| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 991 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 991 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "eyebrow" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "structure" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "shimmered" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "eyes widened" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 980 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 533 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 3.94 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 21 | | Eva | 16 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Compass | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Kowalski" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "or carved, but seemingly burned into the sur" | | 1 | "seemed unrelated" | | 2 | "appeared solid" |
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| 97.96% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.02 | | wordCount | 980 | | matches | | 0 | "not painted or carved, but seemingly burned into the surface at a temperature" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.70% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 25.13 | | std | 12.1 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 |
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| 85.40% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "were positioned" | | 1 | "was scorched" | | 2 | "been etched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 3.48% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—ozone and copper." | | 1 | "Her curly red hair caught the torchlight as she tucked a strand behind her left ear—a nervous habit Quinn noted immediately." | | 2 | "She pointed to marks on the victim's wrists—circular burns that looked disturbingly like ritualistic branding." | | 3 | "Strange symbols had been etched into the crumbling brickwork—not painted or carved, but seemingly burned into the surface at a temperature that should have caused structural damage." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 540 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.025925925925925925 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018518518518518517 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 11.95 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.541 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 70.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.45121951219512196 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "Her curly red hair caught" | | 1 | "His hands were positioned in" | | 2 | "She pointed to marks on" | | 3 | "She pulled out a small" | | 4 | "She met Quinn's gaze directly" |
| | ratio | 0.104 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "The water dripped from rusted" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended the" | | 2 | "The air grew thick with" | | 3 | "The body lay in the" | | 4 | "A man, late fifties, face" | | 5 | "The voice came from her" | | 6 | "Eva Kowalski stepped forward, adjusting" | | 7 | "Quinn turned her sharp jaw" | | 8 | "Eva gestured towards the walls" | | 9 | "Her curly red hair caught" | | 10 | "Quinn approached the body, her" | | 11 | "The victim wore a tailored" | | 12 | "His hands were positioned in" | | 13 | "Eva consulted her notebook" | | 14 | "She pointed to marks on" | | 15 | "Quinn's gaze swept the area," | | 16 | "The ground around the body" | | 17 | "Quinn indicated a small brass" | | 18 | "Eva lifted the compass with" | | 19 | "Quinn raised an eyebrow" |
| | ratio | 0.979 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "His hands were positioned in an unnatural configuration, fingers bent at angles that would have been impossible to achieve while conscious." | | 1 | "She pointed to marks on the victim's wrists—circular burns that looked disturbingly like ritualistic branding." | | 2 | "Strange symbols had been etched into the crumbling brickwork—not painted or carved, but seemingly burned into the surface at a temperature that should have caus…" | | 3 | "The Veil Compass in Eva's hand suddenly stopped spinning, its needle pointing directly at a section of wall that appeared solid." | | 4 | "The brickwork shimmered, revealing a faint outline that hadn't been visible before." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Eva added (add)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.08 | | leniency | 0.16 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |