Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0H87XKT0JH6E60AQ2RP7X

Run Details

Duration:
27.5s
Cost:
$0.001693
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at midnight—three sharp raps that cut through the hum of Eva’s ancient refrigerator. Rory froze mid-sip, the lukewarm tea bitter on her tongue. No one visited Eva’s flat unannounced. Not with three deadbolts and a tabby that hissed at strangers. Ptolemy’s ears flattened against his skull. He darted under the sofa as Rory set her mug down, the ceramic clinking against the cluttered coffee table. She didn’t reach for the baseball bat propped by the door. Something in the rhythm of those knocks prickled the back of her neck. She peered through the peephole. Lucien Moreau stood on the other side, rain glistening in his platinum hair. His charcoal suit was immaculate as ever, but the left sleeve clung to his forearm, soaked through. The amber and black of his eyes flicked up as if he sensed her watching. Rory exhaled through her nose and unchained the door. "You look like hell," she said. His mouth twitched. "And you look like you were not expecting company." She hadn’t. Not in sweatpants and an old university hoodie, her hair piled into a messy knot. The scar on her wrist itched. She crossed her arms. "What do you want?" Lucien leaned on his cane, the ivory handle catching the dim hallway light. "A moment of your time. And possibly a towel." Rainwater dripped from his sleeve onto Eva’s frayed welcome mat. Rory stepped aside. The flat felt smaller with him in it. He took up space without trying—the crisp scent of bergamot and something darker cutting through the usual smells of old books and takeout. Ptolemy emerged just enough to glare from beneath the sofa. Lucien glanced at the stacks of grimoires and half-translated scrolls covering every surface. "Eva’s work?" "Don’t touch anything." Rory tossed him a dish towel from the kitchen. "You’re lucky she’s not here." He caught it one-handed. "I know. I waited." Of course he had. Rory watched as he dabbed at his sleeves, the movement precise. No wasted effort. Just like the last time she’d seen him, in the back room of Silas’ bar, his gloved fingers sliding a dossier across the table. *Don’t ask questions you don’t want answers to, Rory.* She hadn’t listened. "You’re staring," he said without looking up. "You’re dripping on Eva’s floor." Lucien smirked. He folded the towel neatly and set it on the arm of the sofa. "I need your help." Rory barked a laugh. "You’ve got the wrong flat." "I don’t." His voice dropped, the French accent thickening the way it did when he was tired. Or angry. "There’s a ledger. Encrypted. Your old university’s system." Her stomach twisted. "No." "You haven’t heard what’s in it yet." "I don’t care." She moved toward the door. "Whatever game you’re playing, I’m not—" "It’s about Evan." Her fingers curled around the door handle. The metal bit into her palm. Lucien took a step closer. The rain had left his hair slightly undone, a single blond strand falling across his forehead. "He’s been skimming from the wrong people. They’ll kill him for it." Rory turned. "And you’re here out of the goodness of your heart?" "I’m here," he said slowly, "because you would never forgive me if I didn’t tell you." The air between them crackled. She remembered the weight of his coat around her shoulders that winter night two years ago, the way he’d lit her cigarette without a word after she’d walked out on Evan for the last time. She swallowed. "Why now?" Lucien’s gaze flicked to her wrist—to the crescent scar she knew he’d noticed the first time they met. "Because you’re the only one who can decrypt it." Ptolemy chose that moment to slink out from his hiding spot and weave between Lucien’s legs. Traitor. Rory exhaled. "You’ll owe me." The corner of his mouth lifted. "I always do." She reached past him for her laptop, her shoulder brushing his damp sleeve. His breath hitched. Just once. The screen flared to life, casting blue light across their faces. Rory flexed her fingers over the keyboard. "Start talking."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:54:08.518Z" 2/19/2026, 3:54:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.259
leniency0.519
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.074
85.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount686
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount686
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"flicked"
2"stomach"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords9
totalWords680
ratio0.013
matches
0"Don’t ask questions you don’t want answers to, Rory."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount529
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Rory11
Moreau1
Lucien7
French1
Evan1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Evan"
5"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.46
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount680
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean18.38
std13.97
cv0.76
sampleLengths
043
149
25
345
49
56
612
731
822
913
1041
1115
1217
138
1451
153
167
175
1820
199
2027
214
227
2314
243
2513
2633
2712
2816
2940
304
3127
3217
335
349
3518
3620
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs93
matches(empty)
38.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences82
ratio0.037
matches
0"The knock came at midnight—three sharp raps that cut through the hum of Eva’s ancient refrigerator."
1"He took up space without trying—the crisp scent of bergamot and something darker cutting through the usual smells of old books and takeout."
2"Lucien’s gaze flicked to her wrist—to the crescent scar she knew he’d noticed the first time they met."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount374
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.0213903743315508
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.00267379679144385
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean8.29
std6.12
cv0.738
sampleLengths
016
110
26
311
46
519
611
713
85
913
1017
1115
129
136
143
159
162
1715
186
194
204
2113
229
2310
243
258
2623
2710
2813
292
3012
315
324
334
344
3511
363
3724
389
393
407
415
422
4314
444
454
465
4717
482
498
56.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.35365853658536583
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"Of course he had."
1"Just like the last time"
ratio0.038
73.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences52
matches
0"He darted under the sofa"
1"She didn’t reach for the"
2"She peered through the peephole."
3"His charcoal suit was immaculate"
4"His mouth twitched."
5"She crossed her arms."
6"He took up space without"
7"He caught it one-handed."
8"She hadn’t listened."
9"he said without looking up"
10"He folded the towel neatly"
11"His voice dropped, the French"
12"Her stomach twisted."
13"She moved toward the door"
14"Her fingers curled around the"
15"he said slowly"
16"She remembered the weight of"
17"She reached past him for"
18"His breath hitched."
ratio0.365
27.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences52
matches
0"The knock came at midnight—three"
1"Rory froze mid-sip, the lukewarm"
2"Ptolemy’s ears flattened against his"
3"He darted under the sofa"
4"She didn’t reach for the"
5"Something in the rhythm of"
6"She peered through the peephole."
7"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
8"His charcoal suit was immaculate"
9"The amber and black of"
10"Rory exhaled through her nose"
11"His mouth twitched."
12"The scar on her wrist"
13"She crossed her arms."
14"Lucien leaned on his cane,"
15"Rainwater dripped from his sleeve"
16"Rory stepped aside."
17"The flat felt smaller with"
18"He took up space without"
19"Ptolemy emerged just enough to"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.3665%