Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0HKBYDZ4JT1386G1N8V1H

Run Details

Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.204150

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks towered above them, their twisted branches forming archways that seemed too deliberate to be natural. Aurora's breath misted in the December air as she followed Isolde deeper into Richmond Park, the Heartstone pendant warm against her chest beneath her jacket. "Almost there." Isolde's silver hair caught moonlight that shouldn't have penetrated the canopy this deeply. Her bare feet made no sound on the frost-brittle leaves. Behind Aurora, Nyx flowed between the shadows cast by tree trunks. Their form solidified momentarily beside her. "The Veil grows thin here. Can you feel it?" Aurora could. The air had a charged quality, like the moments before lightning struck. Her skin prickled with each step forward. "There." Isolde gestured ahead. A circle of standing stones rose from the earth, each one a massive oak that had somehow been transformed into solid rock while retaining every groove of bark, every knot and whorl. They gleamed with an inner light that hurt to look at directly. "Oak to stone?" Aurora touched the nearest pillar. Despite the December chill, warmth radiated from its surface. "How?" "The Fae courts have their ways." Isolde stepped between two of the standing stones. The air shimmered like heat waves off summer pavement. "Come. The grove awaits." Aurora hesitated. The space between the stones looked identical to the forest beyond—more twisted oaks, more shadows. But the Heartstone's pulse had quickened against her chest, its warmth spreading through her ribs. Nyx's form rippled with uncertainty. "Time moves strangely in Fae-touched places. We might emerge to find days have passed. Or minutes." "Or we might not emerge at all?" Aurora kept her tone light, but her hand found the hilt of the moonsilver blade at her hip. The Fae-forged metal was ice against her palm, a sharp contrast to the pendant's heat. "Such little faith in one who cannot lie." Isolde's laugh was wind chimes in a breeze that touched nothing else. "Though I suppose I never promised safety, did I? Only answers." The half-Fae woman vanished through the shimmer without waiting for a response. Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx—or what passed for glances when one party had no definable features beyond faintly glowing violet points where eyes should be. Then she stepped forward. The world twisted. For a moment that lasted forever and no time at all, Aurora existed in two places at once. Her left foot stood on frozen December earth while her right sank into grass so vibrantly green it seemed to glow. The scent of summer flowers mixed with winter frost in her nostrils. Her vision fractured, showing her both the stark winter forest and an impossible meadow occupying the same space. Then she stumbled through, and the dislocation ended. Warmth hit her like a physical thing. Not the gentle heat of the standing stones, but the thick, honeyed warmth of a summer afternoon. She shed her jacket immediately, draping it over her arm as she stared. The grove stretched before them in defiance of every natural law. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that shouldn't bloom together—spring bluebells beside autumn asters, summer roses tangling with winter hellebores. The trees here weren't the gnarled oaks of Richmond Park but something altogether different. Their trunks were silver-smooth as Isolde's hair, their leaves shifting through a spectrum of metallic hues with each breath of wind. "Bloody hell." The words escaped before Aurora could stop them. Nyx flowed through the barrier behind her, their shadowy form seeming more solid here, more defined. "The Fae Grove. I had heard tales, but..." "Tales rarely capture truth." Isolde stood beneath one of the silver trees, her pale lavender eyes reflecting its shifting leaves. Here in this place, she seemed more real and less human simultaneously. Her edges blurred slightly, as if she might dissolve into moonlight at any moment. "Welcome to my home, such as it is." Aurora bent to touch a flower—something with petals like spun glass that chimed softly when her fingers brushed it. The sound rippled outward, taken up by other flowers until the entire meadow rang with crystalline music. "Don't wander far." Isolde's warning cut through the wonder. "The grove exists between worlds. Stray too far from the center, and you might find yourself in the Fae realm proper. Or somewhere worse." The flowers' song faded, leaving behind an expectant silence. Aurora straightened, suddenly aware of how the air itself felt different here. Thicker. Each breath carried tastes she couldn't identify—honey and metal, storm clouds and starlight. Nyx had moved to examine the trees, their incorporeal fingers passing through the silver bark. "The wood hums with power. Old magic. Older than humanity." "Older than your current form, certainly." Isolde glided past them, deeper into the grove. "This way. What you seek lies at the heart." They followed a path that hadn't existed moments before, or perhaps had always been there, waiting. The flowers parted before Isolde's bare feet, creating a walkway of soft moss that glowed faintly phosphorescent. Above them, the sky defied logic—simultaneously noon-bright and midnight-dark, with stars visible through sunshine. Aurora's equilibrium rebelled. She focused on the Heartstone's steady pulse, using its rhythm to anchor herself. The Fae blade at her hip had grown colder, frost forming on its sheath despite the warmth. "How long have you lived here?" She addressed Isolde's back, needing conversation to ground herself. "Time has little meaning in the grove. I arrived yesterday. I arrived three centuries ago. Both statements hold equal truth." Isolde paused beside a pool of water that reflected not the impossible sky above but something else entirely—storm clouds gathering over a city Aurora didn't recognize. "The Fae courts exiled me for sharing visions with mortals. They didn't specify where my exile should be served." Nyx drifted closer to the pool. "Clever. A place between worlds, technically fulfilling the letter of their judgment while—" They stopped, violet eyes flaring brighter. "Something approaches." The grove's perpetual summer breeze stilled. The chiming flowers fell silent. Even the silver leaves ceased their colour-shifting dance. Aurora's hand found the Fae blade's hilt. The weapon sang eagerly against her palm, recognizing this place, these energies. "Isolde?" But the half-Fae woman had gone motionless, her head tilted as if listening to something beyond normal hearing. When she spoke, her voice carried harmonics that raised goosebumps on Aurora's arms. "The grove has accepted you. It offers a gift." She turned, and her eyes had gone solid silver, pupilless and ancient. "Or a curse. With the Fae, the distinction often blurs." The air split apart. Not violently, but with deliberate precision, as if reality were fabric and someone had taken very sharp scissors to it. Through the tear stepped a figure that made Aurora's eyes water to perceive. It stood roughly human height but wrong—too many angles, or perhaps not enough. Its skin appeared to be made of condensed starlight, and when it moved, it left brief afterimages in colours that didn't exist. "Mortal." Its voice was the sound of wind through leaves, of water over stone, of time itself aging. "You carry Dymas-touched silver. You walk with shadow-kind. You bear steel forged in the moon courts. What curious contradictions." The Heartstone burned against Aurora's chest. Not painfully, but with urgent warmth. A warning? A recognition? "I seek answers." Aurora fought to keep her voice steady. The figure's presence pressed against her mind like deep water, threatening to drown rational thought. "All seekers speak thus. Few understand the weight of what they seek." The being circled them, and Aurora realized with a start that it moved without disturbing a single flower. "The Seer brings you here at the year's dying, when the Veil wears thin. She knows the old patterns. But do you?" Isolde had recovered her composure, though silver still leaked from the corners of her eyes like tears. "They need to understand what comes. The convergence—" "Silence." The word had physical weight, cutting off Isolde mid-sentence. The being focused on Aurora with an intensity that made her bones ache. "You wear the Heartstone of Dymas. Do you know what you carry, mortal? Do you understand what beats against your fragile human chest?" Aurora's hand moved instinctively to the pendant. Through her shirt, she could feel it pulsing in rhythm with her own heartbeat. "A gift. That's all I was told." The being laughed, and the sound was breaking glass and ringing bells and nothing human at all. "A gift. Yes. The Prince of Gluttony's gifts always carry such weight. Such terrible, beautiful weight." Nyx shifted, placing themselves partially between Aurora and the Fae being. "You speak in riddles. If you have knowledge to share, speak plainly." "Shadow-kind demands clarity? How your form has changed you, Aldric who was." The being's attention shifted to Nyx, and even the living shadow seemed to flinch. "You know better than most how gifts reshape their bearers. How power transforms. How hunger grows." The grove around them began to shift. The flowers' colours deepened, became more vivid, almost painful in their beauty. The silver trees' leaves rang like chimes despite the still air. Reality grew thick, syrup-slow, each moment stretching like taffy. "The Heartstone." Aurora forced the words past lips that felt numb. "What is it really?" The being smiled—or performed something that Aurora's human mind interpreted as a smile. The expression revealed too many teeth in too many rows. "A heart, of course. But whose heart, little mortal? And why does it beat in time with yours?"
total_cost0.20415

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.773
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1604
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"eagerly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"eagerly"
4"very"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1604
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count6
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"crystalline"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"dance"
count1
11
word"weight"
count4
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"chill"
2"warmth"
3"shimmered"
4"pulse"
5"quickened"
6"fractured"
7"stark"
8"crystalline"
9"silence"
10"dance"
11"weight"
12"intensity"
13"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
70.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1581
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1155
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
December3
Isolde14
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone4
Aurora24
Nyx8
Despite1
Fae-forged1
Fae6
Reality1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Heartstone"
2"Aurora"
3"Nyx"
4"Fae"
5"Reality"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Despite"
globalScore0.461
windowScore0.333
89.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed more real and less human simultaneously"
1"as if listening to something beyond normal hearing"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.53
wordCount1581
matches
0"Not the gentle heat of the standing stones, but the thick, honeyed warmth of a summer afternoon"
1"not the impossible sky above but something else entirely"
2"Not violently, but with deliberate precision, as if reality were fabric"
3"Not painfully, but with urgent warmth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean30.4
std15.88
cv0.522
sampleLengths
043
125
226
321
44
544
618
727
832
921
1040
1131
1212
1329
143
1569
168
1737
1869
1910
2024
2154
2236
2333
2435
2525
2623
2747
2833
2915
3065
3127
3219
3320
3431
3531
364
3768
3837
3916
4025
4152
4225
4346
4428
4533
4623
4742
4839
4915
87.54% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences99
matches
0"been transformed"
1"being circled"
2"being focused"
3"being laughed"
4"being smiled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was breaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences123
ratio0.073
matches
0"The space between the stones looked identical to the forest beyond—more twisted oaks, more shadows."
1"Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx—or what passed for glances when one party had no definable features beyond faintly glowing violet points where eyes should be."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that shouldn't bloom together—spring bluebells beside autumn asters, summer roses tangling with winter hellebores."
3"Aurora bent to touch a flower—something with petals like spun glass that chimed softly when her fingers brushed it."
4"Each breath carried tastes she couldn't identify—honey and metal, storm clouds and starlight."
5"Above them, the sky defied logic—simultaneously noon-bright and midnight-dark, with stars visible through sunshine."
6"\"Time has little meaning in the grove. I arrived yesterday. I arrived three centuries ago. Both statements hold equal truth.\" Isolde paused beside a pool of water that reflected not the impossible sky above but something else entirely—storm clouds gathering over a city Aurora didn't recognize."
7"It stood roughly human height but wrong—too many angles, or perhaps not enough."
8"The being smiled—or performed something that Aurora's human mind interpreted as a smile."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount841
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.036860879904875146
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011890606420927468
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean12.85
std7.11
cv0.553
sampleLengths
018
125
215
310
411
56
69
72
812
97
104
1132
1212
138
149
151
1614
179
184
192
2015
2115
225
2316
2425
2515
2620
2711
2812
2925
304
313
3218
3321
3412
3518
368
377
3817
3913
4011
4123
4214
4321
4410
4516
468
4720
4812
4914
63.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4146341463414634
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then she stepped forward."
1"Then she stumbled through, and"
2"Even the silver leaves ceased"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences91
matches
0"Her bare feet made no"
1"Their form solidified momentarily beside"
2"Her skin prickled with each"
3"They gleamed with an inner"
4"Her left foot stood on"
5"Her vision fractured, showing her"
6"She shed her jacket immediately,"
7"Their trunks were silver-smooth as"
8"Her edges blurred slightly, as"
9"They followed a path that"
10"She focused on the Heartstone's"
11"She addressed Isolde's back, needing"
12"They stopped, violet eyes flaring"
13"She turned, and her eyes"
14"It stood roughly human height"
15"Its skin appeared to be"
16"Its voice was the sound"
ratio0.187
42.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences91
matches
0"The ancient oaks towered above"
1"Aurora's breath misted in the"
2"Isolde's silver hair caught moonlight"
3"Her bare feet made no"
4"Their form solidified momentarily beside"
5"The air had a charged"
6"Her skin prickled with each"
7"Isolde gestured ahead"
8"A circle of standing stones"
9"They gleamed with an inner"
10"Aurora touched the nearest pillar"
11"Isolde stepped between two of"
12"The air shimmered like heat"
13"The space between the stones"
14"Nyx's form rippled with uncertainty."
15"Aurora kept her tone light,"
16"The Fae-forged metal was ice"
17"Isolde's laugh was wind chimes"
18"The half-Fae woman vanished through"
19"Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx—or"
ratio0.835
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The ancient oaks towered above them, their twisted branches forming archways that seemed too deliberate to be natural."
1"A circle of standing stones rose from the earth, each one a massive oak that had somehow been transformed into solid rock while retaining every groove of bark, …"
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that shouldn't bloom together—spring bluebells beside autumn asters, summer roses tangling with winter hell…"
3"The flowers parted before Isolde's bare feet, creating a walkway of soft moss that glowed faintly phosphorescent."
4"But the half-Fae woman had gone motionless, her head tilted as if listening to something beyond normal hearing."
5"When she spoke, her voice carried harmonics that raised goosebumps on Aurora's arms."
6"Not violently, but with deliberate precision, as if reality were fabric and someone had taken very sharp scissors to it."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora kept, but her hand found the hilt of the moonsilver blade at her hip"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She addressed (address)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.045
77.8021%