Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0H0DEEMRVD05EW7KGANCH

Run Details

Duration:
56.7s
Cost:
$0.008146
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water dripped from the rusted concave roof of the abandoned Tube station, a rhythmic *plink, plink, plink* that echoed against the tiled walls. The air down here tasted of ozone, wet copper, and the stale sweetness of rotting fruit. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a discarded crate filled with what looked like dried newts, her boots crunching on the grit of the platform. She checked her wristwatch, the worn leather strap digging into her skin. She was late. Not that time mattered much in a place where the shadows seemed to stretch longer than physics allowed. She flashed her badge at the uniformed officer standing guard by the emergency exit. The young man looked green, his eyes darting around the flickering stalls of the Veil Market as if expecting the gargoyles carved into the brickwork to come alive and eat him. "They're through there, Detective. The... ah, fortune tellers." Harlow ignored the tremor in his voice and walked past. The market was in full swing despite the corpse, traders in heavy cloaks hawking vials of glowing liquid and serrated knives made of bone. She kept her gaze forward, jaw set, shoulders squared. Military precision. She wouldn't let them see her sweat. She found the crime scene cordoned off near the old ticket booth, a faded barrier of police tape that looked embarrassingly mundane against the backdrop of enchanted stalls. Eva Kowalski crouched by the body, her round glasses slipping down her nose. She wore a oversized knit cardigan and her wild red curls were held back by a pencil. Harlow’s oldest friend didn’t look up, too busy examining the dead man's fingernails with a penlight. "Evening, Harlow. You missed the interesting part. The wards stopped screaming about five minutes ago." Harloq ducked under the tape. "I didn't know you consulted on homicides now, Evie." "I don't. But the Met calls the British Museum when they find a dead man with a patina of verdigris on his skin. They called the restricted archives. I happened to pick up the phone." Eva finally stood, tucking a stray lock of hair behind her ear in a nervous tic. She gestured to the corpse. The victim lay sprawled on his back, arms thrown wide as if embracing the grimy ceiling. His skin, where it wasn't covered in a fine, green dust, was pale as milk. He wore a velvet waistcoat and a silk shirt that had been torn open at the chest. "Who is he?" "Julian Vane. High-end fence. Specialized in inter-dimensional contraband. Nasty piece of work, usually." Harloq knelt. She ignored the smell of sulfur and focused on the mechanics of death. "Cause of death looks obvious. Heart attack. The shock of a robbery, maybe." "Robbery?" Eva scoffed, shifting her weight. Her satchel, heavy with books, thumped against her hip. "Nothing is stolen. Look at his pockets. They’re bulging. And look at the Veil Compass." Harloq followed Eva’s finger. Clutched in the dead man’s right hand was a small brass instrument. The casing was etched with protective sigils, the needle inside spinning lazily, refusing to settle. "A compass. So he was lost." "It’s attuned to rift energy, Harlow. It points to magic. Right now, it’s pointing at him." Eva adjusted her glasses. "It makes sense. Vane tried to smuggle something volatile through a rift without paying the tariff. The backlash cooked him. Spontaneous combustion of the soul. Classic clumsy novice error." Harloq leaned closer. The blood vessels in Vane’s eyes had burst, flooding the whites with red. But there was something else. A small, almost imperceptible mark on his neck. Two puncture wounds, neat and precise, lacking the swelling or bruising of a bite. "You say it was a magical backlash?" "That's the standard pattern. Overloading the nervous system with raw ether. The green dust is the residue." "Then explain the bruising on his knuckles." Harloq pointed. Vane’s right hand, the one holding the compass, was scraped raw. The skin was abraded, dirt ground deep into the tissue. "Fell over?" Eva suggested, though her voice lacked conviction. "He fell backwards. See the scuff marks on the heel of his loafers? They’re pushed forward, towards the toes. He slid back. If he fell from a standing position, the impact would be different." Harloq gestured to the pristine velvet of his waistcoat. "And look at his shirt. It’s torn open, but the fabric isn't burnt. No scorch marks. If the energy cooked him from the inside out, why is the silk intact?" Eva frowned, tucking her hair again. "Maybe the energy dissipated internally?" "Possibly. But magic or no magic, physics still applies. I don't see a weapon, but I see a struggle." Harloq stood up and walked a slow circle around the body. "You said he was a fence. Someone who deals in dangerous goods. A man like that doesn't make 'novice errors'. He’d have protections." "He clearly didn't have enough." "Or someone bypassed them." Harloq stopped at the victim's feet. She looked at the floor around the body. The dust of the station was undisturbed for a three-foot radius, a perfect circle of emptiness around Vane. "Look at the ground, Eva." Eva crouched again, squinting. "It's clean. Someone swept up?" "No. The dust is pushed away. Radially. As if a shockwave expanded from right here." Harloq pointed to the center of Vane’s chest. "But you said it was internal. If the shockwave came from him, why isn't he at the epicenter of the debris pattern? He’s slightly off-center." Eva bit her lip, her eyes darting from the floor to the compass. "The readings are erratic. The Veil Compass is reacting to the residual energy. It’s confusing the scene." "The compass isn't confused. It's a tool. It reads the environment." Harloq pulled a pair of latex gloves from her pocket and snapped them on. She reached down and gently pried the brass compass from Vane’s stiff grip. The needle spun violently, then jerked to a halt. It wasn't pointing at the body. It was pointing at a stack of wooden crates five yards away. "It's not pointing at him, Evie. It's pointing at *that*." Harloq walked over to the crates. They were stacked haphazardly, covered in a tarp. She lifted the corner of the heavy canvas. Underneath sat a cage. The bars were made of iron, cold to the touch. Inside, a small, lizard-like creature with scales of obsidian watched her with unblinking yellow eyes. It was chewing on something. "What is it?" Eva asked, coming up behind her. "Bait." Harloq shone her torch into the cage. The lizard hissed, scrambling back. In the corner of the cage lay a half-eaten rat. But more importantly, etched into the floor of the cage was a symbol. A binding rune. "Vane wasn't transporting the lizard," Harloq said, her mind racing, piecing together the fractured narrative. "He was feeding it." "Chameleons eat bugs, Harlow. Not rats." "That’s not a chameleon." Harloq turned back to the body. "The marks on his neck. Those weren't bites. They were injections. Vane was drugged." "With what?" "Something to paralyze him but keep him conscious. Something to stop his heart from exploding from fear." Harloq gestured to the clean circle around the body. "The shockwave wasn't the cause of death. It was the method of extraction." "Extraction?" "Vane had something inside him. Information. A location. A memory." Harloq walked back to Eva, lowering her voice. "The killer paralyzed him, set up the cage to channel the energy, and then used Vane as a conduit to crack the wards on this cage. The 'backlash' you saw? That was Vane’s life force being siphoned off to open the lock." Eva stared at the compass in Harloq’s hand, the needle now trembling towards the lizard. "But... the cage is locked. It’s still shut." "Because Vane died too soon." Harloq looked down at the man's peaceful, frozen face. "The killer botched it. They took too much, too fast. The heart gave out before the cage opened. The shockwave happened when the connection snapped." Eva paled, the freckles on her nose standing out against her skin. "That’s necromancy. High-tier blood magic. That’s way above Vane’s pay grade. He was a fence, not a battery." "He was a loose end." Harloq dropped the compass into an evidence bag. "And the killer is still in the market." "How do you know?" "Because the cage is still shut." Harloq scanned the faces of the traders watching them from the shadows of the stalls. "And that lizard looks hungry." She stepped back over the tape, her eyes locking onto a figure in a dark cloak standing near the exit, the hem of their garment stained with a distinctive green dust. They weren't watching the body. They were watching the cage. "Eva, stay with the body." "Harlow, wait—" Harloq was already moving, cutting through the crowd, her hand drifting to the holster at her hip. The figure turned, slipping into the tunnel leading to the deeper Underground. Harloq broke into a run, the sound of her boots swallowed by the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harloq turned back [back]"
1"Harloq walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.315
leniency0.63
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.074
90.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1513
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slightly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1513
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count2
3
word"silk"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"etched"
count2
6
word"standard"
count1
7
word"pristine"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"fractured"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoed"
2"velvet"
3"silk"
4"weight"
5"etched"
6"standard"
7"pristine"
8"perfect"
9"racing"
10"fractured"
11"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1508
ratio0.003
matches
0"plink, plink, plink"
1"that"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount891
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.47
worstName"Harloq"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Harloq"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow3
Quinn1
Veil1
Market1
Kowalski1
Eva13
Harloq22
Vane5
Underground1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Harloq"
5"Vane"
places(empty)
globalScore0.265
windowScore0
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like dried newts, her boots crunch"
1"as if expecting the gargoyles carved into the brickwork to come alive and eat him"
2"as if embracing the grimy ceiling"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1508
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean26.93
std19.5
cv0.724
sampleLengths
096
145
28
352
428
546
615
714
835
921
1048
113
1213
1328
1430
1531
166
1749
1843
197
2017
217
2223
239
2473
2511
2653
275
2841
299
3048
3130
3238
3327
3410
3522
3634
379
3839
3919
406
4124
422
4339
441
4560
4623
4739
4830
4921
71.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences82
matches
0"were held"
1"been torn"
2"was etched"
3"was scraped"
4"was abraded"
5"was undisturbed"
6"were stacked"
7"were made"
25.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs153
matches
0"wasn't pointing"
1"was pointing"
2"weren't watching"
3"were watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences119
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount893
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.023516237402015677
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007838745800671893
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean12.67
std8.49
cv0.67
sampleLengths
023
116
224
312
43
518
614
731
88
910
1024
119
122
137
1428
1513
1617
1716
1815
195
209
2135
2216
235
2416
2515
2617
273
2813
292
3013
3113
326
339
3415
354
3612
3715
386
3920
4029
413
4213
435
448
4514
467
4717
487
492
59.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3949579831932773
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences79
matches
0"She checked her wristwatch, the"
1"She was late."
2"She flashed her badge at"
3"She kept her gaze forward,"
4"She wouldn't let them see"
5"She found the crime scene"
6"She wore a oversized knit"
7"She gestured to the corpse."
8"His skin, where it wasn't"
9"He wore a velvet waistcoat"
10"She ignored the smell of"
11"Her satchel, heavy with books,"
12"She looked at the floor"
13"She reached down and gently"
14"It wasn't pointing at the"
15"It was pointing at a"
16"They were stacked haphazardly, covered"
17"She lifted the corner of"
18"It was chewing on something."
19"She stepped back over the"
ratio0.278
10.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences79
matches
0"Water dripped from the rusted"
1"The air down here tasted"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
3"She checked her wristwatch, the"
4"She was late."
5"She flashed her badge at"
6"The young man looked green,"
7"Harlow ignored the tremor in"
8"The market was in full"
9"She kept her gaze forward,"
10"She wouldn't let them see"
11"She found the crime scene"
12"Eva Kowalski crouched by the"
13"She wore a oversized knit"
14"Harlow’s oldest friend didn’t look"
15"Harloq ducked under the tape."
16"Eva finally stood, tucking a"
17"She gestured to the corpse."
18"The victim lay sprawled on"
19"His skin, where it wasn't"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Water dripped from the rusted concave roof of the abandoned Tube station, a rhythmic *plink, plink, plink* that echoed against the tiled walls."
1"The young man looked green, his eyes darting around the flickering stalls of the Veil Market as if expecting the gargoyles carved into the brickwork to come ali…"
2"She found the crime scene cordoned off near the old ticket booth, a faded barrier of police tape that looked embarrassingly mundane against the backdrop of ench…"
3"The victim lay sprawled on his back, arms thrown wide as if embracing the grimy ceiling."
4"She stepped back over the tape, her eyes locking onto a figure in a dark cloak standing near the exit, the hem of their garment stained with a distinctive green…"
5"Harloq was already moving, cutting through the crowd, her hand drifting to the holster at her hip."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva suggested, though her voice lacked conviction"
1"Harloq said, her mind racing, piecing together the fractured narrative"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva suggested (suggest)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.037
74.5352%