| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she stated calmly [calmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 88.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1257 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1257 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "dancing" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "stark" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "rhythmic" | | 17 | "fleeting" | | 18 | "intensity" | | 19 | "scanned" | | 20 | "fragmented" | | 21 | "crystal" | | 22 | "resolve" | | 23 | "oppressive" | | 24 | "symphony" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a prickle" | | 1 | "g with resolve" |
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| 66.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1249 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1035 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | British | 1 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | One | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Wildflowers" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Shade" | | 7 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.872 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.75% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye" | | 1 | "as if testing the density of this new reality" | | 2 | "felt like liquid silk, cool and tinglin" | | 3 | "felt like walking on the edge of a drea" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.801 | | wordCount | 1249 | | matches | | 0 | "not solid, but rather collections of swirling mist" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 37.85 | | std | 17.98 | | cv | 0.475 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 70 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 62 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 65 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here tasted different—thicker, sweeter, laced with the scent of blooming jasmine and damp earth despite the grey London drizzle soaking her delivery jacket behind the boundary." | | 1 | "One moment, the chill of a British afternoon bit at her cheeks; the next, a warm, golden sunlight bathed her skin." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in chaotic bursts of color around her ankles—violets, crimsons, and golds that had no business thriving in the same season, let alone the same patch of soil." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1043 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "comforting cold against her" |
| | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.020134228187919462 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007670182166826462 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 13.88 | | std | 6.71 | | cv | 0.483 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 51.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 45.05% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a wave of overwhelming" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 1 | "She blinked, her bright blue" | | 2 | "she breathed, turning in a" | | 3 | "They hummed, a barely audible" | | 4 | "Her bare feet touched the" | | 5 | "she murmured, watching a fish" | | 6 | "she announced, her voice carrying" | | 7 | "She pulled the Heartstone pendant" | | 8 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 9 | "she said, her voice sharp" | | 10 | "They were not solid, but" | | 11 | "They moved without sound, their" | | 12 | "she stated calmly" | | 13 | "She gritted her teeth, forcing" | | 14 | "she gasped, clutching the Heartstone" | | 15 | "Their voice boomed now, shaking" | | 16 | "She looked at the pendant," | | 17 | "She straightened her spine, her" | | 18 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 19 | "She turned and continued walking," |
| | ratio | 0.27 | |
| 0.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stopped at the" | | 2 | "The air here tasted different—thicker," | | 3 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 4 | "Nyx stepped forward, their form" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like" | | 6 | "Aurora took the final step." | | 7 | "The transition hit her stomach" | | 8 | "She blinked, her bright blue" | | 9 | "she breathed, turning in a" | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed in chaotic bursts" | | 11 | "They hummed, a barely audible" | | 12 | "Isolde Varga glided past them," | | 13 | "Her bare feet touched the" | | 14 | "The Half-Fae seer moved with" | | 15 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 16 | "Aurora followed the seer, her" | | 17 | "The moonsilver dagger radiated a" | | 18 | "Nyx flowed beside her, their" | | 19 | "The deeper they ventured, the" |
| | ratio | 0.919 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their bark rough and etched with symbols that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the e…" | | 1 | "As they crossed the line between the mundane world and the grove, the faint violet glow of their eyes intensified, casting a soft luminescence on the wildflower…" | | 2 | "She blinked, her bright blue eyes widening as the grey sky above vanished, replaced by a canopy of impossible verdant leaves that filtered light into dancing em…" | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in chaotic bursts of color around her ankles—violets, crimsons, and golds that had no business thriving in the same season, let alone the sa…" | | 4 | "Nyx flowed beside her, their shadowy form stretching and contracting as if testing the density of this new reality." | | 5 | "One of the mist-figures drifted closer, its form coalescing into a face that mirrored Aurora's own features, twisted in an expression of grief." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over pavement" | | 2 | "she announced, her voice carrying a weight that demanded silence" | | 3 | "she said, her voice sharp" | | 4 | "she said, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she announced (announce)" | | 4 | "Aurora noted (note)" | | 5 | "she stated calmly (state)" | | 6 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 7 | "Isolde advised (advise)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.615 | | effectiveRatio | 0.552 | |