Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0J2DNV2626S08K411JEDX

Run Details

Model:
o4 Mini
Duration:
22.4s
Cost:
$0.013093
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Lucien’s ivory-handled cane clicked on the scuffed floorboards the moment the door swung inward. Rory’s breath caught. He stepped into the cramped living room above Silas’s bar, charcoal suit brushing against a leaning pile of delivery boxes. One amber eye studied the clutter, the other as dark as spilled ink. Behind him, the door thudded shut, the lock sliding home. Rory’s hand hovered over the panic alarm tucked under the sofa cushion. Her pulse hammered against the crescent-shaped scar at her wrist. She rose, shoulders square, voice hard. What are you doing here A slow smile quirked Lucien’s lips. He let the cane fall to the floor. The hidden blade traced a faint silver gleam as it slid free of its sheath. He tucked it back without a word. I came to see you Rory’s stomach twisted. Every rational nerve screamed at her to slam the door, call Eva, run. Instead she stood her ground. The curry aroma drifted up from the bar two floors down. Steam hissed through the vents, a reminder of every late shift she’d endured before their falling out. You’d better have a good reason Lucien folded his hands behind his back. His platinum hair caught a stray beam from the streetlamp outside. His heterochromatic gaze held her. He’d always exuded calm control, even when he fractured her trust. I don’t do surprises She crossed her arms, boots scuffing the threadbare rug. The scratch of denim sounded louder than normal. Her mind replayed his departure: the half-finished kiss in the moonlight, the whispered promise he’d return, and then silence. No explanation. No farewell. Just emptiness. You left A silence bloomed between them. Lucien’s gaze never wavered. Circumstances He spoke as if reciting a case file. Three simple letters stacked like evidence against him. Circumstances don’t excuse you She advanced, voice low. Each footfall felt like a confession. Each spark of anger blistered her throat. His amber eye flicked to her scar, then away. You have no right He straightened. His tailored jacket whispered against the chipped wood of the coffee table. He ran a fingertip over the cane’s ivory handle. I have every right Rory lunged. Her fist brushed his chest, tension crackling in the air. He didn’t flinch. Instead he closed the distance, one deliberate step, and caught her wrist. Pain bloomed white-hot under her skin. She winced at the pressure. If you wanted me to trust you He tilted his head, amber and black eyes juxtaposed like two worlds colliding. You should have stayed Rory jerked free, backing into a stack of crates. A pile of old law textbooks teetered and fell. Pages spiralled to the floor. The letters printed in dusty black seemed to mock her: adjudication, tort, jurisdiction. Every reminder that she’d tried to outrun her past, only to have it chase her here. You’re still the same Lucien stepped around the toppled books. His posture remained immaculate, as if the mess belonged to someone else. And you never learn He lifted a hand, fingers ghosting over a faded photograph pinned above the mantel. Her father’s solemn face smiled back. She’d hidden it after leaving Wales. He traced the edge and set it back. Why are you here now Her voice cracked. He finally met her blue eyes, bright and unyielding. I need your help The words fell like stones. Rory’s chest tightened. She shook her head. Not after everything He inhaled, the scent of lavender soap mingling with the colder note of his cologne. His lips thinned. I’m in danger She scoffed, the sound brittle. Danger had a dull ache now. She’d faced angry exes, late-night deliveries in rough neighbourhoods, occult rumours in Camden. Danger was her job. From a demon he can’t control Her breath stuttered. Lucien’s jaw clenched. The idea of his father’s realm had hung between them like a guillotine blade. You knew His words landed like thunder. He didn’t ask. He stated. I knew enough Rory drew in a ragged breath. She stared at him, hands trembling. He’d pulled her in once. He’d shattered her trust. Why should she fall for it again? He pivoted to face her fully. The cane slid into his grip. His amber eye glowed. Will you help me His voice softened, the question laced with desperation. A crack in his armour. Rory felt the old pull, the magnetic force that had drawn her nights ago when they’d shared secrets beneath city lights. She stepped back, wary. I’m not your saviour His cane thumped on the floor. He leaned on it as if the weight kept him tethered to this world. No. But I was yours Silence, heavy as a tomb lid. Rory’s jaw clenched. She seemed to shrink, doubt flickering across her features. The books at her feet rustled as if impatient for her answer. Then why show up unannounced The question tasted bitter. Lucien lifted his chin. Because you deserve the truth Rory’s own hand went to her scar. A gesture born of habit. Memories of his fingertips grazing it flickered behind her eyes. Her thumb brushed the crescent mark. Truth A sudden crash from the bar below rattled the floorboards. Metal clanged. A roar, low and hungry, vibrated through the ceiling. Rory froze. Blast from Silas’s kitchen She strode to the window, curtains parting. Steam billowed from a shattered exhaust fan. Flames licked the darkened alley. Something screeched, half-human, half something else. Heat pushed up through the floorboards. Lucien joined her. Heterochromatic eyes ablaze. What now He murmured. No fear echoed in his tone. Only readiness. Building breached Rory’s voice snapped. She reached for her phone, fingers shaking. Lucien’s hand covered hers. Stay here He sounded clinical, but she saw the corner of his mouth curl. Older than she remembered. Survived too much. We’re going down He pulled her away from the window. Rage ignited in her chest. Hurt, fear, longing all tangled into a cruel knot. Fine Her one-word reply rang cold. She flicked off the light and grabbed her jacket from the back of the door. Her boots thudded as she bent to scoop up the fallen books. Lucien stowed the cane in his palm. Together He said nothing. He simply held the door open. Rory hesitated. The heat rose beneath her skin. She stepped into the night, into the fight that had found them both. Sirens wailed in the distance. Lucien closed the door with a soft click, blade poised. Rory’s pulse throbbed against her wrist. Beside him, she felt the weight of every unspoken word and every promise broken, shifting into something fierce and new. They descended the narrow staircase into the chaos, side by side, the past trailing behind them like smoke.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"wavered"
count1
7
word"footfall"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count2
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"jaw clenched"
count2
11
word"shattered"
count2
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"throbbed"
count1
18
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"traced"
2"stomach"
3"reminder"
4"fractured"
5"silence"
6"wavered"
7"footfall"
8"flicked"
9"tension"
10"jaw clenched"
11"shattered"
12"magnetic"
13"weight"
14"flickered"
15"vibrated"
16"echoed"
17"throbbed"
18"unspoken"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count2
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences135
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1117
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1117
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Silas2
Lucien11
Rory14
Eva1
Wales1
Camden1
Silence1
You6
persons
0"Silas"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silence"
5"You"
places
0"Wales"
1"Camden"
globalScore0.873
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reciting a case file"
1"felt like a confession"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1117
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean14.89
std13.35
cv0.897
sampleLengths
017
143
228
35
436
55
649
76
834
94
1042
112
129
131
1416
154
1626
174
1823
194
2027
2111
227
2313
244
2552
264
2718
284
2934
305
3112
324
3312
343
3518
363
3728
386
3920
402
4110
423
4328
4416
454
4638
474
4820
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs223
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences135
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1124
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white-hot under her"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.02491103202846975
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005338078291814947
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean8.27
std4.53
cv0.548
sampleLengths
014
13
220
313
410
512
610
76
811
98
1015
117
128
1313
145
1511
1617
1713
1811
195
2011
2113
228
2319
242
252
262
277
284
299
308
318
326
337
349
356
3612
379
386
3910
403
4112
426
435
4420
4513
469
475
4813
4916
62.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners54
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences126
matches
0"Instead she stood her ground."
1"Instead he closed the distance,"
2"Then why show up unannounced"
ratio0.024
51.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences126
matches
0"He stepped into the cramped"
1"Her pulse hammered against the"
2"She rose, shoulders square, voice"
3"He let the cane fall"
4"He tucked it back without"
5"I came to see you"
6"You’d better have a good"
7"His platinum hair caught a"
8"His heterochromatic gaze held her."
9"He’d always exuded calm control,"
10"I don’t do surprises She"
11"Her mind replayed his departure:"
12"You left A silence bloomed"
13"His amber eye flicked to"
14"You have no right He"
15"His tailored jacket whispered against"
16"He ran a fingertip over"
17"I have every right Rory"
18"Her fist brushed his chest,"
19"He didn’t flinch."
ratio0.421
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences126
matches
0"Lucien’s ivory-handled cane clicked on"
1"Rory’s breath caught."
2"He stepped into the cramped"
3"Rory’s hand hovered over the"
4"Her pulse hammered against the"
5"She rose, shoulders square, voice"
6"He let the cane fall"
7"The hidden blade traced a"
8"He tucked it back without"
9"I came to see you"
10"Every rational nerve screamed at"
11"The curry aroma drifted up"
12"Steam hissed through the vents,"
13"You’d better have a good"
14"His platinum hair caught a"
15"His heterochromatic gaze held her."
16"He’d always exuded calm control,"
17"I don’t do surprises She"
18"The scratch of denim sounded"
19"Her mind replayed his departure:"
ratio0.778
79.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences126
matches
0"If you wanted me to"
1"Because you deserve the truth"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.6453%