Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0FS7DCBT2D11PHX1DR27T

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Duration:
42.7s
Cost:
$0.030705

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's boots struck stone that hummed beneath her feet. The sound rang differently here—not the hollow echo of earthly caverns, but something that seemed to vibrate through her bones. She paused at the threshold, one hand pressed against the ancient oak that marked the boundary, the other clutching the Heartstone pendant at her throat. "The Grove accepts you." Isolde's voice drifted from behind, already sounding distant though she stood mere steps away. "Step through, Aurora Carter. Time moves as it wills here." The air shimmered like heat waves, but cold pressed against Aurora's skin as she crossed into the Fae Grove. Her second step landed on grass that glowed with its own inner light, each blade pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—petals that shifted from deep purple to silver as her gaze moved across them. "Bloody hell," she whispered, then immediately regretted the words. They seemed to hang in the air longer than they should, as if the Grove itself were tasting them. Nyx materialized beside her, their shadow-form more solid here than she'd ever seen it. The violet glow of their eyes had intensified, casting faint light on the nearest flowers. "The barriers are thin." Their whisper-voice carried notes she'd never heard before—almost musical. "I can feel the spaces between more clearly." Aurora took another step forward. The grass beneath her feet released a scent like honey and starlight, if starlight had a smell. She reached out to touch a nearby flower, and it leaned into her palm like a cat seeking affection. The petals felt like velvet that had been kissed by moonlight. "It's alive," she said. "Really alive, not just growing." "All things live here differently." Isolde glided past them, her silver hair flowing as if underwater. Her feet left no impression in the luminescent grass. "The Grove remembers when all places were thus." They moved deeper into the clearing, following a path that revealed itself one step at a time. Ancient oak trees surrounded them, their trunks wider than Aurora could have wrapped her arms around. But these weren't the oaks of Richmond Park. These trees breathed. She could see their massive chests rise and fall in slow, deliberate rhythms. Faces seemed to peer from the bark—not carved, but emerging and retreating like expressions in dreams. A sound drifted through the air, somewhere between wind chimes and distant singing. Aurora looked up to see what appeared to be fireflies, but as her eyes focused, she realized they were tiny winged figures no larger than her thumb. They darted between the branches in complex patterns, their movements too purposeful to be random. "Sprites," Isolde said without being asked. "They carry messages between the trees." One of the sprites approached Aurora, hovering just beyond her reach. Its wings were translucent, shot through with veins of gold. It studied her with eyes like chips of sapphire, then chittered something in a language that sounded like tinkling bells. "What did it say?" "That you taste of iron and determination." Isolde's lips curved in what might have been a smile. "It finds this combination curious in one so young." Aurora watched the sprite dart away to rejoin its companions. The pendant at her throat pulsed warmer, and she noticed something odd—the crimson stone was picking up colours from the Grove, reflecting purple and gold and silver in its depths. They reached what seemed to be the heart of the clearing, where a pool of water reflected stars that weren't visible in the amber sky above. The water's surface was perfectly still, yet Aurora could see movement beneath—not fish, but lights that swam in spirals and figure-eights. Nyx knelt beside the pool, their shadow-hand hovering just above the surface. Where their essence nearly touched the water, ripples spread outward, but in reverse—starting large and shrinking to nothing. "Time flows backward here, in places." They looked up at Aurora, wonder evident even in their featureless face. "I can see echoes of what will be." Aurora approached the pool cautiously. Her reflection stared back at her, but wrong—her image looked older, with streaks of silver in her black hair and a scar across her cheek that she didn't yet possess. As she watched, the reflection aged and grew younger in stuttering increments. "Don't look too long," Isolde warned. "The pool shows many possible paths. Some viewers lose themselves choosing which to follow." A flutter of movement caught Aurora's attention. She turned to see a butterfly the size of a dinner plate floating toward them. Its wings were transparent as glass, but filled with what looked like swirling galaxies. Stars and nebulae spun slowly within the wing membranes, creating patterns too beautiful and complex for mortal eyes to fully process. "The Grove's guardian," Isolde whispered. "It comes to judge your intentions." The butterfly alighted on Aurora's outstretched hand. Despite its size, it weighed nothing. The sensation was like holding captured moonlight. Where it touched her, warmth spread up her arm—not the heat of summer, but something deeper. Comfort. Welcome. The creature's antennae twitched, and suddenly Aurora could hear the Grove's song—not through her ears, but directly into her mind. It was the sound of growing things, of seasons turning, of ancient magic that had never forgotten how to dream. The melody wrapped around her thoughts, showing her glimpses of the Grove's history: the first Fae who had found this place, the rituals that had anchored it between worlds, the countless pilgrims who had sought wisdom here across centuries. The butterfly lifted from her hand and circled the group once before disappearing between the trees. As it vanished, the Grove seemed to exhale, and Aurora felt a fundamental shift in the air around them. "You have been accepted," Isolde said. "The Grove will remember you now. You may return when the need is great." Aurora looked around at the impossible beauty surrounding them—the breathing trees, the singing sprites, the flowers that bloomed in colours that had no names. The pendant at her throat pulsed steadily now, synchronizing with the Grove's own rhythm. "How do we get back?" she asked, though part of her wasn't sure she wanted to leave. "The same way you entered. But remember—minutes here may be hours there. Or seconds. The Grove keeps its own counsel regarding time." Nyx moved to her side, their form flickering between solid and shadow. "I understand now why you brought us here. This place... it's a crossroads, isn't it? Not just between realms, but between possibilities." Isolde nodded. "The Grove stands where all paths converge. What you have seen here will aid you in the trials ahead." Her pale lavender eyes fixed on Aurora. "The pendant you wear... it resonates with this place because it too exists between worlds. As do you, child of two realms." Aurora's hand moved instinctively to the Heartstone, feeling its warm pulse against her palm. Around them, the Grove hummed its ancient song, and she knew that whatever came next, she would carry this moment of wonder with her—a reminder that magic still breathed in the world, patient and wild and beautiful beyond imagining.
total_cost0.030705

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1204
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"perfectly"
2"cautiously"
3"slowly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1204
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"affection"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"complex"
count2
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"depths"
count1
8
word"echoes"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"shimmered"
2"whisper"
3"affection"
4"velvet"
5"complex"
6"pulsed"
7"depths"
8"echoes"
9"warmth"
10"pulse"
11"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1187
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount963
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Aurora17
Fae2
Grove8
Isolde8
Richmond1
Park1
One1
Nyx3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Grove"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Fae"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.617
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"something that seemed to vibrate through her bones"
1"felt like velvet that had been kissed b"
2"sounded like tinkling bells"
3"looked like swirling galaxies"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords5.055
wordCount1187
matches
0"not the hollow echo of earthly caverns, but something"
1"not carved, but emerging"
2"not fish, but lights"
3"not the heat of summer, but something deeper"
4"not through her ears, but directly into her mind"
5"Not just between realms, but between possibilities"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"knew that whatever"
99.07% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean35.97
std17.87
cv0.497
sampleLengths
054
128
258
328
429
521
652
79
833
973
1055
1112
1241
134
1426
1540
1647
1730
1826
1947
2020
2157
2211
2338
2479
2535
2620
2738
2817
2922
3034
3150
3253
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"been kissed"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"were tasting"
1"was picking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences83
ratio0.145
matches
0"The sound rang differently here—not the hollow echo of earthly caverns, but something that seemed to vibrate through her bones."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—petals that shifted from deep purple to silver as her gaze moved across them."
2"\"The barriers are thin.\" Their whisper-voice carried notes she'd never heard before—almost musical."
3"Faces seemed to peer from the bark—not carved, but emerging and retreating like expressions in dreams."
4"The pendant at her throat pulsed warmer, and she noticed something odd—the crimson stone was picking up colours from the Grove, reflecting purple and gold and silver in its depths."
5"The water's surface was perfectly still, yet Aurora could see movement beneath—not fish, but lights that swam in spirals and figure-eights."
6"Where their essence nearly touched the water, ripples spread outward, but in reverse—starting large and shrinking to nothing."
7"Her reflection stared back at her, but wrong—her image looked older, with streaks of silver in her black hair and a scar across her cheek that she didn't yet possess."
8"Where it touched her, warmth spread up her arm—not the heat of summer, but something deeper."
9"The creature's antennae twitched, and suddenly Aurora could hear the Grove's song—not through her ears, but directly into her mind."
10"Aurora looked around at the impossible beauty surrounding them—the breathing trees, the singing sprites, the flowers that bloomed in colours that had no names."
11"Around them, the Grove hummed its ancient song, and she knew that whatever came next, she would carry this moment of wonder with her—a reminder that magic still breathed in the world, patient and wild and beautiful beyond imagining."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount979
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cold pressed against Aurora's"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03472931562819203
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.015321756894790603
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean14.3
std7.86
cv0.549
sampleLengths
09
120
225
318
410
519
621
718
89
919
1014
1115
1213
138
145
1517
1619
1711
184
195
2016
219
228
2317
2416
258
263
2713
2816
2913
3027
3115
326
336
3411
3510
3620
374
3817
399
4010
4130
4226
4321
4412
4518
4618
478
485
4930
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.42168674698795183
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences62
matches
0"She paused at the threshold,"
1"Her second step landed on"
2"she whispered, then immediately regretted"
3"They seemed to hang in"
4"Their whisper-voice carried notes she'd"
5"She reached out to touch"
6"Her feet left no impression"
7"They moved deeper into the"
8"She could see their massive"
9"They darted between the branches"
10"Its wings were translucent, shot"
11"It studied her with eyes"
12"They reached what seemed to"
13"They looked up at Aurora,"
14"Her reflection stared back at"
15"She turned to see a"
16"Its wings were transparent as"
17"It was the sound of"
18"she asked, though part of"
19"Her pale lavender eyes fixed"
ratio0.323
32.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora's boots struck stone that"
1"The sound rang differently here—not"
2"She paused at the threshold,"
3"Isolde's voice drifted from behind,"
4"The air shimmered like heat"
5"Her second step landed on"
6"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—petals"
7"she whispered, then immediately regretted"
8"They seemed to hang in"
9"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
10"The violet glow of their"
11"Their whisper-voice carried notes she'd"
12"Aurora took another step forward."
13"The grass beneath her feet"
14"She reached out to touch"
15"The petals felt like velvet"
16"Isolde glided past them, her"
17"Her feet left no impression"
18"They moved deeper into the"
19"These trees breathed."
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The sound rang differently here—not the hollow echo of earthly caverns, but something that seemed to vibrate through her bones."
1"She paused at the threshold, one hand pressed against the ancient oak that marked the boundary, the other clutching the Heartstone pendant at her throat."
2"Her second step landed on grass that glowed with its own inner light, each blade pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat."
3"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—petals that shifted from deep purple to silver as her gaze moved across them."
4"It was the sound of growing things, of seasons turning, of ancient magic that had never forgotten how to dream."
5"The melody wrapped around her thoughts, showing her glimpses of the Grove's history: the first Fae who had found this place, the rituals that had anchored it be…"
6"Aurora looked around at the impossible beauty surrounding them—the breathing trees, the singing sprites, the flowers that bloomed in colours that had no names."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde glided, her silver hair flowing as if underwater"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde warned (warn)"
2"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.259
leniency0.519
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.222
67.1070%