Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0G4XAEH99K39E0YHV9HHC

Run Details

Duration:
11.8s
Cost:
$0.031470
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, Nyx, and Isolde Varga stood before the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove in Richmond Park. Despite the calm of the city park behind them, Aurora felt a shiver of anticipation as the stones seemed to hum with an ancient power. "It's beautiful and foreboding, like walking into a dream," Aurora remarked, her bright blue eyes dancing over the wildflowers blooming in a tapestry of colors, undeterred by the season. "Dreams and nightmares, both," came Nyx's voice, a whisper threaded through the wind, their form shifting subtly as shadows played around the stones. Isolde stepped lightly over the threshold, her silver hair cascading around her like a shroud. "Time flows differently here. We must be cautious." Aurora touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a grounding habit she had developed since childhood. She took a steadying breath and stepped into the grove. The ground felt springy beneath her feet, and she could sense the vibrancy of life all around her. Nyx's eyes glowed faintly, their violet hue casting an ethereal light as the shade solidified. "The boundary's magic is potent. Be vigilant." The trio moved forward, surrounded by flora that seemed to pulse with their own inner light. Aurora's heartstone pendant glowed faintly, responding to the ambient magic. She brushed a wildflower, its petals soft and cool, leaving a trace of luminous pollen on her fingers. Isolde's voice carried a melodic lilt as she murmured, "The grove is not unwelcoming, merely cautious of unfamiliar feet." Aurora nodded, her gaze sweeping over the ancient trees that towered above them, their branches twisted into intricate patterns that seemed almost deliberate. "It's like the forest is watching us." "It is," Isolde confirmed, her pale lavender eyes meeting Aurora's briefly. "The Fae Grove is alive, attuned to every movement." They walked deeper, the air growing cooler and more fragrant. Strange bird calls echoed in the distance, their melodies unlike anything Aurora had ever heard. She couldn't help but feel a sense of childlike wonder, tempered by the eerie beauty of the place. Nyx paused beside a pool of water, its surface mirror-like and still. "Something resides beneath," they murmured, their form blending with the surrounding shadows. Aurora knelt beside the pool, her reflection dark and wavering. A fish with scales like silver coins darted just below the surface. "Incredible," she whispered, mesmerized by the otherworldly sight. Isolde's gaze was distant, her mind seemingly apart from her body. "Visions cling to the water. It remembers." Aurora’s curiosity sparked. She dipped a finger into the pool, the water surprisingly warm. Ripples spread out, distorting her reflection into something unrecognizable, showing fleeting images of faces and places she couldn't place. A feeling of unease crept up her spine. "It's like looking into forgotten dreams." Nyx's voice was barely audible. "Or the memories of the grove itself." They continued on, the light filtering through the trees becoming softer, diffused by the thick canopy. Aurora felt an odd sensation, as if time itself were shifting around them. The rhythm of their footsteps seemed out of sync with their surroundings. Ahead, a clearing opened up, revealing a circle of standing stones similar to the ones at the grove’s entrance but more ancient, covered in intricate carvings that glowed faintly in the dim light. In the center stood an altar made of polished stone. Aurora's breath caught. "What is this place?" Isolde's voice held a touch of reverence. "A place of power. An ancient nexus between realms." Nyx approached the altar, their silhouette dark against the glowing carvings. "It feels like the very air is charged with magic." Aurora felt the pendant around her neck grow warmer, pulsing slightly. She touched it, the gemstone’s inner glow brightening. "The heartstone pendant... it’s reacting to something." Isolde's expression remained impassive, though her eyes showed a flicker of interest. "It senses the proximity of a rift point. The pendant is a key of sorts." Aurora moved closer to the altar, her eyes tracing the carvings. Words in an old language wove through the stones like a song. She could feel the energy thrumming beneath her skin. "Do you think this could open a portal?" Nyx's form shifted slightly, tendrils of shadow curling around the altar. "If it does, tread carefully. Portals can be unpredictable." Isolde stepped forward, her voice soft but clear. "Aurora, place the pendant on the altar." Hesitation flickered across Aurora’s face for a moment. The air seemed to hold its breath as she reached up and unclasped the pendant. She placed it on the polished stone surface. Instantly, the carvings flared brighter, and the air around them shimmered. Aurora's heart raced, the sensation both thrilling and terrifying. Light swirled around the pendant, forming an intricate web of luminescence. It felt as if the grove itself was coming alive, a heartbeat pulsing through the air. The light grew more intense. A low hum resonated, echoing in Aurora's bones. She glanced at Nyx and Isolde, seeing her own awe reflected in their eyes. Suddenly, the light converged at the center of the altar, forming a swirling vortex. Aurora felt a pull, an irresistible urge to step closer. "Is this... a portal?" Isolde nodded, her expression unreadable. "A doorway to another part of the realm, perhaps even another world." Nyx's eyes glowed with an intense violet light. "The veil between worlds. We stand on the threshold." Aurora felt a mix of fear and exhilaration. Thoughts of her past life, her escape from Evan, seemed distant and insignificant compared to the vast unknown in front of her. "Should we... go through?" Isolde's lavender eyes met hers, filled with an ancient wisdom. "Only if you are ready to face whatever lies beyond." Aurora took a deep breath, the pulse of the heartstone echoing in her chest. "I've run from enough shadows. It's time to face the unknown." With that, she stepped forward, the vortex's light wrapping around her. Nyx and Isolde followed, their forms blending into the luminescent swirl as they crossed the threshold into the otherworldly realm. The moment they passed through, the world around them shifted. The lush greenery of the grove was replaced by a landscape that defied logic. The ground beneath their feet felt like smooth glass, and towering structures of crystalline light rose around them, shimmering with a spectrum of colors. Aurora's senses tingled with wonder and unease as she took in the alien beauty of this new realm. "This place... it’s like nothing I’ve ever seen." Nyx’s voice echoed softly, "A crossroads of existence. Between realms, time, and reality." Isolde's voice carried a note of caution. "Beware, for not all that glitters is safe." They moved forward, their path illuminated by the glowing crystals. Aurora felt a sense of purpose, a feeling that this journey—which had begun with a step into the unknown—was only just beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx’s voice echoed softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.467
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.067
69.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1148
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
4"suddenly"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1148
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"anticipation"
count1
1
word"foreboding"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"tapestry"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"cascading"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"lilt"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count3
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"sense of"
count2
11
word"wavering"
count1
12
word"otherworldly"
count2
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"footsteps"
count1
15
word"charged"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"tracing"
count1
18
word"could feel"
count1
19
word"flickered"
count1
20
word"shimmered"
count1
21
word"raced"
count1
22
word"resonated"
count1
23
word"echoing"
count2
24
word"unreadable"
count1
25
word"crystalline"
count1
highlights
0"anticipation"
1"foreboding"
2"dancing"
3"tapestry"
4"whisper"
5"cascading"
6"pulse"
7"lilt"
8"intricate"
9"echoed"
10"sense of"
11"wavering"
12"otherworldly"
13"fleeting"
14"footsteps"
15"charged"
16"flicker"
17"tracing"
18"could feel"
19"flickered"
20"shimmered"
21"raced"
22"resonated"
23"echoing"
24"unreadable"
25"crystalline"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"couldn't help but feel"
90.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences73
matches
0"felt a shiver"
1"A feeling of unease"
2"d with wonder"
64.58% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1145
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
30.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount921
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.39
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Nyx11
Isolde13
Varga1
Fae1
Grove1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora22
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Varga"
4"Aurora"
5"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.306
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"flora that seemed to pulse with their own inner light"
1"seemed almost deliberate"
2"tant, her mind seemingly apart from her body"
3"seemed distant and insignificant compared to the vast unknown in front of her"
4"felt like smooth glass, and towering st"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1145
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"feeling that this"
69.95% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean27.26
std10.76
cv0.395
sampleLengths
049
129
223
323
445
522
644
719
830
920
1043
1124
1230
1318
1433
1514
1612
1741
1843
197
2016
2121
2226
2327
2440
2520
2615
2742
2836
2927
3028
3117
3217
3334
3420
3525
3631
3748
3826
3913
4015
4132
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"was replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs149
matches
0"were shifting"
1"was coming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences96
ratio0.01
matches
0"Aurora felt a sense of purpose, a feeling that this journey—which had begun with a step into the unknown—was only just beginning."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount924
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.032467532467532464
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.0183982683982684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.93
std5.7
cv0.478
sampleLengths
024
125
229
323
415
58
617
710
818
915
107
1116
1210
1318
1419
1523
167
1711
189
1910
2015
2118
2212
2312
2410
2512
268
2711
287
293
3011
3119
328
336
345
357
3616
3713
3812
3933
4010
413
424
437
449
4511
4610
4711
488
497
56.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3645833333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners35
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instantly, the carvings flared brighter,"
1"Suddenly, the light converged at"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences73
matches
0"She took a steadying breath"
1"She brushed a wildflower, its"
2"They walked deeper, the air"
3"She couldn't help but feel"
4"they murmured, their form blending"
5"she whispered, mesmerized by the"
6"She dipped a finger into"
7"They continued on, the light"
8"She touched it, the gemstone’s"
9"She could feel the energy"
10"She placed it on the"
11"It felt as if the"
12"She glanced at Nyx and"
13"They moved forward, their path"
ratio0.192
14.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences73
matches
0"Aurora Carter, Nyx, and Isolde"
1"Aurora remarked, her bright blue"
2"Isolde stepped lightly over the"
3"Aurora touched the small crescent-shaped"
4"She took a steadying breath"
5"The ground felt springy beneath"
6"Nyx's eyes glowed faintly, their"
7"The trio moved forward, surrounded"
8"Aurora's heartstone pendant glowed faintly,"
9"She brushed a wildflower, its"
10"Isolde's voice carried a melodic"
11"Aurora nodded, her gaze sweeping"
12"Isolde confirmed, her pale lavender"
13"They walked deeper, the air"
14"She couldn't help but feel"
15"Nyx paused beside a pool"
16"they murmured, their form blending"
17"Aurora knelt beside the pool,"
18"A fish with scales like"
19"she whispered, mesmerized by the"
ratio0.89
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora Carter, Nyx, and Isolde Varga stood before the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove in Richmond Park."
1"Aurora nodded, her gaze sweeping over the ancient trees that towered above them, their branches twisted into intricate patterns that seemed almost deliberate."
2"Ahead, a clearing opened up, revealing a circle of standing stones similar to the ones at the grove’s entrance but more ancient, covered in intricate carvings t…"
3"It felt as if the grove itself was coming alive, a heartbeat pulsing through the air."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"a whisper threaded, their form shifting subtly as shadows played around the stones"
1"they murmured, their form blending with the surrounding shadows"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde's voice carried (carry)"
1"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.267
72.7764%