| 53.66% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "her shelf watched like [like]" | | 1 | "His cane knocked again [again]" | | 2 | "Silence followed like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.293 | | leniency | 0.585 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.146 | |
| 95.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1067 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.02% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1067 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shattered" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "potential" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "normalcy" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 153 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1054 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 863 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Didn" | | discoveredNames | | Voice | 2 | | Scribbled | 1 | | Warning | 1 | | Avarosian | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Lucien | 4 | | Icicles | 1 | | Didn | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Icicles" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1054 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 21.96 | | std | 11.05 | | cv | 0.503 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.14% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 153 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "One amber eye caught the glow; the other, obsidian, drifted past her shoulder." | | 1 | "He wore that charcoal suit—tailored to the exact angle of his collarbone, sleeves hemming at the perfect wrist-break." | | 2 | "Rain had pelted them that night he vanished—she’d chased him across cobblestones, demanded answers he’d refused to give." | | 3 | "She glanced at the battered cookbooks—her only attempt at normalcy." | | 4 | "He stepped closer; floorboards protested." | | 5 | "She caught a whisper of his scent—pepper and old parchment, danger and late-night confessions." | | 6 | "And they stood like that—two halves that once belonged together—caught at the threshold of what came next." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 874 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.02631578947368421 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002288329519450801 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 153 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 153 | | mean | 6.89 | | std | 4.35 | | cv | 0.631 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 61.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.38562091503267976 | | totalSentences | 153 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 30.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "She placed one foot back," | | 1 | "His cane leaned against the" | | 2 | "He wore that charcoal suit—tailored" | | 3 | "Her chest tightened." | | 4 | "She folded her arms, the" | | 5 | "Her jaw tensed." | | 6 | "She pressed her foot against" | | 7 | "He tilted his head." | | 8 | "She stared at him." | | 9 | "He stepped past anyway, sleek" | | 10 | "He leaned on the hallway" | | 11 | "She tried to remember her" | | 12 | "She’d slammed that same door." | | 13 | "He peeled the note free." | | 14 | "He held it out, careful" | | 15 | "She stared at the Scribbled" | | 16 | "He flicked the paper." | | 17 | "She backed toward the living" | | 18 | "He rose, cane in hand," | | 19 | "His other eye tracked her." |
| | ratio | 0.574 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s palm hovered over the" | | 1 | "She placed one foot back," | | 2 | "Lucien stood in the narrow" | | 3 | "His cane leaned against the" | | 4 | "He wore that charcoal suit—tailored" | | 5 | "Her chest tightened." | | 6 | "Walls lined with battered cookbooks" | | 7 | "She folded her arms, the" | | 8 | "Lucien spooled a slow smile." | | 9 | "Her jaw tensed." | | 10 | "She pressed her foot against" | | 11 | "He tilted his head." | | 12 | "Cane tapped the threshold, three" | | 13 | "She stared at him." | | 14 | "Memories of storm-wet rooftops and" | | 15 | "He stepped past anyway, sleek" | | 16 | "He leaned on the hallway" | | 17 | "A folded note lay beneath" | | 18 | "Rory’s mouth dried." | | 19 | "She tried to remember her" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 46.30% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Lucien’s disappearance." |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A tendril of memory curled at her ribs: his hand brushing hers while decrypting Avarosian script, the hush after they cracked the cipher." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.049 | | leniency | 0.098 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.049 | |