Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0FJ0KKZV808FTWD0VBSAX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.044413
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung inward before I latched the top deadbolt. Lucien Moreau filled the gap, blade cane clutched at his side. I froze on the threshold of my narrow entry hall, leather jacket still draped across my arm. His heterochromatic gaze flicked from my wrist to my face in a single silent calculation. The small crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist prickled under his scrutiny. I swallowed. The corridor light overhead hummed, stubborn and half alive. “Miss Carter,” he said. His voice slid across the quiet like velvet. “Lucien.” My single word sounded brittle, colder than I meant. I forced the jacket into a basket by the door. His gaze lingered there. Then he stepped forward, purposeful, tailored charcoal suit brushing the chipped paint on my doorframe. “Twenty minutes.” My tone landed flat, more statement than question. His amber eye glimmered. “I trust your punctuality hasn’t improved.” I closed the door behind him in one sharp motion, locking each of the three deadbolts with practiced fingers. He watched, unperturbed, ivory-handled cane tapping the floor. His black eye narrowed. “Impressive security for someone who delivers noodles as a day job.” “Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress insists on punctuality.” I kicked off my boots, wary. “You didn’t answer.” An inexplicable twist knotted in my chest. Lucien brushed past me without invitation, crossing the living room with that familiar, silent grace. He paused by the battered old sofa, fingertips brushing a faded cushion. The faint scent of curry still clung to the air, settling beneath dust motes dancing in the stale light. I followed. “Why are you here? Really.” He pivoted, cane held upright. “I owe you an apology.” He unclipped the blade from the shaft and let it fall gently into his palm, steel flashing. “And a request.” My heart jolted at the sight of that blade. “Atlas said you left Avaros for good.” “He’s underestimating me.” He closed the distance in three long strides. The cane struck the wooden floor, a warning. “I’m wounded, Aurora. I need sanctuary.” Words twisted in my gut. “You chose the wrong flat for sanctuary.” He tilted his head, amber eye observing the precarious stack of empty noodle boxes on the narrow kitchen dresser, a half-burnt candle dripping wax onto a notebook filled with scrawled notes on demon sigils. “Your flat,” he said, voice gentler now, “is unassuming.” He brushed a hand against the peeling wallpaper, dust rising. “Perfect hiding place.” I crossed my arms. “Forget hiding. You vanished.” He took a slow breath. “I ran.” I paced to the window, heels clicking on the floorboards. I peered through slatted blinds at the sour glow of Silas’s bar sign across the street. Music thumped faintly. “And you left me here, sorting through cryptic manuscripts alone.” His jaw tightened. “I kept my promise not to involve you.” I whirled. “By leaving me to twist in the wind?” He advanced, cane held behind him like a shield. “I did what I had to do.” The scar on my wrist felt hot beneath my sleeve. I glanced down. “You left me the bill.” He stopped, close enough that I smelled the sharp tang of his cologne, something like crushed mint and leather. “Battlefields aren’t places for vows.” “I count this flat a battlefield sometimes.” My voice broke. “I needed you.” He reached out, thumb brushing that scar. “I know.” My spine stiffened. “Then tell me why you came now.” He stood upright, eyes locked on mine. “Because time ran out.” My skin crawled. “Time?” He nodded toward the door. “They’re coming.” I spun around. Silence filled the flat, too heavy. Lucien’s cane tip scraped against the floor in a single, controlled tap. “The Sable Church put a contract on me.” I bit my lip. “Cultists with pitchforks?” He offered a thin, humourless smile. “More subtle. They deal in blood rites and back-alley bargains.” I sank onto the sofa, mind racing. “And you expect me to play bodyguard?” He crouched in front of me, blade-tip glinting. “I expect you to keep me alive until I can vanish again.” I bit back a curse. “You owe me more than that.” He studied my expression, amber eye flickering. “I know.” I stood, fists unclenching. “Name it.” He exhaled, shoulders heavy. “The ritual in Camden—” I pressed a finger to my lips. “No.” Memories flashed: candlelight flickering off Eva’s flat walls, scrawled warnings in Sanskrit. “That was brutal.” “It saved my life.” His gaze softened. “You saved my life.” I shook my head. “That doesn’t cancel the silence that followed.” His black eye glistened with something unreadable. He let the blade slide back into place. “I never stopped caring, Laila.” A tremor jogged through me. “You called me Laila once.” “Only when I was at my worst.” He stood, cane extended. “I came back at my worst again. I’m sorry.” Silence stretched, thick enough to choke. I searched his face. Found fragments of the man I once leaned on, and the stranger I only half knew. I whispered, “I’m tired.” He took a step closer. “So am I.” Something in his tone cut deeper than any blade. The bulb overhead flickered. We both looked up. Footsteps pounded on the stairs. Lucien’s hand snapped to his cane, thumb at the blade release. My pulse hammered so loud I could feel it in my throat. He slipped into a fighting stance. Cane poised. The footsteps stopped. A low, guttural voice hissed through the doorframe. I yanked at my jacket, baring my wrist. Ready. Lucien sprang to the door, sliding the bolt aside. I moved to block, but he held up one gloved hand. “Back.” I ducked behind him. His suit sleeve brushed my hair as he cracked the door a fraction. Horrid shapes pressed in the stairwell light. Dark silhouettes with glassy eyes and wicked limbs. One stepped forward into the flat, claws scraping the threshold. Lucien’s amber eye narrowed. He whispered, “Stay close.” The creature lunged. Metal flashed. I threw myself to the side as his blade sliced through shadow. Books erupted from the trunk. A muffled scream tore from my throat. He ducked another strike, cane thudding against wood. His next thrust parted darkness. My breath tore in ragged bursts. Chaos roared around us. I scrambled upright. Lucien backed toward the sofa, fending off more creatures. I seized a ceramic mug, heart pounding like a war drum. The mug shattered on the nearest wall. Glass scattered underfoot. He swung the cane, carving a path. His eyes met mine, fierce. I nodded, understanding. Together, we charged back toward the door. The creatures hissed. We tumbled into the corridor. Fists and claws flailed in the dim light. I slammed the door shut. Lucien hammered the lock. Panting, he faced me. Blade retracted, cane upright. I stared at him, breathless. “We fight together?” He leaned close, voice husky. “Together.” I swallowed the tremor. He raised his cane. “Ready?” I nodded, gripping a broken curtain rod. He cracked a smile so slight it almost felt familiar. Footsteps thundered outside. Lucien’s amber eye gleamed, black eye dark with resolve. I tightened my grip. He whispered, “Hold on, Laila.” The door buckled under fresh blows. Splintered wood fell. He steadied himself. I braced my shoulder. And then, darkness began to pour under the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.491
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1219
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1219
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"dancing"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count2
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count3
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"charged"
count1
17
word"thundered"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"velvet"
2"familiar"
3"dancing"
4"sanctuary"
5"perfect"
6"silence"
7"racing"
8"glinting"
9"unreadable"
10"flickered"
11"footsteps"
12"pulse"
13"could feel"
14"pounding"
15"shattered"
16"charged"
17"thundered"
18"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences134
matches
0"k with resolve"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences134
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences177
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1214
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount949
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Silas1
Eva1
Sanskrit1
Silence2
Lucien9
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Silence"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Sanskrit"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like crushed mint and leather"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1214
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences177
matches
0"brushing that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs103
mean11.79
std10.61
cv0.9
sampleLengths
021
155
212
339
410
510
642
716
853
97
1030
1116
1225
1312
1456
158
167
1739
1811
1910
2016
2118
2224
2313
249
2510
2611
274
287
299
3020
317
3216
3314
3420
3511
369
376
388
3923
4011
4111
4220
4310
4420
456
4620
474
488
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences177
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount953
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.024134312696747113
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0031479538300104933
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences177
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences177
mean6.86
std4.54
cv0.661
sampleLengths
010
111
217
315
412
52
69
74
88
910
1010
114
1215
1310
144
156
1619
178
184
1911
2013
213
227
2315
2412
2519
262
275
285
2922
303
319
327
3311
348
356
365
377
3834
3919
403
414
424
435
442
4510
4616
473
4810
493
47.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3107344632768362
totalSentences177
uniqueOpeners55
26.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"Then he stepped forward, purposeful,"
ratio0.008
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount77
totalSentences124
matches
0"I froze on the threshold"
1"His heterochromatic gaze flicked from"
2"His voice slid across the"
3"My single word sounded brittle,"
4"I forced the jacket into"
5"His gaze lingered there."
6"My tone landed flat, more"
7"His amber eye glimmered."
8"I closed the door behind"
9"He watched, unperturbed, ivory-handled cane"
10"His black eye narrowed."
11"I kicked off my boots,"
12"He paused by the battered"
13"He pivoted, cane held upright."
14"He unclipped the blade from"
15"My heart jolted at the"
16"He closed the distance in"
17"He tilted his head, amber"
18"he said, voice gentler now,"
19"I crossed my arms."
ratio0.621
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences124
matches
0"The door swung inward before"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the gap,"
2"I froze on the threshold"
3"His heterochromatic gaze flicked from"
4"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
5"The corridor light overhead hummed,"
6"His voice slid across the"
7"My single word sounded brittle,"
8"I forced the jacket into"
9"His gaze lingered there."
10"My tone landed flat, more"
11"His amber eye glimmered."
12"I closed the door behind"
13"He watched, unperturbed, ivory-handled cane"
14"His black eye narrowed."
15"I kicked off my boots,"
16"An inexplicable twist knotted in"
17"Lucien brushed past me without"
18"He paused by the battered"
19"The faint scent of curry"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"I kicked off, wary"
1"He unclipped, steel flashing"
2"he said, voice gentler now,"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"I whispered (whisper)"
1"He whispered (whisper)"
2"He whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.175
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.105
79.1913%