Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0JAJ99KQPBY8R8C5WTADA

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Duration:
57.9s
Cost:
$0.152700

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks of Richmond Park stood like sentinels in the pre-dawn darkness, their branches reaching toward a sky that hadn't yet decided whether to remain night or surrender to morning. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter against the October chill, her breath misting in the air as she followed the narrow deer path deeper into the woods. Behind her, Nyx moved without sound, their form flickering between substance and shadow with each shift of moonlight through the canopy. "You certain about this?" Aurora's voice cut through the stillness. The Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt pulsed with unusual warmth against her skin. "Certainty is a luxury we cannot afford." Nyx's whispered reply seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. "The winter solstice approaches. If Isolde has answers about your connection to Dymas, we need them before—" "Before the Veil weakens. I know." Aurora ducked beneath a low-hanging branch, her fingers brushing against bark that felt too smooth, too warm for the season. "Doesn't mean I have to like walking into Fae territory in the middle of the night." The trees grew denser as they pressed forward, their trunks twisting into impossible spirals that made Aurora's eyes water if she stared too long. The familiar sounds of the park—distant traffic, the occasional fox cry—faded to nothing. Even the wind had stilled, leaving only their footsteps and the thundering of her own heartbeat. "There." Nyx's form solidified beside her, one shadowy arm extending toward a cluster of oaks that formed a rough circle. Between the trees, the air shimmered like heat waves rising from summer pavement, despite the cold. Aurora approached the boundary slowly. The pendant's warmth intensified, spreading across her chest in waves. As she drew closer, she could make out shapes within the shimmer—standing stones that hadn't been there moments before, each carved from wood so ancient it had turned to something between bark and stone. "The threshold." She reached toward the barrier, then hesitated. "Any advice for dealing with half-Fae seers who speak in riddles?" "Listen to what she doesn't say." Nyx's violet eyes flickered with something that might have been amusement. "And whatever you do, don't accept any food or drink." "Brilliant. Cryptic advice for dealing with cryptic beings." Aurora took a breath and stepped through. The world tilted. Colors bled and shifted, too vivid and wrong. The grey pre-dawn light transformed into something golden and green, as if she'd stepped from October into the heart of spring. The air tasted of honey and copper, sweet and metallic on her tongue. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells growing beside summer roses, autumn crocuses tangled with spring violets. Nyx materialized beside her, their shadowy form more solid here, edges more defined. "The Grove exists between. Neither fully Earth nor Fae." Aurora's boot sank into moss that felt like silk beneath her feet. Each step forward took effort, as if the very ground was deciding whether to accept her presence. The standing stones formed a spiral path leading deeper into the Grove, their surfaces covered in symbols that shifted and writhed when she wasn't looking directly at them. "Why can I read these?" The words tumbled out before she could stop them. The symbols resolved into meaning as she watched—warnings, welcomes, and prophecies all tangled together in a script she'd never seen but somehow understood. "Perhaps because you were meant to." The voice drifted from ahead, melodious and strange. "Or perhaps because the Grove recognizes what you carry." Isolde stood at the spiral's center, and Aurora's breath caught. The half-Fae woman seemed to exist in multiple moments at once—young and ancient, solid and translucent, beautiful and terrible. Her silver hair moved in a breeze Aurora couldn't feel, and her lavender eyes held depths that threatened to drown anyone foolish enough to stare too long. "The Shadow brings the Marked One at last." Isolde's bare feet left no impression on the flower-strewn ground as she approached. "Tell me, child of two bloods, do you know what you are?" "Human last I checked." Aurora's hand moved instinctively to where the pendant lay hidden. "Though given recent events, I'm starting to have doubts." "Doubt is wisdom's beginning." Isolde circled them slowly, her movements liquid and strange. "You wear Dymas' heartstone, yet you breathe. You walk the mortal realm, yet Hel's princes know your name. What does that make you, Rory Carter?" The use of her nickname sent ice down Aurora's spine. "Someone in the wrong place at the wrong time?" "There are no wrong places." Isolde's laugh sounded like wind chimes and breaking glass. "Only unexpected doors. The blood speaks, even when the mind denies. Your mother's mother's mother knew the taste of pomegranate wine and dancing beneath foreign stars." "You're saying I have Fae blood?" The Grove spun around her, flowers blooming and dying in accelerated cycles. "That's impossible. My family's Welsh and Irish, boring as toast." "The Fae touch leaves no records in your world's books." Isolde gestured to the standing stones, and they pulsed with pale light. "But the Grove remembers. Feel how it welcomes you home." Aurora did feel it—a pull in her chest, separate from the pendant's warmth. The flowers turned their faces toward her like she was the sun. The very air seemed to sing against her skin. It terrified her. "I don't want this." The words came out raw. "Whatever this is, whatever you think I am—" "Want and need rarely walk the same path." Isolde produced something from the folds of her gown—a blade that caught light that didn't exist, its surface rippling like mercury. "Dymas calls to you because gluttony recognizes hunger. But hunger for what, child? Power? Knowledge? Love?" "Answers." Aurora met those impossible eyes. "Starting with why demons from Hel's realm of gluttony keep finding me." "They don't find you." Isolde pressed the blade into Aurora's hands. The metal burned cold against her palm, and she nearly dropped it. "You call to them, as honey calls to bees. The heartstone merely amplifies what already exists within your blood." The Grove shuddered. The flowers wilted at the edges of the clearing, and the golden light flickered. Nyx's form grew more solid, edges sharpening into focus. "Time grows short." Isolde's form began to fade at the edges. "The Veil weakens with each passing day. When the solstice arrives, choices made in ignorance will bind tighter than chains forged in knowledge." "Wait." Aurora stepped forward, the Fae blade humming in her grip. "What am I supposed to do? How do I stop—" "Stop?" Isolde's laughter echoed from everywhere at once as her form dispersed like mist. "Dear child, you don't stop the tide. You learn to swim."
total_cost0.1527

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora's hand moved instinctively [instinctively]"
1"The Grove spun around [around]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
82.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1126
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1126
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count2
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"resolved"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"chill"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"familiar"
5"footsteps"
6"shimmered"
7"flickered"
8"silk"
9"resolved"
10"depths"
11"dancing"
12"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
38.96% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1114
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.37% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount738
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
October2
Nyx6
Heartstone1
Aurora15
Grove3
Isolde9
Fae2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
globalScore0.484
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something between bark and stone"
1"felt like silk beneath her feet"
2"sounded like wind chimes and breaking glas"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.898
wordCount1114
matches
0"Neither fully Earth nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
77.33% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean34.81
std14.64
cv0.421
sampleLengths
078
123
236
342
453
536
649
720
827
915
1062
1122
1257
1337
1423
1556
1633
1723
1838
1919
2040
2128
2232
2337
2417
2545
2618
2742
2826
2934
3021
3125
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
97.44% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs130
matches
0"was deciding"
1"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences75
ratio0.093
matches
0"The familiar sounds of the park—distant traffic, the occasional fox cry—faded to nothing."
1"As she drew closer, she could make out shapes within the shimmer—standing stones that hadn't been there moments before, each carved from wood so ancient it had turned to something between bark and stone."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells growing beside summer roses, autumn crocuses tangled with spring violets."
3"The symbols resolved into meaning as she watched—warnings, welcomes, and prophecies all tangled together in a script she'd never seen but somehow understood."
4"The half-Fae woman seemed to exist in multiple moments at once—young and ancient, solid and translucent, beautiful and terrible."
5"Aurora did feel it—a pull in her chest, separate from the pendant's warmth."
6"\"Want and need rarely walk the same path.\" Isolde produced something from the folds of her gown—a blade that caught light that didn't exist, its surface rippling like mercury."
95.28% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount749
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04539385847797063
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009345794392523364
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean14.85
std6.74
cv0.454
sampleLengths
031
126
221
310
413
519
617
726
816
924
1013
1116
1220
1316
145
1510
1634
179
1811
1917
2010
2115
223
238
2421
2513
2617
2713
289
2912
3017
3128
3214
3323
3414
359
3610
3719
3827
3921
4012
4114
429
4313
4425
4510
469
4714
4826
4918
94.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.6
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners45
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Even the wind had stilled,"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount3
totalSentences55
matches
0"She reached toward the barrier,"
1"Her silver hair moved in"
2"It terrified her."
ratio0.055
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences55
matches
0"The ancient oaks of Richmond"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter"
2"Aurora's voice cut through the"
3"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
4"Nyx's whispered reply seemed to"
5"Aurora ducked beneath a low-hanging"
6"The trees grew denser as"
7"The familiar sounds of the"
8"Nyx's form solidified beside her,"
9"Aurora approached the boundary slowly."
10"The pendant's warmth intensified, spreading"
11"She reached toward the barrier,"
12"Nyx's violet eyes flickered with"
13"Aurora took a breath and"
14"The world tilted."
15"Colors bled and shifted, too"
16"The grey pre-dawn light transformed"
17"The air tasted of honey"
18"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
19"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The ancient oaks of Richmond Park stood like sentinels in the pre-dawn darkness, their branches reaching toward a sky that hadn't yet decided whether to remain …"
1"The trees grew denser as they pressed forward, their trunks twisting into impossible spirals that made Aurora's eyes water if she stared too long."
2"The grey pre-dawn light transformed into something golden and green, as if she'd stepped from October into the heart of spring."
3"Aurora's boot sank into moss that felt like silk beneath her feet."
4"The standing stones formed a spiral path leading deeper into the Grove, their surfaces covered in symbols that shifted and writhed when she wasn't looking direc…"
5"Her silver hair moved in a breeze Aurora couldn't feel, and her lavender eyes held depths that threatened to drown anyone foolish enough to stare too long."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"The Grove spun around, flowers blooming and dying in accelerated cycles"
1"Isolde produced, its surface rippling like mercury"
2"Aurora stepped, the Fae blade humming in her grip"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Isolde pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.048
72.4327%