| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she asked finally [finally]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.341 | | leniency | 0.683 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |
| 82.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1431 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1431 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lurch" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "tenderness" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "looming" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "desire" | | 11 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1445 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 984 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.73 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | French | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Lucien | 17 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.636 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite sexual, but something deeper, more primal" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.692 | | wordCount | 1445 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite sexual, but something deeper, more primal" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 72.27% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 28.9 | | std | 11.65 | | cv | 0.403 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 87.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "been obsessed" | | 2 | "been burned" | | 3 | "get lost" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.112 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum blond hair was slicked back, and his heterochromatic eyes - one amber, one black - stared back at her through the tiny lens." | | 1 | "She'd told herself she was done with him, with all of it - the supernatural underworld, the danger, the way he made her feel things she wasn't ready to feel." | | 2 | "Lucien turned to her, and for a moment, she saw something raw in his eyes - something that made her breath catch." | | 3 | "\"He's back in London. And he's not alone.\" Lucien moved closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne - something expensive and spicy." | | 4 | "But she'd been burned before - literally and figuratively." | | 5 | "But there was something in Lucien's face - a vulnerability she'd never seen before - that made her pause." | | 6 | "The challenge in his words sparked something in her - that same fire that had always drawn her to him, even when she knew better." | | 7 | "Lucien's lips curved into a smile - small, but genuine." | | 8 | "But instead, he just looked at her - really looked at her - and something shifted in his gaze." | | 9 | "And then, slowly, he smiled - a real smile this time, one that reached his eyes and made him look years younger." | | 10 | "The air between them crackled with tension - not quite sexual, but something deeper, more primal." | | 11 | "Lucien nodded, but she could see the reluctance in his eyes - the desire to stay in this moment, in this space between them where everything felt possible." |
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| 92.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 970 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.041237113402061855 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013402061855670102 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 13.5 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.513 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 52.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.32710280373831774 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 43.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 74.55% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She peered through the peephole" | | 1 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 2 | "They hadn't spoken since that" | | 3 | "She'd told herself she was" | | 4 | "She took a deep breath" | | 5 | "He stepped inside without waiting" | | 6 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 7 | "She wanted to believe him," | | 8 | "she asked, pulling her hand" | | 9 | "It was a word that" | | 10 | "She'd trusted Evan once, and" | | 11 | "She'd trusted her own instincts," | | 12 | "He'd always been so controlled," | | 13 | "she asked finally, hating how" | | 14 | "He held it out to" | | 15 | "She wanted to prove him" | | 16 | "She couldn't do this alone." | | 17 | "she said, tying the pouch" | | 18 | "She wasn't anyone's girl, least" | | 19 | "she asked, stepping back and" |
| | ratio | 0.364 | |
| 57.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock at the door" | | 1 | "Rory froze, her hand hovering" | | 2 | "The cat, Ptolemy, lifted his" | | 3 | "Another knock, slightly louder this" | | 4 | "Rory set the book down" | | 5 | "She peered through the peephole" | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 7 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 8 | "Rory hesitated, her hand on" | | 9 | "They hadn't spoken since that" | | 10 | "She'd told herself she was" | | 11 | "The knock came again, more" | | 12 | "Lucien called, his French accent" | | 13 | "She took a deep breath" | | 14 | "He stepped inside without waiting" | | 15 | "Rory closed the door and" | | 16 | "Lucien turned to her, and" | | 17 | "The name hit her like" | | 18 | "Lucien moved closer, close enough" | | 19 | "Rory's stomach twisted." |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "To see him stripped bare" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 79.37% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory froze, her hand hovering over the ancient grimoire she'd been studying." | | 1 | "He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his eyes scanning the chaos of Eva's flat." | | 2 | "Lucien turned to her, and for a moment, she saw something raw in his eyes - something that made her breath catch." | | 3 | "The challenge in his words sparked something in her - that same fire that had always drawn her to him, even when she knew better." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien called, his French accent thicker than usual" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "Lucien said, his voice hardening" | | 3 | "Lucien said, his voice all business now" | | 4 | "she said, her voice hardening" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.293 | | leniency | 0.585 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |