| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "intensely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsms | 46 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | | | 34 | | | 35 | | | 36 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "quickened" | | 2 | "whimsical" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "otherworldly" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "tangible" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "intricate" | | 14 | "dance" | | 15 | "familiar" | | 16 | "cascading" | | 17 | "intensity" | | 18 | "unraveling" | | 19 | "tapestry" | | 20 | "flicker" | | 21 | "resonated" | | 22 | "anticipation" | | 23 | "symphony" | | 24 | "flickered" | | 25 | "gleaming" | | 26 | "echoes" | | 27 | "depths" | | 28 | "unspoken" | | 29 | "determined" | | 30 | "navigate" | | 31 | "tension" | | 32 | "echo" | | 33 | "silence" | | 34 | "resonance" | | 35 | "dancing" | | 36 | "intrigue" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 99.75% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "felt the chill" | | 1 | "d with anticipation" |
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| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1091 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.54% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 984 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Seer | 1 | | Shadow | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Earth" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Shadow" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.585 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something akin to stepping into a dream half-re" | | 1 | "seemed alive with whispers, stories fluttering at the edge of comprehension" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.917 | | wordCount | 1091 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 47.43 | | std | 20.6 | | cv | 0.434 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 89 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 76 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 75 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.167 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground underfoot, their blooms ablaze with hues that defied seasonal expectation — reds deeper than autumnal fire, blues brighter than any summer sky." | | 1 | "Nyx flowed beside her, the Shadow’s form shifting, trickling into cracks and shadows — a flicker of night in eternal daylight." | | 2 | "The liquid gleamed under the amber sky; its surface undisturbed save for reflections of half-formed shapes trapped between worlds." | | 3 | "She gasped as visions flickered to life — the image of a city, its spires gleaming under an alien sky, calling forth echoes of grandeur and decay." | | 4 | "Yet, she felt something stir within her, a calling deep as the ocean's depths, stirring realms she knew inside, places unvisited — the pull of decision made, journey begun." | | 5 | "The Heartstone glowed brighter, calling forth the passage to Dymas — a portal untouched by time's ravages." | | 6 | "A peculiar sound rose from the depths — the chattering voices of creatures unseen, murmuring secrets to leaves." | | 7 | "Yet, unease prickled at the edge of recognition — things moved in shadows, unseen but intensely present." | | 8 | "Rory tried not to shiver, despite the blade's chill — a warning deeper than embers." | | 9 | "Rory squared her shoulders, gripping the dagger's hilt, emboldened by Isolde's presence, harrowed by the path awaiting — shadowed yet promising." | | 10 | "As she hovered at the doorway between worlds, the grove pulsed irresistibly, its secrets unfurling around her like infinite petals — welcomed, encircled." | | 11 | "Together, they ventured onto pathways forged deep within aspirations — brimming amongst stars, dancing shadows upon the breath of ages, calling forth whispers touched by intrigue." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 977 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "trusting against better judgment." |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.02456499488229273 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01023541453428864 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 89.24% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 15.15 | | std | 5.65 | | cv | 0.373 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 78.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4722222222222222 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Unexpectedly, Isolde emerged, as if" | | 1 | "All mingled with sensory details" | | 2 | "Suddenly, Rory halted." | | 3 | "Then, all fell still around" |
| | ratio | 0.061 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "They advanced deeper, each step" | | 1 | "She glanced upward, her eyes" | | 2 | "Her ethereal, ageless form was" | | 3 | "She imagined them as remnants" | | 4 | "They approached a circle of" | | 5 | "She gasped as visions flickered" | | 6 | "she said, her eyes capturing" | | 7 | "They wandered deeper, drawn toward" | | 8 | "She scanned their surroundings, aware" | | 9 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 10 | "She held firm, nostalgia whispering" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 58.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's pulse quickened as she" | | 1 | "The immediate sensation was disorienting" | | 2 | "Rory swayed, caught in the" | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground underfoot," | | 4 | "Each flower seemed alive with" | | 5 | "Nyx hovered behind, shifting between" | | 6 | "The Shade's presence carried an" | | 7 | "Nyx's eyes, faintly glowing violet," | | 8 | "Rory's gaze fell to her" | | 9 | "The crimson gem caught the" | | 10 | "Rory murmured, her voice barely" | | 11 | "Nyx replied, their voice a" | | 12 | "They advanced deeper, each step" | | 13 | "Reality seemed to waver, the" | | 14 | "Rory felt the chill of" | | 15 | "She glanced upward, her eyes" | | 16 | "Each branch twisted into an" | | 17 | "Her ethereal, ageless form was" | | 18 | "Isolde's voice sang, her riddles" | | 19 | "Rory offered, their purpose simple" |
| | ratio | 0.803 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, she felt something stir" | | 1 | "Yet, unease prickled at the" | | 2 | "To the horizon where mystery" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground underfoot, their blooms ablaze with hues that defied seasonal expectation — reds deeper than autumnal fire, blues brighter than …" | | 1 | "She glanced upward, her eyes tracing the outline of trees merging with the amber glow that defied Earth's skies." | | 2 | "Each branch twisted into an intricate dance, captivating and strange, creating shapes that felt achingly familiar yet unknown." | | 3 | "The air was thick with the smell of ancient soil and rich fragrances that called forth memories long buried." | | 4 | "Nyx flowed beside her, the Shadow’s form shifting, trickling into cracks and shadows — a flicker of night in eternal daylight." | | 5 | "She gasped as visions flickered to life — the image of a city, its spires gleaming under an alien sky, calling forth echoes of grandeur and decay." | | 6 | "Yet, she felt something stir within her, a calling deep as the ocean's depths, stirring realms she knew inside, places unvisited — the pull of decision made, jo…" | | 7 | "Rory squared her shoulders, gripping the dagger's hilt, emboldened by Isolde's presence, harrowed by the path awaiting — shadowed yet promising." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx replied, their voice a whisper upon the wind" | | 1 | "Isolde's voice sang, her riddles shimmering with hidden truths" | | 2 | "Rory offered, their purpose simple yet submerged in larger designs" | | 3 | "Isolde noted, a trace of laughter in her tone, though not unkind" | | 4 | "they whispered, their voice a caution upon the air" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde's voice sang (sing)" | | 2 | "Isolde noted (note)" | | 3 | "Rory agreed (agree)" | | 4 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |