Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0FB9RSNAQD1F3ENF3936K

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Duration:
31.3s
Cost:
$0.001075

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into the grove, the sunlight fading behind her, swallowed by an overhanging canopy of vibrant leaves. Whispers of the forest brushed against her skin, a contrasting chill to the warmth lingering from the day. She paused, adjusting the slender blade at her waist, its coldness grounding her in a reality that felt tenuous at best. “Is this… it?” Rory's voice broke the silence, quivering slightly with a mix of awe and apprehension. Nyx materialized beside her, a pool of shadow against the backdrop of vibrant wildflowers. Their glowing violet eyes flickered toward the ancient oak standing stones that formed a protective ring around the grove. “More than ‘it,’” they replied, their voice a secret carried in the wind. “This place bends reality, whispers forgotten truths.” Rory nodded slowly, absorbing the scene. Each stone dripped with moss, their surfaces etched with intricate designs that seemed to shift when gazed at too long. Light played tricks, dancing between the fading sun and the canopy above, as the world felt alive with a pulse that synchronized with her heart. “Feels like we stepped into a painting,” Rory said, stepping further in. The air thickened, heavy with the scent of blooming wildflowers, sharp with sweetness. It whispered of memories, stories woven in every petal and blade of grass. Just then, a rustling nearby drew her attention. She turned her head abruptly. A small creature, ethereal and delicate, darted past, shimmering like a flicker of moonlight before vanishing into the foliage. “What was that?” Rory's eyes widened. She instinctively reached for her Heartstone Pendant, its warmth comforting against the cool air. “A Fae, perhaps,” Nyx suggested, their tone morphing into intrigue. “Curious, yet wary of intruders.” Isolde appeared at the edge of the grove, her silver hair waving gently in an unseen breeze. “Intruders or seekers? Perspective is everything,” she mused, leaving no footprints behind as she glided toward them, the atmosphere shifting around her presence. “Is it true that time behaves differently here?” Rory asked, her brow furrowing as she recalled tales of the grove’s peculiarities. “Ah, the boundaries twist and turn,” Isolde replied, her voice lilting like a melody, each word a riddle. “An hour within may vanish like dew beneath the sun. Beware, for one might not return as they left.” Rory shuddered, imagining days lost in these tangled whispers of time. Nyx continued deeper into the grove, a dark silhouette flitting between shafts of light. Rory hesitated, then followed, curiosity chasing away lingering unease. They ventured further, the woods spreading wide like an expansive canvas. Each sound, every rustle of branches, felt amplified in the sacred stillness. Rory reached out to touch the soft petals of a bloom, its colors shifting from azure to gold as her fingers brushed against it. It twinkled, a spark of pure energy coursing through her veins. “Here, the flora defies logic,” Nyx observed, their form growing faint with the fading light. “It exists without boundaries, nourished by emotions—not mere memories but those lingering ties to hope and dreams.” Isolde’s laugh chimed like glass bells. “Precisely, dear Nyx. But not only hope. Shadows weave their tales here, too.” The three pressed on, at a gradual pace, Rory soaking in the wonders around her. She plucked a flower, its tiny luminescent glow illuminating her fingers, a gentle reminder of her humanity in this surreal abode. Subtle undertones of music curled through the air, string melodies drifting from who-knew-where. It beckoned her deeper into the labyrinth of the grove. “Do you hear that?” Rory turned to her companions, a smile breaking across her face. “Fae melodies weave through these ancient woods,” Isolde said, serenity overlapping her enigmatic aura. “Echoes of forgotten songs, past and present converging in harmony.” Rory’s heart raced, and she reveled in the thrill of adventure. She stepped lightly, her senses sharpened as the world flared with colors more vivid than she had ever imagined. Bending down, she released the flower, letting it fall back among its kin. It landed softly, whispering its mutter of surrender. Suddenly, Nyx recoiled, their silhouette flickering as darkness pooled around them. “What is it?” Rory’s voice tightened. “Something shifts within the shadows.” Nyx's voice barely rose above a breath. “Danger lingers, unnoticed.” Isolde’s gaze turned serious, her ethereal presence signaling familiarity with the unknown. “Visions warn of the dark; let us tread lightly. Greater forces vie for attention in these realms.” Rory’s stomach clenched. She tightened her grip on the Fae-forged blade at her side, its chill reminding her of her purpose. But the idea of danger in this enchanting place left her wary. “What are we looking for?” Rory pressed, her excitement dampening. “Truths,” Nyx whispered, their eyes scanning the grove, sharp and alert. “And perhaps answers that reveal paths unseen.” As they rounded a gigantic gnarled tree, its bark swirling with ancient symbols, the mood shifted. The music faded, replaced by a daunting silence, the hum of the grove melding into an ominous stillness. “Feel that?” Rory glanced around. The atmosphere thickened, each breath harder to take. Isolde raised a hand, halting them. “Listen to the land. It speaks.” The earth trembled subtly beneath their feet, a pulse echoing in tune with her own racing heart. A figure coalesced from the shadows beyond the tree, emerging with an elegance that sent a ripple of unease through Rory. The air chilled as the creature looked up, its pale lavender eyes meeting Isolde’s. Recognition flared in the depths of those distant eyes. “Seekers dare tread upon the sacred ground,” it murmured, voice soothing yet laced with authority. “Wisdom often courts danger.” “Walther,” Isolde breathed, her gaze unyielding. “Guardian of the grove, what brings you forth?” The Shade transformed, solidifying, contours sharpening until Rory could see each detail—a hauntingly beautiful apparition, both threat and guardian. “I guard against the gluttony of desire,” Walther replied, the shadows around them twisting to echo their words. “What do you desire? Truth? Or merely the thrill of discovery?” Rory squared her shoulders, determination flooding her. “Both, if truth can lead to freedom.” The Shade's gaze swept over her, as if peeling back layers of her soul, weighing the winds of her past. “Careful,” they whispered. “Desire’s price is never light.” Rory swallowed, unease tightening her chest. She felt the weight of their quest deep in her bones, unsure of the path unfolding before her. But she sensed a deeper purpose drawing them onward, the grove alive with whispers and wonders yet to be uncovered. The heart of this world lay just beyond, waiting for brave souls to claim it.
total_cost0.00107477

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.543
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
63.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count2
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
3"precisely"
4"lightly"
5"softly"
6"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"apprehension"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"synchronized"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"comforting"
count1
12
word"intrigue"
count1
13
word"furrowing"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"surreal"
count1
16
word"enigmatic"
count1
17
word"echoes"
count1
18
word"raced"
count1
19
word"stomach"
count1
20
word"scanning"
count1
21
word"trembled"
count1
22
word"echoing"
count1
23
word"racing"
count1
24
word"chilled"
count1
25
word"depths"
count1
26
word"desire"
count3
27
word"echo"
count1
28
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"apprehension"
4"flickered"
5"etched"
6"intricate"
7"dancing"
8"pulse"
9"synchronized"
10"flicker"
11"comforting"
12"intrigue"
13"furrowing"
14"reminder"
15"surreal"
16"enigmatic"
17"echoes"
18"raced"
19"stomach"
20"scanning"
21"trembled"
22"echoing"
23"racing"
24"chilled"
25"depths"
26"desire"
27"echo"
28"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"a ripple of unease"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1097
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
40.93% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount871
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx7
Rory19
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Isolde8
Fae-forged1
Shade2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Shade"
places(empty)
globalScore0.409
windowScore0.667
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"designs that seemed to shift when gazed at too long"
1"as if peeling back layers of her soul, weighing the winds of her past"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.912
wordCount1097
matches
0"not mere memories but those lingering ties to hope"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean28.13
std14.81
cv0.526
sampleLengths
057
117
233
320
451
538
632
720
815
940
1021
1137
1234
1358
1432
1519
1636
1723
1815
1924
2051
2111
226
2315
2429
2533
2610
2718
2834
2913
3012
3161
3219
3314
3419
3529
3614
3728
3859
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
76.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences86
ratio0.023
matches
0"“Visions warn of the dark; let us tread lightly. Greater forces vie for attention in these realms.”"
1"The Shade transformed, solidifying, contours sharpening until Rory could see each detail—a hauntingly beautiful apparition, both threat and guardian."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03428571428571429
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012571428571428572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.76
std5.5
cv0.432
sampleLengths
018
118
221
317
414
519
613
77
86
920
1025
1112
1213
1313
148
155
1619
176
1814
1910
205
2117
2223
2321
2418
2519
2611
2714
289
2911
3012
3124
3211
3315
3417
356
3613
3715
3821
3913
4010
4115
4214
4310
4411
4519
4613
478
4811
496
94.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5697674418604651
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners49
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Just then, a rustling nearby"
1"Suddenly, Nyx recoiled, their silhouette"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences70
matches
0"She paused, adjusting the slender"
1"Their glowing violet eyes flickered"
2"they replied, their voice a"
3"It whispered of memories, stories"
4"She turned her head abruptly."
5"She instinctively reached for her"
6"she mused, leaving no footprints"
7"They ventured further, the woods"
8"It twinkled, a spark of"
9"She plucked a flower, its"
10"It beckoned her deeper into"
11"She stepped lightly, her senses"
12"It landed softly, whispering its"
13"She tightened her grip on"
14"it murmured, voice soothing yet"
15"She felt the weight of"
ratio0.229
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences70
matches
0"Aurora stepped into the grove,"
1"Whispers of the forest brushed"
2"She paused, adjusting the slender"
3"Rory's voice broke the silence,"
4"Nyx materialized beside her, a"
5"Their glowing violet eyes flickered"
6"they replied, their voice a"
7"Rory nodded slowly, absorbing the"
8"Each stone dripped with moss,"
9"Light played tricks, dancing between"
10"Rory said, stepping further in"
11"The air thickened, heavy with"
12"It whispered of memories, stories"
13"She turned her head abruptly."
14"A small creature, ethereal and"
15"Rory's eyes widened"
16"She instinctively reached for her"
17"Nyx suggested, their tone morphing"
18"Isolde appeared at the edge"
19"she mused, leaving no footprints"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She paused, adjusting the slender blade at her waist, its coldness grounding her in a reality that felt tenuous at best."
1"Their glowing violet eyes flickered toward the ancient oak standing stones that formed a protective ring around the grove."
2"Light played tricks, dancing between the fading sun and the canopy above, as the world felt alive with a pulse that synchronized with her heart."
3"The Shade's gaze swept over her, as if peeling back layers of her soul, weighing the winds of her past."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"they replied, their voice a secret carried in the wind"
1"Nyx suggested, their tone morphing into intrigue"
2"Isolde replied, her voice lilting like a melody, each word a riddle"
3"Nyx observed, their form growing faint with the fading light"
4"Rory turned, a smile breaking across her face"
5"Isolde said, serenity overlapping her enigmatic aura"
6"Rory pressed, her excitement dampening"
7"Nyx whispered, their eyes scanning the grove, sharp and alert"
8"it murmured, voice soothing yet laced with authority"
9"Isolde breathed, her gaze unyielding"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx suggested (suggest)"
1"Nyx observed (observe)"
2"Rory pressed (press)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"it murmured (murmur)"
5"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
6"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.371
leniency0.743
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.4
77.3399%