Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0JD0TZ14E936AGJ9AY6VX

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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The water dripped from rusted pipes somewhere in the darkness, each drop echoing through the abandoned Tube station. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the concrete steps, her torch beam cutting through the gloom. The air grew thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—ozone and copper. The body lay in the centre of what appeared to be a makeshift market stall. A man, late fifties, face frozen in an expression of terror Quinn had seen only a handful of times in her eighteen years on the force. "DCI Ramsey said you'd want first look." The voice came from her left. Eva Kowalski stepped forward, adjusting her round glasses. "Though I'm not sure what you expect to find here that the others missed." Quinn turned her sharp jaw towards the younger woman. "You're the occult expert from the British Museum. What are you doing at my crime scene?" "They called me when they found the symbols." Eva gestured towards the walls. Her curly red hair caught the torchlight as she tucked a strand behind her left ear—a nervous habit Quinn noted immediately. "The Met thought it might be gang-related, but I suggested otherwise." Quinn approached the body, her worn leather watch catching the light as she bent down. The victim wore a tailored suit but no identification. His hands were positioned in an unnatural configuration, fingers bent at angles that would have been impossible to achieve while conscious. "Time of death?" "Medical examiner estimates between midnight and three AM. No visible wounds, no signs of struggle." Eva consulted her notebook. "Except for these." She pointed to marks on the victim's wrists—circular burns that looked disturbingly like ritualistic branding. Quinn's gaze swept the area, taking in details that others might overlook. The ground around the body was scorched in a perfect circle, yet no fire damage to the victim's clothing. "And this?" Quinn indicated a small brass object half-hidden beneath the victim's hand. "What do you make of it?" Eva lifted the compass with gloved hands. "Veil Compass. Rare item. Points toward supernatural rifts." "Supernatural?" Quinn raised an eyebrow. "We're dealing with a homicide, not ghost stories." "The needle's spinning." Eva turned the compass in her palm. "It only does that when it's near a powerful energy source or when it's broken." Quinn examined the walls more closely. Strange symbols had been etched into the crumbling brickwork—not painted or carved, but seemingly burned into the surface at a temperature that should have caused structural damage. "Evidence suggests the victim was placed here post-mortem," Quinn said. "No defensive wounds, no sign of restraint. But look at his eyes." The victim's eyes were wide open, pupils dilated to an unnatural degree. The irises had taken on a milky quality, like cataracts forming overnight. "Any identification?" "None. His pockets were empty. Even the labels were cut from his clothing." Eva shivered. "This isn't the first time." Quinn straightened up, her bearing military-precise as she turned in a slow circle. "What do you mean?" "There have been three other cases in the last six months. Similar circumstances. No IDs, impossible angles of the limbs, symbols on the walls." Eva tucked her hair behind her ear again. "The Met closed them all as unsolvable." "Unsolvable isn't a word in my vocabulary." Quinn approached the symbols on the wall, running her fingers millimetres from the surface without touching. "The paint's still wet. Whoever did this was here recently." "It's not paint. The surface was altered chemically. As if the symbols were burned into the molecular structure of the brick itself." Eva held up a small device. "Thermal scanner shows residual heat signature." Quinn's brown eyes narrowed. "That's impossible. These walls are stone. They would have crumbled under that kind of heat." "Exactly." Eva lowered her voice. "The Veil Market moves locations every full moon. Tonight's the full moon. This station won't be accessible tomorrow." "Veil Market?" Quinn's expression hardened. "What aren't you telling me, Kowalski?" Eva hesitated, then reached into her worn leather satchel. She pulled out a small bone token, carved with intricate symbols. "This is how you get in. The Market deals in enchanted goods, banned substances, and information." She met Quinn's gaze directly. "The victim wasn't killed here. He was brought here as a message." Quinn took the token, turning it over in her hand. "A message for whom?" "For you, perhaps. Or for others who can read the signs." Eva pointed to the symbols again. "They're a warning. Something's coming through the rifts. Something that shouldn't be able to cross over." Quinn's mind raced, connecting details that had seemed unrelated. The unexplained death of her partner three years ago. The whispers of a clique operating beyond normal law enforcement. The cases that had landed on her desk that defied logical explanation. "DS Morris—my partner who died—was investigating similar symbols before he was killed." Quinn's voice was low, controlled. "The official report said it was a heart attack, but I never believed it." Eva's eyes widened. "The symbols were on him?" "On his personal effects. Burned into his notebook." Quinn pulled out a small photograph from her jacket pocket, showing a page of familiar-looking markings. "I thought they were some kind of gang code." "They're not. They're binding sigils. Used to contain or summon entities from beyond the Veil." Eva adjusted her glasses. "If someone killed your partner to keep this secret, they won't hesitate to kill again." The Veil Compass in Eva's hand suddenly stopped spinning, its needle pointing directly at a section of wall that appeared solid. "There." Eva whispered. "A rift. It's active now." Quinn approached the wall slowly, her torch beam steady. The brickwork shimmered, revealing a faint outline that hadn't been visible before. "This isn't just a homicide scene." Quinn said. "It's a doorway." "And someone didn't just kill this man." Eva added. "They used him as a key."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount991
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount991
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"structure"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"raced"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"gloom"
2"perfect"
3"eyebrow"
4"etched"
5"structure"
6"intricate"
7"raced"
8"familiar"
9"shimmered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
88.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords980
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount533
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.94
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn21
Eva16
Kowalski1
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"or carved, but seemingly burned into the sur"
1"seemed unrelated"
2"appeared solid"
97.96% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.02
wordCount980
matches
0"not painted or carved, but seemingly burned into the surface at a temperature"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
94.70% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean25.13
std12.1
cv0.481
sampleLengths
047
141
235
325
445
545
63
722
846
919
1015
1113
1225
1333
1422
1524
162
1720
1817
1939
2033
2134
2219
2323
2411
2520
2633
2714
2833
2940
3031
318
3233
3334
3421
358
3621
3711
3815
85.40% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences53
matches
0"were positioned"
1"was scorched"
2"been etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs94
matches(empty)
3.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences82
ratio0.049
matches
0"The air grew thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—ozone and copper."
1"Her curly red hair caught the torchlight as she tucked a strand behind her left ear—a nervous habit Quinn noted immediately."
2"She pointed to marks on the victim's wrists—circular burns that looked disturbingly like ritualistic branding."
3"Strange symbols had been etched into the crumbling brickwork—not painted or carved, but seemingly burned into the surface at a temperature that should have caused structural damage."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount540
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.025925925925925925
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.018518518518518517
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean11.95
std6.47
cv0.541
sampleLengths
018
114
215
315
426
513
68
714
89
916
1013
1121
1211
1315
149
1521
163
1719
183
1915
2012
2119
2213
236
247
258
265
278
2810
2915
306
3127
3210
3312
3412
3512
362
3715
385
3913
404
4132
427
4323
4410
4528
466
474
4815
495
70.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.45121951219512196
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences48
matches
0"Her curly red hair caught"
1"His hands were positioned in"
2"She pointed to marks on"
3"She pulled out a small"
4"She met Quinn's gaze directly"
ratio0.104
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences48
matches
0"The water dripped from rusted"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"The air grew thick with"
3"The body lay in the"
4"A man, late fifties, face"
5"The voice came from her"
6"Eva Kowalski stepped forward, adjusting"
7"Quinn turned her sharp jaw"
8"Eva gestured towards the walls"
9"Her curly red hair caught"
10"Quinn approached the body, her"
11"The victim wore a tailored"
12"His hands were positioned in"
13"Eva consulted her notebook"
14"She pointed to marks on"
15"Quinn's gaze swept the area,"
16"The ground around the body"
17"Quinn indicated a small brass"
18"Eva lifted the compass with"
19"Quinn raised an eyebrow"
ratio0.979
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"His hands were positioned in an unnatural configuration, fingers bent at angles that would have been impossible to achieve while conscious."
1"She pointed to marks on the victim's wrists—circular burns that looked disturbingly like ritualistic branding."
2"Strange symbols had been etched into the crumbling brickwork—not painted or carved, but seemingly burned into the surface at a temperature that should have caus…"
3"The Veil Compass in Eva's hand suddenly stopped spinning, its needle pointing directly at a section of wall that appeared solid."
4"The brickwork shimmered, revealing a faint outline that hadn't been visible before."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva added (add)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.08
leniency0.16
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.08
71.5648%