, the sense of being watched. Yet, it wasn't a predator's gaze that grazed her—rather an ancient audience, curious and unpinned, observing secrets clinging to her motions. "This place," Aurora spoke with quiet reverence, "it's alive." Her words drew a strange comfort—the realization that she had entered something sacred and extraordinary, a bridge between realities. The Fae Grove vibrated underfoot, each movement an invitation, the ground cool and rich with a promise of things unseen. Rory's hand brushed against the slender, leaf-shaped dagger tucked securely at her side—the Fae-Forged Blade a gift from Isolde herself. Its moonsilver glint caught the light, weaving anticipation into her thoughts; it was the key to Hel's wards, a talisman against demonkind—her anchor to a world beyond the reach of mundane. "You can feel the paths?" Isolde's voice, delicate and woven with layers of memory, danced like music played on ancient strings. "It's more like… hearing something," Rory paused, her brows knitting in concentration, tracing the rise and fall of the song in her mind. "A whisper. You're following it, finding it by instinct. Intuition." Nyx's silhouette paused, their gaze caught by the distant shimmer of the Veil itself—a phantom curtain. Even it knew boundaries here were ethereal, shifting; there was a logic at play she longed to understand. "There's a beauty in this," Nyx confessed, a rare vulnerability threading their habitual calm. Aurora saw their fingers brush against the surface of an ancient stone, the action delicate as though feeling something pure and untouchable. "Yet it can be deceiving," warned Isolde, her eyes fixed far beyond their trespass, seeking a story not yet told. Her gaze flickered with knowing, a trickle of unease winding beneath her serene exterior. "The boundaries allow passage, but they demand a price." Aurora’s fingers caressed the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist; a memory flickered in her mind, words past exchanged with an unknown benefactor—the lingering transient, touching promises yet unfulfilled. She felt a tether, a connection bid by the chaos beyond. As they moved, helmeted by the Grove’s age, the air fell crisp, every breath a taste of ancient reverie. Silence draped around, deep and profound, until a new sound—a brook’s gentle hum—caught their attention. The water flowed like liquid crystal, its bed lined with stones that glittered as if the sky itself had scattered stars here, forgotten. "It's… harmonious," Nyx mused, their visage absorbing the rippling reflections, the cadence turning languid under their quiet examination. In this place, even Nyx found moments of humbleness—whispers slipped from shadows beckoning from paths unseen. Aurora turned to see Isolde standing by the brook's edge, her eyes far away as if remembering times only the Grove itself could recall. "The water speaks if you listen long enough," Isolde said, her voice enfolding them like the sweet, ancient air. Her fingers brushed the crystalline surface, raising ripples that danced with moonlight. Rory crouched low, fingers teasingly close to the stream. The pendant warmed against her skin, a subtle reminder of the threads connecting past, present, and future. With the water's touch came a notion—a glimpse of Dymas, of Belphegor's land, the pulse of abundance threaded through the streams. "If these stones resonate," Rory began, the thought weaving through her mind, "remembering, dreaming… what stories would they tell us?" Isolde’s expression softened, a rare piercing glow in her lavender eyes. "They tell of places where boundaries crumble—tales of those who wander, seeking what lies beyond thresholds." Nyx cast their gaze to Aurora, understanding pooling within the depths of their shadowed eyes. "The Grove holds echoes of the Veil—it's alive in ways the mundane cannot grasp." The path they walked gripped Aurora's soul; its allure lay not in what was visible, but what danced in shadow and light, breathed through leaf and petal. The heartstone pulsed its promise of connection—the invitation to walk further, step deeper into the unknown tapestry. "It isn't about seeing," Rory concluded, her voice firm, solid with the understanding that fate did not entirely elude her grasp. "It's about feeling. Listening." Their journey led through the twists of timeless paths, the woodland telling its stories in hushed tones, unseen reserves whispered truths. Rory's eyes met the violet glow within Nyx's, a silent conversation unfurling between them—the yearning for answers, the quest entwined. Isolde gazed into the distance, a knowing woven gently into her being; this Grove, for all its secrets, stood solidly entwined with worlds unseen, nurturing those daring enough to wander. As Aurora and Nyx moved forward—each step a reverent exploration—an echo danced like laughter, carrying promises that transformed unease to wonder, mystery to revelation. They realized, not all was meant to be understood, but savored and explored; secret pathways carried them further, their hearts beating in time with rhythms as ancient as stars. The journey, begun in light and shadow, unfolded with the certainty of endless possibilities, woven into the timeless embrace of the Faery Grove—a haven larger than worlds, deeper than destiny. Standing stones echoed eternity as Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stepped together into the endless dance, discovering the wondrous entities waiting in the whispers of leaves, hearts bound by promises carved in the language of magic itself.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"teasingly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"teasingly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsms41
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"trepidation"
count1
3
word"fleeting"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"footfall"
count1
7
word"cascading"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"echo"
count2
10
word"amidst"
count1
11
word"yearning"
count2
12
word"unravel"
count1
13
word"tapestry"
count2
14
word"comforting"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"silk"
count1
17
word"sense of"
count1
18
word"predator"
count1
19
word"vibrated"
count1
20
word"glint"
count1
21
word"anticipation"
count1
22
word"tracing"
count1
23
word"flickered"
count2
24
word"silence"
count1
25
word"profound"
count1
26
word"crystal"
count1
27
word"crystalline"
count1
28
word"reminder"
count1
29
word"depths"
count1
30
word"echoes"
count1
31
word"pulsed"
count1
32
word"echoed"
count1
33
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"traced"
2"trepidation"
3"fleeting"
4"pulse"
5"whisper"
6"footfall"
7"cascading"
8"weight"
9"echo"
10"amidst"
11"yearning"
12"unravel"
13"tapestry"
14"comforting"
15"warmth"
16"silk"
17"sense of"
18"predator"
19"vibrated"
20"glint"
21"anticipation"
22"tracing"
23"flickered"
24"silence"
25"profound"
26"crystal"
27"crystalline"
28"reminder"
29"depths"
30"echoes"
31"pulsed"
32"echoed"
33"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences59
matches
0"n with wonder"
70.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1220
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1084
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove8
Isolde10
Aurora11
Fae3
Seer1
Pale1
Veil2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Nyx12
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Hel1
Rory8
Dymas1
Belphegor1
Faery1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Aurora"
2"Seer"
3"Pendant"
4"Nyx"
5"Rory"
6"Belphegor"
places
0"Grove"
1"Fae"
2"Hel"
3"Faery"
globalScore0.946
windowScore1
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though feeling something pure and untouchable"
1"as if remembering times only the Grove itself could recall"
36.07% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.639
wordCount1220
matches
0"not in what was visible, but what danced in shadow"
1"not all was meant to be understood, but savored"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"understanding that fate"
65.22% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean43.57
std16.48
cv0.378
sampleLengths
081
140
246
375
448
529
668
728
871
921
1033
1134
1236
1343
1439
1557
1634
1755
1847
1920
2027
2129
2244
2325
2441
2530
2653
2766
93.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"was bound"
1"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences20
totalSentences65
ratio0.308
matches
0"Time itself seemed to twist and flutter here—her heart thrummed in her chest, torn between excitement and the soft tug of trepidation."
1"Each bloom sang a silent hymn to the ancient pulse beneath the soil—a secret cadence only the Fae understood."
2"Rory didn't need words to answer—they were hungry for understanding, yearning to unravel the tapestry of the Veil and the secrets it sheltered."
3"Yet, it wasn't a predator's gaze that grazed her—rather an ancient audience, curious and unpinned, observing secrets clinging to her motions."
4"\"This place,\" Aurora spoke with quiet reverence, \"it's alive.\" Her words drew a strange comfort—the realization that she had entered something sacred and extraordinary, a bridge between realities."
5"Rory's hand brushed against the slender, leaf-shaped dagger tucked securely at her side—the Fae-Forged Blade a gift from Isolde herself."
6"Its moonsilver glint caught the light, weaving anticipation into her thoughts; it was the key to Hel's wards, a talisman against demonkind—her anchor to a world beyond the reach of mundane."
7"Nyx's silhouette paused, their gaze caught by the distant shimmer of the Veil itself—a phantom curtain."
8"Even it knew boundaries here were ethereal, shifting; there was a logic at play she longed to understand."
9"Aurora’s fingers caressed the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist; a memory flickered in her mind, words past exchanged with an unknown benefactor—the lingering transient, touching promises yet unfulfilled."
10"Silence draped around, deep and profound, until a new sound—a brook’s gentle hum—caught their attention."
11"In this place, even Nyx found moments of humbleness—whispers slipped from shadows beckoning from paths unseen."
12"With the water's touch came a notion—a glimpse of Dymas, of Belphegor's land, the pulse of abundance threaded through the streams."
13"The path they walked gripped Aurora's soul; its allure lay not in what was visible, but what danced in shadow and light, breathed through leaf and petal."
14"The heartstone pulsed its promise of connection—the invitation to walk further, step deeper into the unknown tapestry."
15"Rory's eyes met the violet glow within Nyx's, a silent conversation unfurling between them—the yearning for answers, the quest entwined."
16"Isolde gazed into the distance, a knowing woven gently into her being; this Grove, for all its secrets, stood solidly entwined with worlds unseen, nurturing those daring enough to wander."
17"As Aurora and Nyx moved forward—each step a reverent exploration—an echo danced like laughter, carrying promises that transformed unease to wonder, mystery to revelation."
18"They realized, not all was meant to be understood, but savored and explored; secret pathways carried them further, their hearts beating in time with rhythms as ancient as stars."
19"The journey, begun in light and shadow, unfolded with the certainty of endless possibilities, woven into the timeless embrace of the Faery Grove—a haven larger than worlds, deeper than destiny."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1106
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slender, leaf-shaped dagger"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.022603978300180832
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007233273056057866
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
82.19% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean18.77
std6.67
cv0.355
sampleLengths
012
126
221
322
411
529
68
719
819
923
1023
1110
1214
135
1423
1525
1618
1711
1815
1922
2010
2121
2228
2320
2420
2531
2621
2723
2810
2916
3018
3114
3222
3320
3414
359
3628
3711
3819
3915
4023
4118
4216
4324
4419
4512
469
4717
4821
4920
74.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.47692307692307695
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences57
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes, keen"
1"Their form, a silhouette of"
2"Her gaze swept the wildflowers,"
3"her voice, holding the weight"
4"She reached for the Heartstone"
5"Its moonsilver glint caught the"
6"Her gaze flickered with knowing,"
7"She felt a tether, a"
8"Her fingers brushed the crystalline"
9"Their journey led through the"
10"They realized, not all was"
ratio0.193
65.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences57
matches
0"Aurora pushed aside the curtain"
1"The fabric of the world"
2"Her bright blue eyes, keen"
3"Nyx's voice, as insubstantial as"
4"Their form, a silhouette of"
5"Her gaze swept the wildflowers,"
6"Each bloom sang a silent"
7"Isolde, the Seer, stepped forward"
8"her voice, holding the weight"
9"Rory didn't need words to"
10"She reached for the Heartstone"
11"Nyx, drawn by instinct more"
12"Aurora nodded, although Nyx had"
13"Unease whispered through her mind,"
14"Aurora spoke with quiet reverence,"
15"The Fae Grove vibrated underfoot,"
16"Rory's hand brushed against the"
17"Its moonsilver glint caught the"
18"Isolde's voice, delicate and woven"
19"Rory paused, her brows knitting"
ratio0.789
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"Yet, it wasn't a predator's"
1"Even it knew boundaries here"
ratio0.035
29.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She reached for the Heartstone Pendant, feeling its comforting pulse of warmth against her skin, tethering her to purpose as she glanced back at Nyx."
1"With every step she took, the Grove seemed to shift around her, paths weaving and unwinding, urging her deeper into its heart."
2"Yet, it wasn't a predator's gaze that grazed her—rather an ancient audience, curious and unpinned, observing secrets clinging to her motions."
3"Aurora saw their fingers brush against the surface of an ancient stone, the action delicate as though feeling something pure and untouchable."
4"The water flowed like liquid crystal, its bed lined with stones that glittered as if the sky itself had scattered stars here, forgotten."
5"Her fingers brushed the crystalline surface, raising ripples that danced with moonlight."
6"As Aurora and Nyx moved forward—each step a reverent exploration—an echo danced like laughter, carrying promises that transformed unease to wonder, mystery to r…"
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Nyx confessed, a rare vulnerability threading their habitual calm"
1"Isolde said, her voice enfolding them like the sweet, ancient air"
2"Rory began, the thought weaving through her mind,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora spoke (speak)"
2"Nyx confessed (confess)"
3"warned Isolde (warn)"
4"Rory concluded (conclude)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.5
72.4384%