Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0J8DN89Q31DC27NPY4YNT

Run Details

Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.002989
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Lucien’s cane could tap a third time. Aurora stood there, her black hair slightly damp, her bright blue eyes sharp and unreadable. She leaned against the frame, arms crossed, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist catching the faint light from the hallway. Her lips parted, but no greeting came out. He raised an eyebrow, the amber eye catching the dim light, while the black one seemed to absorb it entirely. "Good evening," he said, his French accent rolling smoothly off his tongue. "May I come in?" Her jaw tightened. "Do I have a choice?" "Do you ever?" Her laugh was dry, humorless, as she stepped aside. He moved past her, the scent of his cologne—something dark and expensive—lingering in the narrow hallway. His polished shoes clicked against the wooden floor, and she shut the door behind him, the sound of the deadbolts sliding into place louder than necessary. Her flat was small, cluttered with books and papers that spilled from every surface. A tabby cat—Ptolemy—watched from the windowsill, tail flicking as Lucien surveyed the room with a practiced eye. He stopped near the worn sofa, his gloved hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane. "This isn’t a social call," she said, standing several feet away, arms still crossed. "No," he agreed. "It never is." "So?" He turned to face her fully, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers. "You’ve been avoiding me." "Have I?" "Don’t play coy, Aurora. It doesn’t suit you." She bristled at the use of her full name. "What do you want, Lucien?" "Answers." "To what?" He stepped closer, and she held her ground, though her pulse quickened. "Why you left." "I didn’t leave. I moved on." "Semantics." "What do you want me to say?" "The truth." Her laugh was sharp, brittle. "You of all people asking for honesty?" "I’ve always been honest with you." "Selectively." He tilted his head, considering her. "And that’s enough to make you run?" "I didn’t run." "Then what do you call this?" He gestured to the cramped flat, the stacks of papers, the cat lounging indifferently. "Survival." "Survival?" "Yes. Something you wouldn’t understand." "Try me." She stepped closer, her voice low. "I won’t be another pawn in your games, Lucien. I won’t play the part of the naïve girl who thinks she can change you." "I never asked you to change me." "You didn’t have to." He studied her, the faintest hint of a smile tugging at his lips. "You think I’m a monster." "I think you’re dangerous." "Same thing." "Not always." His smile widened, but it didn’t reach his eyes. "Tell me something, Aurora. Do you still dream about me?" Her breath hitched, and she turned away, crossing to the small kitchenette. She grabbed a glass and filled it with water, her hands steady despite the storm brewing inside her. "Don’t rewrite history," she said, her back to him. "You were the one who walked away." "Because you were afraid." "Afraid?" She turned sharply, water sloshing over the rim of the glass. "I wasn’t afraid, Lucien. I was smart. I knew what you were capable of." "And yet, here I am." "Here you are," she echoed, setting the glass down with a little too much force. "What do you want?" "I told you. Answers." "I don’t owe you anything." "Don’t you?" She stared at him, the air between them crackling with tension. Ptolemy jumped down from the windowsill and padded over, rubbing against Lucien’s leg. He crouched down, scratching behind the cat’s ears, his gloved fingers moving with practiced ease. "You always did have a soft spot for strays," she said, bitterness lacing her words. He looked up, his amber eye gleaming. "Strays have a way of finding me." "Lucky them." "I’m not here to fight with you," he said, rising to his full height. "Then why are you here?" "Because something’s coming." Her brow furrowed. "What do you mean?" "Something dangerous. And I need your help." "My help?" "Yes." She laughed, though it held no humor. "You’ve got the wrong person." "I don’t think I do." "I’m not part of that world anymore." "You never really leave it." "I’m not like you." "No," he agreed. "You’re better." She froze, her breath catching in her throat. "Don’t." "Don’t what?" "Don’t say things you don’t mean." "I mean it." "Bullshit." He stepped closer, and this time, she didn’t move. His gloved hand cupped her cheek, the leather cool against her skin. She stiffened, but didn’t pull away. "You’ve always had a way of bringing out the best in me," he murmured. "That’s not a compliment." "Isn’t it?" She shook her head, her voice barely above a whisper. "I can’t do this again." "Then don’t." His lips brushed hers, and for a moment, she let herself fall into it. The kiss was soft, tentative, as if testing the waters. But the moment she responded, he pulled back, his eyes dark with something she couldn’t name. "Tell me to leave," he said, his voice low. "I should." "But you won’t." She swallowed hard, her heart pounding. "Lucien—" The knock at the door shattered the moment, sharp and insistent. They both froze, their eyes darting to the source of the sound. "Expecting someone?" he asked, his tone light, but his eyes sharp. She shook her head, moving to the door. Before she could reach it, he caught her wrist, his grip firm but not painful. "Wait." She glanced back at him, her brow furrowed. "What?" "Let me." He stepped in front of her, his cane held loosely at his side. She opened her mouth to protest but thought better of it. The knock came again, louder this time. Lucien opened the door, revealing a young man in a delivery uniform, holding a bag that smelled faintly of soy sauce and noodles. "Delivery for Aurora Carter?" She stepped forward, her cheeks flushing. "That’s me." The man handed her the bag, along with a receipt to sign. She scribbled her name and handed it back, her heart still racing. "Enjoy," he said, before turning and disappearing down the stairs. She shut the door, the bag dangling from her fingers, and turned to find Lucien watching her, his expression unreadable. "Hungry?" he asked. She blinked, caught off guard. "I didn’t order this." "Then who did?" She stared at the bag, her unease growing. "I don’t know." He stepped closer, his voice low. "Maybe you should check." She hesitated, then opened the bag, pulling out the carton of noodles. Beneath it was a small envelope, her name scrawled across the front in unfamiliar handwriting. Her fingers trembled as she opened it, pulling out a single photograph. Her breath caught in her throat as she stared at the image—a grainy snapshot of her leaving her flat, taken from across the street. On the back, written in bold letters, was a single word: *Run.* "Lucien—" He was already at the window, peering down into the street below. "Stay here." "Wait!" But he was already out the door, his cane clicking against the stairs as he disappeared from view. She stood there, the photograph clutched in her hand, the unease in her stomach twisting into something sharper. Run? From what? And why was Lucien already chasing it? She grabbed her coat and followed him out the door, the photograph still burning in her grasp.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences94
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.319
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.021
79.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"really"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"unreadable"
count2
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"quickened"
count1
4
word"pawn"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"practiced ease"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"furrowed"
count2
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"pounding"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"eyebrow"
2"pulse"
3"quickened"
4"pawn"
5"echoed"
6"tension"
7"practiced ease"
8"gleaming"
9"furrowed"
10"whisper"
11"pounding"
12"shattered"
13"racing"
14"trembled"
15"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1230
ratio0.001
matches
0"Run."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount860
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien6
French1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if testing the waters"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1230
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs109
mean11.28
std11.55
cv1.023
sampleLengths
056
136
28
33
451
548
614
76
81
916
102
118
1214
131
142
1515
166
171
187
192
2012
216
221
2313
243
2520
261
271
285
292
3030
317
324
3318
344
352
362
3719
3830
3916
404
4126
425
4319
444
455
462
4739
4815
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs169
matches(empty)
88.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences159
ratio0.019
matches
0"He moved past her, the scent of his cologne—something dark and expensive—lingering in the narrow hallway."
1"A tabby cat—Ptolemy—watched from the windowsill, tail flicking as Lucien surveyed the room with a practiced eye."
2"Her breath caught in her throat as she stared at the image—a grainy snapshot of her leaving her flat, taken from across the street."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount866
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03002309468822171
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010392609699769052
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean7.74
std5.77
cv0.746
sampleLengths
012
115
221
38
420
512
64
73
85
93
109
1116
1226
1314
1417
1517
1614
173
183
191
2012
214
222
238
249
255
261
272
2812
293
306
311
327
332
345
357
366
371
386
397
403
4120
421
431
445
452
466
4724
487
494
56.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3710691823899371
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners59
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences74
matches
0"She leaned against the frame,"
1"Her lips parted, but no"
2"He raised an eyebrow, the"
3"he said, his French accent"
4"Her jaw tightened."
5"Her laugh was dry, humorless,"
6"He moved past her, the"
7"His polished shoes clicked against"
8"Her flat was small, cluttered"
9"He stopped near the worn"
10"she said, standing several feet"
11"He turned to face her"
12"She bristled at the use"
13"He stepped closer, and she"
14"Her laugh was sharp, brittle."
15"He tilted his head, considering"
16"He gestured to the cramped"
17"She stepped closer, her voice"
18"He studied her, the faintest"
19"His smile widened, but it"
ratio0.797
0.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences74
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Aurora stood there, her black"
2"She leaned against the frame,"
3"Her lips parted, but no"
4"He raised an eyebrow, the"
5"he said, his French accent"
6"Her jaw tightened."
7"Her laugh was dry, humorless,"
8"He moved past her, the"
9"His polished shoes clicked against"
10"Her flat was small, cluttered"
11"A tabby cat—Ptolemy—watched from the"
12"He stopped near the worn"
13"she said, standing several feet"
14"He turned to face her"
15"She bristled at the use"
16"He stepped closer, and she"
17"Her laugh was sharp, brittle."
18"He tilted his head, considering"
19"He gestured to the cramped"
ratio0.919
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Before she could reach it,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien opened the door, revealing a young man in a delivery uniform, holding a bag that smelled faintly of soy sauce and noodles."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he said, his French accent rolling smoothly off his tongue"
1"He gestured, the stacks of papers, the cat lounging indifferently"
2"She turned sharply, water sloshing over the rim of the glass"
3"she said, bitterness lacing her words"
4"he said, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences94
tagDensity0.128
leniency0.255
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.064
80.4943%