Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0GSTQ7C01HPMWRWMDJR9X

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Duration:
10.6s
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$0.014578
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Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Under the dim light filtering through dense clouds, Aurora Carter, her fingers brushing lightly against the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, stood on the edge of The Fae Grove. Its timeless whispers called to her from beyond the twisted standing stones, those ancient sentinels marking the threshold between the mundane world and one steeped in supernatural wonder. "I can feel it," murmured Nyx beside her, their form flickering between solidity and shadow as if struggling to maintain human shape. The violet glow of their eyes cast eerie reflections against the stones, deepening the mystery of the place. Aurora nodded, her bright blue eyes scanning the grove's entrance, framed by wildflowers that defied seasons. "Feels like stepping into a storybook. But there's more to it, isn't there?" Nyx grinned, shadows cascading down their humanoid silhouette, "More than stories, Rory. Secrets, woven within the fabric of reality. Let's see what waits in the heart of this grove." With a light touch, Isolde Varga joined them, her presence barely disturbing the grass underfoot. Her silver hair flowed like quicksilver in the soft breeze. Her lavender eyes held echoes of truths untold as she gestured silently for them to follow. As they entered, the air inside The Grove shimmered. The undercurrent of magic thrummed, an interwoven song of space and time. Aurora could feel the rhythm resonating in her bones alongside the steady warmth of the Heartstone Pendant. She glanced around—insects humming in harmony, vivid blooms unfurling as if touched by sunlight despite the overcast sky. Every step deepened the sense of alien wonder; moss whispered secrets, and leaves danced to silent tunes. "Feels like we're being watched," Aurora noted. Her voice barely raised, yet the grove amplified it; an echo in a hollow world. "Eyes that see beyond measure," Isolde replied softly, fingers brushing leaves with unerring precision. "They know us, yet remain unseen." Nyx's gaze sharpened, shadows shifting around their presence like the tendrils of night. "Keep moving. I'd rather not be tangled in fae games." The Grove stretched before them, an unending tapestry of marvels layered with enchantment. The trees leaned impossibly tall, their ancient boughs glistening with dew that shimmered like stars. Aurora's footsteps fell in rhythm with her companions, a silent accord keeping them alight amidst nature. They looked deeper, saw paths unfurling into mysteries. The ground seemed to sing beneath their tread, each note a promise of potential. Aurora, feeling the pull, stepped forward, curiosity kindling in her veins. Her touch, soft but determined, turned leaves to silver flame—radiant trails marking their passage. "Dymas was like this, but different," Nyx's voice, a shadowed breeze, reminded Aurora of a realm where indulgence reigned. "Full of excess, but here, restraint carries more." "The Grove knows balance," Isolde's steady murmur swept over them, echoing the harmony imbued in every petal and branch. "Creation exists with purpose." Aurora paused, catching sight of a clearing that widened like silence unfolding. Her breath hitched—a heartstone altar, crimson-veined, stood central. "What's that?" Aurora's gaze locked on the altar—a convergence point pulsing with an unknown invitation. It seemed to beckon, familiar yet laced with unease. A laugh, distant and close all at once, echoed. Nyx, inseparable from the darkness, slipped closer, observing the altar's languid glow. "A hinge. Not for doors, but for passage." The words weighed in the air, tension a palpable thread woven with wonder. Aurora leaned in, curiosity urging her closer to unearthed secrets. As they neared, faces illuminated by the altar's glow, Isolde held her hand aloft. Her expression was serene—a porcelain mask veiling depth. "Touch not until intent is wholly understood." Her riddles danced, entwining with Aurora's anticipation. The altar hummed with energy, akin to Nyx's eternal shadows in motion—alive, yet withheld. Together, they walked, silence forming a companionable bond as they steeped in marvel. The Grove bent around them, awash in transcendent hues. The air laced with floral vibrancy curled around Aurora’s senses, her heartstone pulsing response to the grove’s unified spirit. Isolde's gaze fell upon a moondrop pool, sapphire in depth and surrounded by luminescent orchids. Her breath, poetic and deliberate, caressed the air. "In stillness, reflection speaks. Listen closely." The pool mirrored their forms, a crystal labyrinth encompassing faceless truths. Nyx whispered, drawn to a hidden flutter beneath the surface, perhaps the memory of dreams. "The Veil weakens here," Nyx's words blended into the pool's melody. A breach, visible only in glimmers, floated within its depths—an echo from worlds threadbare. Aurora kneeled, hand brushing crystalline water—warmth beneath the cold touch sent shivers through her. Fascination eclipsed hesitation. Her heartstone responded, gentle tremors marking a change in perception. Isolde's silver voice vibrated against the rising rhythm of revelation. "Not just spaces, but between moments. Time curls here like lichen—a tapestry incomplete." Nyx's shadow loomed over the journey’s end—a place where discovery melded with the Grove’s eternal embrace. Their exploration felt timeless, steeped in antiquity yet vibrating with novelty as each step charted unwalked paths. The Grove's enchantments twined around reality, binding the glimpsed and the imagined. Aurora's heartstone pendant interwoven with the experiences of this otherworldly place—each pulse a testament to passage. But change lingered beneath the surface—an understanding set beyond words, springing forth the promise of revelation awaiting its harrowing in shadows cast deep. Aurora looked upon the Grove’s heart and felt its pulse mirror her own.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:53:53.76Z" 2/19/2026, 3:53:53 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.118
88.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount902
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount902
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"cascading"
count1
3
word"echoes"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count2
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"echo"
count2
9
word"tapestry"
count2
10
word"glistening"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"amidst"
count1
13
word"potential"
count1
14
word"determined"
count1
15
word"radiant"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count1
17
word"silence"
count2
18
word"familiar"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"tension"
count1
21
word"palpable"
count1
22
word"porcelain"
count1
23
word"anticipation"
count1
24
word"crystal"
count1
25
word"depths"
count1
26
word"crystalline"
count1
27
word"vibrated"
count1
28
word"loomed"
count1
29
word"otherworldly"
count1
30
word"pulse"
count2
31
word"testament"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"scanning"
2"cascading"
3"echoes"
4"shimmered"
5"could feel"
6"warmth"
7"sense of"
8"echo"
9"tapestry"
10"glistening"
11"footsteps"
12"amidst"
13"potential"
14"determined"
15"radiant"
16"echoing"
17"silence"
18"familiar"
19"echoed"
20"tension"
21"palpable"
22"porcelain"
23"anticipation"
24"crystal"
25"depths"
26"crystalline"
27"vibrated"
28"loomed"
29"otherworldly"
30"pulse"
31"testament"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
96.26% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences58
matches
0"d with unease"
1"n with wonder"
68.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences58
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords889
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount763
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora15
Carter1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Fae1
Grove7
Nyx9
Isolde6
Varga1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Grove"
5"Nyx"
6"Isolde"
7"Varga"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.517
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if struggling to maintain human shape"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.25
wordCount889
matches
0"Not for doors, but for passage"
1"Not just spaces, but between moments"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
47.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean30.66
std9.7
cv0.317
sampleLengths
057
140
229
329
441
538
635
722
820
923
1044
1147
1227
1323
1420
1524
1629
1723
1829
1921
2041
2129
2226
2325
2427
2523
2616
2745
2836
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences67
ratio0.194
matches
0"She glanced around—insects humming in harmony, vivid blooms unfurling as if touched by sunlight despite the overcast sky."
1"Every step deepened the sense of alien wonder; moss whispered secrets, and leaves danced to silent tunes."
2"Her voice barely raised, yet the grove amplified it; an echo in a hollow world."
3"Her touch, soft but determined, turned leaves to silver flame—radiant trails marking their passage."
4"Her breath hitched—a heartstone altar, crimson-veined, stood central."
5"\"What's that?\" Aurora's gaze locked on the altar—a convergence point pulsing with an unknown invitation."
6"Her expression was serene—a porcelain mask veiling depth."
7"The altar hummed with energy, akin to Nyx's eternal shadows in motion—alive, yet withheld."
8"A breach, visible only in glimmers, floated within its depths—an echo from worlds threadbare."
9"Aurora kneeled, hand brushing crystalline water—warmth beneath the cold touch sent shivers through her."
10"Nyx's shadow loomed over the journey’s end—a place where discovery melded with the Grove’s eternal embrace."
11"Aurora's heartstone pendant interwoven with the experiences of this otherworldly place—each pulse a testament to passage."
12"But change lingered beneath the surface—an understanding set beyond words, springing forth the promise of revelation awaiting its harrowing in shadows cast deep."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount775
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.025806451612903226
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01032258064516129
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
98.72% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean13.27
std5.26
cv0.397
sampleLengths
029
128
222
318
416
513
629
715
810
916
109
1112
1217
1318
1417
157
1615
1714
186
1913
2010
2113
2215
2316
248
2514
2611
2714
2819
298
3019
314
3212
338
3415
359
369
3712
388
3913
4010
4114
428
437
447
4514
4613
479
4819
4915
67.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.43283582089552236
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences57
matches
0"Its timeless whispers called to"
1"Her silver hair flowed like"
2"Her lavender eyes held echoes"
3"She glanced around—insects humming in"
4"Her voice barely raised, yet"
5"They looked deeper, saw paths"
6"Her touch, soft but determined,"
7"Her breath hitched—a heartstone altar,"
8"It seemed to beckon, familiar"
9"Her expression was serene—a porcelain"
10"Her riddles danced, entwining with"
11"Her breath, poetic and deliberate,"
12"Her heartstone responded, gentle tremors"
13"Their exploration felt timeless, steeped"
ratio0.246
21.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences57
matches
0"Its timeless whispers called to"
1"The violet glow of their"
2"Aurora nodded, her bright blue"
3"Nyx grinned, shadows cascading down"
4"Her silver hair flowed like"
5"Her lavender eyes held echoes"
6"The undercurrent of magic thrummed,"
7"Aurora could feel the rhythm"
8"She glanced around—insects humming in"
9"Every step deepened the sense"
10"Her voice barely raised, yet"
11"Isolde replied softly, fingers brushing"
12"Nyx's gaze sharpened, shadows shifting"
13"The Grove stretched before them,"
14"The trees leaned impossibly tall,"
15"Aurora's footsteps fell in rhythm"
16"They looked deeper, saw paths"
17"The ground seemed to sing"
18"Aurora, feeling the pull, stepped"
19"Her touch, soft but determined,"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Under the dim light filtering through dense clouds, Aurora Carter, her fingers brushing lightly against the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, stood on the edg…"
1"Aurora nodded, her bright blue eyes scanning the grove's entrance, framed by wildflowers that defied seasons."
2"She glanced around—insects humming in harmony, vivid blooms unfurling as if touched by sunlight despite the overcast sky."
3"The trees leaned impossibly tall, their ancient boughs glistening with dew that shimmered like stars."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx grinned, shadows cascading down their humanoid silhouette,"
1"Isolde replied softly, fingers brushing leaves with unerring precision"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"murmured Nyx beside her (murmur)"
1"Aurora noted (note)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.235
67.6362%