| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.565 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "crystal" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "synchronized" | | 8 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1086 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.41% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 880 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 7 | | Aurora | 17 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 11 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.534 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 8.49% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed taller than they had moments before" | | 1 | "something like attention turn toward her—not" | | 2 | "flowers that seemed to part as she approached, then close again behind her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.921 | | wordCount | 1086 | | matches | | 0 | "not hostile, but ancient" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 31.94 | | std | 19.04 | | cv | 0.596 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 90 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 30 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at what Isolde insisted was a threshold, Aurora felt something shift in the air—a pressure that had nothing to do with the weather." | | 1 | "The air tasted different—sweeter, heavier with the scent of things blooming." | | 2 | "They'd entered between two stones barely ten feet apart, but now the clearing stretched in all directions—easily two hundred yards across, ringed by ancient oaks that seemed taller than they had moments before." | | 3 | "They ran a wisp of tendril across a nearby bloom, and the flower chimed—a sound like crystal struck gently—and released a spiral of bioluminescent pollen that hung in the air like tiny stars." | | 4 | "As soon as her skin made contact, the tree seemed to breathe, and she felt something like attention turn toward her—not hostile, but ancient and aware." | | 5 | "A sound drew her attention—water, nearby and musical." | | 6 | "Their voice carried the way it always did—like wind through empty chambers." | | 7 | "Aurora detected it then too—a phantom aroma of roasting meat and herbs and something distinctly intoxicating." |
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| 91.01% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 895 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.05027932960893855 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01564245810055866 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 13.75 | | std | 8.05 | | cv | 0.586 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 52.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.35443037974683544 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Then they followed, deeper into" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Her skin prickled." | | 1 | "She stumbled, catching herself against" | | 2 | "She looked around." | | 3 | "They'd entered between two stones" | | 4 | "They ran a wisp of" | | 5 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 6 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 7 | "It cut through the glade" | | 8 | "She made no move to" | | 9 | "She jerked backward." | | 10 | "It wasn't a question." | | 11 | "Their voice carried the way" | | 12 | "Her stomach clenched." | | 13 | "She began walking toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.222 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose before" | | 1 | "Aurora ran her fingers along" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her silver hair" | | 3 | "Aurora had tracked the Half-Fae" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant had started" | | 5 | "Her skin prickled." | | 6 | "The afternoon seemed to hold" | | 7 | "Isolde replied, already moving forward" | | 8 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their shadow-form" | | 9 | "Aurora stepped through." | | 10 | "The change was immediate and" | | 11 | "The light shifted from yellow-grey" | | 12 | "The air tasted different—sweeter, heavier" | | 13 | "She stumbled, catching herself against" | | 14 | "Isolde said, her figure somehow" | | 15 | "Aurora straightened, forcing her lungs" | | 16 | "The panic subsided." | | 17 | "She looked around." | | 18 | "The grove opened before her" | | 19 | "They'd entered between two stones" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at what Isolde" | | 1 | "As soon as her skin" | | 2 | "Now it sat warm against" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant had started its frantic pulsing two nights ago, and the only person Aurora knew who might explain what it meant was a woman who spoke exc…" | | 1 | "The light shifted from yellow-grey to something warmer, more golden, as though the world had been painted in honey." | | 2 | "They'd entered between two stones barely ten feet apart, but now the clearing stretched in all directions—easily two hundred yards across, ringed by ancient oak…" | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion: purples and golds and colours she didn't have names for, some pulsing faintly as though lit from within." | | 4 | "They ran a wisp of tendril across a nearby bloom, and the flower chimed—a sound like crystal struck gently—and released a spiral of bioluminescent pollen that h…" | | 5 | "She pressed her fingers to it through her shirt, finding it no longer burning." | | 6 | "The stones at its bed weren't grey or brown but opalescent, catching and reflecting light that came from nowhere Aurora could identify." | | 7 | "She began walking toward the source of the scent, her footsteps leaving no impression on the velvet grass." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde knelt, her silver hair spilling forward" |
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| 63.04% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.435 | | leniency | 0.87 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.174 | |