Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0K2FN1QW20NRXGFA9CAMH

Run Details

Duration:
4.0s
Cost:
$0.001357
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled of honey and burnt sugar as Aurora stepped through the shimmering distortion between the standing stones. The Heartstone pendant pulsed against her collarbone, warm as a living thing. Behind her, Nyx’s form flickered between solidity and shadow, their violet eyes scanning the grove with quiet intensity. "Time moves differently here," Isolde murmured, her silver hair catching the strange, dappled light filtering through the canopy. The wildflowers beneath their feet didn’t bend under her steps. Aurora crouched, brushing her fingers over a cluster of blossoms. The petals shimmered like crushed opals, shifting color as she touched them. "They’re alive." "Everything here is," Nyx whispered. Their voice curled around the words like smoke. The trees arched overhead, their trunks twisted into shapes that made Aurora’s eyes ache if she stared too long. Bark peeled away in places, revealing veins of something luminous beneath—not sap, but liquid light, slow-dripping onto the moss below. The moss swallowed it hungrily, glowing faintly where it landed. Isolde moved ahead, her lavender gaze distant. "Stay close. The grove listens." Aurora’s boot sank slightly into the ground, the earth yielding like damp sponge. She frowned, lifting her foot. Tiny filaments, fine as spider silk, clung to the sole before dissolving into mist. "What the hell—" "Roots," Nyx said. They knelt, pressing a hand to the soil. The shadows around their fingers deepened, swirling. "Not just in the ground. Everywhere." Aurora followed their gaze upward. The branches weren’t just growing—they were *breathing*, pulsing in a rhythm too slow to be natural. The leaves shivered without wind. A sound rippled through the air, low and resonant, like a plucked harp string the size of a mountain. The pendant flared hot against Aurora’s skin. She grabbed it instinctively, the crimson gem searing her palm. "Something’s coming." Isolde didn’t turn. "Not something. Some*one*." Between the trees, a figure emerged—tall, slender, their skin the color of birch bark, their eyes hollow pits of twilight. They moved without sound, their bare feet leaving no impression on the glowing moss. Nyx straightened, their form flickering darker. Aurora’s hand drifted toward the Fae blade at her belt, the metal cold even through the sheath. The stranger tilted their head. When they spoke, their voice was the rustle of leaves. "You are not welcome here, little mortals." Isolde stepped forward, her chin lifted. "We seek passage." "Passage is given only to those who pay the toll." Aurora’s pulse thudded in her throat. "What toll?" The figure smiled, their mouth stretching too wide. "A story. A secret. Or a piece of yourselves." Nyx’s shadows coiled tight around them. "We’re not here to bargain." The air thickened. The flowers at their feet curled inward, petals shivering shut. The stranger laughed, a sound like cracking ice. "Then you are here to be lost." The grove shifted. The trees groaned, their branches twisting, closing off the path behind them. The light dimmed, the colors leaching away until only shades of violet and silver remained. Aurora’s breath fogged in the sudden chill. The Fae blade hummed against her hip, its glow brightening. She drew it, the moonsilver edge casting jagged reflections across the ground. Isolde’s voice cut through the dark. "Run."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:55:08.158Z" 2/19/2026, 3:55:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount536
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"hungrily"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"hungrily"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount536
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"searing"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"flickered"
2"scanning"
3"intensity"
4"shimmered"
5"silk"
6"searing"
7"pulse"
8"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences60
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords532
ratio0.004
matches
0"breathing"
1"one"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount459
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora9
Heartstone1
Nyx5
Fae2
Isolde5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.52
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
12.03% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.88
wordCount532
matches
0"not sap, but liquid light, slow-dripping onto the moss below"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean22.17
std12.33
cv0.556
sampleLengths
049
128
224
313
449
512
635
724
826
938
106
1134
1223
1322
149
1510
168
1717
1811
1913
2015
2130
2229
237
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs84
matches
0"were *breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences60
ratio0.05
matches
0"Bark peeled away in places, revealing veins of something luminous beneath—not sap, but liquid light, slow-dripping onto the moss below."
1"The branches weren’t just growing—they were *breathing*, pulsing in a rhythm too slow to be natural."
2"Between the trees, a figure emerged—tall, slender, their skin the color of birch bark, their eyes hollow pits of twilight."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount463
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.032397408207343416
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.01079913606911447
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean8.87
std5.19
cv0.586
sampleLengths
019
112
218
318
410
510
612
72
85
98
1019
1120
1210
137
145
1513
165
1714
183
193
208
217
226
235
2416
255
2619
277
2810
292
303
313
3220
3314
346
3517
365
3710
387
396
403
4110
426
432
448
459
466
475
483
4910
59.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences44
matches
0"Their voice curled around the"
1"She frowned, lifting her foot."
2"They knelt, pressing a hand"
3"She grabbed it instinctively, the"
4"They moved without sound, their"
5"She drew it, the moonsilver"
ratio0.136
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences44
matches
0"The air smelled of honey"
1"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against"
2"Isolde murmured, her silver hair"
3"The wildflowers beneath their feet"
4"Aurora crouched, brushing her fingers"
5"The petals shimmered like crushed"
6"Their voice curled around the"
7"The trees arched overhead, their"
8"Bark peeled away in places,"
9"The moss swallowed it hungrily,"
10"Isolde moved ahead, her lavender"
11"Aurora’s boot sank slightly into"
12"She frowned, lifting her foot."
13"They knelt, pressing a hand"
14"The shadows around their fingers"
15"Aurora followed their gaze upward."
16"The branches weren’t just growing—they"
17"The leaves shivered without wind."
18"A sound rippled through the"
19"The pendant flared hot against"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The trees arched overhead, their trunks twisted into shapes that made Aurora’s eyes ache if she stared too long."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.235
75.2877%