Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0GA56DYK70T258JHK2X2D

Run Details

Duration:
54.2s
Cost:
$0.001566
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The peephole offered a distorted, green-tinted view of the hallway, but the platinum silhouette was unmistakable. Rory’s fingers trembled for a fraction of a second as she reached for the deadbolt. Her chest tightened, a familiar, metallic taste filling her mouth. She slid the first lock back, then the second. The third resisted slightly before clicking into place. "Silas? Is that you?" she called out, her voice sounding far too loud in the small flat. A heavy knock reverberated through the timber door, sharp and rhythmic. Not the polite tap of a friend; it was the percussive beat of authority. Rory held her breath, gripping the wood with knuckles turning white. She knew that rhythmic knock. She’d traced the pattern on the wooden desk in her former office at the university just to memorize it. She unhooked the security chain and twisted the handle. The door flew open before she could even lean out. Lucien Moreau didn't ask to enter. He just walked in, filling the doorway with the scent of rain, expensive cologne, and ozone. The sound of the door slamming shut vibrated through the floorboards. "You have three deadbolts, Rory. You didn't need the chain." Lucien stood there, a slate-grey suit perfectly pressed despite the London rain soaking his shoulders. He didn't look like a man who had just breeched a secure location. He looked like he had just walked out of a London bank during a robbery. His hair was slicked back, damp at the temples, and the platinum blond strands caught the dim light from the hallway. But it was his face that held her frozen. One eye was a deep, burning amber, and the other was a void of pure black. The heterochromatic gaze settled on her, dissecting her appearance as if she were a suspect or a file he had forgotten to delete. Rory straightened her shoulders, trying to ignore the sudden drop in her core temperature. "I have guests." "You invited nobody." He stepped forward, invading her personal space. The air pressure shifted, heavy and suffocating. He removed his coat, hanging it neatly on the single hook by the door, then walked deeper into the room. His ivory-handled cane tapped against the hardwood with a soft *thock-thock-thock*. The flat was a disaster zone. Papers were piled on the sofa, ancient scrolls—actual scrolls—were stacked precariously on the coffee table, and the kitchen counters were covered in takeout containers from the Golden Empress. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, immediately hissed at the intruder, arched his back, and bared yellow teeth. Lucien ignored the feral noise. He walked to the kitchen counter and looked over it, tilting his head. His black eye locked onto the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The wound had been from a childhood bicycle accident, barely a scratch, but Lucien looked at it as if it were a wound from a recent battle. "Let me guess," he said, his voice a low rumble that vibrated in her chest. "You've been hiding in this trash heap for three months?" "I've been working," she snapped, crossing her arms to hide her hand. "And this isn't a trash heap. It's... a study." "A study," he repeated. He reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a silver lighter. The flint sparked, a bright flare illuminating his sharp features. He lit a cigarette, the smoke curling around his face. "You left without saying goodbye, Carter. Not to me. Not to anyone." "You vanished." She met his gaze, refusing to look away from the amber fire in his right eye. "You didn't answer my texts. You didn't pick up the phone. When I finally went to your apartment..." "You came to my apartment? To do what? Save you from yourself?" The casual cruelty of the question hit her like a physical blow. Rory took a step back, bumping into the stack of books on the sideboard. They crashed to the floor with a thunderous thud. She gasped, crouching down to start gathering them. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa. "It was an eviction notice!" she shouted, her voice cracking. "I was there to get my things." Lucien took a drag of his cigarette, exhaling a plume of grey smoke that drifted over her bent form. "You could have knocked. I would have given you everything back. You could have kept the photographs. You could have kept the cufflinks." Rory stood up, clutching a thick hardback book to her chest. Her face flushed, hot with embarrassment. "I wanted you to be angry. I wanted the doors to be locked." "And now?" He flicked the ash from his cigarette onto the floor, the fine grey dust catching in the beams of light filtering through the grime on the windowpane. "Now I'm standing in your flat. And the doors are unlocked." He walked around the table, his cane tapping a steady, maddening rhythm. He stopped right in front of her, so close she could see the irises of his eyes were slightly dilated. The amber one seemed to pulse with heat. "I’m done letting you run," he said. His voice dropped an octave, losing its mocking edge for something rougher, darker. "You think I stayed in London all this time because I missed your personality?" "I didn't ask." He took a step closer. Rory instinctively backed up, her spine hitting the cold wall. He trapped her there, looming over her. The sharp scent of him assaulted her senses—the lingering smell of rain, the sharp tang of cigarette smoke, and beneath it, a musk that smelled like sin. "You think I forgot how you look when you’re about to cry?" His hand moved, his fingers brushing against the hair at her nape. The warmth of his palm seared her skin. "You think I forgot the way you move, the way you think?" Rory looked up at him, her throat tight. The anger had curdled into something else, something sickening and sweet. The years of silence, the wondering, the rage—it all dissolved under the gravity of his gaze. "You're late," she whispered. Lucien let out a short, breathless laugh. He leaned in, resting his forehead against hers. His eyes closed for a second, and the tension in his shoulders finally released, though the intensity in his touch remained. "I'll fix it," he murmured. "I'll fix everything." He crushed his cigarette out on the side of her bookshelf, right next to the spines of her forgotten legal texts. Then he reached out, his cane dropping to the floor with a dull clatter, and pulled her into a kiss that tasted of smoke and refusal.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1109
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1109
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"reverberated"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count2
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count2
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"looming"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"familiar"
2"reverberated"
3"rhythmic"
4"traced"
5"vibrated"
6"flicked"
7"pulse"
8"looming"
9"warmth"
10"silence"
11"tension"
12"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1101
ratio0.001
matches
0"thock-thock-thock"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount895
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien6
Rory7
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he had just walked out of a L"
1"smelled like sin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1101
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean31.46
std17.89
cv0.569
sampleLengths
041
117
217
360
49
543
610
743
869
917
103
1145
1250
1358
1425
1521
1648
1736
1812
1943
205
2117
2242
2330
2440
2540
2634
273
2849
2944
3035
314
3236
338
3447
95.65% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"was slicked"
1"were piled"
2"were stacked"
3"were covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
14.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences89
ratio0.045
matches
0"Not the polite tap of a friend; it was the percussive beat of authority."
1"Papers were piled on the sofa, ancient scrolls—actual scrolls—were stacked precariously on the coffee table, and the kitchen counters were covered in takeout containers from the Golden Empress."
2"The sharp scent of him assaulted her senses—the lingering smell of rain, the sharp tang of cigarette smoke, and beneath it, a musk that smelled like sin."
3"The years of silence, the wondering, the rage—it all dissolved under the gravity of his gaze."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount903
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"distorted, green-tinted view"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.029900332225913623
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009966777408637873
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12.37
std6.18
cv0.5
sampleLengths
016
115
210
39
48
517
611
714
811
95
1019
119
1210
136
1416
1511
1610
1715
1813
1915
2021
219
2216
2323
2414
253
263
277
287
2920
3011
316
3228
3316
345
3513
3613
3727
3815
3910
4012
419
424
4312
4410
4510
4612
4718
4818
4912
39.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.24719101123595505
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners22
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then he reached out, his"
ratio0.014
22.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences69
matches
0"Her chest tightened, a familiar,"
1"She slid the first lock"
2"she called out, her voice"
3"She knew that rhythmic knock."
4"She’d traced the pattern on"
5"She unhooked the security chain"
6"He just walked in, filling"
7"He didn't look like a"
8"He looked like he had"
9"His hair was slicked back,"
10"He stepped forward, invading her"
11"He removed his coat, hanging"
12"His ivory-handled cane tapped against"
13"He walked to the kitchen"
14"His black eye locked onto"
15"he said, his voice a"
16"she snapped, crossing her arms"
17"He reached into his jacket"
18"He lit a cigarette, the"
19"She met his gaze, refusing"
ratio0.493
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences69
matches
0"The peephole offered a distorted,"
1"Rory’s fingers trembled for a"
2"Her chest tightened, a familiar,"
3"She slid the first lock"
4"The third resisted slightly before"
5"she called out, her voice"
6"A heavy knock reverberated through"
7"Rory held her breath, gripping"
8"She knew that rhythmic knock."
9"She’d traced the pattern on"
10"She unhooked the security chain"
11"The door flew open before"
12"Lucien Moreau didn't ask to"
13"He just walked in, filling"
14"The sound of the door"
15"Lucien stood there, a slate-grey"
16"He didn't look like a"
17"He looked like he had"
18"His hair was slicked back,"
19"The heterochromatic gaze settled on"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory held her breath, gripping the wood with knuckles turning white."
1"The heterochromatic gaze settled on her, dissecting her appearance as if she were a suspect or a file he had forgotten to delete."
2"Lucien took a drag of his cigarette, exhaling a plume of grey smoke that drifted over her bent form."
3"The sharp scent of him assaulted her senses—the lingering smell of rain, the sharp tang of cigarette smoke, and beneath it, a musk that smelled like sin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she called out, her voice sounding far too loud in the small flat"
1"he said, his voice a low rumble that vibrated in her chest"
2"she shouted, her voice cracking"
3"His hand moved, his fingers brushing against the hair at her nape"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
2"he repeated (repeat)"
3"she shouted (shout)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.444
72.4361%