| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx replied flatly [flatly]" | | 1 | "She glanced back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 84.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 963 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.93% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 963 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "intricate" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 947 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 681 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Grove | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Fae-forged" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.766 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "reds that seemed to breathe, whites that glowed faintly in the darkness" | | 1 | "something that seemed to emanate from the very air" | | 2 | "seemed wrong" | | 3 | "quite reach her ancient eyes" | | 4 | "spirals that seemed to point toward a specific spot in the darkness above" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.112 | | wordCount | 947 | | matches | | 0 | "not moonlight, not starlight, but something older, something" | | 1 | "not starlight, but something older, something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 33.82 | | std | 20.07 | | cv | 0.594 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 73 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 53 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.143 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form shifted between states—their edges blurring where candlelight from the distant streetlamps failed to reach, their violet eyes catching what little glow remained." | | 1 | "The change hit Aurora like plunging into cold water—all the sounds of Richmond Park at night, the distant traffic, the rustle of foxes in the undergrowth, simply ceased." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors that shouldn't exist—blues too deep to be natural, reds that seemed to breathe, whites that glowed faintly in the darkness." | | 3 | "The canopy overhead blocked out the sky, but light filtered through anyway—not moonlight, not starlight, but something older, something that seemed to emanate from the very air." | | 4 | "She noticed that immediately—bent down, pressed her palm flat against the ground, felt nothing but give and warmth." | | 5 | "As they drew closer, Aurora realized the stones weren't merely tall—they were immense, each one wider than a city bus, their surfaces covered in writing she couldn't read." | | 6 | "\"I existed before most mortal languages. This is older.\" Nyx's voice carried an edge she'd never heard before—uncertainty, perhaps, or unease." | | 7 | "The pendant at her chest beat faster, its rhythm matching something she could feel now—a pulse in the earth itself, a heartbeat belonging to something vast and patient." | | 8 | "Or rather, she didn't hear footsteps at all—footsteps that made no sound, that left no impression." | | 9 | "She hadn't said anything to anyone about her questions—not really." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 694 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.0345821325648415 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01729106628242075 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 13.53 | | std | 7.85 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 56.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 92.34% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form shifted between states—their" | | 1 | "They stepped through the gates" | | 2 | "She stopped walking, her breath" | | 3 | "They had gone completely corporeal" | | 4 | "She noticed that immediately—bent down," | | 5 | "They walked toward the circle." | | 6 | "She heard the footsteps before" | | 7 | "She simply became present, as" | | 8 | "Her silver hair floated around" | | 9 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 10 | "Her gaze found Nyx, lingered" | | 11 | "She glanced back, her expression" | | 12 | "She hadn't said anything to" | | 13 | "She'd barely admitted them to" | | 14 | "Her head tilted, birdlike" |
| | ratio | 0.319 | |
| 2.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gates stood no" | | 1 | "Their form shifted between states—their" | | 2 | "Aurora touched the Heartstone at" | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 4 | "Nyx leaned closer, their shadow-body" | | 5 | "They stepped through the gates" | | 6 | "The change hit Aurora like" | | 7 | "The air thickened, tasting of" | | 8 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 9 | "She stopped walking, her breath" | | 10 | "The standing stones rose in" | | 11 | "Bark and bedrock merged seamlessly," | | 12 | "The canopy overhead blocked out" | | 13 | "They had gone completely corporeal" | | 14 | "Aurora picked her way through" | | 15 | "She noticed that immediately—bent down," | | 16 | "Nyx gestured toward the standing" | | 17 | "They walked toward the circle." | | 18 | "Symbols shifted as she watched," | | 19 | "Nyx's voice carried an edge" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form shifted between states—their edges blurring where candlelight from the distant streetlamps failed to reach, their violet eyes catching what little gl…" | | 1 | "The pendant pulsed against her sternum, a steady warmth that had nothing to do with her heartbeat." | | 2 | "The air thickened, tasting of honey and copper and something else, something that made her think of winter stars." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors that shouldn't exist—blues too deep to be natural, reds that seemed to breathe, whites that glowed faintly in the dark…" | | 4 | "The standing stones rose in a perfect circle ahead, twelve oaks grown to impossible heights, their trunks fused with stone that gleamed like quartz." | | 5 | "The canopy overhead blocked out the sky, but light filtered through anyway—not moonlight, not starlight, but something older, something that seemed to emanate f…" | | 6 | "Symbols shifted as she watched, rearranging themselves like words in a language that refused to stay still." | | 7 | "Or rather, she didn't hear footsteps at all—footsteps that made no sound, that left no impression." | | 8 | "The ground there shimmered, the flowers growing in spirals that seemed to point toward a specific spot in the darkness above." |
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| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped, her breath catching" | | 1 | "She glanced back, her expression unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.147 | | leniency | 0.294 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |