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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0JF0FV4G309SP40W11YYT
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.7
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.016128
Provider:
Venice
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
91.90%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
59.48%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
44.70%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
78.13%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
58.05%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
79.7639%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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Three deadbolts clicked in succession, the metal grinding against the cheap brass fixtures.
I wrenched the heavy door
open, expecting Eva with a spare key or the landlord complaining about the noise again. "You're late,"
I started, then stopped
.
Lucien Moreau leaned against the
doorframe, filling the cramped hallway with the scent of expensive tobacco and ozone.
He adjusted the cuff of
a charcoal suit that probably cost more than my annual rent, the ivory head of his cane resting against his thigh. "Do you always greet guests with such hostility, Laila?" "Don't call me that."
I moved to slam the
door, but the tip of his cane jammed into the gap, catching the wood with a dull thud.
He didn't push, just held
it there, an immovable object in the path of my barely contained panic. "I hear you've been busy. Delivering takeout for the Golden Empress?"
He raised a pale eyebrow
. "Quite the fall from grace for the girl who almost burned down Avaros." "I'm working, Lucien. Something you wouldn't understand." I glared at the cane, then up at his mismatched eyes.
The amber one glinted with
mockery; the black one swallowed the light from the hallway bulb. "Take your toothpick out of my doorframe before I call the police." "The Metropolitan Police hold no jurisdiction over what stands in this hallway."
He pushed the door open
just enough to slip inside, his movements fluid and predatory. "Besides, we both know I'm not here to discuss your career trajectory." He stepped into the flat, his polished shoes clicking on the uneven floorboards.
Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, hissed
from the top of a stack of ancient scrolls and scrambled behind the sofa. "Get out."
Lucien ignored me, running a
gloved finger over a dust-covered stack of books on the kitchen counter.
He grimaced, pulling a white
handkerchief from his pocket to wipe the grime away. "You’re living in a hovel, Aurora. Above a curry house that spices the air with turmeric and desperation."
He turned, the cane tapping
a slow,
rhythmic
beat against the floor. "Is this how you imagined your life when you left Cardiff?" "It's better than the alternative." "Is it?"
He closed the distance between
us in two strides.
I backed up until my
spine hit the wall.
He loomed over me, the
heat radiating from his body seeping through my thin t-shirt. "Evan is still asking questions. He doesn't appreciate having his toys run away." "Evan is a human thug with a temper tantrum." "A human thug who has recently made some
very
interesting friends in the underground."
Lucien reached out, his leather-clad
fingers gripping my chin. He tilted my head up, forcing me to meet his gaze. "Friends who care nothing for your Pre-Law degree or your delivery job. They want what you took." "I didn't take anything." "You know better."
His thumb brushed over the
small, crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist. The touch was light,
electric
, sending a shiver down my arm that had nothing to do with fear. "The ledger doesn't balance, Laila. And when the numbers don't add up, people like me get called in to audit." "Then audit and leave." "Unfortunately for you, my contract has changed." I jerked my chin free. "I don't care about your contracts." "You should."
He turned his back on
me, walking to the window that overlooked the neon-lit Brick Lane. "Because the price on your head just tripled. It seems Evan isn't the only one looking for the Carter girl."
I crossed my arms, hugging
myself against the sudden
chill
in the room. "I can handle myself." "You can hide in cramped flats and change your name, yes. But you can't run from what’s coming."
He gestured vaguely at the
street below. "Do you know why they call this city the Smoke?" "I'm not in the mood for a history lesson." "Because it obscures the view." He spun the cane between his fingers, and with a sharp metallic click, a thin blade extended from the ivory handle. "You’ve been careless. Three deadbolts? Cute. But ineffective against anything with more than two legs." "Is that a threat?" "It’s a warning." He retracted the blade with a snap. "I'm not the boogeyman you need to worry about tonight. I’m just the only one willing to stand between you and the dark." "I don't need a saviour. Especially not one who sells secrets to the highest bidder." "Then perhaps a business partner?" He moved toward the small round table near the kitchen, picking up a flyer for Yu-Fei's restaurant. "I know what you carry in those delivery bags, Rory. It's not just sweet and sour pork." My
stomach
dropped. I kept my face blank. "You're mistaken." "Am I?" He tossed the flyer onto the floor. "I tracked the magical residue from the warehouse explosion last Tuesday straight to this door. Yu-Fei is using you to smuggle artefacts. You’re a mule for the Triads." "I deliver food." "Deliver this." He lunged, grabbing my wrist and pulling me flush against him. His grip was iron, his breath hot against my ear. "Don't lie to me. It doesn't suit you, and it certainly won't save you when the Obsidian Circle kicks down that door." I shoved him away, harder than I intended. He stumbled back a step, his expression darkening. "I don't work for the Triads." "Then tell me why I smelled sulfur and burnt bone on your jacket when you walked past me at the market three days ago." "I was at a bonfire." "With demon bones?" He stepped closer again, his voice dropping to a dangerous
whisper
. "I can help you, but you have to stop pretending you're just a normal girl living a normal life. You haven't been normal since you left that bastard in Cardiff." "I'm done with this conversation." I pointed at the door. "Leave." "I can't do that." "Why not?" "Because they are already here." The floorboards
vibrated
. A low, guttural growl
echoed
from the hallway outside, vibrating through the thin wood of the front door. It wasn't human. It wasn't the cat. Ptolemy yowled from behind the sofa, a sound of pure terror. Lucien’s demeanor shifted instantly. The mocking
charm
vanished, replaced by a cold, lethal focus. He drew a silver pistol from inside his jacket with his right hand, the cane with the blade extended in his left. "Move," he ordered, shoving me toward the bathroom. "Now." "What is that?" "Your past. Come calling." He kicked the sofa aside, exposing the trembling cat. "Go. Hide." "No, I—" The door to the flat exploded inward, splintering into a shower of wood and twisted metal. Two shapes lunged through the gap, their eyes glowing red in the dim light of the room. They were large, misshapen, their skin
glistening
with wet, dark scales. Lucien fired. The crack of the gun
was deafening
in the small space. The first creature shrieked, a bullet hole smoking in its shoulder, but it didn't fall. It scrambled forward, claws gouging the floorboards. "Silver won't hold them for long!" Lucien shouted, ejecting the magazine and slamming a fresh one home. "Get the salt!" I froze. The cupboard. "Rory!" Lucien roared, slashing at the second creature with his cane. Black blood sprayed across the
pristine
wallpaper. I scrambled for the kitchen, throwing open the cupboard door and grabbing the box of cooking salt. My hands shook as I ripped the cardboard top off. "Behind you!" Lucien yelled. I spun around. The first creature had bypassed him. It was inches away, its jaw unhinging to reveal rows of needle-like teeth. I threw the salt. The crystals hit its face. It shrieked, steam hissing from its skin as if acid had
been thrown
. It recoiled, clawing at its burning eyes. "Kitchen knife!" Lucien commanded, wrestling the second beast to the floor. He placed a boot on its chest, pressing the cane blade against its throat. "Now!" I grabbed the largest knife from the block. My heart hammered against my ribs like a trapped bird. "Not for them," Lucien grunted, straining against the thrashing monster beneath him. "For the circle." I looked at the floor. A faint, purple light
was pulsing
beneath the rug in the centre of the room. A summoning circle. "Break it!" I dove for the rug, tearing it aside. The sigils carved into the wood underneath glowed with a sickening violet hue. I raised the knife high. "Don't hesitate!" Lucien shouted. The creature beneath him threw him off with a violent surge of strength. He smashed into the bookshelf, books raining down around him. The beast scrambled up, fixing its sights on me. I brought the knife down. The blade chipped the wood, severing the line of the sigil. The light flared blindingly bright, then vanished with a sound like a breaking vacuum seal. The creatures froze. Their forms
shimmered
, destabilising like a bad television signal. With a final, piercing scream, they dissolved into thick, black smoke that filled the room, choking and acrid. I dropped the knife, gasping for air. Silence fell over the flat, broken only by the distant honking of horns on Brick Lane and the wheeze of my own lungs. Lucien pushed a pile of hardbacks off his legs and stood up. He brushed a layer of dust from his shoulder, wincing
slightly
. He retrieved his cane from the floor and clicked the blade back into place. "Well," he said, straightening his tie. "That was unexpected." I stared at the empty space where the monsters had been. "What... what were they?" "Hunters. Bound by the Circle." He walked over to the
shattered
door, surveying the damage with a critical eye. "You can't stay here." "I don't have anywhere else to go." "You do now." He turned back to me, holding out a hand. "My car is outside. And I have a
very
large bottle of whisky." I looked at his hand, then at the ruin of my safe haven. The splintered door. The salt on the floor. The sigil carved into the wood. "What about Evan?" Lucien smiled, a cold, dangerous curve of his lips. "Let him send his pets. I have a kennel full of my own." I took his hand. His grip was firm, warm, and terrifyingly safe. "Come, Laila. We have work to do." He pulled me toward the door, stepping over the debris without a second glance. As we stepped into the hallway, a shadow detached itself from the wall opposite us. A man in a long coat, his face obscured by a hood. Lucien stopped instantly, pushing me behind him. "Company," he whispered. The figure raised a hand. Flames erupted in the air around us, sealing off the escape route down the stairs. "Run," Lucien said, drawing his cane sword again. "Up the stairs. To the roof. Go." "What about you?" "I owe them a debt." He glanced back at me, the amber eye burning. "Go!" I turned and sprinted up the narrow staircase, the sounds of steel clashing against sorcery ringing out below.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
32
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"I started then [then]"
1
"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2
"He turned back [back]"
3
"He glanced back [back]"
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effectiveRatio
0.092
91.90%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1851
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
2
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
1
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
59.48%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1851
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"eyebrow"
count
1
1
word
"rhythmic"
count
1
2
word
"loomed"
count
1
3
word
"electric"
count
1
4
word
"chill"
count
1
5
word
"stomach"
count
1
6
word
"whisper"
count
1
7
word
"vibrated"
count
1
8
word
"echoed"
count
1
9
word
"charm"
count
1
10
word
"glistening"
count
1
11
word
"pristine"
count
1
12
word
"shimmered"
count
1
13
word
"silence"
count
1
14
word
"shattered"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyebrow"
1
"rhythmic"
2
"loomed"
3
"electric"
4
"chill"
5
"stomach"
6
"whisper"
7
"vibrated"
8
"echoed"
9
"charm"
10
"glistening"
11
"pristine"
12
"shimmered"
13
"silence"
14
"shattered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach dropped"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
118
matches
0
"o with fear"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
118
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
173
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
30
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1845
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
18
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
24
wordCount
1215
uniqueNames
7
maxNameDensity
1.23
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva
2
Lucien
15
Moreau
1
Brick
2
Lane
2
Yu-Fei
1
Black
1
persons
0
"Eva"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Moreau"
3
"Yu-Fei"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
globalScore
0.883
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
89
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1845
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
173
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
91
mean
20.27
std
14.46
cv
0.713
sampleLengths
0
33
1
6
2
44
3
9
4
45
5
29
6
46
7
39
8
32
9
2
10
31
11
41
12
5
13
48
14
9
15
51
16
4
17
53
18
4
19
7
20
11
21
38
22
17
23
35
24
9
25
41
26
4
27
33
28
15
29
39
30
10
31
37
32
3
33
45
34
16
35
6
36
24
37
5
38
44
39
11
40
4
41
2
42
5
43
28
44
11
45
36
46
9
47
3
48
15
49
2
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
118
matches
0
"been thrown"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
213
matches
0
"was deafening"
1
"was pulsing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
1
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
173
ratio
0.006
matches
0
"The amber one glinted with mockery; the black one swallowed the light from the hallway bulb."
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1220
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.02459016393442623
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.007377049180327869
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
173
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
173
mean
10.66
std
6.78
cv
0.636
sampleLengths
0
13
1
20
2
6
3
18
4
26
5
9
6
27
7
18
8
16
9
13
10
18
11
16
12
12
13
27
14
12
15
13
16
19
17
2
18
17
19
14
20
30
21
11
22
5
23
11
24
9
25
15
26
13
27
9
28
23
29
11
30
17
31
4
32
15
33
18
34
20
35
4
36
7
37
5
38
6
39
18
40
20
41
13
42
4
43
25
44
10
45
9
46
26
47
15
48
4
49
10
44.70%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
16
diversityRatio
0.3236994219653179
totalSentences
173
uniqueOpeners
56
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
112
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
68
totalSentences
112
matches
0
"I wrenched the heavy door"
1
"I started, then stopped"
2
"He adjusted the cuff of"
3
"I moved to slam the"
4
"He didn't push, just held"
5
"He raised a pale eyebrow"
6
"I glared at the cane,"
7
"He pushed the door open"
8
"He stepped into the flat,"
9
"He grimaced, pulling a white"
10
"He turned, the cane tapping"
11
"He closed the distance between"
12
"I backed up until my"
13
"He loomed over me, the"
14
"He tilted my head up,"
15
"His thumb brushed over the"
16
"I jerked my chin free."
17
"He turned his back on"
18
"I crossed my arms, hugging"
19
"He gestured vaguely at the"
ratio
0.607
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
107
totalSentences
112
matches
0
"I wrenched the heavy door"
1
"I started, then stopped"
2
"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
3
"He adjusted the cuff of"
4
"I moved to slam the"
5
"He didn't push, just held"
6
"He raised a pale eyebrow"
7
"I glared at the cane,"
8
"The amber one glinted with"
9
"He pushed the door open"
10
"He stepped into the flat,"
11
"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, hissed"
12
"Lucien ignored me, running a"
13
"He grimaced, pulling a white"
14
"He turned, the cane tapping"
15
"He closed the distance between"
16
"I backed up until my"
17
"He loomed over me, the"
18
"Lucien reached out, his leather-clad"
19
"He tilted my head up,"
ratio
0.955
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
112
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
48
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"He loomed over me, the heat radiating from his body seeping through my thin t-shirt."
1
"With a final, piercing scream, they dissolved into thick, black smoke that filled the room, choking and acrid."
78.13%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
32
uselessAdditionCount
3
matches
0
"He turned, the cane tapping a slow, rhythmic beat against the floor"
1
"He stepped, his voice dropping to a dangerous whisper"
2
"He glanced back, the amber eye burning"
58.05%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"He retracted (retract)"
1
"he ordered (order)"
2
"Lucien shouted (shout)"
3
"Lucien roared (roar)"
4
"Lucien yelled (yell)"
5
"Lucien grunted (grunt)"
6
"Lucien shouted (shout)"
7
"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
87
tagDensity
0.115
leniency
0.23
rawRatio
0.8
effectiveRatio
0.184
79.7639%