Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0H06QP8S935TN2H2AXEXD

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36.9s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt retracted with a heavy, reluctant sigh. The security chain slid back with a metallic clatter, echoing against the peeling plaster walls of the hallway. I held the door frame, heart hammering a frantic rhythm against my ribs. I should have known better than to trust the lock on Eva’s flat when it meant seeing *him* again. "Lucien?" The name left my lips before I could stop it, stripped of its usual cool authority, reduced to a tremulous whisper. The figure in the hall didn't respond. Instead, he stepped over the threshold without a second glance at the clutter of boxes lining the floor or the flash of a newspaper headline about a serial arsonist. He closed the door behind him with a decisive click, trapping me in the dim light of the landing. "You shouldn't answer if you don't know who stands on the other side, Rory." His voice was smooth, dipping into that lower register that used to make my knees weak before I knew the fire that lived underneath the skin. He stood there, framed by the flickering streetlamp outside. The smell of rain and expensive cologne washed over me, familiar and suffocating. "I didn't expect you to know my name. You only ever called me Malphora when we were... busy." I forced my shoulders back, straightening the soft grey cardigan I’d thrown on. "And when we were *not* busy, you ignored me." Lucien ran a hand through his platinum hair, slicking it back with a negligent flick. He looked impeccable. Tailored charcoal suit, starched white shirt, and a watch that probably cost more than my car. He checked his pocket watch anyway, popping it open with a tiny click. "Evasion isn't becoming." He took a step forward. I didn't back away. I couldn't. The flat was small, filled with the chaos of my research, the curry stains on the worn rug, and the sheer weight of Eva’s bedroom door at the end of the hall. I was cornered. "Then what is?" I crossed my arms, trying to create a barrier. "I thought we were done. I fled London for a reason, Lucien. One Evan Sullivan couldn't manage on his own." "Your ex-boyfriend was a singular disappointment. He lacked panache." He closed the distance, invading my personal space until I could feel the heat radiating from him. The heterochromatic gaze locked onto mine—one amber eye blazing, the other void black. "He couldn't scratch the surface of what you are, Rory. And now, the surface is breaking." He reached out, his long fingers closing around the strap of my tote bag resting on the table near the door. He didn't take it. He simply gripped it, hard enough to bruise the leather. "I'm just a delivery girl from Cardiff now. I make curries." "I saw the broadcast." The blood drained from my face. *The wrong footage.* "You don't know what you saw." "Detail matters." His thumb grazed the leather strap, his thumbpad rough, scarred in a way that matched the small crescent scar on my own wrist. "A half-demon stalking a human? A human carrying magical residue? That's interesting. And it's dangerous." He leaned in, closer this time. The scent of him hit me—a mix of sandalwood and ozone, a distinctly demonic thing he couldn't hide no matter how much French cologne he wore. It tasted like trouble. It tasted like home. "What do you want?" I whispered, the coldness I usually wore like armour slipping a fraction. "Why are you here?" "To ask a simple question." His voice dropped, dropping like a stone into a pond. "Why did you lie about the package?" *Snap.* My breath hitched. "I didn't lie." "Liar." He laughed, a short, sharp sound. "I know the type of courier Yu-Fei hires, Rory. Gritty, no-nonsense, breaks a nail and demands overtime. You don't trade letters for demon blood with a straight face and leave without a scar." "I have a job to do. You have your own life." "Doesn't seem that way." He dropped the bag strap. The motion was fluid, practiced. He gripped my wrist, his fingers cold, his grip unbreakable. He ignored the strange bruise forming on my skin. He turned my wrist over, thumb pressing against the soft inner flesh. "You were foolish to think you could outrun the scent of the Abyss." "I did outrun it." I yanked my wrist back, a flush of heat rising up my neck. "I went to London to disappear." "You didn't disappear. You just went deeper." He leaned closer, his lips brushing the shell of my ear. The heat was electric, sending a jolt straight to my core that had nothing to do with fear. "You think you can just walk away from a man like me?" The question hung in the air, heavy and thick. I looked at him, really looked at him. The way his eyes watched me, calculating, hungry. The way his lips curled into a smile that promised violence and pleasure in equal measure. I thought of the nights in Marseille, of how his hands felt controlling my every move, how he knew exactly how to break me down until I begged for the comfort of his touch. "I'm not that girl anymore, Lucien." "You're still the one who steals letters from hell for the humans in Brick Lane." I stared at the back of the bedroom door where Eva was probably studying. If she came out, she'd kill him. If she didn't, I was in trouble. He stepped back, releasing my wrist, but the damage was done. The air between us crackled, charged with the static of all the things unsaid. He straightened his lapels, looking down his nose at me, the arrogance of a royal, even a demonic one, shining through. "Stay inside. Lock the deadbolts tight. And pray the next time you slip up, I'm the only one who finds you." He turned for the door, moving with that predatory grace that set my teeth on edge. But before he reached the handle, he paused. "Your father’s still a barrister, I assume? He’d be disappointed to know his daughter has become the deliverer of demons." "Get out." He smirked, a flash of white teeth in the dim light. "Au revoir, Malphora." The door clicked shut. Silence rushed back into the flat, smelling of curry and rain, louder than it had been a moment ago.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.206
leniency0.412
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"calculating"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"whisper"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"could feel"
5"electric"
6"calculating"
7"charged"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"o with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords6
totalWords1068
ratio0.006
matches
0"him"
1"not"
2"The wrong footage."
3"Snap."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount756
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva3
French1
Marseille1
persons
0"Eva"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1068
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean24.27
std16.24
cv0.669
sampleLengths
058
11
221
355
414
548
618
722
847
93
1046
1132
1255
1335
1411
154
1615
1740
1840
1920
2022
211
226
2340
2411
254
2641
2713
2823
297
3029
3112
3241
3334
346
3515
3628
3746
3821
3924
4020
412
4214
4323
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"was cornered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
78.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences89
ratio0.022
matches
0"The heterochromatic gaze locked onto mine—one amber eye blazing, the other void black."
1"The scent of him hit me—a mix of sandalwood and ozone, a distinctly demonic thing he couldn't hide no matter how much French cologne he wore."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount758
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.030343007915567283
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009234828496042216
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12
std7.67
cv0.639
sampleLengths
08
118
213
319
41
521
67
729
819
914
1026
119
1213
1318
1413
159
1615
173
1816
1913
203
215
224
232
2432
253
2612
2720
2826
2913
3016
3121
324
3310
3411
354
366
379
3825
3915
406
4126
424
434
4416
454
4615
477
481
493
32.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3146067415730337
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners28
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Instead, he stepped over the"
ratio0.016
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences61
matches
0"I held the door frame,"
1"I should have known better"
2"He closed the door behind"
3"His voice was smooth, dipping"
4"He stood there, framed by"
5"I forced my shoulders back,"
6"He looked impeccable."
7"He checked his pocket watch"
8"He took a step forward."
9"I didn't back away."
10"I was cornered."
11"I crossed my arms, trying"
12"He closed the distance, invading"
13"He reached out, his long"
14"He didn't take it."
15"He simply gripped it, hard"
16"His thumb grazed the leather"
17"He leaned in, closer this"
18"It tasted like trouble."
19"It tasted like home."
ratio0.607
0.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences61
matches
0"The deadbolt retracted with a"
1"The security chain slid back"
2"I held the door frame,"
3"I should have known better"
4"The name left my lips"
5"The figure in the hall"
6"He closed the door behind"
7"His voice was smooth, dipping"
8"He stood there, framed by"
9"The smell of rain and"
10"I forced my shoulders back,"
11"Lucien ran a hand through"
12"He looked impeccable."
13"He checked his pocket watch"
14"He took a step forward."
15"I didn't back away."
16"The flat was small, filled"
17"I was cornered."
18"I crossed my arms, trying"
19"He closed the distance, invading"
ratio0.918
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"If she came out, she'd"
1"If she didn't, I was"
ratio0.033
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His voice was smooth, dipping into that lower register that used to make my knees weak before I knew the fire that lived underneath the skin."
1"The way his lips curled into a smile that promised violence and pleasure in equal measure."
2"He straightened his lapels, looking down his nose at me, the arrogance of a royal, even a demonic one, shining through."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"I crossed, trying to create a barrier"
1"I whispered, the coldness I usually wore like armour slipping a fraction"
2"I yanked, a flush of heat rising up my neck"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"I whispered (whisper)"
1"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.118
82.7397%