Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0GTMF9VP9PBJFXMQFZNEB

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, immaculate as always, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane. Rain dripped from the brim of his hat. "No." Rory moved to slam the door. His cane shot forward, wedging into the gap. "I need five minutes." "You need to leave." "Aurora, please." The way he said her full name made something twist in her chest. She hated that. Hated how his accent wrapped around the syllables like silk around a blade. "It's two in the morning, Lucien." "I'm aware of the time." "Are you bleeding?" "Not presently." "On fire?" "No." "Then sod off." She shoved the door. The cane didn't budge. Of course it didn't. Nothing about Lucien Moreau ever gave when you wanted it to. "I have information regarding your friend Eva. The situation has escalated." Rory's hand stilled on the door. Behind her, Ptolemy meowed from somewhere in the mess of scrolls covering Eva's kitchen table. The flat smelled like curry from the restaurant below and the bergamot candles Eva insisted on burning during her research sessions. "What situation?" "Perhaps we could discuss this inside? The neighbours needn't know the details." "The neighbours are a Polish student who plays death metal at three in the morning and an elderly woman whose telly is louder than a jet engine. They're not listening." "Nevertheless." His mismatched eyes, one amber and one black as pitch, met hers. Something flickered there. Not quite desperation, but close. On Lucien, close was the same as screaming. She stepped back. The door opened wider. "Five minutes. Then you're gone." "Understood." He stepped inside, precise as always, removing his hat with one smooth motion. Water droplets scattered across Eva's hardwood floor. Rory shut the door and threw the deadbolts. All three of them. The familiar snick-snick-snick echoed too loud in the cramped space. "You've added security since I was last here." "Eva's paranoid. Also not your business." "Everything is my business when it concerns you." "Don't." The word came out sharper than she'd intended. Lucien went still. He did that, sometimes. Became a statue wearing expensive tailored charcoal, as if he could will himself into furniture if he just stopped moving long enough. Rory crossed her arms. "Say what you came to say." "Eva has been making inquiries. Dangerous ones." "Eva's always making dangerous inquiries. It's her hobby." "This concerns the Avaros relics." The temperature in the room seemed to drop. Rory's fingers dug into her own arms. "She promised me she'd dropped that research." "She lied." "Eva doesn't—" But the protest died. Of course Eva lied. Everyone lied about the important things. That was what the last three months had taught her, wasn't it? Ptolemy wound between Lucien's legs, purring. The traitor cat had always liked him better. "She approached Mikhail Volkov two nights ago." "Christ." "Indeed." "Is she—" "Alive. Yes. Volkov was... entertained by her audacity. But his patience has limits, and she's approaching them rapidly." Rory moved to the kitchen counter, needing something to do with her hands. Tea. She'd make tea. Normal people made tea during crisis conversations with their ex-whatevers at two in the morning. The kettle filled with a rush of water that covered the silence. "Why come to me? Tell Eva yourself." "I tried. She's not answering her phone." "Maybe she's ignoring you specifically." "Perhaps." His reflection appeared in the darkened window above the sink. Still standing by the door. Still holding his hat. "But she won't ignore you." "Bold assumption." "Is it?" The kettle clicked on. Rory's hands gripped the counter edge. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light. A childhood accident. A lifetime ago. "You can't just show up here after three months of nothing and expect—" "I expect nothing. I'm asking." "It's the same thing." "It's not." She turned. He'd moved closer without her hearing, which shouldn't surprise her. Lucien moved like smoke when he wanted to. He stood near Eva's cluttered table now, one gloved hand resting on a stack of books. *A Comprehensive History of Demonic Pacts*. *The Avaros Chronicles*. *Blood Magic and Its Discontents*. "She's in deeper than you think," he said. "Then help her." "I'm trying." "By involving me." "Yes." "Because you know I can't say no if Eva's in danger." Something crossed his face. There and gone, like lightning behind clouds. "I know." "That's low, even for you." "I'm aware." The kettle began to whistle. Rory didn't move. Neither did Lucien. Ptolemy jumped onto the table, scattering loose papers. One floated to the floor between them. Lucien bent to retrieve it. His fingers, still gloved despite being indoors, brushed against symbols Rory recognised from Eva's late-night rant sessions. "She's attempting a summoning." Lucien's voice had gone flat. "A significant one." "Eva knows better." "Does she? Because these notes suggest she's planning to open a gateway on the autumn equinox." "That's two days from now." "Yes." "Bloody hell." Lucien set the paper on the table, careful not to disturb the rest of Eva's organised chaos. The kettle screamed behind them. Rory finally moved, switching it off. The sudden silence felt thick enough to choke on. "What do you need from me?" "Find her. Talk her down. She trusts you." "And what will you be doing?" "Ensuring Volkov doesn't send his people to her flat first." "How generous." "Aurora—" "Don't." She held up a hand. "Don't say my name like that. Like we're still... whatever we were." "What were we?" The question hung between them. Outside, a siren wailed past. The sound faded into the perpetual background noise of East London, leaving only the drip-drip-drip of water from Lucien's coat onto Eva's floor. "I don't know," Rory said finally. "Something that ended badly." "It didn't have to end at all." "You left." "You told me to leave." "You could've stayed." His jaw tightened. A muscle jumped beneath the sharp angle of his cheekbone. "You made your choice clear." "I was angry." "You were justified." "That's not—" She bit off the words. This wasn't the conversation to have. Not now. Not with Eva potentially summoning demons in some warehouse or abandoned church or wherever she'd decided was appropriate for cosmic-level stupidity. "Fine. I'll find her. But then we're done. No more midnight visits. No more asking for favours." "Agreed." He said it too quickly. Too easily. That should've been a relief. Instead, it felt like another loss in a year full of them. Lucien moved toward the door. His hand reached for the top deadbolt. "She mentioned Borough Market once," Rory said. "Said the old tunnels underneath would be perfect for rituals. Something about the ley lines." Lucien paused. "The South Arch specifically?" "Maybe. She was drunk. I didn't think she was serious." "Eva's always serious about research. It's everything else she treats as a joke." That was true. Rory had known Eva since they were eleven, and the girl had never met a dangerous idea she didn't want to investigate personally. The deadbolts slid open. Snick-snick-snick. The sound of an exit. "Lucien." He turned. The amber eye caught the light from Eva's lamp. The black one seemed to swallow it whole. "Thank you," Rory said. "For the warning. Even if your delivery method was shit." The corner of his mouth twitched. Not quite a smile, but close. On Lucien, close was the same as grinning. "My timing has always been questionable." "That's one word for it." He opened the door. Rain still fell outside, turning the Brick Lane pavement into a river of reflected neon from the curry house signs. Lucien stepped into it, replaced his hat with that same fluid grace, and looked back one final time. "Be careful. Volkov isn't the only one interested in Eva's research." "Who else?" But he'd already descended the first step, becoming a shadow among shadows. The rain swallowed him whole. Rory stood in the doorway, cold air raising goosebumps on her arms, watching the space where he'd been. Ptolemy meowed again. The flat suddenly felt emptier than it had any right to be. She shut the door. Threw the deadbolts. Pulled out her phone. Eva's number went straight to voicemail, as expected. Rory didn't bother leaving a message. Instead, she opened her contact list and scrolled to a name she hadn't called in weeks. *Silas - Work (bar below flat)* He'd have information. He always did. The man collected gossip like other people collected stamps, and his bar catered to exactly the sort of crowd who'd know about demonic summonings in abandoned market tunnels. Her thumb hovered over the call button. Through the window, lightning split the sky. Thunder followed three seconds later. The storm was close. Getting closer. Just like everything else.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences94
tagDensity0.096
leniency0.191
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.021
93.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1464
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1464
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"ensuring"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"flickered"
2"familiar"
3"echoed"
4"silence"
5"ensuring"
6"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences214
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords20
totalWords1456
ratio0.014
matches
0"A Comprehensive History of Demonic Pacts"
1"The Avaros Chronicles"
2"Blood Magic and Its Discontents"
3"Silas - Work (bar below flat)"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount962
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Lucien15
Ptolemy4
Eva12
Comprehensive1
History1
Demonic1
Avaros1
Magic1
Rory16
East1
London1
Brick1
Lane1
Work1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Work"
globalScore0.668
windowScore0.667
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like curry from the restaurant bel"
1"felt like another loss in a year full o"
2"Not quite a smile, but close"
62.64% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.374
wordCount1456
matches
0"Not quite desperation, but close"
1"Not quite a smile, but close"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences214
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs117
mean12.44
std12.78
cv1.027
sampleLengths
031
11
214
34
44
52
629
76
85
93
102
112
121
133
1423
1511
1642
172
1812
1930
201
2128
227
235
241
2542
268
276
288
291
3037
3110
327
338
345
3522
362
3728
3814
397
401
411
422
4318
4444
457
467
475
4825
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs179
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences214
ratio0.005
matches
0"*Silas - Work (bar below flat)*"
87.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount970
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04742268041237113
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009278350515463918
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences214
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences214
mean6.8
std5.25
cv0.772
sampleLengths
04
119
28
31
46
58
64
74
82
913
103
1113
126
135
143
152
162
171
183
194
204
214
2211
2311
246
2515
2621
272
2812
2930
301
3112
323
335
348
353
364
375
381
3913
407
418
424
4310
448
456
468
471
488
493
58.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.38317757009345793
totalSentences214
uniqueOpeners82
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences118
matches
0"Of course it didn't."
1"Of course Eva lied."
2"Still standing by the door."
3"Still holding his hat."
4"Instead, it felt like another"
5"Instead, she opened her contact"
6"Just like everything else."
ratio0.059
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences118
matches
0"His cane shot forward, wedging"
1"She hated that."
2"She shoved the door."
3"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
4"She stepped back."
5"He stepped inside, precise as"
6"He did that, sometimes."
7"She'd make tea."
8"His reflection appeared in the"
9"He'd moved closer without her"
10"He stood near Eva's cluttered"
11"His fingers, still gloved despite"
12"She held up a hand"
13"His jaw tightened."
14"She bit off the words"
15"He said it too quickly."
16"His hand reached for the"
17"He opened the door."
18"She shut the door."
19"He'd have information."
ratio0.186
65.93% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences118
matches
0"The door swung open."
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"Rain dripped from the brim"
3"Rory moved to slam the"
4"His cane shot forward, wedging"
5"The way he said her"
6"She hated that."
7"She shoved the door."
8"The cane didn't budge."
9"Nothing about Lucien Moreau ever"
10"Rory's hand stilled on the"
11"The flat smelled like curry"
12"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
13"Something flickered there."
14"She stepped back."
15"The door opened wider."
16"He stepped inside, precise as"
17"Water droplets scattered across Eva's"
18"Rory shut the door and"
19"The familiar snick-snick-snick echoed too"
ratio0.788
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Became a statue wearing expensive tailored charcoal, as if he could will himself into furniture if he just stopped moving long enough."
1"Rory stood in the doorway, cold air raising goosebumps on her arms, watching the space where he'd been."
2"The man collected gossip like other people collected stamps, and his bar catered to exactly the sort of crowd who'd know about demonic summonings in abandoned m…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences94
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.085
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.1886%