Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0HFECQP8RVKHS6RMFDS3K

Run Details

Duration:
1m 37s
Cost:
$0.001265
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station hung thick and cold, tasting of damp stone and something older, metallic. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed on the grimy platform tiles, her breath a faint cloud in the beam of her flashlight. The place was a tomb, sealed off from the city above, yet someone had dragged a body down here. Her partner, Sergeant Will Carter, stood by the flickering blue lights of a forensic lamp they’d run off a generator. "Quinn. Took you long enough." "Traffic's a nightmare even when you're not heading underground, Carter." She snapped on a pair of latex gloves, her movements economical, practiced. Her sharp jaw was set, her brown eyes already cataloging the scene. The body lay sprawled near the edge of the platform, a man in his late fifties, well-dressed in a cashmere coat now ruined by a dark, spreading stain on his chest. "What’ve we got?" "Marcus Holloway. Investment banker, supposedly. Wallet’s still on him. Looks like a mugging gone bad. Single stab wound to the chest. Precise." Quinn crouched, the worn leather of her watch strap pressing against her wrist. She played her light over the body. Holloway’s face was frozen in a rictus of surprise, not fear. His right hand was clenched. She used a pen from her pocket to gently pry the fingers apart. Empty. But there were faint, glittering traces of something caught under his nails. Not dirt. It looked like flecks of old, green-tinged brass. "A mugging," she said, her voice flat. "Down here. In a sealed station that requires a crowbar and a prayer to get into. His watch is a Patek Philippe. Still on his wrist. His shoes are Italian leather. They didn’t take a thing, Carter." Carter shrugged, his bulky frame blocking some of the light. "Maybe they got spooked. He fought back, they panicked, ran. Happens." "Does it?" She stood up, her light sweeping away from the body, tracing the dust on the platform. The scene was too contained. A single pool of blood, no spatter, no signs of a struggle. The killer had been close, known him, or taken him completely by surprise. Her beam caught on something a few feet away. She walked over, her bearing straight, military-precise even here in the gloom. A small object lay half-kicked under a crumbling bench. A disc of yellowed bone, about the size of a large coin, intricately carved with a symbol she didn't recognize. She bagged it without a word. "Probably just rubbish," Carter said, coming up behind her. "This place is full of junk." "Maybe." Her light continued its path, stopping at the wall behind the bench. The old tiled advertisements were peeling, but one was different. A section of wall, about the size of a doorway, wasn’t brick or tile. It was shimmering, indistinct, like heat haze off asphalt in summer. The air around it prickled against her skin. "You seeing this?" she asked. Carter squinted. "Seeing what? Dust? Damp? It's a ruin, Quinn." She ignored him, stepping closer. The compass on her wrist, the one she’d taken from a evidence locker after the Morris case—a small brass thing with a patina of verdigris and a face etched with strange symbols—suddenly grew warm against her skin. Its needle, which had been lazily swinging, snapped to attention, pointing directly at the shimmer in the wall. She looked from the compass to the wall, then back at the body. A man in a two-thousand-pound coat, killed in a place no one should know about, with flecks of peculiar metal under his nails and a bone token in his vicinity. A token that felt… specific. Like a key. "This wasn't a mugging," she said, her voice low. "Course it was." Carter’s tone was dismissive, final. "Open and shut. Weird location, but the motive’s the oldest one in the book. We find his recent contacts, see who needed cash. Probably his mistress." "He wasn't robbed," Quinn repeated, turning to face him. The forensic lights cast deep shadows under his eyes, making him look tired, impatient. "Look at the wound. Neat. Upward thrust, under the rib cage. Professional. An angry mugger stabs, slashes, over and over. This was one movement. Efficient." She held up the evidence bag with the bone token. "And he had this. What is it?" "Like I said, rubbish." Carter shifted his weight. "Some homeless person's carving. This is a waste of time. We should be upstairs, knocking on doors, not playing Scooby-Doo down in the dark." Her mind raced, pieces clicking into a pattern she alone could see. Morris had been investigating weird things before he died. Whispered reports. Objects that didn’t behave right. Places that felt wrong. He’d tried to tell her, and she’d dismissed it as stress. She wouldn't make that mistake again. "He wasn't here to catch a train, Carter." She gestured at the shimmering wall with her chin. "He was here for that." Carter stared at the wall, then back at her, a slow confusion dawning on his face. "For what? There's nothing there. It's a bloody wall." The compass needle trembled, insistent. The flecks under Holloway’s nails. Verdigris. The token. A market that moved. A compass that pointed to portals. Lore that Eva Kowalski, with her satchel full of books, had tried to explain to her over too many coffees. "He was coming from somewhere," Quinn said, the deduction solidifying into cold certainty. "Or going to. He had a token for passage. He fought with someone, not over his wallet, but over what was in his hand. They took it. Something small, made of brass. They stabbed him when they got it, and they left him here. They went back through." She nodded toward the shimmer. "Back to wherever this leads." Carter laughed, a short, harsh sound that echoed in the cavernous space. "Back through the wall? Quinn, have you lost the plot? You’ve been spending too much time with that kooky red-headed friend of yours. It's brick and mortar. It's a dead end." He took a step toward the wall, reaching out a hand as if to prove his point. His fingers passed through the shimmering air without resistance, disappearing into the wall up to his wrist. He yanked his hand back with a sharp gasp, staring at it as if it belonged to someone else. Quinn didn't smile. She just watched him, her expression grim. "It's not a dead end. It's a crime scene with two sides. And we're only standing on one of them."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"completely"
2"suddenly"
3"lazily"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"efficient"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"raced"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"tinged"
2"tracing"
3"gloom"
4"etched"
5"efficient"
6"weight"
7"raced"
8"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
64.58% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1089
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount749
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Carter"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Carter"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn5
Sergeant1
Will1
Carter8
Morris2
Holloway2
Eva1
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Will"
4"Carter"
5"Morris"
6"Holloway"
7"Eva"
8"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.966
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like flecks of old, green-tinged b"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.918
wordCount1089
matches
0"not over his wallet, but over what was in his hand"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"make that mistake"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean40.33
std20.26
cv0.502
sampleLengths
060
125
268
322
472
544
621
769
835
915
1056
115
1210
1360
1451
159
1634
1765
1832
1949
2022
2125
2243
2371
2443
2553
2630
95.65% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"was frozen"
1"was clenched"
84.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs115
matches
0"were peeling"
1"was shimmering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences88
ratio0.011
matches
0"The compass on her wrist, the one she’d taken from a evidence locker after the Morris case—a small brass thing with a patina of verdigris and a face etched with strange symbols—suddenly grew warm against her skin."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount757
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"old, green-tinged brass."
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02906208718626156
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007926023778071334
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean12.38
std9.41
cv0.761
sampleLengths
020
121
219
320
45
522
612
731
83
922
1013
117
1211
135
1413
151
1612
172
188
197
2037
2110
2211
2318
245
2512
2613
279
2812
299
3020
316
329
336
3413
3510
3614
3711
388
395
402
418
425
4337
4418
4513
4630
474
481
493
71.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4659090909090909
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her partner, Sergeant Will Carter,"
1"She snapped on a pair"
2"Her sharp jaw was set,"
3"She played her light over"
4"His right hand was clenched."
5"She used a pen from"
6"It looked like flecks of"
7"she said, her voice flat"
8"She stood up, her light"
9"Her beam caught on something"
10"She walked over, her bearing"
11"She bagged it without a"
12"Her light continued its path,"
13"It was shimmering, indistinct, like"
14"She ignored him, stepping closer."
15"Its needle, which had been"
16"She looked from the compass"
17"she said, her voice low"
18"She held up the evidence"
19"Her mind raced, pieces clicking"
ratio0.431
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences65
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed"
2"The place was a tomb,"
3"Her partner, Sergeant Will Carter,"
4"She snapped on a pair"
5"Her sharp jaw was set,"
6"The body lay sprawled near"
7"Quinn crouched, the worn leather"
8"She played her light over"
9"Holloway’s face was frozen in"
10"His right hand was clenched."
11"She used a pen from"
12"It looked like flecks of"
13"she said, her voice flat"
14"Carter shrugged, his bulky frame"
15"She stood up, her light"
16"The scene was too contained."
17"A single pool of blood,"
18"The killer had been close,"
19"Her beam caught on something"
ratio0.969
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Carter laughed, a short, harsh sound that echoed in the cavernous space."
1"He yanked his hand back with a sharp gasp, staring at it as if it belonged to someone else."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"She snapped on, her movements economical, practiced"
1"she said, her voice flat"
2"she said, her voice low"
3"Quinn repeated, turning to face him"
4"Quinn said, the deduction solidifying into cold certainty"
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She snapped on (snap on)"
1"Her light continued (continue)"
2"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.207
77.1532%