Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0HMG9JZAQ2ZP8VC027B38

Run Details

Duration:
2m 33s
Cost:
$0.001867
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy clunk. Rory pulled the door open, the familiar scent of turmeric and old paper wafting out into the Brick Lane evening. She expected Eva, having forgotten her keys again, or maybe the takeaway delivery she’d spaced on ordering. She did not expect Lucien Moreau. He filled the doorway, a stark silhouette against the hazy orange glow of the streetlights. His platinum hair was perfectly slicked back, not a strand out of place despite the damp London chill. A tailored charcoal suit hugged his frame, and his left hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane. Those mismatched eyes—one the warm gold of amber, the other a void of absolute black—fixed on her, and for a heartbeat, the entire noisy, vibrant street fell silent. Her own breath hitched. It had been eight months, three weeks, and—she hated that she knew this—four days. “Aurora,” he said. His voice was exactly as she remembered, a low baritone that felt like it vibrated through the floorboards and up into the soles of her feet. It was a voice that could negotiate a peace treaty or whisper a threat with the same effortless calm. She didn’t move. Didn’t speak. Her mind, usually so quick to assemble a defense, scrambled. The last time she’d seen him, the words had been sharp and final, a door slammed so hard the frame had splintered. Ptolemy the tabby wound himself around her ankles, purring loudly, utterly oblivious to the tectonic shift happening in his hallway. “You’re blocking the threshold, *chérie*,” Lucien remarked, a faint, almost imperceptible smile touching his lips. “It’s considered poor form, even in this part of the city.” The spell broke. Rory took a sharp step back, her shoulder brushing a precarious stack of books on a small console table. “What are you doing here, Lucien?” He didn’t wait for a more formal invitation. He stepped across the threshold, the tip of his cane making a soft tap on the worn floorboards. He closed the door behind him with a quiet, definitive click, engaging the first deadbolt himself. The sound echoed in the small, cluttered space. “I was in the neighborhood,” he said, his gaze sweeping the flat, taking in the chaos of Eva’s research. It lingered on a star chart pinned to the wall, a half-eaten container of curry on the coffee table, a sweater Rory recognized as her own draped over a chair. His inspection felt more intimate than it should have. “You’re never just ‘in the neighborhood’,” she countered, crossing her arms over her chest. The gesture felt defensive, childish. She dropped them. “This is Eva’s place. How did you even find me?” “You live above a pub, you work for Yu-Fei Cheung. You are not a difficult woman to find, Aurora Carter.” He said her full name like it was a secret he was choosing to share. He took another step further into the room, his presence making the walls feel closer. “I need to talk to you.” “We said everything there was to say.” Her voice was tighter than she intended. She could feel the old hurt, a cold stone in her stomach, and beneath it, a treacherous, flickering heat she thought she’d extinguished. He looked the same. Impeccable. Unruffled. It was infuriating. “Did we?” He stopped by the fireplace, where a few embers still glowed in the grate. He leaned his cane against the mantelpiece, a move she knew was calculated. It made him seem less formal, more approachable. A tactic. It was always a tactic with him. “I recall a great deal of shouting. Primarily from you. I recall some rather creative insults involving my parentage and my moral character. But a conversation? A resolution? Non. I do not believe we had that.” “There was nothing to resolve. You lied to me.” “I omitted.” “Semantics. Your favorite sport.” He turned to face her fully then, and the firelight caught the planes of his face, highlighting the sharp cut of his jaw. “I am a broker of information, Rory. It is what I do. I trade in omissions. You knew that. You walked into my world with your eyes open.” She flinched at the old nickname. He hadn’t used it since before. “I walked into what you *showed* me of your world. There’s a difference.” She could still feel the sting of it, the humiliation of realizing she was just another piece on his board, a useful asset with a pretty face. “You used me to get to Evan.” “I used the situation to neutralize a threat. A threat, I will remind you, that was camped on your doorstep and making your life a living hell. You wanted him gone. I made him gone. The method may have been… indirect.” “You let me think we were…” She trailed off, the words too raw, too revealing. She looked away, towards the window, where the neon sign of the curry house flickered. “It doesn’t matter. It’s done. He’s gone. I’m here. You’re there. That’s the way it is.” He was silent for a long moment. The only sounds were Ptolemy’s contented purring and the distant hum of traffic. “Is it?” he finally asked, his voice softer now. She risked a glance back at him. He was watching her with an intensity that made her skin prickle. He wasn’t looking at her like an asset. He was looking at her like… her. The woman who’d laughed with him in dark corners of supernatural bars, who’d argued philosophy with him at three in the morning, whose body he’d mapped with a reverence that had felt devastatingly real. “Why are you really here, Luc?” The shortened name slipped out, a relic of a time when things were easier. He took the final few steps that closed the distance between them. He didn’t touch her. He just stood there, close enough that she could smell the faint, clean scent of his cologne, something with sandalwood and bergamot. “Because I was a fool,” he said, the words simple and stark, devoid of his usual polished charm. “I treated you as part of the game. And you were never that.” Her heart was a frantic drum against her ribs. “You can’t just say that. You can’t just show up here after all this time and say that.” “Why not? It is the truth.” “It’s not that easy.” “I am not claiming it is easy.” One of his hands lifted, hesitated, then gently brushed a stray strand of hair from her cheek. His fingers were warm. The touch was electric, a jolt that went straight through her. She froze. “I am claiming it is true. I have replayed that last night in my head a thousand times. The look on your face when you realized. I would give a great deal to erase it.” She could feel the pull, the old, familiar gravity that had always existed between them. It would be so easy to lean in, to let the anger and the hurt dissolve into the heat of his touch. To forget. But she’d done that before. She took a shaky step back, breaking the contact. Her cheek burned where his fingers had been. “You don’t get to do that. You don’t get to walk back in and tidy up your mess. Some things stay broken.” His hand fell back to his side. The amber eye seemed to glow in the low light, but the black one was unreadable, depthless. “I am not here to tidy up. I am here because I have information. And because, despite your very justified desire to see me gutted with my own cane, I trust your mind more than anyone else’s in this godforsaken city.” The shift was so abrupt it left her dizzy. From raw confession to cold business in a breath. It was pure Lucien. A deflection, a retreat behind the armor of his profession. “Information,” she repeated flatly. “Evan,” he said, and the name hung in the air between them, ugly and cold. A different kind of chill went through her. “What about him?” “He is asking questions. In places he should not know about, talking to people he should not be able to find. He is looking for you, Rory. And he is not looking to apologize.” The fear was instant, a cold fist closing around her throat. She had fought so hard for this sliver of peace, for this cramped flat above a curry house, for the mindless rhythm of delivery runs and late-night talks with Eva. The thought of him, of his rage, finding its way back to her… She wrapped her arms around herself again, this time against a genuine chill. Lucien watched her, his expression grim. “I told you I made him gone. I see now I did not make him gone enough. For that, I am sorry. It is a failure I intend to rectify.” “How?” The word was a whisper. “That,” he said, picking up his cane from the mantel with a fluid motion, “is what I need to talk to you about. But not here. This place… it has no wards. It is not safe. You will come with me.” It wasn’t a question. It was a statement. The fixer was back, issuing instructions. The part of her that was still furious, that remembered the betrayal, wanted to refuse on principle. To slam the door in his face all over again. But the larger part, the part that had seen the things Evan was capable of, that knew the world was far stranger and more dangerous than most people ever dreamed, knew he was right. She looked at him, this half-demon in a charcoal suit who had broken her heart and was now offering to protect her from the monster she’d left behind. The irony was so bitter she could taste it. “Give me five minutes,” she said, her voice hollow. “I need to get my coat.”
created_at"2026-02-19T03:54:21.075Z" 2/19/2026, 3:54:21 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he finally asked [finally]"
1"she repeated flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.415
leniency0.829
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.098
85.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1673
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"utterly"
2"really"
3"gently"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1673
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"stark"
count2
2
word"chill"
count3
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"effortless"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count2
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"treacherous"
count1
10
word"calculated"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"charm"
count1
15
word"electric"
count1
16
word"unreadable"
count1
17
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stark"
2"chill"
3"vibrated"
4"whisper"
5"effortless"
6"echoed"
7"could feel"
8"stomach"
9"treacherous"
10"calculated"
11"resolve"
12"flickered"
13"intensity"
14"charm"
15"electric"
16"unreadable"
17"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1665
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
1"showed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1157
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Eva3
Lucien4
Moreau1
London1
Rory3
Ptolemy2
Evan1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like it vibrated through the floor"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1665
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean35.43
std22.74
cv0.642
sampleLengths
046
16
280
318
448
537
620
726
828
950
1058
1132
1256
1346
1482
159
162
174
1851
1959
2041
2146
2229
2368
2420
2569
2627
276
284
2976
3039
315
3239
3365
3432
354
3615
3711
3834
3967
4036
416
4241
4314
4461
4537
4615
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
56.63% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was choosing"
1"was watching"
2"wasn’t looking"
3"was looking"
96.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences123
ratio0.016
matches
0"Those mismatched eyes—one the warm gold of amber, the other a void of absolute black—fixed on her, and for a heartbeat, the entire noisy, vibrant street fell silent."
1"It had been eight months, three weeks, and—she hated that she knew this—four days."
93.67% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1164
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"entire noisy, vibrant street"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.040378006872852236
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010309278350515464
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean13.54
std10.03
cv0.741
sampleLengths
09
120
217
36
415
518
619
728
84
914
103
1126
1219
133
142
1510
1622
1720
1815
1911
203
2119
226
238
2418
2516
268
2719
2830
299
3014
315
323
3310
3435
3515
366
3714
3823
394
401
411
423
4316
4413
458
462
477
4836
499
42.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2764227642276423
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount61
totalSentences92
matches
0"She expected Eva, having forgotten"
1"She did not expect Lucien"
2"He filled the doorway, a"
3"His platinum hair was perfectly"
4"Her own breath hitched."
5"It had been eight months,"
6"His voice was exactly as"
7"It was a voice that"
8"She didn’t move."
9"Her mind, usually so quick"
10"He didn’t wait for a"
11"He stepped across the threshold,"
12"He closed the door behind"
13"he said, his gaze sweeping"
14"It lingered on a star"
15"His inspection felt more intimate"
16"she countered, crossing her arms"
17"She dropped them."
18"He said her full name"
19"He took another step further"
ratio0.663
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences92
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"She expected Eva, having forgotten"
3"She did not expect Lucien"
4"He filled the doorway, a"
5"His platinum hair was perfectly"
6"A tailored charcoal suit hugged"
7"Those mismatched eyes—one the warm"
8"Her own breath hitched."
9"It had been eight months,"
10"His voice was exactly as"
11"It was a voice that"
12"She didn’t move."
13"Her mind, usually so quick"
14"The last time she’d seen"
15"Ptolemy the tabby wound himself"
16"Lucien remarked, a faint, almost"
17"The spell broke."
18"Rory took a sharp step"
19"He didn’t wait for a"
ratio0.946
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"To slam the door in"
ratio0.011
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"It was a voice that could negotiate a peace treaty or whisper a threat with the same effortless calm."
1"Ptolemy the tabby wound himself around her ankles, purring loudly, utterly oblivious to the tectonic shift happening in his hallway."
2"He was watching her with an intensity that made her skin prickle."
3"The woman who’d laughed with him in dark corners of supernatural bars, who’d argued philosophy with him at three in the morning, whose body he’d mapped with a r…"
4"But the larger part, the part that had seen the things Evan was capable of, that knew the world was far stranger and more dangerous than most people ever dreame…"
5"She looked at him, this half-demon in a charcoal suit who had broken her heart and was now offering to protect her from the monster she’d left behind."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She trailed, the words too raw, too revealing"
1"he finally asked, his voice softer now"
2"he said, and the name hung in the air between them, ugly and cold"
3"she said, her voice hollow"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated flatly (repeat)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.439
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.049
76.5793%