| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1328 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1328 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "wavering" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "predator" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "marble" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "framework" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "quivered" | | 15 | "crystal" | | 16 | "pounding" | | 17 | "flicker" | | 18 | "echoing" | | 19 | "wavered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 168 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1312 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1231 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.62 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 2 | | Aurora | 20 | | Moonlight | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Bark | 1 | | Powdered | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Tiny | 1 | | Brighton | 1 | | Isolde | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Moonlight" | | 3 | "Bark" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Tiny" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.688 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if remembering its purpose" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1312 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.76% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 30.51 | | std | 12.35 | | cv | 0.405 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 256 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 168 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the standing stones of basalt formed a jagged arch, their tops dissolving into faint distortion—The Veil itself, wavering in the amber dusk." | | 1 | "They stepped beneath the pavilion’s roof—an open framework of bones interlaced with silver filigree." | | 2 | "Tiny faces flickered beneath the surface—silent mouths shaped into pleas or laughter." | | 3 | "From beyond the pavilion came rolling thunder—a drumbeat syncopated with voices." | | 4 | "The path narrowed between walls of living crystal—hexagonal pillars that hummed against each other like tuning forks." | | 5 | "A flash of memory—Aurora standing on a Brighton pier, laughter behind her—flickered in her vision." | | 6 | "Bubbles surfaced on the nearest orange; it split open, letting a clear fluid leak." | | 7 | "Each orb contained a flicker of memory—a joyous feast, a scream, a lover’s kiss." | | 8 | "She slashed again—same result." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1247 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.022453889334402566 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0024057738572574178 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 168 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 168 | | mean | 7.81 | | std | 4.29 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 61.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.38095238095238093 | | totalSentences | 168 | | uniqueOpeners | 64 | |
| 45.98% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the spores halted their" | | 1 | "Light bent through them." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 93.10% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "She tasted iron on her" | | 1 | "They paused midstride, shoulders shifting" | | 2 | "She whispered a string of" | | 3 | "She pocketed the pendant" | | 4 | "She stepped forward, toes sliding" | | 5 | "They reached out a hand." | | 6 | "They drew back, silhouette flickering." | | 7 | "She traced a chalice with" | | 8 | "She drew the blade free," | | 9 | "Their voice drifted like a" | | 10 | "She sheathed the blade and" | | 11 | "She stooped and pocketed a" | | 12 | "They leaned inward, carved with" | | 13 | "She stepped into reach, but" | | 14 | "She turned to the arch" | | 15 | "They skirted the orchard’s edge," | | 16 | "They stepped beneath the pavilion’s" | | 17 | "She grimaced, her breath hissing" | | 18 | "Their form shimmered." | | 19 | "They tapped the glass" |
| | ratio | 0.317 | |
| 22.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 127 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora crouched at the threshold," | | 1 | "The silver chain coiled around" | | 2 | "She tasted iron on her" | | 3 | "Nyx slipped through the arch" | | 4 | "They paused midstride, shoulders shifting" | | 5 | "This realm stank of ripeness" | | 6 | "Isolde hovered at Aurora’s shoulder," | | 7 | "She whispered a string of" | | 8 | "She pocketed the pendant" | | 9 | "Moonlight glimmered on the Fae-forged" | | 10 | "She stepped forward, toes sliding" | | 11 | "Orbs the size of skulls" | | 12 | "A slow wind rattled branches," | | 13 | "Aurora inhaled, lungs tightening with" | | 14 | "Nyx hovered near a fruit." | | 15 | "They reached out a hand." | | 16 | "Darkness pooled along their fingers" | | 17 | "The fungus under their touch" | | 18 | "They drew back, silhouette flickering." | | 19 | "Isolde moved among the trunks," |
| | ratio | 0.876 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 97.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the standing stones of basalt formed a jagged arch, their tops dissolving into faint distortion—The Veil itself, wavering in the amber dusk." | | 1 | "One split open on the stone, oozing seed-slime that hissed against the tile." | | 2 | "The path narrowed between walls of living crystal—hexagonal pillars that hummed against each other like tuning forks." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |