| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory glanced around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.543 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 63.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "precisely" | | 4 | "lightly" | | 5 | "softly" | | 6 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "apprehension" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "synchronized" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "comforting" | | 12 | "intrigue" | | 13 | "furrowing" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "surreal" | | 16 | "enigmatic" | | 17 | "echoes" | | 18 | "raced" | | 19 | "stomach" | | 20 | "scanning" | | 21 | "trembled" | | 22 | "echoing" | | 23 | "racing" | | 24 | "chilled" | | 25 | "depths" | | 26 | "desire" | | 27 | "echo" | | 28 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1097 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.93% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 871 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 19 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Shade | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Shade" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.409 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "designs that seemed to shift when gazed at too long" | | 1 | "as if peeling back layers of her soul, weighing the winds of her past" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.912 | | wordCount | 1097 | | matches | | 0 | "not mere memories but those lingering ties to hope" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 28.13 | | std | 14.81 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 61 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.41% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "“Visions warn of the dark; let us tread lightly. Greater forces vie for attention in these realms.”" | | 1 | "The Shade transformed, solidifying, contours sharpening until Rory could see each detail—a hauntingly beautiful apparition, both threat and guardian." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 875 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.03428571428571429 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012571428571428572 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 12.76 | | std | 5.5 | | cv | 0.432 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 94.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5697674418604651 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 95.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Just then, a rustling nearby" | | 1 | "Suddenly, Nyx recoiled, their silhouette" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, adjusting the slender" | | 1 | "Their glowing violet eyes flickered" | | 2 | "they replied, their voice a" | | 3 | "It whispered of memories, stories" | | 4 | "She turned her head abruptly." | | 5 | "She instinctively reached for her" | | 6 | "she mused, leaving no footprints" | | 7 | "They ventured further, the woods" | | 8 | "It twinkled, a spark of" | | 9 | "She plucked a flower, its" | | 10 | "It beckoned her deeper into" | | 11 | "She stepped lightly, her senses" | | 12 | "It landed softly, whispering its" | | 13 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 14 | "it murmured, voice soothing yet" | | 15 | "She felt the weight of" |
| | ratio | 0.229 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped into the grove," | | 1 | "Whispers of the forest brushed" | | 2 | "She paused, adjusting the slender" | | 3 | "Rory's voice broke the silence," | | 4 | "Nyx materialized beside her, a" | | 5 | "Their glowing violet eyes flickered" | | 6 | "they replied, their voice a" | | 7 | "Rory nodded slowly, absorbing the" | | 8 | "Each stone dripped with moss," | | 9 | "Light played tricks, dancing between" | | 10 | "Rory said, stepping further in" | | 11 | "The air thickened, heavy with" | | 12 | "It whispered of memories, stories" | | 13 | "She turned her head abruptly." | | 14 | "A small creature, ethereal and" | | 15 | "Rory's eyes widened" | | 16 | "She instinctively reached for her" | | 17 | "Nyx suggested, their tone morphing" | | 18 | "Isolde appeared at the edge" | | 19 | "she mused, leaving no footprints" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, adjusting the slender blade at her waist, its coldness grounding her in a reality that felt tenuous at best." | | 1 | "Their glowing violet eyes flickered toward the ancient oak standing stones that formed a protective ring around the grove." | | 2 | "Light played tricks, dancing between the fading sun and the canopy above, as the world felt alive with a pulse that synchronized with her heart." | | 3 | "The Shade's gaze swept over her, as if peeling back layers of her soul, weighing the winds of her past." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "they replied, their voice a secret carried in the wind" | | 1 | "Nyx suggested, their tone morphing into intrigue" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her voice lilting like a melody, each word a riddle" | | 3 | "Nyx observed, their form growing faint with the fading light" | | 4 | "Rory turned, a smile breaking across her face" | | 5 | "Isolde said, serenity overlapping her enigmatic aura" | | 6 | "Rory pressed, her excitement dampening" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered, their eyes scanning the grove, sharp and alert" | | 8 | "it murmured, voice soothing yet laced with authority" | | 9 | "Isolde breathed, her gaze unyielding" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx suggested (suggest)" | | 1 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Rory pressed (press)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "it murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.371 | | leniency | 0.743 | | rawRatio | 0.538 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |