| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde replied softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.471 | | leniency | 0.941 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 88.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 902 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 902 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "cascading" | | 3 | "echoes" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "tapestry" | | 10 | "glistening" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "amidst" | | 13 | "potential" | | 14 | "determined" | | 15 | "radiant" | | 16 | "echoing" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "familiar" | | 19 | "echoed" | | 20 | "tension" | | 21 | "palpable" | | 22 | "porcelain" | | 23 | "anticipation" | | 24 | "crystal" | | 25 | "depths" | | 26 | "crystalline" | | 27 | "vibrated" | | 28 | "loomed" | | 29 | "otherworldly" | | 30 | "pulse" | | 31 | "testament" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 96.26% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "d with unease" | | 1 | "n with wonder" |
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| 68.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 889 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.70% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 763 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.97 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 15 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 7 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 6 | | Varga | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Varga" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.517 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if struggling to maintain human shape" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.25 | | wordCount | 889 | | matches | | 0 | "Not for doors, but for passage" | | 1 | "Not just spaces, but between moments" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.58% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 30.66 | | std | 9.7 | | cv | 0.317 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 36 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.194 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced around—insects humming in harmony, vivid blooms unfurling as if touched by sunlight despite the overcast sky." | | 1 | "Every step deepened the sense of alien wonder; moss whispered secrets, and leaves danced to silent tunes." | | 2 | "Her voice barely raised, yet the grove amplified it; an echo in a hollow world." | | 3 | "Her touch, soft but determined, turned leaves to silver flame—radiant trails marking their passage." | | 4 | "Her breath hitched—a heartstone altar, crimson-veined, stood central." | | 5 | "\"What's that?\" Aurora's gaze locked on the altar—a convergence point pulsing with an unknown invitation." | | 6 | "Her expression was serene—a porcelain mask veiling depth." | | 7 | "The altar hummed with energy, akin to Nyx's eternal shadows in motion—alive, yet withheld." | | 8 | "A breach, visible only in glimmers, floated within its depths—an echo from worlds threadbare." | | 9 | "Aurora kneeled, hand brushing crystalline water—warmth beneath the cold touch sent shivers through her." | | 10 | "Nyx's shadow loomed over the journey’s end—a place where discovery melded with the Grove’s eternal embrace." | | 11 | "Aurora's heartstone pendant interwoven with the experiences of this otherworldly place—each pulse a testament to passage." | | 12 | "But change lingered beneath the surface—an understanding set beyond words, springing forth the promise of revelation awaiting its harrowing in shadows cast deep." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 775 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.025806451612903226 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01032258064516129 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 98.72% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 13.27 | | std | 5.26 | | cv | 0.397 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 67.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.43283582089552236 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Its timeless whispers called to" | | 1 | "Her silver hair flowed like" | | 2 | "Her lavender eyes held echoes" | | 3 | "She glanced around—insects humming in" | | 4 | "Her voice barely raised, yet" | | 5 | "They looked deeper, saw paths" | | 6 | "Her touch, soft but determined," | | 7 | "Her breath hitched—a heartstone altar," | | 8 | "It seemed to beckon, familiar" | | 9 | "Her expression was serene—a porcelain" | | 10 | "Her riddles danced, entwining with" | | 11 | "Her breath, poetic and deliberate," | | 12 | "Her heartstone responded, gentle tremors" | | 13 | "Their exploration felt timeless, steeped" |
| | ratio | 0.246 | |
| 21.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Its timeless whispers called to" | | 1 | "The violet glow of their" | | 2 | "Aurora nodded, her bright blue" | | 3 | "Nyx grinned, shadows cascading down" | | 4 | "Her silver hair flowed like" | | 5 | "Her lavender eyes held echoes" | | 6 | "The undercurrent of magic thrummed," | | 7 | "Aurora could feel the rhythm" | | 8 | "She glanced around—insects humming in" | | 9 | "Every step deepened the sense" | | 10 | "Her voice barely raised, yet" | | 11 | "Isolde replied softly, fingers brushing" | | 12 | "Nyx's gaze sharpened, shadows shifting" | | 13 | "The Grove stretched before them," | | 14 | "The trees leaned impossibly tall," | | 15 | "Aurora's footsteps fell in rhythm" | | 16 | "They looked deeper, saw paths" | | 17 | "The ground seemed to sing" | | 18 | "Aurora, feeling the pull, stepped" | | 19 | "Her touch, soft but determined," |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Under the dim light filtering through dense clouds, Aurora Carter, her fingers brushing lightly against the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, stood on the edg…" | | 1 | "Aurora nodded, her bright blue eyes scanning the grove's entrance, framed by wildflowers that defied seasons." | | 2 | "She glanced around—insects humming in harmony, vivid blooms unfurling as if touched by sunlight despite the overcast sky." | | 3 | "The trees leaned impossibly tall, their ancient boughs glistening with dew that shimmered like stars." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx grinned, shadows cascading down their humanoid silhouette," | | 1 | "Isolde replied softly, fingers brushing leaves with unerring precision" |
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| 32.35% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "murmured Nyx beside her (murmur)" | | 1 | "Aurora noted (note)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.235 | |