| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 934 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 934 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "profound" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "stark" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "tapestry" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "enigmatic" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "gloom" | | 15 | "crystal" | | 16 | "chaotic" | | 17 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.79% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 932 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 833 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 4 | | Rory | 5 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Half-Fae" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to drink the faint light of the moss" | | 1 | "radiance that seemed to emanate from the very air" | | 2 | "power that seemed to resonate with the grove’s own energy" |
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| 92.70% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.073 | | wordCount | 932 | | matches | | 0 | "not a path but a suggestion, a winding route between trees" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 44.38 | | std | 22.48 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 111 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 69 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 28 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "No sun pierced the branches; the light came from the flora itself, from the moss, and from a soft, pearlescent radiance that seemed to emanate from the very air." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 835 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.023952095808383235 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005988023952095809 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 14.56 | | std | 6.55 | | cv | 0.45 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 63.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.40625 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.17% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silver hair, unbound, stirred" | | 1 | "She raised a hand, her" | | 2 | "she whispered, her voice like" | | 3 | "It wasn't the urgent, warning" | | 4 | "She rested a hand on" | | 5 | "They stopped beside Isolde, their" | | 6 | "She stepped through the distortion" | | 7 | "She stumbled out the other" | | 8 | "She touched one." | | 9 | "It was cool and smooth," | | 10 | "They looked less like a" | | 11 | "they murmured, reaching out a" | | 12 | "She noticed the ground where" | | 13 | "She gestured for them to" | | 14 | "It was a faint, silvery" | | 15 | "It responded to the ambient" | | 16 | "She drew it an inch" | | 17 | "They came to a small" | | 18 | "Its trunk was a pale," | | 19 | "She did not look at" |
| | ratio | 0.362 | |
| 20.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass gave way to" | | 1 | "London’s distant hum faded, replaced" | | 2 | "Isolde stopped before the largest" | | 3 | "Her silver hair, unbound, stirred" | | 4 | "She raised a hand, her" | | 5 | "she whispered, her voice like" | | 6 | "Aurora Carter felt a familiar" | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant, usually dormant," | | 8 | "It wasn't the urgent, warning" | | 9 | "She rested a hand on" | | 10 | "The moonsilver was cold, a" | | 11 | "Nyx flowed forward, their form" | | 12 | "They stopped beside Isolde, their" | | 13 | "Nyx’s voice was a whisper" | | 14 | "Isolde placed her palm flat" | | 15 | "The light within the moss" | | 16 | "The scent of ozone and" | | 17 | "She stepped through the distortion" | | 18 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 19 | "The sensation was like plunging" |
| | ratio | 0.879 | |
| 86.21% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stood a circle" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 65.64% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Between the trunks, massive standing stones marked a boundary, covered in moss that glowed with a faint, phosphorescent green." | | 1 | "The sensation was like plunging into cold water, a brief, disorienting pressure that squeezed the air from her lungs and then released it." | | 2 | "Rory heard no birdsong, no insects, only the soft, pervasive chime from the flowers when they were disturbed and a low, melodic hum that vibrated up through the…" | | 3 | "Its trunk was a pale, opalescent white, and its branches were laden with crystal fruit that chimed with a different, clearer note than the ground flowers." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice echoing slightly in the unnatural silence" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |