Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0EHXFWKYB97PHYEF4N4KX

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Duration:
41.0s
Cost:
$0.002598
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates stood no higher than Aurora's waist, yet they seemed to bar something far more formidable than a simple fence. Ancient oak posts, black with age, framed the entrance to the grove. Intricate spirals and symbols she couldn't name carved into the wood pulsed faintly with a luminescence that had nothing to do with moonlight. "You've gone quiet," Nyx observed. Their form shifted between states—their edges blurring where candlelight from the distant streetlamps failed to reach, their violet eyes catching what little glow remained. "That's unusual for you." "I'm taking in the details." Aurora touched the Heartstone at her chest. The pendant pulsed against her sternum, a steady warmth that had nothing to do with her heartbeat. "It's been doing that since we turned onto the footpath." Nyx leaned closer, their shadow-body rippling like water disturbed by a stone. "The Veil grows thin here. The pendant senses the boundary." They stepped through the gates together. The change hit Aurora like plunging into cold water—all the sounds of Richmond Park at night, the distant traffic, the rustle of foxes in the undergrowth, simply ceased. The air thickened, tasting of honey and copper and something else, something that made her think of winter stars. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors that shouldn't exist—blues too deep to be natural, reds that seemed to breathe, whites that glowed faintly in the darkness. "What the—" She stopped walking, her breath catching. The standing stones rose in a perfect circle ahead, twelve oaks grown to impossible heights, their trunks fused with stone that gleamed like quartz. Bark and bedrock merged seamlessly, as if the trees had grown from the rock itself. The canopy overhead blocked out the sky, but light filtered through anyway—not moonlight, not starlight, but something older, something that seemed to emanate from the very air. "The Grove doesn't follow Earth's rules," Nyx said. They had gone completely corporeal now, their form solid and still, their usual fluidity suppressed. "The Fae don't recognize mortal physics." Aurora picked her way through the flowers, her boots leaving no impression in the soft earth. She noticed that immediately—bent down, pressed her palm flat against the ground, felt nothing but give and warmth. "I'm not leaving footprints." "Time moves differently here. An hour inside could be minutes outside, or days." Nyx gestured toward the standing stones. "We should keep moving. The Seer knows we're coming." "You told me she speaks in riddles." "I told you she cannot lie. That's worse." They walked toward the circle. As they drew closer, Aurora realized the stones weren't merely tall—they were immense, each one wider than a city bus, their surfaces covered in writing she couldn't read. Symbols shifted as she watched, rearranging themselves like words in a language that refused to stay still. "Can you read this?" she asked. "I existed before most mortal languages. This is older." Nyx's voice carried an edge she'd never heard before—uncertainty, perhaps, or unease. "This predates the Veil. This is Fae script from before the separation." The temperature dropped as they entered the circle. Aurora's breath fogged in front of her face, though moments ago she'd been warm. The pendant at her chest beat faster, its rhythm matching something she could feel now—a pulse in the earth itself, a heartbeat belonging to something vast and patient. She heard the footsteps before she saw their source. Or rather, she didn't hear footsteps at all—footsteps that made no sound, that left no impression. Aurora turned. Isolde emerged from between two of the standing stones, though "emerged" seemed wrong. She simply became present, as if she'd been there all along, waiting for them to notice. Her silver hair floated around her face despite the absence of wind. Her pale lavender eyes reflected the strange light of the Grove, making them seem to glow from within. "Aurora of the mortal world." Isolde's voice layered over itself, multiple tones speaking in harmony. "You carry three gifts now—the stone from Hel, the blade from my people, and the shadow-friend who walks between." Her gaze found Nyx, lingered. "Aldric. You chose a new name." "They forced it on me," Nyx replied flatly. "After the ritual. I didn't choose anything." "You chose to survive." Isolde smiled, though the expression didn't quite reach her ancient eyes. "That is its own kind of transformation." Aurora's hand drifted to the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The weapon hummed faintly, resonating with something in the Grove. "You knew I was coming." "I know many things." Isolde began walking, her bare feet leaving no marks in the flower-strewn earth. "I know the Veil weakens with the winter's turning. I know a portal will open where the barriers are thinnest—near your workplace, as it happens. I know the Heartstone will guide you to it." She glanced back, her expression unreadable. "I know you seek answers about what you are, Aurora Carter. About what you might become." Aurora's throat tightened. She hadn't said anything to anyone about her questions—not really. She'd barely admitted them to herself. "What do you mean, what I might become?" Isolde stopped at the center of the standing stone circle. The ground there shimmered, the flowers growing in spirals that seemed to point toward a specific spot in the darkness above. "The pendant chose you. Such artifacts do not gravitate toward ordinary mortals." Her head tilted, birdlike. "Why do you think that is?" "I don't—" Aurora stopped. The pendant pulsed against her chest, and she realized she could feel the warmth spreading through her limbs now, spreading to places that had ached since she'd fled Cardiff. "I don't know." "Then perhaps," Isolde said, "that is the question you should be asking."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx replied flatly [flatly]"
1"She glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.118
84.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount963
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"completely"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount963
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"intricate"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count3
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"intricate"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"perfect"
4"could feel"
5"pulse"
6"footsteps"
7"unreadable"
8"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords947
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount681
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Aurora10
Heartstone1
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx7
Grove2
Isolde6
Fae-forged1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Fae-forged"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.766
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"reds that seemed to breathe, whites that glowed faintly in the darkness"
1"something that seemed to emanate from the very air"
2"seemed wrong"
3"quite reach her ancient eyes"
4"spirals that seemed to point toward a specific spot in the darkness above"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.112
wordCount947
matches
0"not moonlight, not starlight, but something older, something"
1"not starlight, but something older, something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean33.82
std20.07
cv0.594
sampleLengths
057
133
239
322
46
573
68
766
829
938
1028
117
128
1350
146
1533
1650
1727
1859
1945
2015
2122
2225
2373
2427
2553
2636
2712
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences70
ratio0.143
matches
0"Their form shifted between states—their edges blurring where candlelight from the distant streetlamps failed to reach, their violet eyes catching what little glow remained."
1"The change hit Aurora like plunging into cold water—all the sounds of Richmond Park at night, the distant traffic, the rustle of foxes in the undergrowth, simply ceased."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors that shouldn't exist—blues too deep to be natural, reds that seemed to breathe, whites that glowed faintly in the darkness."
3"The canopy overhead blocked out the sky, but light filtered through anyway—not moonlight, not starlight, but something older, something that seemed to emanate from the very air."
4"She noticed that immediately—bent down, pressed her palm flat against the ground, felt nothing but give and warmth."
5"As they drew closer, Aurora realized the stones weren't merely tall—they were immense, each one wider than a city bus, their surfaces covered in writing she couldn't read."
6"\"I existed before most mortal languages. This is older.\" Nyx's voice carried an edge she'd never heard before—uncertainty, perhaps, or unease."
7"The pendant at her chest beat faster, its rhythm matching something she could feel now—a pulse in the earth itself, a heartbeat belonging to something vast and patient."
8"Or rather, she didn't hear footsteps at all—footsteps that made no sound, that left no impression."
9"She hadn't said anything to anyone about her questions—not really."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount694
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0345821325648415
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01729106628242075
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean13.53
std7.85
cv0.58
sampleLengths
022
112
223
35
424
54
612
717
810
912
1010
116
1228
1319
1426
158
1624
1715
1827
198
2015
216
2216
2318
244
2519
269
277
288
295
3028
3117
326
3321
3412
358
3614
3728
389
3916
402
4113
4216
4312
4418
4515
4624
476
488
497
56.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.34% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences47
matches
0"Their form shifted between states—their"
1"They stepped through the gates"
2"She stopped walking, her breath"
3"They had gone completely corporeal"
4"She noticed that immediately—bent down,"
5"They walked toward the circle."
6"She heard the footsteps before"
7"She simply became present, as"
8"Her silver hair floated around"
9"Her pale lavender eyes reflected"
10"Her gaze found Nyx, lingered"
11"She glanced back, her expression"
12"She hadn't said anything to"
13"She'd barely admitted them to"
14"Her head tilted, birdlike"
ratio0.319
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences47
matches
0"The iron gates stood no"
1"Their form shifted between states—their"
2"Aurora touched the Heartstone at"
3"The pendant pulsed against her"
4"Nyx leaned closer, their shadow-body"
5"They stepped through the gates"
6"The change hit Aurora like"
7"The air thickened, tasting of"
8"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
9"She stopped walking, her breath"
10"The standing stones rose in"
11"Bark and bedrock merged seamlessly,"
12"The canopy overhead blocked out"
13"They had gone completely corporeal"
14"Aurora picked her way through"
15"She noticed that immediately—bent down,"
16"Nyx gestured toward the standing"
17"They walked toward the circle."
18"Symbols shifted as she watched,"
19"Nyx's voice carried an edge"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Their form shifted between states—their edges blurring where candlelight from the distant streetlamps failed to reach, their violet eyes catching what little gl…"
1"The pendant pulsed against her sternum, a steady warmth that had nothing to do with her heartbeat."
2"The air thickened, tasting of honey and copper and something else, something that made her think of winter stars."
3"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors that shouldn't exist—blues too deep to be natural, reds that seemed to breathe, whites that glowed faintly in the dark…"
4"The standing stones rose in a perfect circle ahead, twelve oaks grown to impossible heights, their trunks fused with stone that gleamed like quartz."
5"The canopy overhead blocked out the sky, but light filtered through anyway—not moonlight, not starlight, but something older, something that seemed to emanate f…"
6"Symbols shifted as she watched, rearranging themselves like words in a language that refused to stay still."
7"Or rather, she didn't hear footsteps at all—footsteps that made no sound, that left no impression."
8"The ground there shimmered, the flowers growing in spirals that seemed to point toward a specific spot in the darkness above."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She stopped, her breath catching"
1"She glanced back, her expression unreadable"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.147
leniency0.294
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.059
65.9339%