Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0GFFZTG9RTY57K5XMCDHH

Run Details

Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.023826

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, and Aurora's stomach dropped like a stone through water. Lucien stood in the hallway, his platinum hair slightly disheveled from the London drizzle, one gloved hand still raised where he'd knocked. His mismatched eyes—amber and black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her pulse stutter. Water droplets clung to the shoulders of his charcoal overcoat. "Rory." His accent wrapped around her name like silk. "May I come in?" She gripped the door handle tighter, knuckles white against the brass. Three months. Three months since she'd walked away from him in that alley behind the Golden Empress, since she'd told him she couldn't do this anymore, couldn't be another one of his carefully managed variables in the supernatural chess game he played. "How did you find Eva's place?" "You know how." He tilted his head, studying her. "Though I confess I'm impressed by the security measures. Three deadbolts? Rather excessive for a graduate student." Heat crept up her neck. She'd installed those locks herself after the incident with the wraith. Eva had laughed, called her paranoid, but Rory knew what lurked in London's shadows now. What Lucien had shown her. "She's not here." "I know. She's at the British Library until eight." His gaze never left her face. "We need to talk." The tabby cat, Ptolemy, appeared between her legs, weaving in and out with a purr. The traitor had always liked Lucien, drawn to the otherworldly energy that clung to him like expensive cologne. Rory stepped back, her bare feet silent on the hardwood. She wasn't going to make this easy for him, but she wasn't cruel enough to leave him standing in the hallway either. The flat's cramped space seemed to shrink further as he followed her inside, his presence filling every corner like smoke. Books and scrolls covered every surface—Eva's research into London's occult history spread across the coffee table, the kitchen counter, even stacked on the windowsill. Lucien's eyes swept the chaos with professional interest. "Your friend's work is... thorough." "Don't." Rory turned to face him, arms crossed. "Don't do that thing where you pretend this is a social call. What do you want, Luc?" Something flickered across his features at the shortened name. She'd been the only one who called him that, back when they'd spent those late nights mapping the supernatural territories of East London, back when she'd thought she understood what they were building together. "There's been a development. The Covenant—" "No." The word came out sharper than she'd intended. "I'm done with all that. Done with your mysterious phone calls and cryptic warnings and—" She gestured vaguely at his perfectly pressed suit, at the ivory-handled cane he carried more for show than necessity. "—whatever this is supposed to be." He set the cane against the wall with deliberate care. When he looked at her again, something raw flickered behind the polished facade. "You think I wanted this? You think I wanted to drag you back into—" "Then why are you here?" The question hung between them like a blade. "Because I made myself very clear three months ago. I said I was done being your informant, done risking my neck for scraps of information you parceled out like treats for a good dog." "That's not—" He ran a hand through his hair, disrupting its perfect styling. "Merde. That's not how it was." "Wasn't it?" She took a step closer, anger sparking in her chest. "You never told me about your father. Never mentioned you were half-demon until I walked in on you with your eyes doing that thing they do when you're angry. I had to figure out on my own that you've been playing both sides of every supernatural conflict in this city for the past decade." "I was protecting you." "From what? The truth?" Another step. She was close enough now to see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, close enough to catch the scent of bergamot and something darker underneath. "Or were you protecting your precious reputation? Can't have the notorious Lucien Moreau getting attached to some Welsh girl who stumbled into your world by accident." His jaw tightened. "You know it wasn't like that." "Do I? Because from where I'm standing, it looks exactly like that." Her voice dropped to a whisper. "You collect people, Luc. Information brokers and muscle and desperate humans who'll do anything for a taste of the supernatural. I was just another asset." He moved then, closing the distance between them in two strides. His hands came up to frame her face, leather gloves warm against her skin. "You were never just anything to me." The words hit her like a physical blow. She'd imagined him saying them, dreamed about it during those long nights when she'd lain awake thinking about his laugh, about the way he'd looked at her when he thought she wasn't watching. But she'd never expected them to sound so broken. "Then why—" Her voice cracked. "Why didn't you fight for me? When I walked away, you just... let me go." His thumbs traced along her cheekbones. "Because you were right. About all of it. I do collect people. I do use them." His heterochromatic eyes searched her face. "But with you, I forgot how. You made me forget what I was supposed to be." Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, sending a cascade of papers fluttering to the floor. Neither of them moved to pick them up. "The Covenant knows about Eva's research," he said quietly. "They're coming for her tomorrow night. I couldn't—" He swallowed hard. "I couldn't let them hurt you to get to her." The anger drained out of Aurora like water from a cracked cup, leaving behind something more dangerous. Hope.
total_cost0.023826

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"His accent wrapped around [around]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"He swallowed hard [hard]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.361
leniency0.722
rawRatio0.308
effectiveRatio0.222
79.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount968
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"perfectly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount968
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"variables"
count1
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"facade"
count1
8
word"disrupting"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"intensity"
2"pulse"
3"silk"
4"variables"
5"otherworldly"
6"flickered"
7"facade"
8"disrupting"
9"perfect"
10"whisper"
11"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords962
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount595
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"London"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"London"
discoveredNames
Aurora2
London4
Golden1
Empress1
Heat1
Rory3
Lucien4
Ptolemy2
Eva2
East1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heat"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"East"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount962
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean28.29
std17.71
cv0.626
sampleLengths
013
148
213
353
46
526
636
73
819
933
1052
1132
125
1325
1443
156
1649
1723
1814
1947
2019
2166
224
2359
249
2543
2625
277
2850
2920
3044
3122
3230
3318
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"is supposed"
73.02% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs105
matches
0"were building"
1"wasn't watching"
20.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences70
ratio0.043
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her pulse stutter."
1"Books and scrolls covered every surface—Eva's research into London's occult history spread across the coffee table, the kitchen counter, even stacked on the windowsill."
2"\"—whatever this is supposed to be.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount607
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.036243822075782535
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011532125205930808
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean13.74
std9.81
cv0.714
sampleLengths
013
122
216
310
49
54
611
72
840
96
109
1117
125
1311
1415
155
163
1715
184
1915
2018
2110
2222
2320
2424
258
265
278
2817
299
3034
316
329
3334
346
3510
3613
3714
3813
3934
4013
416
4212
4354
444
456
4627
4726
483
496
88.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5571428571428572
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
24.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences47
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—fixed"
1"His accent wrapped around her"
2"She gripped the door handle"
3"He tilted his head, studying"
4"She'd installed those locks herself"
5"His gaze never left her"
6"She wasn't going to make"
7"She'd been the only one"
8"She gestured vaguely at his"
9"He set the cane against"
10"He ran a hand through"
11"She took a step closer,"
12"She was close enough now"
13"His jaw tightened."
14"Her voice dropped to a"
15"He moved then, closing the"
16"His hands came up to"
17"She'd imagined him saying them,"
18"Her voice cracked"
19"His thumbs traced along her"
ratio0.489
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences47
matches
0"The door swung open, and"
1"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
2"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—fixed"
3"Water droplets clung to the"
4"His accent wrapped around her"
5"She gripped the door handle"
6"He tilted his head, studying"
7"Heat crept up her neck."
8"She'd installed those locks herself"
9"Eva had laughed, called her"
10"His gaze never left her"
11"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, appeared"
12"The traitor had always liked"
13"Rory stepped back, her bare"
14"She wasn't going to make"
15"The flat's cramped space seemed"
16"Books and scrolls covered every"
17"Lucien's eyes swept the chaos"
18"Rory turned to face him,"
19"Something flickered across his features"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her pulse stutter."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She gestured vaguely (gesture)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.056
77.3080%