| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 94 | | tagDensity | 0.096 | | leniency | 0.191 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.021 | |
| 93.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1464 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1464 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "ensuring" | | 6 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 214 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 20 | | totalWords | 1456 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "A Comprehensive History of Demonic Pacts" | | 1 | "The Avaros Chronicles" | | 2 | "Blood Magic and Its Discontents" | | 3 | "Silas - Work (bar below flat)" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 962 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 2 | | Lucien | 15 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Eva | 12 | | Comprehensive | 1 | | History | 1 | | Demonic | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Magic | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | East | 1 | | London | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Work | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "East" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" | | 4 | "Work" |
| | globalScore | 0.668 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like curry from the restaurant bel" | | 1 | "felt like another loss in a year full o" | | 2 | "Not quite a smile, but close" |
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| 62.64% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.374 | | wordCount | 1456 | | matches | | 0 | "Not quite desperation, but close" | | 1 | "Not quite a smile, but close" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 214 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 117 | | mean | 12.44 | | std | 12.78 | | cv | 1.027 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 44 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 214 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "*Silas - Work (bar below flat)*" |
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| 87.51% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 970 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04742268041237113 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009278350515463918 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 214 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 214 | | mean | 6.8 | | std | 5.25 | | cv | 0.772 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 58.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.38317757009345793 | | totalSentences | 214 | | uniqueOpeners | 82 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course it didn't." | | 1 | "Of course Eva lied." | | 2 | "Still standing by the door." | | 3 | "Still holding his hat." | | 4 | "Instead, it felt like another" | | 5 | "Instead, she opened her contact" | | 6 | "Just like everything else." |
| | ratio | 0.059 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "His cane shot forward, wedging" | | 1 | "She hated that." | | 2 | "She shoved the door." | | 3 | "His mismatched eyes, one amber" | | 4 | "She stepped back." | | 5 | "He stepped inside, precise as" | | 6 | "He did that, sometimes." | | 7 | "She'd make tea." | | 8 | "His reflection appeared in the" | | 9 | "He'd moved closer without her" | | 10 | "He stood near Eva's cluttered" | | 11 | "His fingers, still gloved despite" | | 12 | "She held up a hand" | | 13 | "His jaw tightened." | | 14 | "She bit off the words" | | 15 | "He said it too quickly." | | 16 | "His hand reached for the" | | 17 | "He opened the door." | | 18 | "She shut the door." | | 19 | "He'd have information." |
| | ratio | 0.186 | |
| 65.93% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open." | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 2 | "Rain dripped from the brim" | | 3 | "Rory moved to slam the" | | 4 | "His cane shot forward, wedging" | | 5 | "The way he said her" | | 6 | "She hated that." | | 7 | "She shoved the door." | | 8 | "The cane didn't budge." | | 9 | "Nothing about Lucien Moreau ever" | | 10 | "Rory's hand stilled on the" | | 11 | "The flat smelled like curry" | | 12 | "His mismatched eyes, one amber" | | 13 | "Something flickered there." | | 14 | "She stepped back." | | 15 | "The door opened wider." | | 16 | "He stepped inside, precise as" | | 17 | "Water droplets scattered across Eva's" | | 18 | "Rory shut the door and" | | 19 | "The familiar snick-snick-snick echoed too" |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Became a statue wearing expensive tailored charcoal, as if he could will himself into furniture if he just stopped moving long enough." | | 1 | "Rory stood in the doorway, cold air raising goosebumps on her arms, watching the space where he'd been." | | 2 | "The man collected gossip like other people collected stamps, and his bar catered to exactly the sort of crowd who'd know about demonic summonings in abandoned m…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 94 | | tagDensity | 0.043 | | leniency | 0.085 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |