Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0GJH54SK1ABZZARVB6CBM

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened to reveal Lucien Moreau in a three-piece charcoal suit that probably cost more than Rory's entire wardrobe. Rain dripped from his platinum hair onto the threadbare carpet of her landing. "You can't be here." "Good evening to you as well, mon chou." He stepped forward. She didn't move aside. "I'm serious. Silas doesn't allow—" "Silas is in Birmingham until Tuesday." Lucien tilted his head, heterochromatic eyes catching the dim hallway light. "May I?" Rory's fingers tightened on the doorframe. The last time she'd seen him, three months ago, he'd left Eva's flat with blood on his shirt collar and a promise he wouldn't contact her again. For her safety, he'd said. For everyone's safety. "You promised." "I did." He produced a slim black folder from his coat. "Unfortunately, your safety now requires breaking that promise." She should slam the door. Lock the three deadbolts Eva had insisted on installing last year. Call Eva. Call someone. Anyone. Instead, she stepped back. Lucien moved past her with that careful grace that always made him seem like he was dancing to music no one else could hear. He left wet footprints on the hardwood, headed straight for her kitchen table, and spread the folder's contents across the chipped surface. Photographs. Police reports. Her own face stared up from what looked like CCTV footage. "How did you—" "Your ex is looking for you." The words landed like a punch. Rory's hand found the edge of the counter. "Evan can't find me. I made sure—" "Evan has friends now. The wrong kind." Lucien pulled out a chair without asking, sat, and crossed his legs. Rain still dripped from his hair onto his collar. He didn't seem to notice. "Specifically, friends who owe favors to certain interested parties in Cardiff. Parties who would like very much to know why Brendan Carter's daughter fled to London eighteen months ago." "My father has nothing to do with this." "Your father prosecuted half the supernatural underworld in Wales." Lucien's amber eye caught the light from her single overhead bulb. The black one stayed dark, endless. "Did you think that wouldn't follow you?" Rory grabbed the kettle, filled it, slammed it onto the hob. Her hands shook. She clasped them together. "So what, you're here to warn me? Out of the goodness of your heart?" "I'm here because Evan walked into The Golden Empress two hours ago asking questions about their delivery girl." The kettle slipped. Water splashed across the counter. "Yu-Fei wouldn't—" "Yu-Fei told him you'd quit." Lucien stood, moved closer. Too close. Rory could smell his cologne, something expensive and foreign that reminded her of the one night they'd spent together before everything went to hell. "She also informed him that people who harass her employees tend to have unfortunate accidents involving kitchen equipment." "Then why are you here?" "Because Evan went to three other restaurants after. Because he's using a locator charm that's far too sophisticated for a human with his limited connections. Because—" Lucien reached past her, turned off the hob she'd forgotten to light. His sleeve brushed her arm. "Because someone is helping him, and I need to know who." Rory turned. Mistake. They stood inches apart in her cramped kitchen, him tall and put-together and smelling like money, her in yesterday's joggers and a Cardiff University jumper with a bleach stain on the sleeve. "You said you were done with me." "I said I couldn't protect you from what was coming." His mismatched eyes searched her face. "I was wrong about the timeline." "Meaning?" "Meaning what was coming is here." The scar on Rory's wrist itched. She rubbed it, that old nervous habit from childhood. Lucien's gaze flicked down, followed the movement. "Don't." "Don't what?" "Look at me like that." She pushed past him, grabbed the photographs from the table. Her face in grainy black and white, walking out of the restaurant. Getting on the tube. Standing right here, on this street, three days ago. "Like you actually care." "I warned you about the danger—" "You left." The words came out harder than intended. "Middle of the night. No explanation. Just gone." Lucien's jaw tightened. He moved to the window, peered through the broken blind at the street below. "Someone was tracking me. If I'd stayed—" "Spare me." Rory threw the photographs back on the table. "You do this. Swoop in, play the hero, disappear. I don't need saving." "No." He turned. "You need information. Which is what I do." "And what's this worth to you?" Something flickered across his face. Pain, maybe. Or calculation. "When I left, I told you to stay away from the supernatural world. Keep your head down. Be boring." He pulled out another photograph, this one older. A man with Evan's build but harder eyes, standing next to someone in robes covered in symbols. "You went to Eva's flat seventeen times in three months." "She's my friend." "She's a chaos mage who keeps demon-summoning texts in her bathroom." Lucien slid the photo across. "You helped her with research on the Holloway Cross murders." "That was—" "Stupid? Reckless?" He leaned against the counter. "The vampires involved in that case have long memories, ma chérie. And your name appeared in three separate witness reports." The scar itched again. Rory pressed her thumb against it hard. "So you're here to lecture me?" "I'm here because Evan's locator charm is demon-made. Because the friend helping him is connected to the same vampires. Because—" Lucien moved closer again. Deliberate. "Because your name came across my desk with a price tag attached." The flat felt smaller. Colder. "How much?" "Enough that refusing the contract was expensive." "You refused." "I refused." His voice dropped. "Someone else won't." Rory's mind raced. Eva's flat. The three deadbolts. Ptolemy the cat who hissed at anyone supernatural. The research they'd done, thinking they were being careful. "What do you want from me?" "Two things." Lucien reached up, brushed rain-wet hair from his forehead. The gesture was tired. Human. "First, you disappear. Tonight. I have a flat in Southwark that's warded. You stay there until I clean this up." "And second?" "You tell me who else knows about Cardiff." The question hung between them. Outside, a siren wailed past. Someone shouted about football scores. London carried on, oblivious. "If I tell you that, you'll know everything." "I already know everything." Lucien's amber eye caught hers. "I need to know who else does." Rory's phone buzzed. She didn't look at it. Couldn't look away from him. "And if I say no?" "Then I'll do what I should have done three months ago." He moved closer. Close enough that she could see the rain on his eyelashes, the tension in his jaw. "I'll make you." "You don't scare me." "I should." His voice went soft. Dangerous. "Because the people hunting you scare me." The phone buzzed again. This time Rory glanced down. Eva's name flashed on the screen. Lucien saw it too. His expression shifted, went cold. "Don't." "She deserves to know—" "Answer that phone and you'll lead them straight to her." He caught her wrist. Not rough, but firm. His fingers wrapped around the small crescent-shaped scar. "Is that what you want?" The phone stopped buzzing. Started again immediately.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.289
leniency0.579
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"dancing"
count1
1
word"charm"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"raced"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"dancing"
1"charm"
2"flicked"
3"flickered"
4"raced"
5"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1210
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount663
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien14
Moreau1
Rory12
Eva5
Rain2
Cardiff1
University1
Evan1
Deliberate1
Close1
Dangerous1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Rain"
5"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.444
windowScore0.833
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like CCTV footage"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.826
wordCount1210
matches
0"Not rough, but firm"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean15.71
std14.66
cv0.933
sampleLengths
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215
35
419
541
62
719
821
94
1046
1114
123
136
1414
157
1662
178
1833
1918
2014
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228
232
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255
2654
2735
287
2922
301
316
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331
342
3544
366
3717
3817
397
4023
4111
426
439
4454
453
4626
472
4827
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
93.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs125
matches
0"was dancing"
1"were being"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences152
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount667
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.037481259370314844
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0029985007496251873
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean7.96
std6.83
cv0.857
sampleLengths
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55
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122
1311
148
155
1611
172
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242
2511
263
276
286
298
307
3119
329
335
3429
358
3620
376
387
3911
403
414
4214
4318
443
455
462
479
482
4924
73.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.48026315789473684
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners73
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Instead, she stepped back."
ratio0.012
98.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences82
matches
0"He stepped forward"
1"She didn't move aside."
2"He produced a slim black"
3"She should slam the door."
4"He left wet footprints on"
5"Her own face stared up"
6"He didn't seem to notice."
7"Her hands shook."
8"She clasped them together."
9"His sleeve brushed her arm."
10"They stood inches apart in"
11"His mismatched eyes searched her"
12"She rubbed it, that old"
13"She pushed past him, grabbed"
14"Her face in grainy black"
15"He moved to the window,"
16"He pulled out another photograph,"
17"He leaned against the counter"
18"His voice dropped"
19"She didn't look at it."
ratio0.305
33.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences82
matches
0"The door opened to reveal"
1"Rain dripped from his platinum"
2"He stepped forward"
3"She didn't move aside."
4"Lucien tilted his head, heterochromatic"
5"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
6"The last time she'd seen"
7"He produced a slim black"
8"She should slam the door."
9"Lucien moved past her with"
10"He left wet footprints on"
11"Her own face stared up"
12"The words landed like a"
13"Rory's hand found the edge"
14"Lucien pulled out a chair"
15"He didn't seem to notice."
16"Lucien's amber eye caught the"
17"The black one stayed dark,"
18"Rory grabbed the kettle, filled"
19"Her hands shook."
ratio0.854
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien pulled out (pull out)"
1"His voice (his voice)"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.026
leniency0.053
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.053
87.6715%