| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 38 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "She laughed bitterly [bitterly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 74 | | tagDensity | 0.514 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 88.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1304 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1304 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "unspoken" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "desire" | | 11 | "facade" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "palpable" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "eyebrow" | | 17 | "warmth" | | 18 | "shattered" | | 19 | "racing" | | 20 | "magnetic" | | 21 | "loomed" | | 22 | "echoed" | | 23 | "unwavering" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 6 | | maxInWindow | 5 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 2 |
| | 3 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "fists clenched" | | 1 | "the weight of his words" | | 2 | "hung in the air" | | 3 | "sent a shiver down" | | 4 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 98.12% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "k with regret" | | 1 | "e with surprise" |
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| 96.77% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1299 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 25 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.38% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 790 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 3 | | Eva | 3 | | Ptolemy | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.804 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if weighing the consequences of his next words" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1299 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.24% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 24.98 | | std | 11.2 | | cv | 0.448 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 49 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 37 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 35 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 99.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.39% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped inside, the scent of his cologne—a mix of cedar and something darker—filling the small space." | | 1 | "Aurora felt her pulse quicken, a mix of anger and something else—something she had buried deep." | | 2 | "The memories surged—late nights filled with laughter, whispered secrets, and the way his touch had ignited something within her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 795 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.025157232704402517 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005031446540880503 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 13.26 | | std | 5.96 | | cv | 0.449 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 69.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4387755102040816 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 1 | "His voice was smooth, but" | | 2 | "He stepped inside, the scent" | | 3 | "She could feel the weight" | | 4 | "She crossed her arms, trying" | | 5 | "he replied, his amber and" | | 6 | "She scoffed, the bitterness rising" | | 7 | "He interrupted, stepping closer, his" | | 8 | "she shot back, her voice" | | 9 | "He laughed, a low, dark" | | 10 | "She stepped back, her back" | | 11 | "His voice softened, and for" | | 12 | "He stepped closer, invading her" | | 13 | "She shook her head, fighting" | | 14 | "His voice was low, almost" | | 15 | "He scoffed, stepping back, the" | | 16 | "She challenged, her voice rising" | | 17 | "he said, his tone shifting," | | 18 | "She glared at him, her" | | 19 | "His frustration flared, and for" |
| | ratio | 0.629 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open, and" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably" | | 2 | "The air thickened with unspoken" | | 3 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 4 | "His voice was smooth, but" | | 5 | "He stepped inside, the scent" | | 6 | "She could feel the weight" | | 7 | "She crossed her arms, trying" | | 8 | "he replied, his amber and" | | 9 | "She scoffed, the bitterness rising" | | 10 | "He interrupted, stepping closer, his" | | 11 | "The accusation hung in the" | | 12 | "Aurora felt her pulse quicken," | | 13 | "she shot back, her voice" | | 14 | "He laughed, a low, dark" | | 15 | "She stepped back, her back" | | 16 | "His voice softened, and for" | | 17 | "Aurora’s breath caught in her" | | 18 | "The memories surged—late nights filled" | | 19 | "He stepped closer, invading her" |
| | ratio | 0.952 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could finish, the" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien hesitated, his eyes searching hers, as if weighing the consequences of his next words." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 38 | | uselessAdditionCount | 22 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret" | | 1 | "She scoffed, the bitterness rising in her throat" | | 2 | "she shot back, her voice sharper than she intended" | | 3 | "She stepped back, her back hitting the edge of the kitchen counter" | | 4 | "She challenged, her voice rising" | | 5 | "he said, his tone shifting, a hint of defensiveness creeping in" | | 6 | "She laughed bitterly, the sound echoing in the small space" | | 7 | "he said, his voice dropping to a near whisper" | | 8 | "She stepped, her heart pounding in her chest" | | 9 | "She shook, disbelief flooding her" | | 10 | "he replied, his voice earnest" | | 11 | "he admitted, his voice thick with regret" | | 12 | "She scoffed, the bitterness rising again" | | 13 | "he said, his voice softening again" | | 14 | "She raised, scepticism lacing her tone" | | 15 | "Eva backed out, her eyes wide with surprise, leaving the door ajar" | | 16 | "Aurora muttered, the interruption pulling her back to reality" | | 17 | "she snapped, her heart racing" | | 18 | "he cut in, his voice low and intense" | | 19 | "he said, his voice softening again," | | 20 | "she echoed, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 21 | "he repeated, his gaze unwavering" |
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| 14.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "it hinted (hint)" | | 2 | "He interrupted (interrupt)" | | 3 | "He laughed (laugh)" | | 4 | "She challenged (challenge)" | | 5 | "She laughed bitterly (laugh)" | | 6 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 7 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 8 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 9 | "he repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 74 | | tagDensity | 0.243 | | leniency | 0.486 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.27 | |