Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0F84SPS5ENXG61753VKEZ

Run Details

Duration:
23.2s
Cost:
$0.009172
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory adjusted the straps of her delivery pack, though it carried moonsilver instead of chow mein tonight. The air in Richmond Park had curdled. It didn’t smell of damp earth or dog walkers anymore. It smelled of overripe peaches and ozone. Beside her, Nyx drifted like a smudge of charcoal against the twilight, their violet eyes pulsing with a rhythmic, feline glow. "The border is thin here," Nyx whispered. The sound grated like dry leaves skittering across pavement. "The Veil frays like moth-eaten silk." They stepped between two ancient oaks. The bark didn't feel like wood; it felt like warm, petrified bone. As Rory crossed the threshold, the evening chill of London vanished, replaced by a heavy, humid heat that tasted of sugar and rot. The sky above didn’t fade into the bruised purple of a British dusk. Instead, it stretched into a vast, suffocating canopy of warm amber. "Isolde said the Grove was a pocket," Rory muttered, her fingers tracing the crescent scar on her wrist. "This doesn't feel like a pocket. It feels like a stomach." The Heartstone Pendant against her chest began to thrum. A deep, rhythmic heat radiated from the crimson gem, matching the pulse of the realm they had just entered. This wasn't the Fae Grove. The shimmering distortion of the Veil had deposited them somewhere far more gluttonous. Sprawling before them lay a valley that defied the laws of biology. Trees with leaves the color of bruised plums bent under the weight of fruits shaped like teardrops, glowing with an inner, liquid light. Vines as thick as a man's thigh coiled around marble pillars that rose haphazardly from the soil, their surfaces etched with scenes of chaotic banquets. "Dymas," Nyx hissed, their form flickering, becoming more translucent. "The Prince’s larder. We have strayed, Little Bird." Rory pulled the leaf-shaped Fae blade from her belt. The moonsilver felt like an icicle in her palm, a sharp contrast to the stifling air. "We don't turn back. The rift won't hold that long." They moved deeper into the orchard. Every step released a puff of spores from the velvet grass that smelled of cinnamon and old wine. The silence was heavy, broken only by the occasional wet *thud* of overripe fruit hitting the ground. Rory paused by a fountain. Instead of water, a viscous, golden syrup bubbled from the mouths of stone gargoyles. It pooled in a basin of polished obsidian, swirling with iridescent patterns. She reached out, drawn by the scent—blackberries and honey—before a shadow-wrapped hand caught her wrist. "Do not taste the indulgence," Nyx warned. "In Dymas, hunger is a terminal illness. One drop and you will spend eternity trying to find a flavor that matches it, orering your soul for a second lick." Rory pulled back, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. She looked at the gargoyles. Their stone eyes seemed to track her movement, their carved grins wide and hungry. The path narrowed, led by the ripening heat. The flora grew more aggressive. Flowers with petals like raw steak unfurled as they passed, exhaling clouds of sweet, numbing perfume. Rory breathed through her sleeve, the Fae-forged blade humming a low, silvery note in her hand. The weapon hated this place. It was a sliver of winter in a land of eternal, rotting summer. "Look there." Rory pointed toward a rise in the landscape. Through the haze of amber light, a crystalline structure rose like a jagged tooth. It wasn't built; it looked as if it had grown out of the earth, a cathedral of spun sugar and translucent bone. Figures moved behind the faceted walls—shimmering distortions that lacked the solid weight of mortals. "The kitchens," Nyx whispered. "Belphegor’s architects are busy tonight. The air carries the scent of a contract." As they climbed the slope, the ground transitioned from soil to a mosaic of crushed shells and sea-glass. A breeze finally cut through the stagnant heat, but it brought no relief. It carried the clatter of silver on porcelain and the low, guttural chanting of entities that had forgotten the need for breathe. Rory tripped over a root that bled thick, white sap. She hissed as the sticky substance scorched her jeans. "The environment is reacting to us," she said, watching the grass curl away from her boots as if offended by her presence. "You carry the iron of the mortal world and the frost of the Fae," Nyx said, their violet eyes scanning the perimeter. "To a realm of pure consumption, you are a bitter pill. Look at the Heartstone." Rory looked down. The pendant wasn't just glowing; it was vibrating, the crimson light carving lines through the amber gloom. It pointed toward the crystalline palace, frantic and demanding. "It wants in," Rory said. "Or it wants something inside." They reached the perimeter of the palace. The "glass" walls were actually towering panes of sugar-ice, thick enough to hold back the weight of the sky. Inside, Rory could see the flickering shadows of the Helbound—souls bound by contract, their hands moving with frantic, practiced grace as they prepared a feast that would never end. A high-pitched chime echoed through the valley, vibrating in Rory’s teeth. The heavy scent of roasted meat and caramelized sugar intensified until it was a physical weight in her lungs. "The first course is served," Nyx said, their shadow-form elongating, merging with the jagged shadows cast by the sugar-walls. "If we are caught here, rory, there is no barrister in Cardiff who can argue your way out of the Prince’s debt." "Good thing I didn’t finish my degree then," Rory whispered. She stepped toward a massive archway carved from a single, gargantuan rib bone. The entrance wasn't guarded by soldiers, but by the sheer, overwhelming sensory assault of the place. The music from within was a discordant mix of flutes and the screams of something being slowly simmered. Rory gripped the hilt of the moonsilver dagger. The coldness of the metal was her only tether to reality. She stepped into the hall, her boots clicking on a floor made of interlocking teeth. The ceiling was lost in a cloud of golden steam, where translucent eels swam through the air, their bodies glowing with the same amber light as the sky. "Stay close," she told the shadow at her side. "I am the shadow you cast, Rory," Nyx replied, their voice barely a ripple in the humid air. "I cannot be anywhere else." They moved past tables groaning under the weight of impossible delicacies. Birds made of singing flames were carved by knives that moved on their own. Platters of fruit that wept wine sat beside cakes that breathed. The Helbound chefs ignored them, their eyes vacant, their skin translucent and pale as parchment. Rory's stomach gave a sharp, treacherous twist of hunger. The smell was a siren song, promising an end to every worry, every fear of her past, every night spent sweating in a flat above Silas’ bar. She looked at a plate of tiny, silver fish that seemed to be swimming in a pool of moonlight. "Just a taste," a voice whispered in her ear—not Nyx’s voice, but a chorus of a thousand sighs. The Heartstone slammed against her sternum, a jolt of pure heat that snapped her back. She gasped, the silver dagger clattering against her palm. "Rory!" Nyx's voice was sharp. "I'm fine," she lied, her throat dry. "I'm fine. The pendant... it stopped me." "The stone is of Dymas," Nyx said, drifting closer. "It knows its master’s tricks. Use that clarity. We are not here to eat. We are here to find the anchor." Rory nodded, her gaze hardening. She ignored the shimmering displays and the seductive aromas, focusing instead on the way the Heartstone pulled her toward the center of the hall. There, beneath a dome of pulsing, raw meat-colored stone, sat a pedestal. It wasn't a plate or a chalice that sat upon it. It was a tear in the air itself—a jagged, shimmering rift that bled the cold, gray light of London into the warm amber of Hel. "The Veil," Rory breathed. "It’s being fed." She saw the mechanism then. Thin, golden tubes ran from the tables, siphoning the essence of the gluttony, the very energy of the indulgence, and pumping it into the rift. The realm was literally eating its way into her world, fueled by the excess of the Prince’s table. "Can the blade cut it?" Rory asked, stepping toward the pedestal. "The Fae blade cuts wards," Nyx said, their form agitated, flickering like a dying candle. "That is not a ward. That is a wound. You must cauterize it." Rory reached for the Heartstone. The silver chain scorched her neck as she pulled it over her head. The crimson gem was screaming now, a silent vibration that made her vision blur. As she neared the rift, the air began to hum. The eels in the ceiling stopped swimming. The Helbound chefs froze, their knives hovering over half-carved roasts. A heavy, rhythmic thud echoed through the floorboards—the sound of something massive waking up beneath the palace. "The Prince notices his guests," Nyx warned. Rory didn't wait. She thrust the Heartstone toward the shimmering gray tear. The moment the crimson gem touched the London air on the other side, the reaction was violent. A flash of white light collided with the golden steam of Dymas. The sugar-walls groaned. The floor of teeth began to chatter. Rory felt a wave of nausea as the two realms fought for dominance over the small patch of space. "Hold it!" Nyx cried, their shadow-form throwing itself in front of her as a shard of crystalline sugar flew from a nearby pillar. The rift began to shrink, drawing in the golden tubes, snapping them like dry twigs. The essence of Dymas hissed as it met the cold reality of the mortal plane. Rory felt the Heartstone grow heavy, its light fading from a violent crimson to a dull, soot-covered red. The heat in the room plummeted. The amber sky visible through the dome turned a sickly, bruised gray. The singing birds of flame flickered and died, leaving behind only the smell of burnt feathers. The rhythmic thudding from below accelerated. The ground buckled, sending Rory sprawling across the mosaic of teeth. She reached out, her fingers brushing the cold moonsilver of her dagger. "We have to go," she gasped, scrambling to her feet. The rift was now no larger than a coin, spinning violently. The Heartstone fell to the floor, its energy spent. Rory grabbed it, the metal cooling instantly in her hand. "The way is closing!" Nyx vanished into her shadow, their presence a frantic pressure at the base of her skull. Rory lunged for the shrinking circle of gray light. Behind her, the crystalline palace began to dissolve into a slurry of syrup and rot. The grand feast collapsed into piles of moldering waste. A roar, deep and gluttonous, shook the very foundations of the realm. She dove headlong into the gray. The sensation was like being pulled through a straw. The heat of Dymas stripped away, replaced by the biting, wonderful chill of a London rainstorm. Rory hit the grass hard, the smell of wet earth and diesel fumes filling her lungs like the sweetest vintage. She lay there for a moment, her face pressed into the mud of Richmond Park. The twin oaks stood silent above her, their bark just bark, their leaves just leaves. She opened her hand. The Heartstone lay dark in her palm, and the Fae-forged blade was tucked firmly in her belt, its moonsilver surface etched with the grime of another world. "Rory," Nyx’s voice returned to its whisper, anchored once more to her shadow. "You still have the delivery bag." Rory looked back at her shoulder. The pack was still there, but it felt lighter. She unzipped it, expecting to see her gear. Instead, a single, glowing teardrop fruit sat nestled in the dark fabric—the only thing that had survived the transition. It smelled of everything she had ever wanted. She zipped the bag shut with a trembling hand. "Let’s get out of here," she said, her voice shaking. "I think I’m done with the park for tonight."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:53:02.882Z" 2/19/2026, 3:53:02 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.605
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2069
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2069
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count4
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"weight"
count5
7
word"marble"
count1
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"crystalline"
count4
13
word"structure"
count1
14
word"mosaic"
count2
15
word"porcelain"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"gloom"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count2
19
word"treacherous"
count1
20
word"pumping"
count1
21
word"flickered"
count1
22
word"firmly"
count1
23
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"silk"
2"chill"
3"tracing"
4"stomach"
5"pulse"
6"weight"
7"marble"
8"etched"
9"chaotic"
10"velvet"
11"silence"
12"crystalline"
13"structure"
14"mosaic"
15"porcelain"
16"scanning"
17"gloom"
18"echoed"
19"treacherous"
20"pumping"
21"flickered"
22"firmly"
23"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"wave of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a wave of nausea"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences146
matches(empty)
74.36% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences146
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords2046
ratio0
matches
0"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount1749
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Nyx16
Rory28
London4
British1
Heartstone8
Pendant1
Fae4
Grove1
Veil1
Fae-forged2
Through1
Helbound3
Hel1
Prince1
Dymas3
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Veil"
4"Prince"
5"Dymas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore0.7
windowScore0.667
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences123
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like warm, petrified bone"
1"felt like an icicle in her palm, a shar"
2"fish that seemed to be swimming in a pool of moonlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.489
wordCount2046
matches
0"not Nyx’s voice, but a chorus of a thousand sighs"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean31
std16.59
cv0.535
sampleLengths
062
122
265
329
446
560
617
725
810
941
1046
1136
1231
1363
1410
1550
1617
1753
1819
1922
2037
2129
2210
2355
2430
2541
2610
2747
2862
299
3023
3151
3255
3318
3424
355
3614
3730
3841
3936
407
4148
4211
4328
4432
4544
467
4741
4829
4923
95.65% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences146
matches
0"was lost"
1"were carved"
2"being pulled"
3"was tucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs286
matches
0"was vibrating"
1"was screaming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences162
ratio0.062
matches
0"The bark didn't feel like wood; it felt like warm, petrified bone."
1"She reached out, drawn by the scent—blackberries and honey—before a shadow-wrapped hand caught her wrist."
2"It wasn't built; it looked as if it had grown out of the earth, a cathedral of spun sugar and translucent bone."
3"Figures moved behind the faceted walls—shimmering distortions that lacked the solid weight of mortals."
4"The pendant wasn't just glowing; it was vibrating, the crimson light carving lines through the amber gloom."
5"Inside, Rory could see the flickering shadows of the Helbound—souls bound by contract, their hands moving with frantic, practiced grace as they prepared a feast that would never end."
6"\"Just a taste,\" a voice whispered in her ear—not Nyx’s voice, but a chorus of a thousand sighs."
7"It was a tear in the air itself—a jagged, shimmering rift that bled the cold, gray light of London into the warm amber of Hel."
8"A heavy, rhythmic thud echoed through the floorboards—the sound of something massive waking up beneath the palace."
9"Instead, a single, glowing teardrop fruit sat nestled in the dark fabric—the only thing that had survived the transition."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1049
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.028598665395614873
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00667302192564347
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean12.63
std6.06
cv0.48
sampleLengths
017
17
210
37
421
57
69
76
86
912
1023
1113
1211
1318
1411
159
1619
175
1813
1912
2023
2125
229
238
249
2516
2610
276
2818
2917
305
3114
3212
3315
347
3529
3612
375
3814
398
405
4116
4216
435
4413
4510
4614
4722
4814
494
37.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2654320987654321
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners43
71.94% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences139
matches
0"Instead, it stretched into a"
1"Instead of water, a viscous,"
2"Instead, a single, glowing teardrop"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences139
matches
0"It didn’t smell of damp"
1"It smelled of overripe peaches"
2"They stepped between two ancient"
3"They moved deeper into the"
4"It pooled in a basin"
5"She reached out, drawn by"
6"She looked at the gargoyles."
7"Their stone eyes seemed to"
8"It was a sliver of"
9"It wasn't built; it looked"
10"It carried the clatter of"
11"She hissed as the sticky"
12"she said, watching the grass"
13"It pointed toward the crystalline"
14"They reached the perimeter of"
15"She stepped toward a massive"
16"She stepped into the hall,"
17"she told the shadow at"
18"They moved past tables groaning"
19"She looked at a plate"
ratio0.259
3.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount127
totalSentences139
matches
0"Rory adjusted the straps of"
1"The air in Richmond Park"
2"It didn’t smell of damp"
3"It smelled of overripe peaches"
4"The sound grated like dry"
5"They stepped between two ancient"
6"The bark didn't feel like"
7"The sky above didn’t fade"
8"Rory muttered, her fingers tracing"
9"The Heartstone Pendant against her"
10"A deep, rhythmic heat radiated"
11"This wasn't the Fae Grove."
12"The shimmering distortion of the"
13"Trees with leaves the color"
14"Vines as thick as a"
15"Nyx hissed, their form flickering,"
16"Rory pulled the leaf-shaped Fae"
17"The moonsilver felt like an"
18"They moved deeper into the"
19"Every step released a puff"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences78
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Figures moved behind the faceted walls—shimmering distortions that lacked the solid weight of mortals."
1"It carried the clatter of silver on porcelain and the low, guttural chanting of entities that had forgotten the need for breathe."
2"Inside, Rory could see the flickering shadows of the Helbound—souls bound by contract, their hands moving with frantic, practiced grace as they prepared a feast…"
3"She stepped into the hall, her boots clicking on a floor made of interlocking teeth."
4"She looked at a plate of tiny, silver fish that seemed to be swimming in a pool of moonlight."
5"The Heartstone slammed against her sternum, a jolt of pure heat that snapped her back."
6"It was a tear in the air itself—a jagged, shimmering rift that bled the cold, gray light of London into the warm amber of Hel."
7"The crimson gem was screaming now, a silent vibration that made her vision blur."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Rory muttered, her fingers tracing the crescent scar on her wrist"
1"Nyx hissed, their form flickering, becoming more translucent"
2"Nyx said, their violet eyes scanning the perimeter"
3"Nyx replied, their voice barely a ripple in the humid air"
4"she lied, her throat dry"
5"she said, her voice shaking"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
5"Rory whispered (whisper)"
6"a siren song promising (a siren song promising)"
7"a voice whispered (whisper)"
8"she lied (lie)"
9"Rory breathed (breathe)"
10"Nyx warned (warn)"
11"Nyx cried (cry)"
12"she gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.535
leniency1
rawRatio0.565
effectiveRatio0.565
73.8727%