Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0F255JYF2RFBNJD55XBR8

Run Details

Duration:
4m 16s
Cost:
$0.004055
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, their bark rough and fissured like dried riverbeds. Aurora Carter halted at the edge of the clearing. The air here tasted different, thicker, carrying the scent of ozone and crushed petals. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, though she carried no food this time. Her fingers brushed the deep crimson gemstone resting against her collarbone. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a faint warmth, rhythmic as a sleeping heartbeat. Nyx stepped through the gap between the first two stones. Their form shifted, the living shadow solidifying into a humanoid silhouette standing over six feet tall. Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the canopy above. The light bends wrong here. Aurora followed. The transition hit her like a physical blow, a drop in pressure that popped her ears. Behind them, the grey London sky vanished. Above the grove, the atmosphere shimmered with a warm amber hue, though no sun was visible. The shadows stretched long and deep, inviting Nyx to linger within them. Isolde Varga walked past Aurora without breaking stride. The half-fae seer moved with an ethereal grace, her silver hair reaching down to her waist like a cascade of moonlight. Where her boots touched the earth, the grass sprang back immediately. No indentations remained. No footprints marked her path. Time behaves like water in this place. It pools in the lows and rushes over the highs. Aurora glanced at her watch. The second hand ticked backward, then froze, then spun wildly before settling. She shoved the wrist into her jacket pocket. We need to keep moving. The Wardens monitor rift points. If they see a tear this big, they will come. Isolde paused beside a cluster of wildflowers. Bluebells bloomed alongside summer roses and autumn chrysanthemums, all vibrant and open despite the season. The seer ran a pale finger along a petal. The Veil grows thin where the roots drink deep. What is monitored on the surface remains blind to what grows beneath. Nyx drifted closer to the tree line. Their edges blurred, merging with the darkness under the branches. A whisper carried on the wind, sounding like dry leaves skittering over pavement. I can feel the spaces between. The realms overlap here. Earth and Fae ground share the same soil. Aurora drew the Fae-Forged Blade from its sheath at her hip. The moonsilver felt heavy, the metal always cold to the touch regardless of the ambient temperature. The leaf-shaped dagger luminesced with a faint glow, cutting through the amber dimness. She gripped the hilt tight, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itching beneath the leather glove. Does the blade react to this place? Isolde turned. Her pale lavender eyes fixed on the weapon. Steel sings when magic breathes nearby. Yours hums a warning. Aurora lowered the point but kept the weapon ready. The silence of the grove pressed against her eardrums. No birds chirped. No insects buzzed. Only the sound of their breathing and the rustle of Isolde's garments broke the quiet. She walked deeper into the clearing. The flora grew denser, vines twisting around the oak trunks in patterns that looked too deliberate to be natural. Some spiraled clockwise, others counter-clockwise, forming locks and keys in the wood. This feels like a trap. Nyx materialized beside her, the solid form flickering like a bad signal. Traps require bait. We are merely guests who arrived without an invitation. Guests leave tracks. Isolde does not. Aurora does. Aurora looked down. Her boots left clear impressions in the soft moss. She stepped onto a exposed root to minimize the mark. The Heartstone warmed further against her skin, almost burning now. The pendant reacts to portals. We are not near a gate to Hel. Isolde stopped before a large stone altar covered in moss. She placed both hands on the surface. Her expression remained serene, unreadable. The stone remembers. It holds the echo of those who stood here before. What do they say? They speak of a winter that does not end. Of a solstice that locks the sun in place. Aurora sheathed the blade. The coldness lingered on her palm. She needed to focus. The disorientation of the time distortion made her stomach churn. Minutes outside could be days in here. She had a shift at the Golden Empress restaurant in three hours. Or three days. The uncertainty gnawed at her cool-headed demeanor. We cannot stay long. Eva expects me back in the city. Expectations are chains we forge ourselves. Isolde stepped away from the altar. She walked toward a patch of ferns that glowed with a faint bioluminescence. The light pulsed in time with the Heartstone. Nyx hovered over the ferns. The shadow being reached out a hand. The plant recoiled, shrinking into the earth. It knows what I am. A shade belongs to the void, not the garden. You were human once. Aldric. Nyx stiffened. The violet eyes flared brighter. That name belongs to a corpse left in sixteen forty-three. I am what remains. Aurora stepped between them. The tension spiked, sharp as the blade at her hip. We do not have time for history lessons. Isolde, you brought us here for a reason. You said you had information about the rifts. Information is a currency. I trade in visions. Show me the vision. Isolde raised a hand. The air shimmered, a distortion visible only when Aurora squinted. The Veil. It looked like heat haze rising from asphalt. Within the shimmer, images flickered. A city in flames. A shadow swallowing the sun. A woman with black hair holding a crimson stone. Aurora touched her own chest. The pendant burned hot. That is me. The image shifted. The woman stood before a gate of iron and bone. Prince Belphegor waited on the other side. The sky above the gate was warm amber, matching the grove. Dymas. Isolde lowered her hand. The vision vanished. The Gluttony realm seeks entrance. The Veil weakens during the winter solstice. We stand in the shadow of that event. Why show me this now? Because you carry the key. The Heartstone does not pulse for warmth alone. It pulses for hunger. Aurora stepped back. The ground felt less stable, as if the earth beneath them tilted. Nyx drifted closer to the ground, their form spreading out like spilled ink. The shadows lengthen. Something approaches. Isolde turned toward the tree line. Her silver hair floated despite the lack of wind. The grove welcomes those who know the price. It rejects those who seek to take. Aurora tightened her grip on the hilt of the dagger again. The cold metal grounded her. She scanned the perimeter. The amber light dimmed slightly, casting the clearing into deeper twilight. The wildflowers closed their petals one by one. What price? Isolde smiled. It did not reach her eyes. That depends on what you value most. Time? Memory? Or the breath in your lungs? Nyx rose higher, hovering above the canopy. Their voice echoed from everywhere at once. We are not alone. The wards shift. Aurora spun around. The standing stones at the entrance seemed further away than before. The distance had stretched. The path they walked in now curved back on itself. You said this was a hidden clearing. It is. Hidden from those who walk in straight lines. Aurora looked at Isolde. The seer stood still, leaving no mark on the earth, watching the shadows lengthen. Aurora took a breath. The air tasted of ozone and crushed petals. She stepped forward, toward the seer, toward the deepening twilight. Show me the way out. There is no out. Only through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count2
5
word"shimmered"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"churn"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"rhythmic"
4"scanned"
5"shimmered"
6"whisper"
7"silence"
8"unreadable"
9"echo"
10"stomach"
11"churn"
12"tension"
13"flickered"
14"pulse"
15"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences175
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences175
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences175
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1269
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1269
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone4
Pendant1
London1
Nyx8
Varga1
Aurora17
Wardens1
Veil3
Fae2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde13
Hel1
Golden1
Empress1
Belphegor1
Gluttony1
You3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Nyx"
4"Varga"
5"Aurora"
6"Veil"
7"Blade"
8"Isolde"
9"Belphegor"
10"You"
places
0"London"
1"Hel"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.83
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like heat haze rising from asphalt"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1269
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences175
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean19.23
std15.64
cv0.813
sampleLengths
077
134
25
353
448
517
625
720
831
921
1030
1118
1258
137
1410
1510
1639
1737
185
1912
2012
218
2232
2313
2422
2513
264
2718
2853
2911
306
3127
3219
3314
345
357
3614
3714
3824
398
404
4147
429
433
4431
451
467
4720
485
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences175
matches
0"is monitored"
1"being reached"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs228
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences175
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1276
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.02664576802507837
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006269592476489028
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences175
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences175
mean7.25
std3.95
cv0.545
sampleLengths
015
19
214
315
411
513
610
716
88
95
102
1116
127
1316
1412
158
1621
1711
183
195
207
2110
225
2312
248
255
265
2710
287
2915
309
319
3212
337
3410
3513
366
374
388
3911
4016
4113
4218
437
442
458
466
474
489
499
40.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.28
totalSentences175
uniqueOpeners49
41.41% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences161
matches
0"Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned"
1"Only the sound of their"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences161
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Her fingers brushed the deep"
2"Their form shifted, the living"
3"It pools in the lows"
4"She shoved the wrist into"
5"We need to keep moving."
6"Their edges blurred, merging with"
7"I can feel the spaces"
8"She gripped the hilt tight,"
9"Her pale lavender eyes fixed"
10"She walked deeper into the"
11"We are merely guests who"
12"Her boots left clear impressions"
13"She stepped onto a exposed"
14"We are not near a"
15"She placed both hands on"
16"Her expression remained serene, unreadable."
17"It holds the echo of"
18"They speak of a winter"
19"She needed to focus."
ratio0.248
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount138
totalSentences161
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter halted at the"
2"The air here tasted different,"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"Her fingers brushed the deep"
5"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with"
6"Nyx stepped through the gap"
7"Their form shifted, the living"
8"The light bends wrong here."
9"The transition hit her like"
10"The shadows stretched long and"
11"Isolde Varga walked past Aurora"
12"The half-fae seer moved with"
13"Time behaves like water in"
14"It pools in the lows"
15"Aurora glanced at her watch."
16"The second hand ticked backward,"
17"She shoved the wrist into"
18"We need to keep moving."
19"The Wardens monitor rift points."
ratio0.857
62.11% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences161
matches
0"If they see a tear"
1"Because you carry the key."
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The transition hit her like a physical blow, a drop in pressure that popped her ears."
1"The flora grew denser, vines twisting around the oak trunks in patterns that looked too deliberate to be natural."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.0178%