Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0HGHZ54AV6BR6CBD2H1YM

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Duration:
1m 6s
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$0.067655
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bone token felt heavier than it should have in the evidence bag. Quinn held it up to the emergency lighting that her team had strung along the tiled walls of the abandoned station, turning the small disc between her latex-gloved fingers. Carved from what looked like human rib—she'd need forensics to confirm—it bore a symbol she didn't recognize. A circle bisected by a wavy line, almost like a horizon over water. "Guv, over here." DC Priya Mehta stood at the base of a stairwell that descended from the sealed station entrance into what had once been a platform. Quinn pocketed the evidence bag and picked her way across the tracks, stepping over a rail that hadn't carried current in decades. The air smelled of damp stone and something else, something sweet and faintly chemical, like burnt sugar mixed with ozone. The body lay on the platform itself, positioned between two market stalls that hadn't been cleared away. That in itself was wrong. Quinn's gaze swept the space as she climbed up. The abandoned station—she'd pulled up the Transport for London decommission records on her phone during the drive over, Camden deep level shelter, sealed 1952—had been converted into something out of a fever dream. Wooden stalls and draped canvas formed narrow alleys. Glass jars lined shelves, their contents murky. Bundles of dried plants hung from hooks. A table near the body held rows of small bottles filled with liquids in colors she'd never seen in nature: a violet so deep it seemed to pull light into itself, a gold that shifted to green when she changed her angle. None of it was in any database she had access to. None of it made sense. "Male, IC1, early thirties," Mehta read from her notes. "No ID. No wallet. No phone. Couple of the Camden uniforms found the entrance blown open when they were doing rounds—someone had taken a sledgehammer to the bricked-up doorway on Hawley Crescent." Quinn crouched beside the body. He lay on his back, arms at his sides, legs straight. Arranged. Not the sprawl of someone who'd fallen or been dumped. His eyes were closed, his expression almost peaceful, but the skin around his mouth and nostrils had a faint grey discoloration, and his fingertips—she lifted his right hand gentlywere blackened, as if dipped in ink. Or burned from the inside. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Half past two in the morning. She'd been in bed forty minutes ago. "What's the pathologist saying?" "Not here yet. Stuck on the M4. But the paramedics called it at the scene—said it looked cardiac, potentially drug-related, given the..." Mehta gestured at the stalls, the bottles, the whole improbable underground bazaar. "Whatever all this is." Quinn said nothing. She studied the body's position relative to the surrounding stalls. He lay in a clear space, almost like an aisle. The stall to his left sold—or had sold, or displayed—what appeared to be compasses. A wooden tray held six of them, each different. Brass, silver, one that looked carved from stone. The nearest brass one caught her attention. Small, its casing covered in a green patina of verdigris, its face etched with symbols that reminded her of the bone token's markings. The needle didn't point north. It pointed at the body. She stood, knees protesting, and circled the dead man slowly. The stalls on either side showed no signs of struggle. No knocked-over merchandise, no scuff marks, no broken glass. The dust on the platform—and there was a thick layer of it everywhere except the walkways between stalls—showed foot traffic in the aisles but nothing chaotic. Whoever had been here had left in an orderly fashion. "So someone calls in an anonymous tip, and Camden division finds a hidden market under a decommissioned Tube station, complete with a dead body and what looks like a chemist's shop from the 1600s." Quinn straightened. "And we're meant to believe this is a drug death." "The blackened fingers could indicate contact with a caustic substance. Some of these bottles—" "Look at his hands, Mehta." The DC crouched where Quinn had been. Looked closer. "The discoloration starts at the fingertips and fades toward the wrists. Uniform gradient. No splash pattern, no chemical burn marks on the surrounding skin, no blistering. If he'd handled something caustic, we'd see irregular contact marks, and the palms would be worse than the fingertips." Quinn pointed without touching. "And the grey around his mouth. No residue. No foam. No signs of ingestion or inhalation injury. No vomit." "So what killed him?" Quinn didn't answer that. She moved to the compass stall and leaned over the wooden tray. Six compasses, six different materials, all with needles pointing in roughly the same direction—toward the body. She took out her phone and snapped photos. The brass one with the verdigris patina drew her back. Its face markings were more intricate than the others, fine lines that formed interlocking geometric patterns. Sigils, some part of her brain supplied, though she didn't know where that word came from in this context. She photographed the compass from multiple angles, then straightened and looked down the length of the platform. The market stalls stretched in both directions, disappearing into darkness beyond the emergency lights. Dozens of stalls. Possibly a hundred. And every vendor had vanished, leaving their merchandise behind. "Who abandons their stock?" Mehta looked up. "Guv?" "This market—whatever it is—these people left everything. Tables, inventory, the lot. That's not how you close up shop when the police show up. You grab what's valuable and run." Quinn walked to the nearest stall and examined the items on display. Bundles of dried herbs, labelled in a script she couldn't read. Small cloth pouches cinched with cord. A leather-bound ledger. "Unless you left in a hurry before the police arrived. Before the tip was even called in. Because something happened here that scared everyone out." "The death scared them." "The death might have. But scared vendors still grab their cashbox." Quinn pointed to a metal tin sitting open on the counter, half-full of currency she didn't immediately recognize—coins of irregular shape, dull metal, stamped with symbols. Mixed in with those were genuine pound coins and a few crumpled twenties. "Nobody took the money, Mehta. Whatever happened here, it cleared this place out so fast that people left cash on the table." She continued down the row of stalls, her torch cutting through the dark. A stall selling candles in black glass jars. Another with what appeared to be taxidermied animals, though the specimens didn't match any species she could name. A third stall—larger than the others, more like a permanent kiosk—had its canvas front pulled down and tied shut. Quinn crouched and shone her torch under the gap at the bottom. Inside, she could see the legs of a chair, a table, scattered papers. "I want this whole station treated as a crime scene. Full forensic sweep. Photograph everything before anyone touches it. And get someone from the university down here—anthropology, history, I don't care—someone who can tell me what language those labels are written in." "You think this is more than a drug death." Quinn returned to the body and crouched again, this time examining the platform surface around him. The dust. She'd noticed the foot traffic patterns before—clear pathways between stalls where dozens of feet had worn the dust thin. But immediately around the body, in a rough circle perhaps two meters in diameter, the dust was undisturbed. No footprints. No drag marks. No prints from shoes, knees, or hands belonging to someone who might have checked on a collapsed man. "He didn't walk here," Quinn said quietly. She pointed her torch at a low angle across the platform surface. The beam picked up the texture of the dust, every scuff and print casting long shadows. The walkway's foot traffic ended a meter from the body in every direction. A clean perimeter of untouched dust. "No one approached this body. No one stood over him. No one checked his pulse. And he didn't walk to this spot, collapse, and die, because there are no footprints leading to where he's lying." Mehta stared at the dust. Then at the body. Then back at the dust. "That's impossible." "That's what the evidence shows." Quinn stood. Her knees ached. Her jaw ached from clenching it. Three years of sleepless nights pressed at the back of her skull—Morris's face, Morris lying in a different impossible position, Morris with the same grey discoloration around his mouth that pathology had waved away as inconclusive, Morris whose case file sat in her desk drawer because she couldn't let it go and couldn't explain it either. She pulled the evidence bag from her pocket and held up the bone token again. "I found this by the entrance. Dropped, I think—someone in a hurry." She turned it in the light. "Carved bone, handmade, with a symbol that matches markings on at least three items I've seen in these stalls. This place has a system, Mehta. Tokens, currency, vendors, regular foot traffic patterns in the dust. This isn't someone's one-off drug lab. This is an organized, recurring operation." "Recurring?" "The dust patterns. Heavy in some places, light in others. Multiple layers of foot traffic built up over weeks or months, not one night. People have been coming here regularly." She sealed the evidence bag and placed it carefully in her coat pocket. "And now a man is dead in the middle of it, in a spot no one walked to, with injuries no chemical in those bottles would explain, and every single person who might have seen something is gone." Mehta's radio crackled. The pathologist's car had pulled up on Hawley Crescent. Quinn nodded and Mehta went to meet them at the entrance. Alone on the platform, Quinn turned back to the compass stall. She studied the brass compass with its verdigris patina, its needle still locked in its impossible orientation. She thought about Morris. She thought about the grey around this dead man's mouth, and the grey that had been around Morris's mouth, and the three years she'd spent telling herself there had to be a rational explanation. The compass needle twitched. It swung thirty degrees left, then slowly, as if dragged through mud, crept back to point at the body. Quinn watched it for a long time, her face still, her brown eyes unblinking. Then she took out a fresh evidence bag and, with steady hands, collected the compass.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.065
88.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1786
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1786
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"database"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"clenching"
count1
highlights
0"database"
1"etched"
2"chaotic"
3"intricate"
4"pulse"
5"clenching"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
88.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1756
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1235
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Priya1
Mehta7
Transport1
London1
Camden1
Quinn18
Bundles2
Mixed1
Morris6
Hawley1
Crescent1
persons
0"Mehta"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Hawley"
2"Crescent"
globalScore0.771
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like human rib—she'd need forensic"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1756
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"lighting that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean41.81
std33.8
cv0.808
sampleLengths
072
13
266
3128
416
541
667
723
84
938
1094
1165
1246
1314
145
159
1668
174
1885
1946
204
214
2286
234
2472
2583
2642
279
2878
2989
3014
312
3272
3315
3465
351
3681
3723
3866
3923
4014
4115
91.90% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"been cleared"
1"been converted"
2"been dumped"
3"were closed"
4"were blackened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences126
ratio0.079
matches
0"Carved from what looked like human rib—she'd need forensics to confirm—it bore a symbol she didn't recognize."
1"The abandoned station—she'd pulled up the Transport for London decommission records on her phone during the drive over, Camden deep level shelter, sealed 1952—had been converted into something out of a fever dream."
2"His eyes were closed, his expression almost peaceful, but the skin around his mouth and nostrils had a faint grey discoloration, and his fingertips—she lifted his right hand gently—were blackened, as if dipped in ink."
3"The stall to his left sold—or had sold, or displayed—what appeared to be compasses."
4"The dust on the platform—and there was a thick layer of it everywhere except the walkways between stalls—showed foot traffic in the aisles but nothing chaotic."
5"Six compasses, six different materials, all with needles pointing in roughly the same direction—toward the body."
6"\"The death might have. But scared vendors still grab their cashbox.\" Quinn pointed to a metal tin sitting open on the counter, half-full of currency she didn't immediately recognize—coins of irregular shape, dull metal, stamped with symbols."
7"A third stall—larger than the others, more like a permanent kiosk—had its canvas front pulled down and tied shut."
8"She'd noticed the foot traffic patterns before—clear pathways between stalls where dozens of feet had worn the dust thin."
9"Three years of sleepless nights pressed at the back of her skull—Morris's face, Morris lying in a different impossible position, Morris with the same grey discoloration around his mouth that pathology had waved away as inconclusive, Morris whose case file sat in her desk drawer because she couldn't let it go and couldn't explain it either."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1255
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"whole improbable underground bazaar."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.027888446215139442
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008764940239043825
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean13.94
std11.68
cv0.838
sampleLengths
013
129
217
313
43
524
622
720
817
95
109
1133
128
137
147
1542
1611
175
189
1932
205
2111
221
2310
2435
255
2610
276
287
294
3034
314
323
3310
3410
3514
369
378
387
3923
405
415
4210
4310
449
4526
4610
4736
4810
4914
58.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.40476190476190477
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences99
matches
0"Possibly a hundred."
1"Then at the body."
2"Then back at the dust."
3"Then she took out a"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences99
matches
0"He lay on his back,"
1"His eyes were closed, his"
2"She checked the worn leather"
3"She'd been in bed forty"
4"She studied the body's position"
5"He lay in a clear"
6"It pointed at the body."
7"She stood, knees protesting, and"
8"She moved to the compass"
9"She took out her phone"
10"Its face markings were more"
11"She photographed the compass from"
12"She continued down the row"
13"She'd noticed the foot traffic"
14"She pointed her torch at"
15"Her knees ached."
16"Her jaw ached from clenching"
17"She pulled the evidence bag"
18"She turned it in the"
19"She sealed the evidence bag"
ratio0.242
81.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences99
matches
0"The bone token felt heavier"
1"Quinn held it up to"
2"A circle bisected by a"
3"DC Priya Mehta stood at"
4"Quinn pocketed the evidence bag"
5"The air smelled of damp"
6"The body lay on the"
7"That in itself was wrong."
8"Quinn's gaze swept the space"
9"The abandoned station—she'd pulled up"
10"Glass jars lined shelves, their"
11"A table near the body"
12"None of it was in"
13"None of it made sense."
14"Mehta read from her notes"
15"Quinn crouched beside the body."
16"He lay on his back,"
17"His eyes were closed, his"
18"She checked the worn leather"
19"She'd been in bed forty"
ratio0.758
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Whoever had been here had"
ratio0.01
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A table near the body held rows of small bottles filled with liquids in colors she'd never seen in nature: a violet so deep it seemed to pull light into itself,…"
1"His eyes were closed, his expression almost peaceful, but the skin around his mouth and nostrils had a faint grey discoloration, and his fingertips—she lifted h…"
2"Small, its casing covered in a green patina of verdigris, its face etched with symbols that reminded her of the bone token's markings."
3"She thought about the grey around this dead man's mouth, and the grey that had been around Morris's mouth, and the three years she'd spent telling herself there…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.065
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.7799%