| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 74.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 975 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 975 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "almost alive" | | 6 | "furrowed" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "quivered" | | 11 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 959 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 750 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 9 | | Marcus | 1 | | Leyton | 7 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 3 | | Compass | 1 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Marcus" | | 4 | "Leyton" | | 5 | "Compass" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.9 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.72% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.043 | | wordCount | 959 | | matches | | 0 | "not pointing to the tunnel or the body anymore, but just slightly off" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 29.97 | | std | 17.04 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 56 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 10 |
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| 81.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "was barricaded" | | 1 | "been caught" | | 2 | "been pushed" | | 3 | "was muffled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 132 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.135 | | matches | | 0 | "Evidence markers dotted the damp ground—some dark smear that could be blood, others just sludge." | | 1 | "No visible wounds, no blood, but a strange, faint glow clung to him—like he’d been caught in something supernatural, some residual flicker of energy." | | 2 | "She looked at the body, then out into the shadows of the tunnel, where faint markings—scratches or symbols—etched into the damp wall caught her eye." | | 3 | "She brushed her fingertips over them, feeling the rough texture, noticing the slight warmth—they felt alive, humming beneath her skin." | | 4 | "She remembered the Veil Market—an underground nexus, an eerie bazaar under Camden where enchanted artifacts and forbidden lore traded hands for the right price." | | 5 | "She’d seen their ilk—arcane warnings, perhaps, or a message meant for someone who knew how to interpret them." | | 6 | "She knew the Market’s stories; ottices, shady mentions of bone tokens and enchanted goods." | | 7 | "The man’s face was serene, almost peaceful—except for the faint golden glow that flickered like dying embers across his skin." | | 8 | "Someone was watching—their presence just beyond what the eye could see, waiting to see if she’d slip up." | | 9 | "The needle shimmered, not pointing to the tunnel or the body anymore, but just slightly off—toward the deepest part of her own intuition." |
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| 85.62% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 762 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.05643044619422572 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01968503937007874 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 12.96 | | std | 7.48 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 57.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3918918918918919 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Maybe, just maybe, this wasn’t" | | 1 | "Too late, she sensed." |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 61.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair" | | 1 | "Her worn leather watch caught" | | 2 | "She moved with deliberate purpose," | | 3 | "he grinned without humor, hands" | | 4 | "She moved closer, humming softly" | | 5 | "She straightened abruptly." | | 6 | "She looked at the body," | | 7 | "She squatted again, eyes narrowing" | | 8 | "They weren’t regular graffiti." | | 9 | "She brushed her fingertips over" | | 10 | "Her eyes drifted to the" | | 11 | "She remembered the Veil Market—an" | | 12 | "She’d heard the rumours about" | | 13 | "She pulled her leather satchel" | | 14 | "She flipped it open now," | | 15 | "She closed the compass with" | | 16 | "She’d seen their ilk—arcane warnings," | | 17 | "She knew the Market’s stories;" | | 18 | "She stood, brushing dirt from" | | 19 | "She knelt again, inspecting the" |
| | ratio | 0.397 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The fog curled thick around" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out" | | 2 | "Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair" | | 3 | "The entrance was barricaded with" | | 4 | "Evidence markers dotted the damp" | | 5 | "Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened as" | | 6 | "Her worn leather watch caught" | | 7 | "The station was silent save" | | 8 | "She moved with deliberate purpose," | | 9 | "A figure waited there, arms" | | 10 | "Detective Marcus Leyton, his face" | | 11 | "he grinned without humor, hands" | | 12 | "Quinn replied, eyes narrowing" | | 13 | "Leyton hesitated, then gestured towards" | | 14 | "Quinn crouched, her gaze flickering" | | 15 | "The man’s clothes were soaked," | | 16 | "She moved closer, humming softly" | | 17 | "Quinn’s gaze drifted over the" | | 18 | "The body was near the" | | 19 | "The fare's glow pulsed faintly," |
| | ratio | 0.931 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She flipped it open now, watching the face etched with protective sigils, its needle flickering toward some unseen rift." | | 1 | "She’d seen their ilk—arcane warnings, perhaps, or a message meant for someone who knew how to interpret them." | | 2 | "The man’s face was serene, almost peaceful—except for the faint golden glow that flickered like dying embers across his skin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he grinned, hands tucked in his coat pockets" | | 1 | "Quinn replied, eyes narrowing" |
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| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |