| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s voice echoed softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.233 | | leniency | 0.467 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 69.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1148 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1148 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "anticipation" | | 1 | "foreboding" | | 2 | "dancing" | | 3 | "tapestry" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "cascading" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "lilt" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "wavering" | | 12 | "otherworldly" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "footsteps" | | 15 | "charged" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "tracing" | | 18 | "could feel" | | 19 | "flickered" | | 20 | "shimmered" | | 21 | "raced" | | 22 | "resonated" | | 23 | "echoing" | | 24 | "unreadable" | | 25 | "crystalline" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "couldn't help but feel" |
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| 90.75% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "A feeling of unease" | | 2 | "d with wonder" |
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| 64.58% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1145 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.56% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 921 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.39 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Isolde | 13 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 22 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.306 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "flora that seemed to pulse with their own inner light" | | 1 | "seemed almost deliberate" | | 2 | "tant, her mind seemingly apart from her body" | | 3 | "seemed distant and insignificant compared to the vast unknown in front of her" | | 4 | "felt like smooth glass, and towering st" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 69.95% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 27.26 | | std | 10.76 | | cv | 0.395 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "were shifting" | | 1 | "was coming" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt a sense of purpose, a feeling that this journey—which had begun with a step into the unknown—was only just beginning." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 924 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.032467532467532464 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0183982683982684 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 11.93 | | std | 5.7 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 56.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3645833333333333 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 91.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Instantly, the carvings flared brighter," | | 1 | "Suddenly, the light converged at" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She took a steadying breath" | | 1 | "She brushed a wildflower, its" | | 2 | "They walked deeper, the air" | | 3 | "She couldn't help but feel" | | 4 | "they murmured, their form blending" | | 5 | "she whispered, mesmerized by the" | | 6 | "She dipped a finger into" | | 7 | "They continued on, the light" | | 8 | "She touched it, the gemstone’s" | | 9 | "She could feel the energy" | | 10 | "She placed it on the" | | 11 | "It felt as if the" | | 12 | "She glanced at Nyx and" | | 13 | "They moved forward, their path" |
| | ratio | 0.192 | |
| 14.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, Nyx, and Isolde" | | 1 | "Aurora remarked, her bright blue" | | 2 | "Isolde stepped lightly over the" | | 3 | "Aurora touched the small crescent-shaped" | | 4 | "She took a steadying breath" | | 5 | "The ground felt springy beneath" | | 6 | "Nyx's eyes glowed faintly, their" | | 7 | "The trio moved forward, surrounded" | | 8 | "Aurora's heartstone pendant glowed faintly," | | 9 | "She brushed a wildflower, its" | | 10 | "Isolde's voice carried a melodic" | | 11 | "Aurora nodded, her gaze sweeping" | | 12 | "Isolde confirmed, her pale lavender" | | 13 | "They walked deeper, the air" | | 14 | "She couldn't help but feel" | | 15 | "Nyx paused beside a pool" | | 16 | "they murmured, their form blending" | | 17 | "Aurora knelt beside the pool," | | 18 | "A fish with scales like" | | 19 | "she whispered, mesmerized by the" |
| | ratio | 0.89 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, Nyx, and Isolde Varga stood before the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove in Richmond Park." | | 1 | "Aurora nodded, her gaze sweeping over the ancient trees that towered above them, their branches twisted into intricate patterns that seemed almost deliberate." | | 2 | "Ahead, a clearing opened up, revealing a circle of standing stones similar to the ones at the grove’s entrance but more ancient, covered in intricate carvings t…" | | 3 | "It felt as if the grove itself was coming alive, a heartbeat pulsing through the air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "a whisper threaded, their form shifting subtly as shadows played around the stones" | | 1 | "they murmured, their form blending with the surrounding shadows" |
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| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde's voice carried (carry)" | | 1 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.133 | | leniency | 0.267 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |