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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0JWJQYYY17M3KSHZVYREQ
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 Plus (2026-02-15)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
41.4s
Cost:
$0.008015
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
92.13%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
47.53%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
48.52%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
98.10%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
47.62%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
76.6856%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The chain rattled, a harsh
metallic scream against the
silence
of the hallway, before the three deadbolts on Eva's flat slid back with a heavy, reluctant thud. Rory yanked the door open, ready to scream at Ptolemy for scratching the wood again, but the words died in her throat.
Lucien stood on the narrow
landing, the smell of rain and expensive charcoal wool filling the cramped space.
He leaned on his ivory-handled
cane, water dripping from the tip onto the scuffed linoleum.
His platinum hair, usually slicked
to perfection, clung to his forehead in damp strands. One amber eye locked onto hers while the black one
seemed to
swallow the dim light of the corridor. "You look terrible," he said.
Rory gripped the doorframe until
her
knuckles turned white
. "And you look like you dragged yourself through the Thames backwards. What do you want, Lucien?"
He didn't wait for an
invitation.
He stepped forward, forcing her
to stumble back into the flat.
The movement brought him close
enough that she
could feel
the unnatural heat radiating from his skin, a
stark
contrast to the drafty
chill
of the Brick Lane evening.
He swept past the stacks
of books and
scrolls that covered
every available surface, his tailored suit brushing against a teetering pile of research notes on Welsh folklore. "The door was unlocked,"
he lied smoothly
. "I have three deadbolts. I heard you pick the last one." "Semantics."
Lucien turned, the cane clicking
against the floorboards as he surveyed the
chaotic
one-bedroom flat.
His gaze lingered on the
tabby cat, Ptolemy, who hissed from atop a mountain of hardbacks before vanishing behind a curtain. "Charming. I expected more order from a woman who organises her life around delivery schedules and hiding from ex-boyfriends."
Rory slammed the door shut
and engaged the locks, the sound
echoing
like a gunshot in the small room.
She crossed her arms over
her chest, shielding the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist as if he could see it through her jumper. "I didn't ask for a home inspection. I asked why you're here."
Lucien rested his weight on
the cane, tilting his head. The gesture was bird-like, predatory. "Evan is making noise. Loud, stupid noise. He's asking questions in the wrong circles about a delivery girl who vanished from Cardiff." The air left Rory's lungs.
She walked over to the
small kitchenette, needing something to do with her hands.
She grabbed a chipped mug
and filled it with tap water, the stream loud in the sudden quiet. "Evan doesn't know I'm in London,"
she said, her voice steady
despite the tremor in her hands. "I covered my tracks." "He doesn't need to know your address to know you're alive. He hired a private investigator. A human one, which means they're sloppy, but they're persistent. They
traced
a transaction from the Golden Empress to this postcode." Lucien moved closer, the floorboards creaking under his polished shoes. "They will be here within the hour." Rory spun around, water sloshing over the rim of the mug and onto her fingers. "Why tell me? Why not let them find me? Isn't that what you wanted last time? For me to deal with my own mess?" The memory hung between them, thick and suffocating. Six months ago, outside Silas' bar, when she had begged him for help and he had walked away with that cold, indifferent shrug that still haunted her nightmares.
He had called her a
liability then. A human complication in his demon-touched world. "That was before I realised your demise would inconvenience my own operations,"
Lucien said, though his jaw tightened
. "If Evan finds you, he drags the police. If the police dig, they find things in this city best left buried. Including me." "So I'm just collateral damage again." "You are a
variable
I forgot to account for."
He stepped into her personal
space, towering over her five-foot-six frame. The scent of him—old books, ozone, and something distinctly sulphurous beneath the cologne—flooded her senses. "Pack a bag, Rory. We leave now." "No." The word snapped out of her mouth before she could stop it. Lucien's heterochromatic
eyes narrowed
. "You don't get to waltz in here, scare me half to death, and order me around like one of your informants." Rory set the mug down with a sharp clatter. "You left me. When I needed you most, you told me to grow up and face the consequences of my choices. Well, I made a choice. I'm staying." "You are being childish." "I am being cautious. If I run, I look guilty. If I stay and face him, I can explain." "Explain what?" Lucien's voice dropped, losing its polished edge. "That you fled an abusive relationship? That you changed your name to Laila for three weeks? That you work for a restaurant owned by a woman who pays her taxes in favours rather than pounds? Humans love a narrative, Rory, but they love a scandal more. Evan will paint you as unstable. He will say you stole from him. He has the resources to make sure no one believes a word you say."
He reached out, his fingers
hovering near her cheek.
She flinched, but didn't pull
away. The heat from his hand
was intoxicating
, a dangerous pull she remembered all too well from the nights they spent talking until dawn in the back of his car. "I can protect you," he whispered. "But only if you let me." "Protect me?" Rory laughed, a brittle sound. "You nearly got me killed in Marseille. You used me as bait to draw out that rogue shifter." "It worked." "And I spent two weeks in a hospital bed!" "The point is, you survived."
His hand dropped to his
side, curling into a fist. "I do not make mistakes twice. Evan will not touch you." A heavy thud came from the front door. Not a knock. A shove. Rory froze. Ptolemy let out a low growl from behind the curtain. "They're early,"
Lucien said, his voice devoid of panic
.
He shifted his stance, placing
himself between Rory and the entrance.
He drew the cane from
his belt, and with a soft click, the ivory handle separated from the shaft, revealing a thin,
gleaming
blade. "Stay behind me," he ordered. "I told you, I'm not—" The door shook again, the wood groaning under the pressure. A voice muffled by the thick panel called out, rough and
familiar
. "Rory! Open up! I know you're in there! We just want to talk!" Evan. Rory's heart hammered against her ribs.
She looked at Lucien, really
looked at him. The sharp line of his jaw, the
tension
in his shoulders, the way his black eye
seemed to
swirl with a dark, internal storm. He wasn't just an ally. He was a weapon, and he had pointed himself at her defence. "If they break in," Lucien said, his eyes never leaving the door, "do not speak. Do not acknowledge them. Let me handle the negotiation." "Negotiation?" Rory whispered. "With a blade?" "With whatever is necessary." The lock on the bottom bolt gave way with a splintering crack. Wood chips flew across the room, landing in Rory's hair. The chain held for a second, straining taut, before the metal
began to
scream. "Last chance, Rory!" Evan's voice rose, laced with anger now. "Open the damn door or we're coming through!" Lucien glanced back at her, a
flicker
of something vulnerable crossing his features before the mask slammed back into place. "Get to the window," he commanded
softly
. "The fire escape leads to the curry house roof. Go." "I'm not leaving you." "Do as I say, for once in your stubborn life." The chain snapped. The door flew open, rebounding against the wall with a violent bang. Three men stood in the doorway, silhouetted against the harsh hallway light. Evan pushed to the front, his face flushed, eyes wild. "There you are," Evan sneered, stepping over the threshold. He stopped short when he saw Lucien standing in the centre of the cramped flat, the steel blade catching the light. "Who the hell is this?" "A friend,"
Rory said, her voice shaking less than she expected
. She stepped out from behind Lucien, planting her feet
firmly
on the worn rug. "And you're trespassing." Evan laughed, a harsh, barking sound. "Trespassing? I'm here to bring my girlfriend home. Move, Frenchman, before you get hurt." Lucien didn't move. He didn't even blink. "She is not your girlfriend. She is not anything to you. Leave. Now." "Or what?" Evan took another step forward, closing the distance. "You'll stab me? In front of witnesses? There are neighbours, you know. People who call the police." "The police take time to arrive,"
Lucien said, his tone conversational
. "I do not." Evan lunged. It happened in a blur. Lucien moved with a speed that defied his human half, sidestepping the punch and bringing the flat of the cane blade down hard on Evan's wrist. Bone crunched. Evan howled, stumbling back into his companions. "Get him!" Evan screamed. The other two men
charged
. Rory grabbed a heavy brass scroll
weight
from the table and hurled it at the nearest attacker. It struck him square in the temple, sending him reeling into a stack of books. Papers exploded into the air like confetti. Lucien danced between them, a whirlwind of charcoal suit and flashing steel. He
wasn't killing
them, just disabling. A cut to the thigh here, a strike to the knee there. But Evan
was scrambling
up, pulling a knife from his pocket. "Rory, run!" Lucien shouted, parrying Evan's wild slash. The metal sparked against metal. Rory didn't run. She grabbed a bottle of olive oil from the counter and sprinted toward the fray. She poured it across the floorboards right in Evan's path just as he
charged
again. Evan's feet flew out from under him. He hit the ground hard, the knife skittering across the oil-slicked wood.
Before he could recover, Lucien
was on him, the tip of the blade pressed
firmly
against Evan's throat.
The room fell silent
save for the heavy breathing of the combatants and the distant wail of a siren approaching on Brick Lane. "Don't,"
Lucien hissed, his amber eye blazing
. "Make another move." Evan stared up at the blade, sweat beading on his forehead. "You can't kill me. Not in front of her." "I am not going to kill you,"
Lucien said, his voice dropping to a terrifying whisper
. "I am going to remove your ability to hold a knife ever again." The sirens grew louder, blue and red lights flashing through the window, casting strobing shadows across the ruined flat. "Police!" a voice boomed from the hallway. "Everyone stay where you are!" Lucien glanced at Rory, his expression
unreadable
. "This is going to get complicated." Rory looked at the oil on the floor, the blood on Evan's wrist, and the knife in Lucien's hand. "You think?" she breathed. The front door creaked as uniformed officers pushed past the remaining thugs, guns drawn. "Drop the weapon!" the lead officer shouted, aiming directly at Lucien's chest. "Hands where I can see them!" Lucien
slowly
raised his free hand, the blade still hovering millimetres from Evan's jugular. He smiled, a sharp, dangerous curving of lips that didn't reach his eyes. "Officer," Lucien said smoothly. "I believe there has been a misunderstanding."
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cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Alibaba"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
30
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"he lied smoothly [smoothly]"
1
"he commanded softly [softly]"
2
"Lucien said smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences
72
tagDensity
0.417
leniency
0.833
rawRatio
0.1
effectiveRatio
0.083
92.13%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1906
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"really"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"really"
1
"softly"
2
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
47.53%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1906
totalAiIsms
20
found
0
word
"silence"
count
1
1
word
"could feel"
count
1
2
word
"stark"
count
1
3
word
"chill"
count
1
4
word
"chaotic"
count
1
5
word
"echoing"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
2
7
word
"traced"
count
1
8
word
"variable"
count
1
9
word
"gleaming"
count
1
10
word
"familiar"
count
1
11
word
"tension"
count
1
12
word
"flicker"
count
1
13
word
"firmly"
count
2
14
word
"charged"
count
2
15
word
"whisper"
count
1
16
word
"unreadable"
count
1
highlights
0
"silence"
1
"could feel"
2
"stark"
3
"chill"
4
"chaotic"
5
"echoing"
6
"weight"
7
"traced"
8
"variable"
9
"gleaming"
10
"familiar"
11
"tension"
12
"flicker"
13
"firmly"
14
"charged"
15
"whisper"
16
"unreadable"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"knuckles turned white"
count
1
2
label
"room fell silent"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"knuckles turned white"
2
"The room fell silent"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
116
matches
0
"d with anger"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
116
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
158
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
73
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1896
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
30
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
70
wordCount
1222
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
2.13
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
5
worstWindowName
"Evan"
discoveredNames
Eva
1
Ptolemy
3
Rory
17
Brick
2
Lane
2
Welsh
1
Lucien
26
Evan
18
persons
0
"Eva"
1
"Rory"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Evan"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
globalScore
0.436
windowScore
0
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
87
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1896
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
158
matches
0
"scrolls that covered"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
77
mean
24.62
std
18.82
cv
0.765
sampleLengths
0
27
1
88
2
5
3
25
4
74
5
7
6
11
7
56
8
43
9
12
10
37
11
37
12
21
13
54
14
39
15
50
16
41
17
6
18
42
19
1
20
16
21
58
22
4
23
19
24
82
25
44
26
12
27
25
28
2
29
9
30
26
31
13
32
12
33
44
34
5
35
5
36
22
37
13
38
1
39
55
40
24
41
6
42
4
43
36
44
18
45
20
46
17
47
4
48
10
49
37
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
116
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
212
matches
0
"was intoxicating"
1
"wasn't killing"
2
"was scrambling"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
2
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
158
ratio
0.006
matches
0
"The scent of him—old books, ozone, and something distinctly sulphurous beneath the cologne—flooded her senses."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
755
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
17
adverbRatio
0.022516556291390728
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.005298013245033113
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
158
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
158
mean
12
std
8.95
cv
0.746
sampleLengths
0
27
1
22
2
18
3
15
4
14
5
19
6
5
7
9
8
16
9
6
10
11
11
29
12
28
13
7
14
11
15
16
16
21
17
19
18
19
19
24
20
12
21
10
22
5
23
22
24
5
25
14
26
18
27
17
28
4
29
47
30
7
31
15
32
24
33
8
34
28
35
7
36
7
37
18
38
23
39
6
40
20
41
15
42
7
43
1
44
12
45
4
46
30
47
28
48
4
49
19
48.52%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.3291139240506329
totalSentences
158
uniqueOpeners
52
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
105
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
98.10%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
32
totalSentences
105
matches
0
"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1
"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
2
"He didn't wait for an"
3
"He stepped forward, forcing her"
4
"He swept past the stacks"
5
"he lied smoothly"
6
"His gaze lingered on the"
7
"She crossed her arms over"
8
"She walked over to the"
9
"She grabbed a chipped mug"
10
"she said, her voice steady"
11
"He had called her a"
12
"He stepped into her personal"
13
"He reached out, his fingers"
14
"She flinched, but didn't pull"
15
"His hand dropped to his"
16
"He shifted his stance, placing"
17
"He drew the cane from"
18
"She looked at Lucien, really"
19
"He wasn't just an ally."
ratio
0.305
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
99
totalSentences
105
matches
0
"The chain rattled, a harsh"
1
"Rory yanked the door open,"
2
"Lucien stood on the narrow"
3
"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
4
"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
5
"Rory gripped the doorframe until"
6
"He didn't wait for an"
7
"He stepped forward, forcing her"
8
"The movement brought him close"
9
"He swept past the stacks"
10
"he lied smoothly"
11
"Lucien turned, the cane clicking"
12
"His gaze lingered on the"
13
"Rory slammed the door shut"
14
"She crossed her arms over"
15
"Lucien rested his weight on"
16
"The gesture was bird-like, predatory."
17
"The air left Rory's lungs."
18
"She walked over to the"
19
"She grabbed a chipped mug"
ratio
0.943
47.62%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
105
matches
0
"Before he could recover, Lucien"
ratio
0.01
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
52
technicalSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"His gaze lingered on the tabby cat, Ptolemy, who hissed from atop a mountain of hardbacks before vanishing behind a curtain."
1
"She crossed her arms over her chest, shielding the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist as if he could see it through her jumper."
2
"Lucien moved with a speed that defied his human half, sidestepping the punch and bringing the flat of the cane blade down hard on Evan's wrist."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
30
uselessAdditionCount
8
matches
0
"she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
1
"Lucien moved, the floorboards creaking under his polished shoes"
2
"Lucien said, though his jaw tightened"
3
"Lucien said, his voice devoid of panic"
4
"Rory said, her voice shaking less than she expected"
5
"Lucien said, his tone conversational"
6
"Lucien hissed, his amber eye blazing"
7
"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a terrifying whisper"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
20
fancyCount
11
fancyTags
0
"he lied smoothly (lie)"
1
"he whispered (whisper)"
2
"Rory laughed (laugh)"
3
"he ordered (order)"
4
"Rory whispered (whisper)"
5
"Evan sneered (sneer)"
6
"Evan screamed (scream)"
7
"Lucien shouted (shout)"
8
"Lucien hissed (hiss)"
9
"she breathed (breathe)"
10
"the lead officer shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences
72
tagDensity
0.278
leniency
0.556
rawRatio
0.55
effectiveRatio
0.306
76.6856%