Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0FSFAR6N1J3SE78AT7HBY

Run Details

Duration:
30.0s
Cost:
$0.007283
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The grass gave way to dirt, a path worn by feet that left no trace. London’s distant hum faded, replaced by a profound silence that pressed in on them. Before them stood a circle of ancient oaks, their branches gnarled and intertwined to form a dense canopy. Between the trunks, massive standing stones marked a boundary, covered in moss that glowed with a faint, phosphorescent green. Isolde stopped before the largest stone. Her silver hair, unbound, stirred in a breeze that was not there. She raised a hand, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the centre of the circle. “The threshold breathes,” she whispered, her voice like the rustle of dry leaves. “Step only if you wish to be seen by what lies between.” Aurora Carter felt a familiar warmth against her skin. The Heartstone pendant, usually dormant, pulsed with a gentle heat beneath her shirt. It wasn't the urgent, warning thrum she’d felt near other places, but a curious, steady thrum, like a second heartbeat. She rested a hand on the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her belt. The moonsilver was cold, a stark contrast to the pendant’s warmth. Nyx flowed forward, their form a solid column of shadow that seemed to drink the faint light of the moss. They stopped beside Isolde, their faintly glowing violet eyes scanning the stones. “The air here is… thin,” Nyx’s voice was a whisper on the edge of hearing. “Like a stretched cloth. Ready to tear.” Isolde placed her palm flat against the mossy stone. The light within the moss brightened, and the air in the centre of the circle shimmered, distorting like a heat haze. The scent of ozone and damp earth, a smell that had no business in a London park, washed over them. She stepped through the distortion without hesitation. Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, then followed. The sensation was like plunging into cold water, a brief, disorienting pressure that squeezed the air from her lungs and then released it. She stumbled out the other side, onto a carpet of wildflowers. The world exploded in colour. Flowers of impossible hue bloomed in profusion, petals like spun glass and velvet, clustered around the base of trees with bark like polished bone. Some glowed with a soft internal light, bathing the grove in shades of sapphire, emerald, and rose. The air was warm and thick with the cloying sweetness of nectar, a scent so potent it was almost a taste. Above, the canopy was a tapestry of leaves in shades of gold and crimson, though it was late autumn outside. No sun pierced the branches; the light came from the flora itself, from the moss, and from a soft, pearlescent radiance that seemed to emanate from the very air. Rory knelt, her fingers hovering over a flower with petals like liquid gold. She touched one. It was cool and smooth, like metal, yet it trembled at her touch, a soft chiming sound resonating from its core. Nyx solidified beside her, their humanoid form sharpening into focus. They looked less like a shadow here and more like a figure carved from the night sky, dusted with faint violet stars. “The Veil is gone here,” they murmured, reaching out a hand that passed through a glowing mushroom without disturbing it. “This place is not on Earth. It is not in the Fae realm. It is… the seam.” Rory stood, brushing dirt from her jeans. She noticed the ground where Isolde had walked. Nothing. Not a single footprint in the soft, loamy soil. The Half-Fae moved through this world as a ghost, a part of its strange fabric. “How do we know what time it is?” Rory asked, the unease beginning to prickle at the edges of her wonder. The quality of the light was constant, unchanging. Isolde turned, a faint, enigmatic smile on her ageless face. “Time is a river. Here, it is a still pool. You may dip your toes in, or you may drown. The choice is yours.” She gestured for them to follow, leading them deeper into the grove. The path was not a path but a suggestion, a winding route between trees that grew in spirals and rocks that balanced in impossible configurations. Rory heard no birdsong, no insects, only the soft, pervasive chime from the flowers when they were disturbed and a low, melodic hum that vibrated up through the soles of her boots. The Fae blade at her hip began to glow. It was a faint, silvery luminescence, different from the moonlight she was used to. It responded to the ambient magic of the place, a cold light in the warm, colourful gloom. She drew it an inch from its sheath. The blade felt alive, humming with a quiet power that seemed to resonate with the grove’s own energy. They came to a small clearing. In its centre stood a tree unlike any other. Its trunk was a pale, opalescent white, and its branches were laden with crystal fruit that chimed with a different, clearer note than the ground flowers. Beneath it, a pool of water reflected the grove’s chaotic light, yet the water itself was perfectly clear, still as glass. Isolde approached the pool’s edge and knelt. She did not look at them, but at her own reflection, which did not look like her. The face in the water was older, sharper, with eyes of pure, solid silver. “The heart of the grove remembers all who pass,” she said, her voice echoing slightly in the unnatural silence. “It offers truth, if you can pay the price.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount934
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount934
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"profound"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"tapestry"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"enigmatic"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"crystal"
count1
16
word"chaotic"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"profound"
1"silence"
2"familiar"
3"warmth"
4"pulsed"
5"stark"
6"scanning"
7"whisper"
8"shimmered"
9"velvet"
10"tapestry"
11"trembled"
12"enigmatic"
13"vibrated"
14"gloom"
15"crystal"
16"chaotic"
17"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
21.79% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords932
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount833
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Heartstone1
Fae-forged1
Isolde6
London2
Nyx4
Rory5
Half-Fae1
Fae3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Rory"
5"Half-Fae"
6"Fae"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
16.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"shadow that seemed to drink the faint light of the moss"
1"radiance that seemed to emanate from the very air"
2"power that seemed to resonate with the grove’s own energy"
92.70% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.073
wordCount932
matches
0"not a path but a suggestion, a winding route between trees"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean44.38
std22.48
cv0.506
sampleLengths
066
133
225
367
432
522
657
742
85
9111
1037
1132
1237
1340
1429
1534
1669
1766
1862
1938
2028
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"was used"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
98.21% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences64
ratio0.016
matches
0"No sun pierced the branches; the light came from the flora itself, from the moss, and from a soft, pearlescent radiance that seemed to emanate from the very air."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount835
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.023952095808383235
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005988023952095809
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean14.56
std6.55
cv0.45
sampleLengths
015
114
218
319
46
512
615
713
812
99
1013
1120
1214
1311
1420
1512
1615
177
189
1921
2020
217
228
2323
2411
255
2624
2717
2821
2920
3029
3113
323
3321
3410
3522
3620
3717
387
398
401
419
4215
4321
448
4510
4624
4712
4825
4932
63.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.40625
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences58
matches
0"Her silver hair, unbound, stirred"
1"She raised a hand, her"
2"she whispered, her voice like"
3"It wasn't the urgent, warning"
4"She rested a hand on"
5"They stopped beside Isolde, their"
6"She stepped through the distortion"
7"She stumbled out the other"
8"She touched one."
9"It was cool and smooth,"
10"They looked less like a"
11"they murmured, reaching out a"
12"She noticed the ground where"
13"She gestured for them to"
14"It was a faint, silvery"
15"It responded to the ambient"
16"She drew it an inch"
17"They came to a small"
18"Its trunk was a pale,"
19"She did not look at"
ratio0.362
20.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences58
matches
0"The grass gave way to"
1"London’s distant hum faded, replaced"
2"Isolde stopped before the largest"
3"Her silver hair, unbound, stirred"
4"She raised a hand, her"
5"she whispered, her voice like"
6"Aurora Carter felt a familiar"
7"The Heartstone pendant, usually dormant,"
8"It wasn't the urgent, warning"
9"She rested a hand on"
10"The moonsilver was cold, a"
11"Nyx flowed forward, their form"
12"They stopped beside Isolde, their"
13"Nyx’s voice was a whisper"
14"Isolde placed her palm flat"
15"The light within the moss"
16"The scent of ozone and"
17"She stepped through the distortion"
18"Rory exchanged a glance with"
19"The sensation was like plunging"
ratio0.879
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Before them stood a circle"
ratio0.017
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Between the trunks, massive standing stones marked a boundary, covered in moss that glowed with a faint, phosphorescent green."
1"The sensation was like plunging into cold water, a brief, disorienting pressure that squeezed the air from her lungs and then released it."
2"Rory heard no birdsong, no insects, only the soft, pervasive chime from the flowers when they were disturbed and a low, melodic hum that vibrated up through the…"
3"Its trunk was a pale, opalescent white, and its branches were laden with crystal fruit that chimed with a different, clearer note than the ground flowers."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice echoing slightly in the unnatural silence"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
74.0807%