Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0G5A26AQQ7BC5006P4KDV

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn strode down the dimly lit corridor of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, her footfalls echoing off the damp concrete walls. Her watch, with its battered leather band, seemed to tick louder in the oppressive silence, mocking the urgency of her task. The air here was thick with mildew and a sense of foreboding, akin to the suspense before a night raid. She squinted into the shadows, her brown eyes narrowing with suspicion. Around her, the crime scene investigators moved with the same military precision she respected, but there was something off in their demeanor—an air of discomfort, maybe even reluctance. She could feel it like a prickling at the back of her neck as she approached the area cordoned off with yellow tape. The Veil Market spread before her, a chaotic array of stalls and overturned tables, their illicit wares spilling onto the cracked concrete, glinting under the flickering light of a lone bulb. Trinkets and talismans, glass vials filled with mysterious liquids, and piles of parchments covered in arcane symbols—spoils of a world most Londoners knew nothing about. This underground bazaar seemed frozen in time, caught in the act of its sordid business. Detective Quinn glanced sideways at a familiar figure bent over one of the stalls. She recognized Eva Kowalski's curly red hair immediately, a vibrant splash against the dreary backdrop. Eva rose, adjusting her round glasses and giving Quinn a nod, her freckled face marked by concern. "I took a look at the scene earlier, Harlow. It's... peculiar," Eva said, moving to tuck a stray lock of hair behind her left ear, a gesture Quinn had seen countless times before. It signaled both nervousness and thoughtfulness. A body lay sprawled across a stall’s tabletop, surrounded by scraps of parchment and shattered glass. Detective Quinn stepped closer, examining the figure—a man dressed in shabby, dark clothing, his life’s essence drained. The cause of death looked unclear at first, but the odd bruising around his neck almost seemed to form intricate lines, more art than injury. "Murder by magic?" Quinn's jaw tightened as she observed the curious pattern. It certainly wasn’t your run-of-the-mill violence. She crouched closer, tracing a finger cautiously along the marks, careful not to touch. "Eva, what do you make of this?" Eva leaned forward, her face a canvas of contemplation. "It resembles some of the etchings I've seen in the museum archives. Definitely mystical in nature. But the perpetrators could be tricky to pinpoint," she murmured, reaching into her satchel for a small notebook. Quinn stood, looking around with narrowed eyes. "Any witnesses, unreliable as they might be?" Vendors and shoppers had scattered like mice when the commotion started, but one or two loitered at a distance, wary eyes fixed on the unfolding investigation. "Just one," Eva replied, her voice laced with doubt. "He claims he heard nothing, only saw a shadow-like figure leave in a hurry, but his story keeps changing." "Typical," Quinn uttered under her breath. Her instinct screamed at her to listen beyond spoken words. "Let's see if his silence says more than his lips." She approached the witness—a gaunt man, grime layered on his skin like a grotesque shield. His eyes darted, as if seeking escape in the very walls. "Strikes me as odd—a shadow moving quickly in the middle of a bustling Market. You see anything else? Or are you keeping secrets handy for later barter?" The man grimaced, his voice cracking like a weather-worn puppet’s. "I told ya, it was dark, and I saw nuthin' but that shadow slippin' away. Might've been more of `em lurking. Things didn't feel right." Quinn studied him, silent as a predator sizing up its prey, catching the twitch of his fingers, a tell of withholding more. "Conveniently vague," she replied, her voice not a note above a whisper yet sharp enough to cut. She turned away, leaving the man to stew in his reluctance. Eva handed her the notebook, pages sketched with possible sigils and theories. "There might be a connection to the Veil Compass," Eva suggested, gesturing toward a broken compass among the scattered items. Its casing was tarnished, its verdigris sheen melding with the grime of the station. "If these marks point to portals or rifts, someone could've exploited them." "Seems a little too neat," Quinn murmured, studying the compass. She recalled shadows of occult mysteries that often danced just out of reach, tempting the mind with their undeniable allure. Her gut twinged—a compass pointed toward supernatural rifts was unique, attuned to the Market’s nature, yet... She noticed another detail: beneath the body, hidden amidst crumpled papers, lay a bone token—a key to the Market's entry. Its surface bore streaks of vivid blue, not stained by blood nor ink. "Eva," she called, as her fingers deftly extracted the token. "This shade of blue—any idea why it’s here?" Eva studied the token, a frown deepening along her brow. "Rare pigment used in shielding spells. It could've protected him, or maybe trapped him." Quinn's eyes narrowed, the pieces slowly knitting into a lattice. The pattern of bruises, the hurried shadow, the betrayal of silence—all threads leading to a tangled tapestry of motive and arcane mischief. Someone skilled had orchestrated this, knowing the veil would hide much but reveal enough for anyone willing to see. She straightened, her voice cutting through the stagnation like a path forged, rescuing clarity from chaos. "We need to uncover who wanted this Market closed—someone with eyes on eliminating competition, perhaps. Or, they wanted something bigger hidden." Her attention flicked back to Eva, her trusted confidant in this swirling vortex of mystery. "Let's untangle this web before it ensnares any more victims. We dig deeper, shadows be damned." Eva nodded, determination igniting in her green eyes, an ally through secrecy’s facade. "I'm with you. Let’s start by figuring where this compass would have led," she replied, flipping through her notebook and revealing maps, uncharted territories amidst the city’s veins. With purpose, Detective Quinn and Eva turned to face the labyrinthine tunnels, where secrets intertwined with echoes, and the night held its breath, waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her attention flicked back [back]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
80.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1032
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"very"
2"quickly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1032
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"sense of"
count1
4
word"foreboding"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"predator"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"amidst"
count2
15
word"tapestry"
count1
16
word"flicked"
count1
17
word"facade"
count1
18
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"oppressive"
2"silence"
3"sense of"
4"foreboding"
5"could feel"
6"chaotic"
7"glinting"
8"familiar"
9"shattered"
10"intricate"
11"tracing"
12"predator"
13"whisper"
14"amidst"
15"tapestry"
16"flicked"
17"facade"
18"echoes"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"a sense of foreboding"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences51
matches
0"a sense of foreboding"
58.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences51
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences60
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1018
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount781
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn12
Tube1
Camden1
Veil1
Market3
Londoners1
Eva11
Kowalski1
Detective4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Veil"
3"Londoners"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Detective"
places
0"Market"
globalScore0.732
windowScore0.667
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed frozen in time, caught in the act of its sordid business"
1"as if seeking escape in the very walls"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1018
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
44.63% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean46.27
std14.17
cv0.306
sampleLengths
076
151
271
346
439
558
639
743
840
928
1026
1153
1235
1350
1458
1546
1651
1724
1851
1968
2041
2124
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"was tarnished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences60
ratio0.117
matches
0"Around her, the crime scene investigators moved with the same military precision she respected, but there was something off in their demeanor—an air of discomfort, maybe even reluctance."
1"Trinkets and talismans, glass vials filled with mysterious liquids, and piles of parchments covered in arcane symbols—spoils of a world most Londoners knew nothing about."
2"Detective Quinn stepped closer, examining the figure—a man dressed in shabby, dark clothing, his life’s essence drained."
3"She approached the witness—a gaunt man, grime layered on his skin like a grotesque shield."
4"Her gut twinged—a compass pointed toward supernatural rifts was unique, attuned to the Market’s nature, yet..."
5"She noticed another detail: beneath the body, hidden amidst crumpled papers, lay a bone token—a key to the Market's entry."
6"The pattern of bruises, the hurried shadow, the betrayal of silence—all threads leading to a tangled tapestry of motive and arcane mischief."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount792
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.023989898989898988
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010101010101010102
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean16.97
std7.66
cv0.451
sampleLengths
024
121
220
311
428
523
631
725
815
914
1015
1117
1233
136
1416
1517
1625
1712
186
1914
207
219
2234
237
2433
259
2619
276
2810
2910
3015
3111
3227
3310
3425
3522
3617
3711
3812
3920
4014
4112
4210
4320
4416
4520
4613
4710
488
4910
78.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.48333333333333334
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences51
matches
0"Her watch, with its battered"
1"She squinted into the shadows,"
2"She could feel it like"
3"She recognized Eva Kowalski's curly"
4"It signaled both nervousness and"
5"It certainly wasn’t your run-of-the-mill"
6"She crouched closer, tracing a"
7"she murmured, reaching into her"
8"Her instinct screamed at her"
9"She approached the witness—a gaunt"
10"His eyes darted, as if"
11"she replied, her voice not"
12"She turned away, leaving the"
13"Its casing was tarnished, its"
14"She recalled shadows of occult"
15"Her gut twinged—a compass pointed"
16"She noticed another detail: beneath"
17"Its surface bore streaks of"
18"she called, as her fingers"
19"She straightened, her voice cutting"
ratio0.431
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences51
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn strode down"
1"Her watch, with its battered"
2"The air here was thick"
3"She squinted into the shadows,"
4"She could feel it like"
5"The Veil Market spread before"
6"Trinkets and talismans, glass vials"
7"This underground bazaar seemed frozen"
8"Detective Quinn glanced sideways at"
9"She recognized Eva Kowalski's curly"
10"Eva rose, adjusting her round"
11"Eva said, moving to tuck"
12"It signaled both nervousness and"
13"A body lay sprawled across"
14"Detective Quinn stepped closer, examining"
15"The cause of death looked"
16"Quinn's jaw tightened as she"
17"It certainly wasn’t your run-of-the-mill"
18"She crouched closer, tracing a"
19"Eva leaned forward, her face"
ratio0.961
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Quinn studied him, silent as a predator sizing up its prey, catching the twitch of his fingers, a tell of withholding more."
1"She straightened, her voice cutting through the stagnation like a path forged, rescuing clarity from chaos."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva suggested (suggest)"
2"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.286
69.9076%