| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.386 | | leniency | 0.773 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1604 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "eagerly" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1604 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "charged" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "fractured" | | 7 | "stark" | | 8 | "crystalline" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "dance" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "intensity" | | 13 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1581 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 66 | | wordCount | 1155 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.08 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | December | 3 | | Isolde | 14 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Aurora | 24 | | Nyx | 8 | | Despite | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 6 | | Reality | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Reality" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Despite" |
| | globalScore | 0.461 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 89.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed more real and less human simultaneously" | | 1 | "as if listening to something beyond normal hearing" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.53 | | wordCount | 1581 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the gentle heat of the standing stones, but the thick, honeyed warmth of a summer afternoon" | | 1 | "not the impossible sky above but something else entirely" | | 2 | "Not violently, but with deliberate precision, as if reality were fabric" | | 3 | "Not painfully, but with urgent warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 30.4 | | std | 15.88 | | cv | 0.522 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 69 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 65 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 68 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 52 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 46 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 42 | | 48 | 39 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 87.54% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "been transformed" | | 1 | "being circled" | | 2 | "being focused" | | 3 | "being laughed" | | 4 | "being smiled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "The space between the stones looked identical to the forest beyond—more twisted oaks, more shadows." | | 1 | "Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx—or what passed for glances when one party had no definable features beyond faintly glowing violet points where eyes should be." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that shouldn't bloom together—spring bluebells beside autumn asters, summer roses tangling with winter hellebores." | | 3 | "Aurora bent to touch a flower—something with petals like spun glass that chimed softly when her fingers brushed it." | | 4 | "Each breath carried tastes she couldn't identify—honey and metal, storm clouds and starlight." | | 5 | "Above them, the sky defied logic—simultaneously noon-bright and midnight-dark, with stars visible through sunshine." | | 6 | "\"Time has little meaning in the grove. I arrived yesterday. I arrived three centuries ago. Both statements hold equal truth.\" Isolde paused beside a pool of water that reflected not the impossible sky above but something else entirely—storm clouds gathering over a city Aurora didn't recognize." | | 7 | "It stood roughly human height but wrong—too many angles, or perhaps not enough." | | 8 | "The being smiled—or performed something that Aurora's human mind interpreted as a smile." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 841 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.036860879904875146 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011890606420927468 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 12.85 | | std | 7.11 | | cv | 0.553 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 63.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4146341463414634 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she stepped forward." | | 1 | "Then she stumbled through, and" | | 2 | "Even the silver leaves ceased" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bare feet made no" | | 1 | "Their form solidified momentarily beside" | | 2 | "Her skin prickled with each" | | 3 | "They gleamed with an inner" | | 4 | "Her left foot stood on" | | 5 | "Her vision fractured, showing her" | | 6 | "She shed her jacket immediately," | | 7 | "Their trunks were silver-smooth as" | | 8 | "Her edges blurred slightly, as" | | 9 | "They followed a path that" | | 10 | "She focused on the Heartstone's" | | 11 | "She addressed Isolde's back, needing" | | 12 | "They stopped, violet eyes flaring" | | 13 | "She turned, and her eyes" | | 14 | "It stood roughly human height" | | 15 | "Its skin appeared to be" | | 16 | "Its voice was the sound" |
| | ratio | 0.187 | |
| 42.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks towered above" | | 1 | "Aurora's breath misted in the" | | 2 | "Isolde's silver hair caught moonlight" | | 3 | "Her bare feet made no" | | 4 | "Their form solidified momentarily beside" | | 5 | "The air had a charged" | | 6 | "Her skin prickled with each" | | 7 | "Isolde gestured ahead" | | 8 | "A circle of standing stones" | | 9 | "They gleamed with an inner" | | 10 | "Aurora touched the nearest pillar" | | 11 | "Isolde stepped between two of" | | 12 | "The air shimmered like heat" | | 13 | "The space between the stones" | | 14 | "Nyx's form rippled with uncertainty." | | 15 | "Aurora kept her tone light," | | 16 | "The Fae-forged metal was ice" | | 17 | "Isolde's laugh was wind chimes" | | 18 | "The half-Fae woman vanished through" | | 19 | "Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx—or" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 44.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks towered above them, their twisted branches forming archways that seemed too deliberate to be natural." | | 1 | "A circle of standing stones rose from the earth, each one a massive oak that had somehow been transformed into solid rock while retaining every groove of bark, …" | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that shouldn't bloom together—spring bluebells beside autumn asters, summer roses tangling with winter hell…" | | 3 | "The flowers parted before Isolde's bare feet, creating a walkway of soft moss that glowed faintly phosphorescent." | | 4 | "But the half-Fae woman had gone motionless, her head tilted as if listening to something beyond normal hearing." | | 5 | "When she spoke, her voice carried harmonics that raised goosebumps on Aurora's arms." | | 6 | "Not violently, but with deliberate precision, as if reality were fabric and someone had taken very sharp scissors to it." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora kept, but her hand found the hilt of the moonsilver blade at her hip" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She addressed (address)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.023 | | leniency | 0.045 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |