| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora's hand moved instinctively [instinctively]" | | 1 | "The Grove spun around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.095 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 82.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1126 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1126 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "resolved" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.96% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1114 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 738 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.03 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | October | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Grove | 3 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.484 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something between bark and stone" | | 1 | "felt like silk beneath her feet" | | 2 | "sounded like wind chimes and breaking glas" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.898 | | wordCount | 1114 | | matches | | 0 | "Neither fully Earth nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.33% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 34.81 | | std | 14.64 | | cv | 0.421 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.44% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "was deciding" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar sounds of the park—distant traffic, the occasional fox cry—faded to nothing." | | 1 | "As she drew closer, she could make out shapes within the shimmer—standing stones that hadn't been there moments before, each carved from wood so ancient it had turned to something between bark and stone." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells growing beside summer roses, autumn crocuses tangled with spring violets." | | 3 | "The symbols resolved into meaning as she watched—warnings, welcomes, and prophecies all tangled together in a script she'd never seen but somehow understood." | | 4 | "The half-Fae woman seemed to exist in multiple moments at once—young and ancient, solid and translucent, beautiful and terrible." | | 5 | "Aurora did feel it—a pull in her chest, separate from the pendant's warmth." | | 6 | "\"Want and need rarely walk the same path.\" Isolde produced something from the folds of her gown—a blade that caught light that didn't exist, its surface rippling like mercury." |
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| 95.28% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 749 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.04539385847797063 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009345794392523364 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 14.85 | | std | 6.74 | | cv | 0.454 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 94.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.6 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 60.61% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind had stilled," |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached toward the barrier," | | 1 | "Her silver hair moved in" | | 2 | "It terrified her." |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "Aurora's voice cut through the" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 4 | "Nyx's whispered reply seemed to" | | 5 | "Aurora ducked beneath a low-hanging" | | 6 | "The trees grew denser as" | | 7 | "The familiar sounds of the" | | 8 | "Nyx's form solidified beside her," | | 9 | "Aurora approached the boundary slowly." | | 10 | "The pendant's warmth intensified, spreading" | | 11 | "She reached toward the barrier," | | 12 | "Nyx's violet eyes flickered with" | | 13 | "Aurora took a breath and" | | 14 | "The world tilted." | | 15 | "Colors bled and shifted, too" | | 16 | "The grey pre-dawn light transformed" | | 17 | "The air tasted of honey" | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 19 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" |
| | ratio | 0.927 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks of Richmond Park stood like sentinels in the pre-dawn darkness, their branches reaching toward a sky that hadn't yet decided whether to remain …" | | 1 | "The trees grew denser as they pressed forward, their trunks twisting into impossible spirals that made Aurora's eyes water if she stared too long." | | 2 | "The grey pre-dawn light transformed into something golden and green, as if she'd stepped from October into the heart of spring." | | 3 | "Aurora's boot sank into moss that felt like silk beneath her feet." | | 4 | "The standing stones formed a spiral path leading deeper into the Grove, their surfaces covered in symbols that shifted and writhed when she wasn't looking direc…" | | 5 | "Her silver hair moved in a breeze Aurora couldn't feel, and her lavender eyes held depths that threatened to drown anyone foolish enough to stare too long." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove spun around, flowers blooming and dying in accelerated cycles" | | 1 | "Isolde produced, its surface rippling like mercury" | | 2 | "Aurora stepped, the Fae blade humming in her grip" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.024 | | leniency | 0.048 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |