Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0H2X1MXEGTASYBP3JK8AV

Run Details

Duration:
17.2s
Cost:
$0.009720
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose before them like sentries of some forgotten age, their bark gnarled and ancient beyond measure. Aurora ran her fingers along the rough surface of the nearest oak, feeling grooves worn smooth by centuries of wind and rain. Behind her, Nyx materialized from the shadows cast between the trunks, their violet eyes barely visible in the dimness of late afternoon. "Beyond these stones," Isolde said, her silver hair catching what little light filtered through the canopy, "the world remembers what it forgot." Aurora had tracked the Half-Fae through Richmond Park for three days before finally cornering her near the pond. The Heartstone Pendant had started its frantic pulsing two nights ago, and the only person Aurora knew who might explain what it meant was a woman who spoke exclusively in riddles and left no footprints in the damp grass. Now, standing at what Isolde insisted was a threshold, Aurora felt something shift in the air—a pressure that had nothing to do with the weather. Her skin prickled. The afternoon seemed to hold its breath. "What happens if we cross?" Aurora asked. "Time becomes negotiable," Isolde replied, already moving forward between the stones. "An hour might be a moment. A moment might be an hour. Best not to dwell on it." Nyx drifted ahead, their shadow-form stretching and contracting like breathing. "There's something alive about this place. I can feel it across the membrane." Aurora stepped through. The change was immediate and nauseating. The light shifted from yellow-grey to something warmer, more golden, as though the world had been painted in honey. The air tasted different—sweeter, heavier with the scent of things blooming. She stumbled, catching herself against a moss-covered stone. Behind her, the standing stones had vanished. "Your first crossing often feels like drowning in reverse," Isolde said, her figure somehow more vibrant here, less ethereal and more entirely present. "The sensation passes." Aurora straightened, forcing her lungs to accept the thick air. The panic subsided. She looked around. The grove opened before her in a way that shouldn't have been possible. They'd entered between two stones barely ten feet apart, but now the clearing stretched in all directions—easily two hundred yards across, ringed by ancient oaks that seemed taller than they had moments before. The grass beneath her feet didn't crunch but gave way like velvet, shifting from green to deeper emerald with each step. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion: purples and golds and colours she didn't have names for, some pulsing faintly as though lit from within. "The boundary stones only mark the entrance," Isolde explained, moving deeper into the glade. "The grove itself is considerably larger than its opening suggests." Nyx's form became more solid, their shadow-composition somehow less at odds with this place. They ran a wisp of tendril across a nearby bloom, and the flower chimed—a sound like crystal struck gently—and released a spiral of bioluminescent pollen that hung in the air like tiny stars. Aurora moved to touch one of the standing oaks that ringed the clearing. The bark beneath her palm was warm, almost feverish. As soon as her skin made contact, the tree seemed to breathe, and she felt something like attention turn toward her—not hostile, but ancient and aware. She pulled her hand back. "They notice," Isolde said. "They've been watching this place since before your kind learned to sharpen flint." The Heartstone Pendant had stopped its frantic pulsing the moment Aurora crossed the threshold. Now it sat warm against her chest, almost peaceful. She pressed her fingers to it through her shirt, finding it no longer burning. A sound drew her attention—water, nearby and musical. Aurora followed it, moving between clusters of flowers that seemed to part as she approached, then close again behind her. Nyx flowed alongside her like oil, their presence somehow comforting in this place where nothing made sense. The stream appeared without warning. It cut through the glade in a ribbon of pure silver, the water moving slower than water should, each ripple lingering for heartbeats before fading. The stones at its bed weren't grey or brown but opalescent, catching and reflecting light that came from nowhere Aurora could identify. "How?" she started. "Magic asks 'how.' This place simply is." Isolde knelt at the stream's edge, her silver hair spilling forward. She made no move to drink, only to observe. "The Fae forged this sanctuary in the spaces between your world and theirs, where the Veil grows thin enough to stitch through. My exile made it my home." Aurora crouched beside the stream, watching her reflection distort in that slow-moving water. For a moment, her reflection moved independently of her, tilting its head in a direction she hadn't. She jerked backward. "Don't frighten easily," Isolde said. It wasn't a question. "Your reflection has merely been waiting for its own mirror to acknowledge it. An old courtesy among the liminal places." The pendant thrummed once, a single pulse like a heartbeat. Nyx had stopped at the stream's edge, their violet eyes reflecting the opalescent stones below. "There's a scent on the wind," they whispered. Their voice carried the way it always did—like wind through empty chambers. "Something cooking. Something rich." Aurora detected it then too—a phantom aroma of roasting meat and herbs and something distinctly intoxicating. Her stomach clenched. "We're not alone here," Isolde said, rising. "The grove tolerates my presence, but guests are rare. Others watch the boundaries." "Others?" Aurora kept her hand on the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The moonsilver felt colder than usual, its faint luminescence more pronounced now that evening was settling over the glade. Isolde turned toward the scent, and her pale lavender eyes shifted to something older, something that saw through more than just light. "The question you must answer now is whether you came to witness wonder or to demand answers. The grove grants only one." Aurora felt Nyx's attention pivot toward her, felt the weight of that ancient choice settling on her shoulders. The wildflowers around them had begun to glow faintly, their inner light synchronized to the pendant's pulse. The air grew sweeter, more intoxicating. "What if I want both?" Aurora asked. Isolde's smile carried the satisfaction of a riddle partially answered. She began walking toward the source of the scent, her footsteps leaving no impression on the velvet grass. Nyx and Aurora exchanged a look. Then they followed, deeper into the golden light, deeper into a place where time moved like honey and the world remembered its forgotten magic.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"velvet"
count2
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"synchronized"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"crystal"
2"comforting"
3"sanctuary"
4"pulse"
5"stomach"
6"weight"
7"synchronized"
8"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1086
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount880
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx7
Aurora17
Half-Fae1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Isolde11
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Pendant"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.534
windowScore0.667
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed taller than they had moments before"
1"something like attention turn toward her—not"
2"flowers that seemed to part as she approached, then close again behind her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.921
wordCount1086
matches
0"not hostile, but ancient"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean31.94
std19.04
cv0.596
sampleLengths
063
122
257
335
47
529
623
73
844
97
1026
1116
1290
1324
1447
1553
1617
1737
1845
1952
203
2155
2233
2329
2410
2539
2619
2720
2831
2944
3041
317
3228
3330
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"been painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was settling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences79
ratio0.101
matches
0"Now, standing at what Isolde insisted was a threshold, Aurora felt something shift in the air—a pressure that had nothing to do with the weather."
1"The air tasted different—sweeter, heavier with the scent of things blooming."
2"They'd entered between two stones barely ten feet apart, but now the clearing stretched in all directions—easily two hundred yards across, ringed by ancient oaks that seemed taller than they had moments before."
3"They ran a wisp of tendril across a nearby bloom, and the flower chimed—a sound like crystal struck gently—and released a spiral of bioluminescent pollen that hung in the air like tiny stars."
4"As soon as her skin made contact, the tree seemed to breathe, and she felt something like attention turn toward her—not hostile, but ancient and aware."
5"A sound drew her attention—water, nearby and musical."
6"Their voice carried the way it always did—like wind through empty chambers."
7"Aurora detected it then too—a phantom aroma of roasting meat and herbs and something distinctly intoxicating."
91.01% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount895
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.05027932960893855
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.01564245810055866
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean13.75
std8.05
cv0.586
sampleLengths
019
122
222
322
418
539
625
73
87
97
1011
1118
1210
1313
143
156
1619
1711
188
197
2023
213
2210
233
243
2513
2633
2721
2823
2914
3010
3114
3233
3313
349
3526
365
374
3813
3914
409
4114
428
4320
4417
455
4625
4722
483
4918
52.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.35443037974683544
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners28
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Then they followed, deeper into"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences63
matches
0"Her skin prickled."
1"She stumbled, catching herself against"
2"She looked around."
3"They'd entered between two stones"
4"They ran a wisp of"
5"She pulled her hand back."
6"She pressed her fingers to"
7"It cut through the glade"
8"She made no move to"
9"She jerked backward."
10"It wasn't a question."
11"Their voice carried the way"
12"Her stomach clenched."
13"She began walking toward the"
ratio0.222
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences63
matches
0"The standing stones rose before"
1"Aurora ran her fingers along"
2"Isolde said, her silver hair"
3"Aurora had tracked the Half-Fae"
4"The Heartstone Pendant had started"
5"Her skin prickled."
6"The afternoon seemed to hold"
7"Isolde replied, already moving forward"
8"Nyx drifted ahead, their shadow-form"
9"Aurora stepped through."
10"The change was immediate and"
11"The light shifted from yellow-grey"
12"The air tasted different—sweeter, heavier"
13"She stumbled, catching herself against"
14"Isolde said, her figure somehow"
15"Aurora straightened, forcing her lungs"
16"The panic subsided."
17"She looked around."
18"The grove opened before her"
19"They'd entered between two stones"
ratio0.889
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences63
matches
0"Now, standing at what Isolde"
1"As soon as her skin"
2"Now it sat warm against"
ratio0.048
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant had started its frantic pulsing two nights ago, and the only person Aurora knew who might explain what it meant was a woman who spoke exc…"
1"The light shifted from yellow-grey to something warmer, more golden, as though the world had been painted in honey."
2"They'd entered between two stones barely ten feet apart, but now the clearing stretched in all directions—easily two hundred yards across, ringed by ancient oak…"
3"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion: purples and golds and colours she didn't have names for, some pulsing faintly as though lit from within."
4"They ran a wisp of tendril across a nearby bloom, and the flower chimed—a sound like crystal struck gently—and released a spiral of bioluminescent pollen that h…"
5"She pressed her fingers to it through her shirt, finding it no longer burning."
6"The stones at its bed weren't grey or brown but opalescent, catching and reflecting light that came from nowhere Aurora could identify."
7"She began walking toward the source of the scent, her footsteps leaving no impression on the velvet grass."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde knelt, her silver hair spilling forward"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde explained (explain)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.435
leniency0.87
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.174
78.3315%