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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0HDA69TXJZY9WN650JZPY
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.001103
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
88.45%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
64.86%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
98.67%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
40.73%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
45.20%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
8.91%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
85.25%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
28.05%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
73.8269%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The moon hung low in
the sky, casting a silvery glow over Richmond Park.
Aurora, known to her friends
as Rory, led the group through the dense underbrush, her fingers gripping the Heartstone Pendant around her neck.
The pendant pulsed faintly, a
warm
reminder
of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her. Beside her, Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer with silver hair reaching her waist, walked with a
grace that seemed to defy the natural world
.
Nyx, the Shade, moved like
a
whisper
of shadow, their form shifting and merging with the darkness.
They approached the ancient oak
standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove.
The stones loomed tall, their
surfaces worn smooth by centuries of time.
Rory hesitated, her bright blue
eyes
scanning
the area
warily
.
Isolde placed a hand on
her shoulder, her pale lavender eyes glowing with an
otherworldly
light. "Do not fear, Aurora," Isolde murmured. "The Grove is a place of wonder, not menace. But tread with caution, for it is not without its mysteries."
Nyx's form solidified briefly, their
faintly glowing violet eyes locking onto Rory's. "The silent ones watch,"
they whispered, their voice carried
on the wind. "But they are not foes." Rory nodded, her
resolve
strengthening.
She pushed a strand of
her straight, black hair behind her ear and stepped forward, her boots crunching on the fallen leaves.
The group passed through the
standing stones, and the world shifted around them.
The air grew heavier, infused
with a scent of wildflowers and earth.
The trees around them seemed
to stretch higher, their branches intertwining to form a canopy that blocked out the moon's light. "Where are we?"
Rory asked, her voice barely
a
whisper
.
Isolde's ethereal smile was both
reassuring and unsettling. "We are in a place between places, Aurora. A pocket of time and space that exists in the interstices of the worlds."
The ground beneath their feet
turned to soft, velvety earth.
Wildflowers bloomed year-round, their colors
vibrant and
surreal
.
Rory reached out to touch
a patch of bluebells, her fingers brushing against the delicate petals. The flowers
shimmered
, as if infused with a faint, inner glow. Nyx moved ahead, their form shifting and merging with the shadows. They paused near a small,
crystal
-clear stream. "Water from another time," they whispered. "Drink, and feel the Grove's magic." Rory hesitated but then knelt by the stream, cupping her hands to gather the water. As she drank, a tingling sensation spread through her body, like the first light of dawn.
She stood, feeling invigorated and
more connected to the world around her. "Isolde, what is this place?"
Rory asked, her curiosity overpowering her unease
. Isolde stepped closer, her silver hair
cascading
down her back. "This is the Fae Grove, a hidden
sanctuary
where time moves differently. An hour here can be minutes or days outside. It is a place of power and protection, a refuge for those who seek it." Rory felt
a sense of awe
wash over her. The Grove was unlike anything she had ever seen.
The air was thick with
magic, and the trees
seemed to
whisper
secrets in the wind. She wandered a bit further, her senses heightened.
She noticed a grove of
ancient trees, their trunks gnarled with age. In the center, a stone altar stood, adorned with offerings: fruits, flowers, and small trinkets. "What is this?"
Rory asked, her voice hushed
. Isolde stepped beside her, her eyes reflecting the ethereal glow of the grove. "This is a place of offerings. Fae and mortals alike leave tokens to honor the spirits of the Grove. It is a way to show respect and gratitude." Rory picked up a small, intricately carved wooden figurine.
It was a representation of
a phoenix, its wings spread in a protective embrace.
She felt a surge of
warmth
, as if the figurine itself
was imbued
with a living energy. "This is powerful," she murmured. Isolde nodded. "Many who come here find something they need, whether it is a token of luck, a
charm
for protection, or a moment of clarity. The Grove is a place of many gifts." Nyx's form solidified again, their eyes
scanning
the area. "We must be wary," they whispered. "The Fae do not take kindly to those who disrespect their
sanctuary
." Rory's hand instinctively went to the Fae-Forged Blade at her side. The weapon, a slender, leaf-shaped dagger made of moonsilver, was always cold to the touch.
Its faint luminescence in the
moonlight gave her
a sense of unease
and power. "We are here to seek answers,"
Rory said, her voice steady
. "And we will be respectful of this place." Isolde's eyes sparkled with a hint of mischief. "Follow me, and I will show you something
truly
wondrous."
She led them deeper into
the grove, the paths winding like the mazes of old tales. The air grew even more humid, the scent of wildflowers and earth mingling with a faint, sweet fragrance.
They came to a clearing
where a massive, ancient tree stood, its roots spreading wide and deep into the ground. The tree's bark was a deep, almost black color, and its leaves
shimmered
with a metallic sheen. "What is this tree?" Rory asked, her voice
filled with wonder
. Isolde's smile was serene. "This is the Heart of the Grove, the lifeblood of this place. It is said that those who touch it can hear the whispers of the Fae and the secrets of the world." Rory approached the tree
cautiously
, her hand reaching out. As her fingers brushed against the bark, a surge of energy coursed through her. Visions flashed before her eyes: ancient battles, forgotten realms, and beings of immense power.
She saw the Veil, the
metaphysical barrier that separated Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.
It shimmered like a faint
distortion, weakening during the winter solstice and strengthening during the summer solstice. "Rory," Isolde's voice broke through the visions. "You must focus. The Heart of the Grove holds many truths, but it can also overwhelm." Rory took a deep breath, grounding herself. The visions faded, but
the sense of wonder
remained.
She turned to Isolde, her
eyes bright with
newfound
knowledge. "What now? What are we supposed to do here?" Isolde's gaze was as
enigmatic
as ever. "We must seek the Seer's guidance. She will show us the path forward." Nyx's form
shimmered
, their voice carried on the wind. "The Seer awaits."
They continued deeper into the
grove, the path leading them to a hidden clearing. In the center, a small, ornate stone pavilion stood, cloaked in a veil of mist. The air here was even more still, the
silence
heavy with the
weight
of ancient magic. Rory's heart
raced
as they approached the pavilion, her senses hyper-aware of every detail. Within the pavilion, a figure sat on a stone throne, their face hidden by a hooded cloak. The presence was both
familiar
and alien, and Rory
felt a shiver
run
down her spine
. "Welcome, seekers of truth,"
the figure said, their voice echoing with an otherworldly resonance
. "I am the Seer, and I have been expecting you." Rory stepped forward, her voice steady. "We seek guidance. The world is changing, and we need to understand what lies ahead." The Seer's hood shifted, and they revealed a face both beautiful and haunting.
Their pale lavender eyes glowed
with an inner light, and their silver hair cascaded down their back in a shimmering waterfall. "The future is a
tapestry
of threads,
intricate
and ever-changing. But know this: the balance of power is shifting, and great challenges lie ahead." Isolde stepped closer, her voice filled with a mixture of respect and urgency. "What do we need to know to prepare for these challenges?" The Seer's eyes locked onto Aurora, their gaze piercing. "Aurora, you are the key. Your quick thinking and strength of will will be tested. The Heartstone Pendant is a
beacon
, guiding you through the Veil. But beware, for the shadows are watching, and not all who seek your aid are allies." Nyx's form
flickered
, their voice a
whisper
. "The Seer speaks the truth. The Heartstone is a powerful artifact, but it draws attention." Rory nodded, her
resolve
solidifying. "We will be cautious. What else can we do to prepare?" The Seer's eyes drifted to the Fae-Forged Blade at Rory's side. "The Fae blade is a weapon of great power, but it must be wielded with wisdom. The Fae Courts are divided, and their influence reaches far. Trust no one blindly, but do not be afraid to forge new alliances." Isolde's voice was steady. "We will follow your guidance, Seer. But what of the immediate threat? What do we face in the days to come?" The Seer's expression softened, a hint of sadness in their eyes. "A gathering storm approaches, one that will challenge the
very
fabric of the realms. You must be ready to face it head-on. The Heart of the Grove will provide you with strength, but ultimately, it is your choices that will shape the future." Rory took a deep breath, the
weight
of the Seer's words settling in her chest.
She felt a sense of
purpose, mingled with a growing unease. The group turned to leave, the Seer's words lingering in the air. As they exited the pavilion, the Grove's beauty seemed even more vivid. The wildflowers glowed, the trees whispered, and the air hummed with magic. Rory felt a connection to this place, a bond that went beyond the physical. "We have a long journey ahead," Isolde said, her voice
tinged
with both hope and caution. "But we are not alone. The Fae Grove has blessed us with its favor." Nyx's form
flickered
once more, their eyes locking onto Rory's. "Remember, the shadows are always watching. But with the right guidance, they can be allies rather than foes." Rory nodded, her heart filled with a mix of determination and awe. "We will not fail. Together, we will face whatever comes our way." The group continued through the grove, the path leading them back to the standing stones. As they passed through, the world shifted back to the
familiar
, the moon casting its silvery light over Richmond Park. But the magic of the Fae Grove remained with them, a
reminder
of the wondrous and dangerous journey that lay ahead.
created_at
"2026-02-19T03:54:13.711Z"
2/19/2026, 3:54:13 AM
model
"qwen/qwen-2.5-72b-instruct"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
303
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
63673
tokens_prompt
1838
tokens_completion
2588
native_tokens_prompt
1746
native_tokens_completion
2291
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.00110301
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"8b6b26e9-621a-4b31-b55a-c9aaa7482ede"
id
"cmpl-569f5b772ba74751bc7e1c9bcb499021"
is_byok
false
latency
44
model_permaslug
"qwen/qwen-2.5-72b-instruct"
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771473253-TwXVH2iCouTlksnWRsjt"
upstream_id
"cmpl-569f5b772ba74751bc7e1c9bcb499021"
total_cost
0.00110301
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
13
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
41
tagDensity
0.317
leniency
0.634
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
88.45%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1732
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"warily"
count
1
1
adverb
"truly"
count
1
2
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
3
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"warily"
1
"truly"
2
"cautiously"
3
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1732
totalAiIsms
46
found
0
word
"pulsed"
count
1
1
word
"reminder"
count
2
2
word
"whisper"
count
4
3
word
"loomed"
count
1
4
word
"scanning"
count
2
5
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
6
word
"resolve"
count
2
7
word
"surreal"
count
1
8
word
"shimmered"
count
4
9
word
"crystal"
count
1
10
word
"cascading"
count
1
11
word
"sanctuary"
count
2
12
word
"sense of"
count
4
13
word
"warmth"
count
1
14
word
"charm"
count
1
15
word
"newfound"
count
1
16
word
"enigmatic"
count
1
17
word
"silence"
count
1
18
word
"weight"
count
2
19
word
"raced"
count
1
20
word
"familiar"
count
2
21
word
"down her spine"
count
1
22
word
"echoing"
count
1
23
word
"resonance"
count
1
24
word
"tapestry"
count
1
25
word
"intricate"
count
1
26
word
"beacon"
count
1
27
word
"flickered"
count
2
28
word
"tinged"
count
1
highlights
0
"pulsed"
1
"reminder"
2
"whisper"
3
"loomed"
4
"scanning"
5
"otherworldly"
6
"resolve"
7
"surreal"
8
"shimmered"
9
"crystal"
10
"cascading"
11
"sanctuary"
12
"sense of"
13
"warmth"
14
"charm"
15
"newfound"
16
"enigmatic"
17
"silence"
18
"weight"
19
"raced"
20
"familiar"
21
"down her spine"
22
"echoing"
23
"resonance"
24
"tapestry"
25
"intricate"
26
"beacon"
27
"flickered"
28
"tinged"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"sense of foreboding"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"a sense of unease"
1
"The air was thick with"
64.86%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
7
narrationSentences
97
matches
0
"a sense of awe"
1
"a surge of warmth"
2
"a sense of unease"
3
"filled with wonder"
4
"d with wonder"
5
"the sense of wonder"
6
"felt a shiver"
98.67%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
97
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
125
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
44
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1723
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
14
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
40.73%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
82
wordCount
1144
uniqueNames
20
maxNameDensity
2.19
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
3.5
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond
2
Park
2
Rory
25
Heartstone
1
Pendant
1
Isolde
15
Varga
1
Half-Fae
1
Shade
1
Fae
6
Grove
4
Nyx
7
Fae-Forged
2
Blade
2
Veil
1
Earth
1
Hel
1
Realms
1
Seer
6
Aurora
2
persons
0
"Rory"
1
"Isolde"
2
"Shade"
3
"Nyx"
4
"Earth"
5
"Seer"
6
"Aurora"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
2
"Fae"
3
"Grove"
4
"Fae-Forged"
5
"Veil"
6
"Hel"
globalScore
0.407
windowScore
0.5
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
86
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"grace that seemed to defy the natural world"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1723
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
125
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
48
mean
35.9
std
19.41
cv
0.541
sampleLengths
0
95
1
53
2
26
3
29
4
73
5
10
6
30
7
45
8
30
9
43
10
12
11
46
12
69
13
8
14
41
15
40
16
5
17
34
18
27
19
40
20
19
21
18
22
71
23
11
24
37
25
70
26
23
27
35
28
20
29
12
30
59
31
33
32
24
33
21
34
58
35
24
36
51
37
22
38
16
39
50
40
25
41
54
42
38
43
38
44
30
45
28
46
24
47
56
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
97
matches
0
"was imbued"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
189
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
125
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1151
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"small, crystal-clear stream."
1
"slender, leaf-shaped dagger"
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.026064291920069503
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.008688097306689836
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
125
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
125
mean
13.78
std
7.23
cv
0.524
sampleLengths
0
14
1
23
2
17
3
24
4
17
5
15
6
12
7
10
8
16
9
6
10
20
11
12
12
12
13
5
14
5
15
22
16
13
17
12
18
21
19
10
20
8
21
22
22
10
23
8
24
16
25
11
26
11
27
7
28
6
29
6
30
15
31
16
32
12
33
12
34
10
35
36
36
9
37
9
38
16
39
8
40
12
41
15
42
8
43
13
44
28
45
9
46
14
47
17
48
5
49
2
45.20%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.256
totalSentences
125
uniqueOpeners
32
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
92
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
18
totalSentences
92
matches
0
"They approached the ancient oak"
1
"they whispered, their voice carried"
2
"She pushed a strand of"
3
"They paused near a small,"
4
"She stood, feeling invigorated and"
5
"She wandered a bit further,"
6
"She noticed a grove of"
7
"It was a representation of"
8
"She felt a surge of"
9
"Its faint luminescence in the"
10
"She led them deeper into"
11
"They came to a clearing"
12
"She saw the Veil, the"
13
"It shimmered like a faint"
14
"She turned to Isolde, her"
15
"They continued deeper into the"
16
"Their pale lavender eyes glowed"
17
"She felt a sense of"
ratio
0.196
8.91%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
83
totalSentences
92
matches
0
"The moon hung low in"
1
"Aurora, known to her friends"
2
"The pendant pulsed faintly, a"
3
"Nyx, the Shade, moved like"
4
"They approached the ancient oak"
5
"The stones loomed tall, their"
6
"Rory hesitated, her bright blue"
7
"Isolde placed a hand on"
8
"Nyx's form solidified briefly, their"
9
"they whispered, their voice carried"
10
"Rory nodded, her resolve strengthening."
11
"She pushed a strand of"
12
"The group passed through the"
13
"The air grew heavier, infused"
14
"The trees around them seemed"
15
"Rory asked, her voice barely"
16
"Isolde's ethereal smile was both"
17
"The ground beneath their feet"
18
"Wildflowers bloomed year-round, their colors"
19
"Rory reached out to touch"
ratio
0.902
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
92
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
85.25%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
62
technicalSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"Beside her, Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer with silver hair reaching her waist, walked with a grace that seemed to defy the natural world."
1
"Nyx, the Shade, moved like a whisper of shadow, their form shifting and merging with the darkness."
2
"Nyx moved ahead, their form shifting and merging with the shadows."
3
"She saw the Veil, the metaphysical barrier that separated Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms."
4
"Rory felt a connection to this place, a bond that went beyond the physical."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
13
uselessAdditionCount
5
matches
0
"Rory asked, her voice barely a whisper"
1
"Rory asked, her curiosity overpowering her unease"
2
"Rory asked, her voice hushed"
3
"Rory said, her voice steady"
4
"the figure said, their voice echoing with an otherworldly resonance"
28.05%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1
"they whispered (whisper)"
2
"they whispered (whisper)"
3
"she murmured (murmur)"
4
"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
41
tagDensity
0.293
leniency
0.585
rawRatio
0.417
effectiveRatio
0.244
73.8269%